Date: 29 May 2013 5:09 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
I love this story! Just so you know, I have over 100 emails of updated stories that I am neglecting cause I can't stop reading this story when RL lets me! Thanks so much for writing! Mwah!
Date: 28 May 2013 9:08 PM Title: Bella
I am brand new, but my mom turned me on to your writing, and I love it so far! Now, if she could keep her mouth shooshed with spoilers from your newest epilogue we would be great!
Date: 27 May 2013 8:35 PM Title: Bella
Thanks for writing this story - it's been on my TBR list but I just saw on FB (I think) where Quiet Storm is disappearing soon so I figured I had to bump it up. I'm glad I did,cause these two are crazy!
Date: 17 May 2013 6:55 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
awwww i loved it
Date: 16 May 2013 7:51 AM Title: Olde E
I just had to comment here. I was so cursing Heidi to hell when she pushed that chick on Edward. But I'm happy he did good. Temptation is everywhere and it's how you deal with it that matters. If he stays strong and true to Bella, no reason to curse Edward for being human
Date: 13 May 2013 4:28 AM Title: Bebella
This is the 3rd time reading this story.....I still busted out laughing!!!!!! I'm waiting for an update on Riders so I figured I'd start over because I love it soooo much!!!
Date: 07 May 2013 11:24 PM Title: Under Pressure
!!! I was 10 pounds 8. Ceasarean. My daughter was 10 pounds. Natural!!!!! In NZ they don't really give you ceasareans unless its an emergengcy. (I was dead when I was born). But they do have a drip with stuff that "induces" labour. Because I had to have that. My waters brpke but I didnt dialate or something... Just thought I'd share..lol. Thanks for writing this story. :o)
Date: 04 May 2013 5:19 AM Title: Round Two
omfg absoluelty dying over the tampon, edwards reaction then the fucking dog bwahahahahhah <3 boo freshy
Date: 03 May 2013 11:38 PM Title: Bebella
lmfao!!!! Bella is crackpot crazy!! I love it.
Date: 03 May 2013 4:53 PM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
Fantastic story. Loved every minute if it. I can't wait to read the seguels.
Date: 02 May 2013 8:40 PM Title: Bebella
I am not sure where to even start! This story was amazing!!!!! I completed this and all the out takes. I will be starting the sequel next and can't wait. I have literally stopped everything and any spare time is spent reading this. I am so excited because you have so many stories I can read through the end of the year! You should be published my dear for sure. I am addicted to FF and this is one of my favorites! Thanks for sharing
Date: 14 Mar 2013 3:13 AM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
I'm re-reading the series again, can't get enough of these stories. I love the way you write each character, your fics are definitely my favourites. Love skip's pov, when I read his narrations, I can't help but hear the narration of goodfellas. Keep up the great writing, can't wait for riders and tribute to update.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:23 AM Title: Bebella
I have read all three stories and coming back to reread and review! This just OWNS me :-) it was so good to reread these two getting together...bella was so cute and funny....hot and hotter ha ha! And the cat scratching her ass ...too funny.....
Date: 21 Feb 2013 6:03 PM Title: Checks and Balances
Loved it!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:08 PM Title: Par for the Course
Loved it!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 8:34 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
Loved it!
Date: 20 Feb 2013 6:30 PM Title: Something in the Water
Loved it!
Date: 20 Feb 2013 8:17 AM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 1:24 PM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
Loved it!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:24 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Loved it!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 11:02 PM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Loved it!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 11:23 AM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
Loved it!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:57 AM Title: Antipasto
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 6:07 PM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
Loved it!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 4:08 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 3:31 PM Title: Par for the Course
Ok Babycakes, who gives a damn who left. When I was preggers wit my son who is 7 now I had mad dreams about his grandfather, he happens to be beautiful and man did I let that dude screw me 7 ways to Sunday :) of course nothing came of it, when my Chunky Punky got here the dreams stopped and 2 this day I still get a kick outta some of the wilder dreams. Great chappie Love as always.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2013 9:07 PM Title: Parts of life
I love you story so much you can go on and on as far as I am concerned Thanks for writing it
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:15 PM Title: Round Three
"If I was going to kill you...I'd use my hands." One of the best lines from Fried Green Tomatos! Great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2013 1:01 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
This story is so intriguing. I love it!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 6:35 PM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
Loved it :)
Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:01 PM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
Love this story, I forgot how hard a time they had communicating back in the beginning, lots of insecurities and now I bet she wishes she didn't know everything she knows. Maybe not, ? Oh, and how it used to be between her and Aro. I'm feeling the need to go reread this story.
Thanks for writing can't wait to read the next chapter of RotS!:-) love the kids story, especially Dame.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 11:50 AM Title: Bebella
mm! hi! I can't jump to chapter 41! I don't know why!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 10:12 PM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
And thank you for writing something so good.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 9:15 PM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
I had forgotten how needy Bella was in the beginning.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:32 AM Title: TKO
Loved it! Bella is a hilarious drunk!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:36 AM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 11:38 AM Title: Hot
lol caius reminded me of pauly d while i was reading, im guessing no thats who inspired him?
