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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 26

Awesome story! I Loved Loved this chapter and can't wait for your outtakes!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

wow i so love that edward learned a craft. it fits him

love that billy is part of their lives still. rose and em have been great. i am thrilled they are expecting twins. i always thought they be a great family, thrilled. i am a little sad that jacob never found edward. i understand the wolves needing to be in their pack but i was kinda hoping that someday they find each other. i so loved this story. i look forward to your outtakes



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great story, so sad to see it over. :)

Author's Response:

Me too.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

great story.

Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

I would love to hear the conversation between Officer Black and Edward as an outtake as well... Will there be a continuance of this story???PLEASE ya Know kinda him growing and her having beautiful gree eyed little wolves :-)

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 25

good chapter.  Edward is finding out about his past.  Thanks for writing

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 25

I love that this story is so different from anything else I have read.  Not only for the storyline itself, but it isn't often that Bella is the strong "leader" of the two, and she protects Edward.

Edward's innocence is almost heartbreaking.  I love that Billy is able to talk to him about his father. 

I look forward to more updates.

CM

Reviewer: cawilliams1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25

Beautiful story.  Very original.  Thanks for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you, outtake was emailed

Reviewer: MiraBella Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awh oh my god the progress that Edward has made is amazing! I'm so happy for him and Bella as well :')

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 25

Hmm. That doesn't seem like it should be all to the story?

See you soon.

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25

I can't believe this wonderful story is almost over, I will absolutely have withdrawals.  Are you thinking of something new?

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

Well I can't wait to find out the outtake then LOL

love this story it is so different than others that I have read. Thank you and your beautiful brain. :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 25

great chapter.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

This was another awesome chapter! So glad Edward at least has Billy to help fill in the blanks. Emment is great ~ and who doesn't love Rose in this chapter..lol! Thanks for the update! :~)

Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awwwww I'm so happy it's all working out for Edward! I'll be so sad when this story's over!

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outtake will be emailed

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

So sad to see this come to an end! It has been an amzing journey!



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Outtake sent

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

A very interesting story and very original I think.You`ve succeeded in portraying the character of Edward in a very unique way, very endearing.Thank you for a very captivating reading.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 25

i hope Edward got alot of answers out of Billy. wonder how this will affect him and his future

Reviewer: beeteetje Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 25

I love this story!

Thanks for writing it!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

That was so heart breaking!

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm sad to see that this story is almost over.  I really enjoyed it.  Are you thinking about writing a sequel to this?

Reviewer: nicci Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 25

I have enjoyed reading this story it was very clever and a different take on the relationship between these two x



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Outtake will be emailed

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 25

I love this story........It's a wonder this guy was found alive out there in the woods all those years later. Can't wait till the next chapter is up.

Reviewer: tickledpinkstamper Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm loving your story so much. My heart breaks for both of them, the idea that as time goes by that E will have to deal with the loss of his parents. Thanks again for the new chapter and I'm looking forward to the new update.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 25

im all for writer's rights.....but the story seemed to end very VERY abruptly. it's almost like u got tired of writing or something else and just ended it.......whilei realize it's not my story to tell, it seem like there  is much more to tell......without the epi. i've loved the story so far and it seemed like a great idea. just kinda sucks that it's ending like this.   

 

best of luck to you!



Author's Response:

This is a type of story that could go on forever. As a person learning everything, I could have written Edward learning EVERYTHING. That being said, it would be minimal conflict in the situation that they are in. The major hurdle was the wolves and I felt like in the end if I spent too much time on the everyday stuff with nothing to build up to or come down from, that it would be disapointing to the readers in the end.

--outtake will be emailed

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 25

what an ending.

 i am glad that billy was one of the good ones. maybe edward got some answers, i hope billy and edward stay in touch. i believe edward can live this life he just has to keep learning and feel needed and loved. bella and edward helped each other. em and rose where great for their lives as well. loved the story. i was looking forward to more but a good things must come to an end. thanx



Author's Response:

Thank you , your outtake will be emailed

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 24

oh no, photographers!!! great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

I was unaware that your story had been plagiarized. Who did it and how many other stories were targeted?! Stuff like that really bothers me. I hope this didn't have any negative effects on your story or your process



Author's Response:

There were 15 authors in total that were stolen from. Leah210on ff.net had taken all of our stories and plugged in the wolfpack names to our stories. So my Edward was a Jacb and Bella a Leah.  We had lots of support and they came down in a day, which I am grateful for. I am looking at the bright side, I did have a few readers come my way because of it. I messaged her readers and lead them to the real story.

