Date: 04 Aug 2016 10:06 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
This was the best journey I have been on in quite a while. Thanks for your original storyline. Once I started reading I could not stop until I finished. Bella and Edward were just adorable! You are a wonderful writer and storyteller. I encourage others to read this story. You will be pleasantly surprised,
Date: 27 Aug 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great story. Truly enjoyed your way of bringing Edward out of the woods and Bella back into nature.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 3:19 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!! story and extra's ;) even though i've read this before i still cried several times ;D
Date: 15 Apr 2015 9:02 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
I'm so in love with this story. I very sad to come to its end but I know that I'll be back.
Is it possible to get a pdf copy from you?
Date: 15 Apr 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
Such a sad, sweet farewell.
Date: 15 Apr 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
I can't read this fast enough, yt I want to savor every moment.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Your description of Edwards actions are so clear that I can picture it like I'm actually witnessing it.
I cracked up when he tried mating.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love large dogs. I'd adopt him.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. This is something I would read over & over again
Date: 31 May 2014 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella your boyfriend only has sex on his brain. Can't wait see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:35 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
I have to say the concept of this story scared me at first. One doesn't like seeing a main character struggling to this extent and it's really out there in reality. That being said, however, you made it seem so easy and sweet so that all the unbelievable stuff was irrelevant and truth be told this is the 2nd time I've read your sweet loveable wonderful story!! I loved the innocence of Edward and the patience in Bella to overlook his handicap and teach him how to survive and get more back in return...love, passion, and determination. Bravo!
hugs StephanieStephanie
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the re read.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 3:17 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
I loved this story. Of course they would find their happy ending. Just like in real life they finally making themselves happy. Don't you just love it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading
Date: 31 Dec 2012 3:30 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Such a great story. I just found it and read it over the past two days. I loved it. Thanks for letting me go along with you on this journey.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 9:27 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Such a lovely story. :-)
Date: 01 Sep 2012 9:08 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Great tale! Unique and orginal! Thanks for entertaining me!~
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Sorry about the lateness of my response Gmail sent all my reviews to my junk mail.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
great start
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. Sorry about the lateness of the response. Gmail sent all my reviews to my junk mail.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
i have cried for the past couple of minutes and had to let you know this story is the best . it takes alot to move me and this beautifully written chapter captivated me. actually this entire story from the beginning .
thank you for sharing your story . i cant wait to continue reading
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, what a lovely compliment!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:00 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
great chapter. I finally got a chance to sit down and read it, and it was sweet and funny. I loved Renee coming into it, and asking all kinds of questions. i about spit my drink out when she asked about him going to the bathrrom and holding his dick.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:40 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
ahhhhh i so love that bella told renee the truth and she couldn't stop asking him questions. off course edward answers.
the girls how precious.i knew edward would make a great dad
they both are great together and thrilled they have friends like rose and emmett who accepted them both fully. what a great family
i had so much fun reading the story and loved how it ended thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 09 Jan 2012 2:55 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
This was a lovely chapter. You did a great job with this story. thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:03 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Beautiful!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 08 Jan 2012 11:27 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Awwww, so sweet and perfect. Thank you for taking us on this journey and allowing us to be a part of their HEA.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 10:31 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
thank you for a wonderful story
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 08 Jan 2012 6:07 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Beautiful..
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:45 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Beautiful as always..loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 3:42 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
Loved it !!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 3:13 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
AAAWWW!! Absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read!!! The base is so different, funny but lots of love. Even from the beginning. She loved him enough to be pateint with him and teach him even thou she thought she may have to give him up. Thank God Rose and Emmett came along with their job offer, that was just what they needed. Edward will probably never be refined and all that, but he doesn't need to be cauase Bella loves him just the way he is. GREAT STORY GREAT JOB THANK YOU!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 1:16 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 08 Jan 2012 12:40 AM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Date: 07 Jan 2012 10:35 PM Title: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
great ending! was that Leah's way of saying goodbye? Renee was a trip ...lol
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Yes it was part about Leah saying goodbye and part about Edward realizing his place completely.
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:39 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
This is an absolutely great story! Well done!
I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. The next future take is with the beta and should be coming soon.
Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:53 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
This is a lovely story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Another Futuretake is coming. I just have to find time around christmas here to finish it
Date: 10 Dec 2011 5:57 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:38 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
where they met?! great idea!!! do you thin the wolves will be watching nearby?
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 10:54 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
Yay! I am so happy you are continuing with the story! I don't know if you're taking requests or not, but one outtake that I would love to see is when Bella tells Edward she's pregnant and how he reacts, or something along those lines. Keep up the good work I love your writing!