Date: 31 Dec 2012 1:36 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
damn! I'm from Puerto Rico and I even think the Harry Potter vacations is waaaay better than this island! I swear!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 11:03 PM Title: Bebella
i love ur storys but its been awhile so im having to go over this one an get up to date but i love love it :) just wanted u to know lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:56 PM Title: Light my Fire
Love this! Love the story am hooked
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 9:09 PM Title: The Game
Great story. I get the slang words, but not sure if necessary, but I get the artistic side.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 4:30 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two
wow. I just started this story and cant stop reading it :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:50 AM Title: Bebella
That has to be the funniest shit ive read in long time!!! O and that lemon has me reaching for a smoke damn that was hot ugh so damn controlling ugh i feel like im not cohereent at all i know i just fucked up that spelling but shit that was nice and long and strong good fuck, um yea so great start ;)
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Soooo awesome!!!! I have rec'd the hell out of this story even though I came to it so damn late.
Thank you for creating such amazing characters for us to love and hate...some at the same time LOL
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:19 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Beautiful Thank u!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
Edward seemed so set in his ways. It's a surprise that they ever got past the first meeting.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:49 PM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
I love your out takes. Every one of them is interesting and they add real value to the whole story
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:09 AM Title: Baby Blues
Esme is struggling!! I actually feel really bad for Carlisle and dare I say...I like him :)
He is stepping up and doing what needs to be done for his family...Esme totally needs to serious medical attention. Post partum is a big hell yes...poor thing
Wow, Edward is taking over the family with gusto! I know he has to make big moves to show that he won't be standing for any crap & it's very hot to see him do it.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:57 AM Title: Checks and Balances
I really like Bellas thoughts on how and why Marcus wanted to take her out...makes perfect sense and I know that Edward thinks the same but won't ever say it to her. Can't believe he shot Aro, get it but I'm not sure Aro was in on the plot hehehehe
Bella may have a small slots addiction that seems to make her shot out serious curses!!!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:48 AM Title: Par for the Course
Love the crazy pregnancy sex dreams!!! I can't wait to see what Edward has planned for Marcus....no one goes after Bella while pregnant (or at all)!!!
Thank god Bella talked to Edward when she woke up!!! Plus she is so observant she reads all the signs and knows others are lying to her & she reads her hubs really well and knew something was up. Good girl!!!
She is getting pretty good with Barry hehehehe
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:32 AM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake
Good chapter. Glad to know what happened then.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:31 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for sharing your collective talents. Loved it all!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:26 PM Title: Icing on the Cake
Awe...what a sweet family.
I'm so glad for the extra parts.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:17 PM Title: This is it
Well shit...I'm strapping myself in cause this is going to be a bumpy ride
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:11 PM Title: SunSational Day
I so understand how Bella feels with Carlisle...I do feel bad for him cause I know he is only trying to be nice and help...but he has creeped on her for so long and then he stupid stunt at Twilight, she is tramatized by it without really knowing it.
I'm glad he was helping with the sign & it does kinda break my heart when he tries and it doesn't go right. :( I just wish he wasn't such a dick before...maybe I forgive to easy too
OMG they are going to do a hit at the salon!!! What is Edward thinking?? I knew he was up to something when he started with the whole, you should take some time off & relax...take a few weeks or more!!! I'm sure he thinks that she should rest but I knew there was a ulterior motive :)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:54 PM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
See, Carlisle getting them into shit again. LOL Seriously though, I just love to hate Carlisle...then I feel bad for him when he tries to make it up...then he does something again and I hate him...it's a viscious cycle :)
Sooooo excited that they are finally having that little baby!!!! It's going to be fun watching him deal with her during her pregnancy...she is already hormonally crazy just wait!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:43 PM Title: Prove It
Edward has to get tipsy just to be around Carlisle...that can not be a good thing. I don't blame him, I'm just saying...
Damn the FBI always ruins a good family dinner!!!
BTW....I read several chapter at a time on my kindle then come back here and review...just in case you are wondering why there are so many by me in a few minutes time. :)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:39 PM Title: Something in the Water
That has got to suck when you want one so bad and everyone else has one...:(
The fact that she only wants him for his sperm made me giggle...cause that is how it ends up feeling when you are trying to damn hard. Poor poor boy, has to have sex all the time...
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:36 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity
Loved this chapter!!!! I didn't know what the hell Carlisle was up to and he scares the crap out of me too when he is alone with Bella. Sober or not!!!
I can't beleive he did that...he really does have a death wish. And Edward....holy shit on a stick...he was out of control. Carlisle deserved it but wow.
Then f**king her in the alley...ummmm yeah that was hot...is it wrong I found that hot after everything that had happen...don't care, it was!!!
Dinner with the family was awesome...and that's all I can say about it...it was perfect
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:35 PM Title: Under Pressure
Yeah for Santino!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:29 PM Title: Get It
I would rather have Skip do me instead of going to a lecture too!!!