 

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh no!!! I knew it!!!  My only fear is that someone willtry to take Edward away, rule him incompetent or something to make his own choices. That would kill not only Bella, but Edward as well. Please don't let that happen. Edward depends on Bella, and needs her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: farsidelady Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 24

This story is really getting good and it is such a change from the usual fare.  Very refreshing to read something so different.  I hope that Edward does have some distant family member.  That would be nice.  Maybe a cousin?  Just a thought.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

Poor Edward, he is the equivalent of a 3-year old, asking all the questions, but he is so sweet and eager to learn how to fit into Bella's world now that the wolves rejected him...by the way, I loved how you had Bella pull over and comfort Edward on the way back home.  He probably needed a good cry with all the changes in his life.

Not sure what to make of Billy Black so far, but having the press show up at the house is not making me feel warm and fuzzy towards him.  All they want is peace and I don't know how they will get any now that the press knows where they live.

PS - loved Edward's first driving experience :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

so sorry to hear of the plagiarism.  That is so sad, that someone would steal other's work.  This chapter was great.  So much for the Black's being the good guys!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

uh oh..not good to see them show up.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

Well, that just pisses me off that the media got the story.  Poor Edward.  Hope he doesn't start to feel like a circus freak.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

Holy shit!!  Really?  If Billy tocld them, I will kick his ass myself.  They don't need that shit!!  Ugh!!

Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 24

I am curious how the press found out... My guess is Billy!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

thank you for a wonderful story I have enjoyed this so much. As for someone putting your story up as theirs... I don't get it? why would they think that is okay?

can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I don't know. She changed Edward to Jacob and Bella to Leah, but the rest of the words were mine. Just not cool.

 

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

wow it seems will change for edward. i am hoping it was officer balck who called the press. cause it almost seem as if he cared about what happen to the cullens. love that emmett is so easy going with edward. edward does need that male role model. em is good for him. i am glad bella was honest with rose and em. i think it was the best and the only way for them to work

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter! Poor Edward, I hope Bella gets to him first.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 24

Well the reporters suck!! Post soon!!!!

So does the story stealing! Who The F does that anyway??



Author's Response:

Apparently someone who wanted more wolfpack sstories but didn't want to write them so she took popular stories and changed the names.

 

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 24

ugh! i really hope Officer Black had nothing to do with those vultures showing up!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

This chapter made me sad and relieved at the same time.  I hate that Edward was rejected by his wolf family, but I am happy that he got resolution and knows he belongs to Bella now.  Kudos!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

 

Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

omg, i'm gonna cry......that just broke my heart.......

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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh how sad but true to an animals nature.  Great chapter.  If you ever do any outtakes, you should do one of Emmett working with Edward on fixing the fence.  I can only imagine..... LOL. 



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

awww, I knew this was going to happen sad still though...



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

Feel bad for Edward. Good boy, Jake.

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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oohhh......that was so sad :-(   Edward saying goodbye to his wolf family that took care of and protected him for all those years he was lost. At least he has Bella, Rose and Emmet now.



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awe Jake left him a good bye present. Kind of sad but Edward does belong with his own kind. Somehow, with Bellas help!!



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 23

awwwwe awesome chappy



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Poor Edward! At least he still has Bella!



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh! I feel so bad for Edward! I cried when I read this chapter!

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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

great but still a bit sad



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 23

so sad don't know why i thought they would welcome edward back with open arms. i guess with jake he still felt something but sam had to look out for the pack and was unsure of edward. my heart broke there. seems edward keeps losing his family. i hope nothing happens to bells. maybe when they have kids they will know what it feels like to protect. love it



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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

thanks for the wonderful chapters!  "sex the fence" is classic! 



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter once again.  How sweet, can wait to see his reaction to the wolves!!!! 



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

Looking forward to the getaway in the woods.  Wonder what Edward is having nightmares about?  Emmett cracks me up, even when he's an old geezer.



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great stuff! Love how Emmett wants to help Edward grow!



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

oh, another good chapter I just love this story!!



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 22

:)  Can´t wait to see the look on Edward´s face when he gets to see Leah, Sam and Jake!  I absolutely adore this story!