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks. I don't think I will be doing outtakes so much as future takes, but I will consider it.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 5:50 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
how sweet i love your edward!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I love writing him
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:48 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
SWEEEEET Post anther one!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 26
They found their way. Sweet story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 12:54 PM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:26 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
Oh I was so excited to see this update. I am glad Edward gets to get married and enjoy his babies and wife!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 7:15 AM Title: Futuretake- The Proposal
Aaawwwww.........the proposal was prescious. Is there going to be another outtake featuring the wedding? Hope so.....can't wait!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am really enjoying your story. I have had a hard time reading fic lately untill I found this. This is so different, THANK GOD! Thanks for your hard work to write this.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
AAAA+++++
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
I totally enjoyed it, I think I have read some of you work before but I can't wait to read more
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
that one needed a tissue alert
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
awww, he could sex my fence
Author's Response:
LOL, yes, I'm sure he knows just how to use the hole digger.
Thanks again!
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
that was funny I could just picture it
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
yay
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks for your reviews, even the small ones make me smile.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow again, poor Edward
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
gonna get cold in winter
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
hopefully Charlie left her some money and she can get a cabin in the woods and they can live happily ever after
or maybe the Cullens left him a rich boy and he will be like Tarzan coming home to Greystone
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
what a great story
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
well isn't she accomodating
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
yes the most beautiful man in the world
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow will she end up living in the cave with him or bring him back to Forks
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
A lot like the story Feral that I am reading in FanFiction but it doesn't have wolves
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all the reviews. I have head about Feral. I didn't want to read it while I was still writing this, becuase I didn't want to be swayed in any direction, but I have heard it's great and intend to check it out.
Date: 15 Oct 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
I have really enjoyed reading this story.
Thank you writing
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 15 Oct 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for sharing this story, it was really raw and beautiful; I can't wait to read more ^-^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
even savage Edward is cute with his possessiveness
Date: 12 Oct 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
Aaaawwwww.......I'm so sad to see this story end. I loved every chapter. I know you said you'd be doing a few outtakes, but do you think you will be doing a sequil since Bella and Edward will be have twins in the near future? Pleeeaaaasse......... :-)
Date: 11 Oct 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
MINE yes Edward yours!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
cool love the insight! it's nice to see what ed was thinking.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
thanks for the wonderful story! i am glad things worked out!! it was beautiful and i enjoyed it!! thanks :P
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed. The short EPOV outtake from Chapter 1 was just posted.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
good glad billy didn't do that wow the guilt to know where they stopped looking is where he was!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 24
OH F!!!! what an a-hole!!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
how sad... poor ed!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
oh where is it all going to go?
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
yeah at least they know. Em is wonderful! so is rose! i hope they can help ed!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh no! how funny rose and her "puppy" play comment i almost died laughing! why doesn't bella just tell the truth?
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
hum what is going to be em and rose's reaction i am soo wondering. i hope ed will be happy.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
i hope he likes where they are going. i wonder if the wolves will follow them too?
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
yeah! one thing is falling in place.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
yeah there is your way out! great! haa rose and em old neat twist!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
he remembers poor guy!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
interesting... i still can't see her staying there.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh it just keeps getting more complicated.. she can't live with him and he really can't live with her... argh!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh poor poor ed... i thought at least one family member would be alive to help him. how sad!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
yeah we need more info!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh boy.... what is she going to do? i knew they are going to hook up but.wow complicated!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh boy... can't talk but we can do that! haha!! that's nature for you
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh the "dog" is out of the bag! HAHA!! i can't believe they fired her! what is she going to do?
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh boy is he going to want to go back... will she find out where he is from and who he is? wow! i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you again for all your reviews, they are great to read!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh my didn't expect that...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your reviews. Glad you are enjoying.
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh boy... poor bells!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
interesting turn of events... she is going to go back.. that is funny that the wolves are the same as the pack and the russet wolf likes her... can't wait to read more!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh boy how is she going to find her way out? what is going to happen to ed? this is very interesting can't wait for more!
Date: 08 Oct 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great story but it feels like you ended it in the middle are you planning a sequel?
Author's Response:
There are going to be future outtakes.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 08 Oct 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
this was a truely wonderful story, thank you so much for takign the tiem to write it and share it with us all. Very nice.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh boy how did he get there? what is his story? i can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
You'll see : )
Thanks for the reviews.
Date: 07 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh intersting thanks for not having her sleep with ben! oh ed can't wait to meet you!
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks for reading.
Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
great ending! so happy for them!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
(applause) that was an amazing story and one of the best ive read in a long time! Thank you for your hard work you're amazing!
Author's Response:
<3 thank you so much!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful! So sad to see it end!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
thanks for the wonderful story. The ending was perfect, no big hype, just a simple loving family. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Excellent story. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks!