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Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 6: Seeing it from the Inside

you know, i skipped through alot of the first chapters and really was only reading until Rose part. but from there the story is very fitting for any rapist

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

ok i sort of liked this? but you put it as a bella and edward story and apparently it's a bella and peter story? i love how you write but i'm a strictly an edward and bella reader ;) so sorry i won't be reading the sequel ;( 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to respond. I'm sorry you were misled.  I think what happened was TWCS changed and it was originally billed as a Bella/Charlie fic but that's not an option anymore so I think it defaulted to Bella/Edward, and I didn't know it. So I appreciate that you took the time to leave a nice review and let me know there was a problem. Thanks again! I understand being an Edward only person. Well maybe not, LOL I'd never write an Edward story but that's beside the point, we all have our own ideals. ;)

xoxoxoxo

M

Reviewer: Livi222014 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Her Only Reaction

sick...but i might be sicker because ill keep reading. 



Author's Response:

LOL ya. Thanks for reading and reviewing

xoxoxoxox

m

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

That's it? What happened to B?!



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews...sorry for the delayed response. There is a sequel on fanfic.net same author name called A True Mate's Heart...it's unfinished however.

xoxoxoxo

m

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 6: Seeing it from the Inside

Ok, wow. I get that B is his mate & he needed revenge but he just fucked his mates dad!!! Wth?!

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hope

Dun dun dun

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 3: Going Nowhere

Ok, now he's definitely getting worse

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2: Getting Started

This is disturbing, but I guess I understand how he's thinking.. Sad.

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Her Only Reaction

:/

Reviewer: mandm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

holy shit you are one twiztid person lol ive got to say im very glad i happened across ur stories and hope to see more soon



Author's Response:

*giggles* Thanks! Again sorry for the delayed response...glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: IzabelCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

love it, please update soon.



Author's Response:

This is the end darlin'. No more. I started a sequel but I haven't finished it, lost my muse on that one.

I'm glad you loved this one though, thank you for the review!

xoxooxoxo

mynxi

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

Great story

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your support and reviews!

xxoxoxoxo

M

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: Seeing it from the Inside

Peter's POV? No, didn't see that comin'.

 

I expect nobody will ever find Charlie.



Author's Response:

Nope, I don't think they will ever find him, unless they decide to excavate that are for some reason...a mall maybe? LOL.

 

Thanks for the reviews, darlin'! I know it wasn't the easiest thing in the world to try to get through I appreciate your attempt at reading it and your lack of flames.

xoxoxoxoo
M

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hope

ug

 

I actually skipped over most of the previous chapters to get to here.

 

You did Rosie okay, I think.



Author's Response:

That works! I can understand skipping some of the yucky stuff. Thank you for the comment on Rose. I wasn't 100% sure of her, that was really my first attempt in her POV and a girl POV. So thanks!

xoxoxoxo
M

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Her Only Reaction

Well that was pretty fucked up.

 

I can see why it was pulled off FF.

 

okay, ew, I'll attempt the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hahaha, yeah I can understand why it was pulled too. Thanks for braving it and reviewing!

 

xoxoxoxoxoxo
M

Reviewer: reign77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

Very interesting story.  Surely its not finished, so much left unread.  



Author's Response:

It's not...there is a sequel called 'A True Mate's Heart'. I don't have it done and it's not posted here, yet. It is still up at fanfiction.net for the time being until they pull it too. You are welcome to read it there or keep me on author alert here and I may start posting it here. It's about 15 chapters and you are welcome to check it out. :)

Thank you for the review. It's funny this is the most read story I have and yet the least reviewed according to TWCS stats.

 

xoxoxoxoxox
M

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

We're all sick fucks, some of us are just unwilling to admit it. I'm not one of them, lol. It was a pretty good story, if I do say so myself.



Author's Response:

Haha I loved your reviews. You have a great point. And I KNOW things aren't all sunshine and roses so it sucks but we all look for a happily ever after and in truth there just isn't one. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Charlie surely didn't get his HEA LOL.

 

xoxoxoxoxo
M

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Her Only Reaction

I'll be honest, I read these stories because they ARE more real, even the ones that have the vampires. So many people act like it's all sunshine, butterflies, and rainbons for everyone, simply because they can when they're writing. I have a hard time accepting it, because it gives some "sheltered' people unrealistic expectations or views for when they're no longer hidden.

Reviewer: ifonly Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

Wish you had added more to this story. There was so much more I wanted to know about.



Author's Response:

Well, there is a sequel posted on fanfic.net. http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2059998/mynxi Plus you can ask questions and I can try to answer them or let you know why they went unanswered. :)

 

Thank you for the review.

xoxoxoxox
M

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

hahaha awesome!



Author's Response:

LOL well glad you liked :)

Thanks for the review!

xoxoxxooxo
M-

Reviewer: RenegadePhoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

Hooooooly shit.... ummm... wow? That was... interesting?



Author's Response:

I'll go with your meaning "I liked it but totally appalled and can't say I liked it." LOL...j/k 9 chapters of the sequel have been posted on ff.net if you are interested in following up.

 

Thanks for the review!

xoxoxoxoxo
M

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 ___!

thanks awsome story i wish we could do shit like that to rapes



Author's Response:

Thank you. I think we all wish they got their just desserts to some degree :)

 

Thanks for the review!

xoxoxoxo
M

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