Krazi

xoxo



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

he's going to be so excited, i hope the wolves will be too

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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 22

Sweet chapter at the end.  Sorry Edward is having so many bad dreams!



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

I love the lemons. I wish Edward would get more vocal with them though. Oh and it would be nice to read what he did with Emmett too. Great chapter.

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LOL, some day, but when all you know is grunts, you aren't going to say mucn during sex.

 

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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22

I hope the wolves still accept him. Bella needs to find a special "meadow" for them on the property!



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 22

loved it as always



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Glad Bella has some help with Edward. Love how this story is turning out : )

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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 21

I like this one! Please tell me how to make those grilled cheese sandwiches! I've never had it w/ cream cheese and butter.



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It's actually a recipe I use from deceptivelly Delicious cookbook. It also has puree'd (either califlaur or sweetpotato I can't remember).

 

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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

It is wonderful how supportive the Mccartys have been!



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 21

what a beautiful chapter. It was sort of sad to see Edward trying to find his place. I am so glad of Rosalie and Em are understanding.
I love the Em and rose in this your..
Thanks

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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

awww, loved this chapter.. I hope this alll ends good



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 21

Yea! Emmett is going to be great for Edward! Thanks for the update! :~)



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

ahhhhh i am so happy bella came clean to rose and emmett. that was the best thing ever. so now edward doesn't have to hide and they will know how to deal with him and look out for him at the same time. now they can also help teach him. oh it is so great. i love that em is taking on the role and helping. edward is so proud of himself. he needed to belong. we all need a purpose



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

This story is just getting better and better with each chapter!  I have a funny feeling that Emmett talked to Edward about more than just chopping wood!  Lol! Can´t wait for the next chapter!

Krazi

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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 21

Lol I was so sure that he would have killed a chicken! Sex fence? What were Emmett and Edward talking about!? Lol I really loved this chapter, the ending was so sweet can't wait for the next chapter! :)

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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

awww!, yay for Edward!.. i really hope it's not some crazy scary circus when people start finding out about him

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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

Outstanding chapter!



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

Sweeeeet! So happy Rose and Emmett know and are gonna help her.

He is gonna be okay!!!!



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)



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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

I absolutely LOVED this chater. Even though I would have love a lemon, the chapter was amazing and I love the rapid progress Edward is making. I could not be happier that Rosalie and Emmett are ok with him and that Emmett is making him feel usful by letting him learn new things that he can help with. Seriously best chapter.

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A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 20

Uh Oh. Naughty, naughty Edward. Did somebody get into a fight with a chicken or did he find something he should not be playing with in shed?...

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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

oh no, cant wait till next chapter....



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much. I actually got it now that you told me how to fix the author review buttom.

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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

oh crap, he killed the chickens didn't he?????

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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no the chickens!
Wouldn't it be easier to tell them he was mentally challenged

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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: msaubreydrakegraham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

i really love this story :) not something id usually go for but im sooo glad i picked it!



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

What??? OMG please update soon!

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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh Cliffie! Loved the puppy play comment!



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

OH EDWARD, DID YOU GET IN THE CHICKEN COOP???    BELLA NEEDS TO EXPLAIN TO ROSE AND EMMETT ABOUT EDWARD, LIKE YESTERDAY!!!!



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Uh Oh!  What did he get into now?!  I really think Bella ought to come clean with Rosalie and Emmett.  They seem to be fairly open minded.  Can't wait to see what Edward was up to in the next chapter.



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

hope it was a coyote he killed and not a chicken or other farm animal.



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

I love the chapter. Again still no teasers are coming to me. I am glad that Rosalie is not upset about Edward in the buff. Lol Loved the lemon. I love the take charge Edward. As for the ending well it seems that he wanted to bring her breakfast. I don't think that is going to go over to well.

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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

Lol Edward 1 chickens 0 (or thats how i perceve it at least) Haha the ending actually made me laugh :).

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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)



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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

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Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well it looks like Bella just found the perfect solution to Edward's need to be in the wild.

Um not so sure about letting Edward around the chickens but hopefully he will adapt quickly. LOL

Em and Rose seem nice. Wonder what they will make of Bella's Wildman. It should be a hoot and a half to see how Edward takes to living on this farm.

 Look forward to more adventures with Edward and Bella as they navigate this road.

 

= )

 

 



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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

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