Carlisle....he has got to be the dumbest f**k on the planet!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:25 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
Esme was killing me this chapter!!! From Aro to Carlisle, she was rocking it. And Carlisle is back on my shit list..again. What the f**k is wrong with him??? I hope Gail is pregnant and Marcus either kicks his ass or kills him. Right not I'm leaning towards the second option!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:56 AM Title: Parts of life
Glad to see Jacob go. He was always around, being a goof. Lol
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:03 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
loved it
Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:45 AM Title: Helluva Day
Why do readers have to attack stories? Why don't they just stop reading? The warnings are there. The rating is clear. And if is about young people reading them, they are curious, and will find stories in other places. Many stories portray couples in loving, committed relationships-and enjoying sex.
if it is the violence than I wish they'd take their energy to the video gaming world. There is lots that they can rage about there.
i love your writing, the passion and the lemons. Please don't let the naysayers get to you. I've seen too many amazing writers leave ff because of a few.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:15 PM Title: Olde E
I get that something suddenly flashed or pushed him into thinking like he did before Bella or even not that he was thinking like he did but he remembering it. Everyone does it I think at some point or on some level. To most of us, like Edward we realize that we have what we want now and the old way/life was always missing something & we have moved past it. He has grown :)
So, he proved his love to her by killing Jane...does that come with a special card or something LOL I'm glad he did it himself. I really hope that things with him and Aro smooth out soon.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:08 PM Title: Poker Face
Thank god they didn't name that baby Charlie!!! LOL
Love love love that Bella told Jane off albeit in a whispered tone during a hug...I think that made it ten times better though!!!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:05 PM Title: Boxed In
Awesome chapter!!! From Jazz bringing Annie & Jacob to watch over Bella to the meeting with Marcus & then Carlisle telling him about Jane...the revelations under the bridge!!!!
Did Jane & Alec really think that the people they were hiring to do this wouldn't some how get back to Edward or at least one of his close associates???
Date: 30 Nov 2012 3:59 PM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
Loved their 'baseball game' at the end!! Perhaps if he would have just told her what the hell was going on, she wouldn't have freaked the fuck out. That was an agruement that has been brewing for a long time though.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:09 PM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Knew you couldn't trust Jane...bitch...and Alec needs to grow a pair man up. I can't believe they are going to try to take them out and take over...is she crazy?
This is going to be a interesting ride.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:22 PM Title: Hot
Edward with the flu...hysterical!!!! Bellas description of Edward with the flu was priceless!!! Poor poor baby boy :(
I can't believe she went to Eclispe either, her reason cracks me up though. Her chat with Lexi was interesting and then Ed Sr....awesome hehehehe
WTF with the car bomb?!?!?!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:13 PM Title: Stages
So knew that he would take him out but wow, Aro was in charge of doing it!! The funeral was an interesting mix of chaos and poor Bella doesn't what she is supposed to feel.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:41 PM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Edward and his random moments of emotional honesty, freaking Macys LOL It was great though :)
So happy that Bella kicked Janes ass and she totally deserved it. Esme was so proud of her and I'm glad that once Edward calmed down so was he.
OMG He ordered the hit on her dad, didn't he!!! I can't believe he let him live this long but wow...
Date: 29 Nov 2012 5:04 AM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
That was one hellish day! I did know that Bella was soooo going to win that bet about Esme. :)
Her parents WTF, are they insane??? I guess I might be able to understand if they had been a huge part of her life and cared for her and stuff that they would be worried that she wasn't doing this on her own. But they never cared before and her dad with all the things he has said to her and called her...never again would I have a thing to do with that man!!
Edward was so cute when he was freaking the hell out with her both before the hospital and once there. We should all hope for a husband that would that for us!! That is love :)
Carlisle helping Edward let off some steam was funny but that Karma comment, damn he's lucky Edward only knocked him out!!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:52 AM Title: Antipasto
Bellas relationship with Aro is so cute...she cracks him the hell up and it's fun to read! Holy shit storm with Esme sorta finding out about Jane...can't believe Jane was bragging, is she stupid?!?!
Bella letting Edward know that if he ever strays he will never be getting it from her again...awesome!!!!! Then saying that she might also be tempted, omg to funny, yet it does go both ways!
Thankgiving went well...Edward feeing the baby a chicken leg LOL Poor Nanny giving 6 people a heart attack at the table about AC & Victoria asking for pot...so good.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:41 AM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
Wow, Bella standing up for Edward to Marcus...ballsy ;)
Is it sick that I kinda liked the basement scene...I think you did a great job with it. After all these guys did just try to kill his wife & he doesn't work a Wal-Mart he is a freaking mafia underboss! Carlisle shooting Sergi earned him back some more good points in my book. He is slowly growning on me LOL
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:37 AM Title: Checks and Balances
Awesome! Every chapter gets better and better!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:51 PM Title: Bad Taffy
The pothead mother-in-laws were AWESOME!!! Then adding in Nanny trying it...fell off the couch laughing!!!!
Bella is a freaking kick ass wife...Edward should have felt proud of her, she held it together and knew what needed to be done and freaking took care of it. Her conversation with Aro both over the phone and then on the boardwalk was a favorite of mine!!!
And Edward...she just shot some dude trying to kill her...she is so not going to go anywhere that you are not in the near future LOL