[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the new chapter! Can´t wait to see what Emmett and Rose think of Edward. Will Bella have to reveal the truth about his past sooner than she thinks. And I could be wrong, but I kind of feel like Rose and Em either are related to Edward or they knew his parents. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
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Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.
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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
I loved this chapter, Edward and the chickens was so funny. I cant wait to see what else he gets up to.
I love that you make it funny, romantic and lemony
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Those are all my favorite things, funny, romantic and lemony. LOL
Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.
Here is your teaser
Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella just needs to come clean and be honest!! Rose and Em'll understand.
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Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.
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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
This Edward is too funny!
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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
i hope Rose will be cool with what she just saw.......
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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Emmett and Rose don't seem fased by Edward but we will see
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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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Date: 10 Aug 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hmmmm I sense that Edward chasing the chickens will be an ongoing problem lol he seems to really want them :). I loved this chapter can't wait for the next one!
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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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Date: 10 Aug 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
:)
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Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.
Here is your teaser
Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love it! Boy does Bella have her work cut out for her, LOL!
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Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.
Here is your teaser
Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love their first day on the farm!
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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh God what can I say that I haven't already? I LOVE THIS STORY. I am so happy for them, that they have a more suitable place that will make Edward happy, but I definitely seen the chiken thing coming a mile away. LOL. Now as for these teasers I keep reading about, I always review your chapters and I have never received a teaser from you. Well maybe someday I will. Great chapter, another 10 from me.
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Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.
Here is your teaser
Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awe sweet Edward wants to be the provider
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Yes, he is.
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Here is your teaser
Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside. But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.
There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do. She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.
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Date: 04 Aug 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Is there more than one Rosalie in the story? I remember reading in an earlier chapter when Rosalie, Alice, Ben, Angela, and Royce came to Bella's apartment after her camping trip w/Ben.
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LMAO. I guess so. My mistake. But the first Rosalie wasn't really major and people are called Rosalie all the time right?
Thanks for pointing it out though.
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 31 Jul 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
awww.....so sweet
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
i printed the story out and finished it all within a day. i so loved it and now i am passing it off to a friend to read. i laughed in all the right places OMG this was great. i love that bella is trying to see what is good for her and what she really wants and not care about others. edward tried her way and then she tried edwards way. i feel bad for him that he misses his wolf family and heartbraking that his human family is gone and that part of his life will not be able to be explored for him. i am excited to see how rose and em will fit into the story. alice is not so nice and doesn't treat bella nice. but rose is a hoot and i loved that she is willing to give bella a shot at helping at the farm even though her expierence is mimal. it seems it is more about help and having someone around and the rest can be learned. part of me is hoping edward doesn't see the ugliness of bella's world. funny how he picked up on bella's landlord and express his opinion. to tell the truth i almost picture bella and edward as living in his world but half and half. bella gets some land and builds her comforts but at the same time edward is able to live his way and with the wolves. i see little wolves all around since bella was a virgin and most likely not on anything and edward not understanding anything but mating and have a little one being the way things work. i am lloking forward to seeing where you take these two. i think the farm is great. it is outdoors and it seems rose and em are very accepting people and edward will be able to be himself and bella and edward will be safe and protected on the farm. and since so close to the forest maybe even the wolves find there way back to edward and bella. loving it and thanx for writing.
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 29 Jul 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
this is a sweet story, I have enjoyed each chapter.
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am so loving this story. There are so many feelings going through the both of them. They have their own means of communicating which stands to reason that you can come from different sides and still find a means to understand one another.
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<3
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful chapter!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
This has been my favorite story ever since I came across it. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it and make all of us so happy!!
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
I've started this story today and i'm hooked! briliant, can't wait for the next chapter.
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I really appreciate you reviewing. I update every Thursday
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
I´m so in love with this story! It´s so original and refreshing. It´s so cute to see Edward learning new words and communicating better. Oh and Edward´s jealousy was adorable, as was Rose and Emmett. Can´t wait until they get to the farm, that should be interesting. Maybe the wolves can come there since the place is so big. Okay, see you next week, great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
I can't wait for them to move.
I hope Edward does OK!
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is such a beautiful story and unlike other E/B's I've read. So thank you, love your brain :)
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Thank you. My brain is a strange place and I'm glad you like it there. LOL
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
i enjoyed this chapter very much thanks for the quick updates
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lol Emmett that old geezer :). He makes me laugh can't wait for the next chapter!
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LOL, I'm having a lot of fun with those two.
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Another amazing chapter! Can't wait for Edward to see his new home!
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
great story so far Thanks :)
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
guess the landlord doesn't think Edward will be around tomorrow.....
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Possibly....
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am loveing this story it is so interesting :) x
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
So great as always! Really looking forward to what Edward will think of the move!
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
EXCELLENT STORY, I LOVE THE FACT THEY ARE MOVING TO THE COUNTRY. I THINK EDWARD WILL FIND PEACE THERE AND MAYBE THE WOLF FAMILY CAN VISIT CLOSE BY. BELLA NEEDS TO EXPLAIN TO ROSE AND EMMETT HOW SHE CAME BY EDWARD, HIS STORY AND HOW SHES TEACHING HIM. THEY MIGHT FIND IT STRANGE TO ONE DAY LOOK OUT THE WINDOW AND SEE EDWARD RUNNING AROUND ON ALL FOURS, OR EVEN NAKED, LOL!!!
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love that he is talking more now. I am also so happy that they are moving. I see so much potential for this story. I think they will be very happy on the ranch.
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love this story. I can't believe how few reviews you have so far (although, I am one of the guilty parties in not reviewing as often as I should). I can't wait to find out Edward's history and the connection to Rosalie and Emmet (please tell me there is a connection there ---)
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Thank you. I have more reviews for this over on FF, so I'm not too worried. I just like posting here, becuase the reviewers here are always so fabulous, no matter how few. :)
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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
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Date: 24 Jul 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
this truly is a beautiful story...thanks for letting us read it!
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 23 Jul 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
I foudn this story a few days ago and I love it. it is very orginal. I am looking foward to reading what happens next!
-Lisa
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 22 Jul 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
well one thing i will mention, this ia a story with a wolf jake that i can like. I'm not a jacob fan. Lovein on the Edward. Really enjoy your story !!!
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LOL, I knew the only way to make everyone like Jake was to keep him a wolf.
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love that Edward is finally putting sentences together and I know this thing with Rosalie will really help them. I have never read a story like this or with Rosalie and Emmett as OLD people. So this is interesting. I cant wait for me. I love the lemon too and cant wait for them to get more vocal with them.
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
lol-- Edward got the plant, I love his "Bella touch" and the way he tries to comfort her.great chapter.
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you, good story and very different from other stuff I've read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 22 Jul 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
The shredded tree was funny. Excited to see Bella and Edward starting a new life at the farm. Enjoyed this chapter.
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 22 Jul 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
I likedd this chapter. Looks like she and Edward will have a new place to stay away from the city. Better fit for Edward. Keep the chapters coming.
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 21 Jul 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
really love this story
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love the progression of the storyline! Amazing chapter, can't wait for more!
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
:)
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
:)
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh yes! perfect! i hope it works out!
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love it! So excited Edward is communicating!
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 21 Jul 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great story so far rellay enjoying it thanks for the frequent updates. Love savage Edward mmmmmm :)
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When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love. The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture. They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.
“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular. They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”
“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”
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Date: 19 Jul 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
I wonder what happened to Edward...
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Thank you so much for your review. Sorry I didn't get the teaser to you in time, but the next chapter is going up now.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
that's perfect for her! aww, and Rose and Emmett :)
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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.
“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.
“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.
“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.
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[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Looking forward to finding out if she will end up taking the job on the farm!
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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.
“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.
“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.
“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.
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[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
God, I love this story. Poor B, I´m glad she went to Charlie for guidance. I just hope she decides to take Edward to the farm. Who knows maybe there´s enough roaming space to bring the wolves. An older Rose and Em, that´s different. Loved it babe! Can´t wait for the next one!
Krazi
xoxo
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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.
“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.
“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.
“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.
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Date: 17 Jul 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Perfect job! On a farm where Edward can get a little of the outdoors and Bella can make money and have a roof over her head.
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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.
“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.
“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.
“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.
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[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.
“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.
“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.
“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.
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Date: 16 Jul 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
:)
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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.
“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.
“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.
“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.
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Date: 16 Jul 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
:)
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Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.
“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.
“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.
“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.
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[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
he remembered! what triggered it???? after all this time.....
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Thank you for all your reviews. I loved reading them all.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
how'd Leah get hurt??? no hunters right?
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
so she's gonna stay????? :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
but shes going to let him go?????
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
i hope none of her "friends" come to ruin her peace with him
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh no, Alice is such a pain!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
shes not going to be able to leave him, he'll just get into more trouble looking for her
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh no! he was caught :( they're gonna put him in a hospital and run tests on him!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
awwww....:( they all miss her...
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward must be so miserable :(
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
great story, Edward is very sweet, but if Bella leaves i see Edward following her to camp as well
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 11 Jul 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hmmm. So his parents were killed by a bear while they were out in the woods? Enjoyed the chapter.
Date: 09 Jul 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
Missed you last week, glad to hear you had a nice vacation. :)
I like that Edward is learning to communicate with Bella better. It makes him seem more human and less animal. He's growing!! ;)
See you next week!
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 08 Jul 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward does rememberwhat happened to him and his famaily, I wonder if being around Bella , (you know human rather than a wolf) iS triggering his memories.
great chapter looking forward to the next update
Author's Response:
My man won't stop obsessing over sports. I mean, if there's lawn bowls on TV he HAS to watch it. NO ONE likes watching lawn bowls, seriously!! No amount of bajinga flashing seems to cure it. (okay well sometimes I get a few minutes of attention). Any ideas on how to curb my man's obsession over balls of any shape or size, besides growing my own and inventing a new kind of sport?
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Chaz x
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter!
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 07 Jul 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
:)
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh, he remembers! So sad. Another amazing chapter. Thank you so much for updating, it made my day! : )
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
Omg I feel so sorry for Edward. He remembers what happened to his parents. That had to be scarry. I can't wait for him to get more vocal especially during sex.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is remembering what happened to him and his family? I really like that you decided to bring them back to the forrest. I think that I like less interference from the outside world with Edward learning and remembering and Bella learning and teaching... :)
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Thanks, but they can't stay out there forever, unfortunatly.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful stuff!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
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Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
So sad....:( Poor Edward. I love this story though. I think Bella's doing a really god job of teaching him the meanings of words, how to talk, how to read, ect.!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Here is your teaser
Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter. poor edward sounds like his parents were killed by a bear and he was remembering or dreaming about it.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella already read about that when she was looking for his family. But now we know that he remembers it in some capacity.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Here is your teaser
Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Here is your teaser
Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.
Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get. Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.
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[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
WOW!! Incredible!! Loving it!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW, that was very interesting. I am so curious to see how this story plays out. I love this story for its so original.
Date: 24 Jun 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
What is she going to do???? Can she survive in the woods? Itseems it would be hard for Edward to adapt to the city!
Have a great vacation! Will miss your posting!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was so sweet how the wolves took care of Bella too. I almost thought that someone had found them and they would take Bella and Edward away. I can't wait to see how much time she spends in the woods and when she'll go home. I absolutely love this story, it's so different from the norm! Great chapter hon, have a great vacay!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awwww, loved it. So happy she is finally teaching him how to communicate with words!!!! : )
Date: 23 Jun 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm thinking Bella needs some antibiotic ointment also. Egads. Have a great vacation!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Really love this story!
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope they're ok. Cant wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ahhh how sweet, Jake cleaned her owie.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love this story!! :))
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I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
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Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
please update soon
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Updates are Thrusdays
I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good story can't wait for the next chapter
thanks
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I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 17 Jun 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh where will you take this?? Good story.
Author's Response:
not telling. LOL
I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
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Date: 16 Jun 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wonder if Bella going to keep wearing
clothes. I must be odd, but living out in the woods and off the land sounds stress free and carefree. I cant believe she did it doggy style or should I say wolf style, plus the I love you... great chapter.. this is one story that I really look forward to and must read as soon as I get the update alert.. diff one of my favs
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LOL, you'll see.
I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 16 Jun 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
Author's Response:
I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
Author's Response:
I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love reading this each week! I am finally at my home computer and can leave you a review again!
I love that she took him back home, but I am still unsure of where this is going to go. Are you an author that writes from the cuff or do you have the ending already planned out? Just curious!
Looking forward to next week :)
Author's Response:
I am a little of both. I have a vague ending in mind but the charachters sometimes take their own journey there.
I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!
Here is your teaser
The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river. Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.
Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop. He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too. Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum