Date: 24 May 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the chapter. Great to see you back.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
i am thrilled that she has friends that care and love her. she so deserves to see what friends do for each other. i think she will be blown away by these friends and family. i am so happy that edward went to her and they where able to get close and admit their feelings for one another.
love it
Date: 24 May 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
im glad that they are there to help her !
Date: 24 May 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
I LOVED IIITTTT !!! :DD
Date: 24 May 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting! Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very emotionally charged... but I wouldnt have it any other way BB!!!
I loved this chapter, she really needed to feel that connection that was instantly there with all of them.
Love it!!!
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yes you made me cry. darn you! hehe can't wait for more.
Date: 10 May 2011 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow. What can I say? Your story is truly beautiful. You kept me crying for a while now.
You put words on things that are not so easy to explain. It's really intresting to see Bella's relationships grow whit the 2 families back in New York.
Jacob, Billy and all the others inhabitants of Forks are complete jakasses and jerks! They are the monstere of this story, not Bella as they love to say.
I can't wait to reed you again.
P.S : Sorry if I made some mistakes, I'm french and writing in english, is not something always so simple.
XOXO
Date: 05 May 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow the was mean of Jacob. Can't believe Edward didn't punch him. I would have
Date: 25 Apr 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
im glad taht she is going home with him ! i hope she lets him in
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
i so want to know what billy said to bella. i feel for her. so shocked that the community didn't come to either bella's or charlie's sid efor comfort or anything. i do not blame her for wanting to sell the house and not look back. her parents where everything to her and they are gone.so i am hoping she learns to live in a world where she exists and learn to love herself. i feel if she does that then she could let edward and his family in and learn to love them and know she is alos worthy of their love. she has had it tough i hope she puts all of it in her art and live through her painitngs and get an education and make her parents proud of her for moving and living on. they where already proud of her. i so love it. thanx
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love this BB!!!!
Happy Easter! :)
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
Maybe I have read too many stories, but this seems completely different then the first time I read it.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Another great chapter,can't wait to read more. Happy Easter if you celabrate it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can't believe people would treat someone so shitty, esp after their parent just died. Dam! Bella's right she needs out of that town fast.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow!!!! The last two chapters were absolutly heart wrenching to read... My own Beloved Daddy died on the 29th of Sept 1979. He died in a horribly nasty car accident. It has been 32 years for me yet I feel the pain just as much as I did back then. Awsome work and way to make your words transport your readers to her world.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
cant wait to read more. great chapter btw
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow the people of forks were so rude to Bella. Thankful for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
i think it should feel awkward. death is awkward. i think that is a subject we all have trouble with and always will. too bad noone showed support to bella. whether they didn't know what to say or they just weren't sure how to act. but man heartbreaking she is all alone and not even the reverend have the balls to go to see if she needed anything. i love it very well done. it expressed totally how bella felt. lost lonely her world over. her parents where everything to her.it will be tough but with the love of edward and her new family and her art she will get through it and find a way to keep her parents in her life in a new way. love it
Date: 14 Apr 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Urgh - poor Bella.... :-(
Don't apologies for this feeling awkard, hon - funerals suck! Period. :-(
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
That whole chapter was so so sad. It brought back memories of my own fathers funeral and how awful it was. I can't imagine no one speaking to me when my dad died. That is just horrific. sigh......
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
I know why it feels awkward... because they dont belong in Forks anymore.
Forks is no longer her home, they are both just visitors there.
Thats how I felt when I read it. Just sayin' *shrugs*
I love it BB!
*hugs*
Date: 13 Apr 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
This was a really emotional chapter. I wanted to slap all those people at the service. Even the Reverend deserved a good pop.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
im excited to see what happens next with these 2
Date: 08 Apr 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is so sweet. Thanks for a wonderful update
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another great chapter,can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter was beautiful. The washing of the hair, you made that FEEL intimate as I read it. I love it BB
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
ahhhh well that went better than i thought. she isn't shutting him out. seems she just might let him love her. she wants to. i am glad she is leaning on him. love it
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad that both of their feelings are out in the open.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
WOAH! That's fast! I admire her courage! hahahaha! If that was me, I would wait for the guy to sa it to me first. hehehehehe... Nice story (as always). Keep it up! Can't wait for the succeeding chapters. :D
Date: 07 Apr 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter,cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow was shocked they she blurted it out that she loved him. i can't wait to hear edwards response. seems they feed off each other in a good way. seems her mother had a sense of what her daughter needed. i hope bella listens. love it
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Very good sappy reading. I do not mean that in a sarcastic or negative way. Thank you for writing this. I have enjoyed reading your story so far.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
im excited to see what happens next
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
what?!?!?
i soo didnt seee that coming!!
loved it and cant ewait for more!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
She said a lot sooner then I thought she would. Great update
Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh boy.........
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
I loved it better than the original. I wish you would not have talked yourself out of it with the first one. It was perfect.
Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think you are doing a very good job w/ this story. I had read it well over a year ago, I think. So I can't honestly remember it all word for word, but I am guessing THIS chapter was not in the original one? If so, I am sorry---put it down to my old age!! :-) I feel it is smoother now, and seems to flow better!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Such a sweet sad chapter. I can't believe Bella was the first to admit her feelings. She really is the brave one of the 2. Edward should have spoke his feelings first. :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*applauds you*
*hugs*
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow, this was really sad, but i cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well crap, I've been putting off reading so that I wouldn't have to stop and then when I do start I end up in tears. Granted I've cried through the whole thing so far. Patiently waiting for the next update.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
im glad that he went to her even though shes been avoiding him
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella. Loved it
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
OMG how much can one girl take :(
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aww I got all excited and stuff *sniffles and wipes away tear*
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
so so sad.... I'm so glad that Edward followed her to Forks. sigh....
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
Dam! Hasn't Bella already suffered enough? That sucks big time.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
damn if thats not a gentleman than i dont know what is... you needed me. i loved it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love it :)
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
ahhh you got to wonder how much heartbreak a person can take. she has been through hell and back and left to gain some normalcy and to paint again a week later she loses her dad and her life is once again turned upside down.oh my heart goes out to her. she is so strong but i have to wonder when she will snap. i am glad edward came down for her but i was kind of hoping they all would be there for her. so loving it all and can't wait for the next chapter. loving it thank you
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
I need to remember to have tissues handy when reading some of your stories. When you write you put such emotion into it. I cannot wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my god.. I knew he would go to her.. Will she let him in.. God I hope so.. :)Leona
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope that Edward will help her.. Not give up.. I think with the sketch and the note.. Edward nows she needs help... and won't quiet.. I hope. Beautiful story. :)Leona
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love that Edward came to help Bella.:)
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
I saw you post this story a while ago and didnt have the time to read it unil now. Im so glad I did. I love it! Fortunatly for me I was reminded because I have you as a fav author for this iste and fanfiction.net. As a result I have noticed that you accidently deleted the last chapter on this site. this should be chapter 10 according to the fan fic account. Cant wait til you update again. Hopefully I will be able to read as you post!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
well bella you are a very smart girl. it seems you have quite the wall built around you as well. i can see why you do. i am hoping you let it come down a little to see if you can have a friend in your life. you are such a smart girl it seems if your are getting an education and going to paint you might want to let some love in your life. it seems you are very deserving for someone to make you there world. your mother would have wanted you to be happy. it seems you still have a lot to deal with. here is to hope
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hi I am going to rate your next chapter tell I catch up. they are so wonderfully done. I feel like I am right there. Can't get the goosebumps to go away. so sad and wonderful at the same time. :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
wwowwwww that was very sad.. I got goosebumps. :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow... sparks fly..
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
im glad that shes kind of letting edward in in her own way
Date: 01 Apr 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
Still a wonderful story. Thank you for reworking it. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
She loves him... he loves her... and they both dont have a clue :(
poor kids.
*hugs*
Date: 31 Mar 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great update. Hopefully Bella is going to let Edward in.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
oooooo
awww thats rly moving
loving this story x
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Everyone assumes the worst about the other in this story. sigh.... so so sad......
Date: 31 Mar 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella doesn't know how to let people in. I hope she learns soon.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Still loving the revised version. Are you going to change any of the story?
Date: 30 Mar 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
well now back to square 1 with her! she just needs to open up! and listen to her mom
Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow, another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow... touchy!!
Poor Ed, I really dont think he was making fun of her.
I cant wait til the next chapter :)
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bitchy Bella really isn't all to pleasant. I hope that everyone can see through her. :)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was really enjoying your story until your note at the end of this chapter. Hopefully it won't have too much angst.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
got to love esme. bella is so strong. her dad did the best he could with her. he was smart instead of dying inside or curling him within himself he was still there for her. taught her self defense taught, told her to keep painting her mom would have wanted that, they fixed a car up together. he was great for her and she is better for all of it. she has along ways to go as well. i love that bella put make in his place. she is not a push over. i am so loving the story. can't wait for the next chapter. thanx
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
well im glad that they are letting her in !
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Still loving reading it again.
:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
oooooooooooooo
love x
Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Warning heard *salutes you*
I figured all couldnt stay rainbows and roses :(
*hugs*
Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
awesome chapter - can't wait until the next one :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am glad that the parents were so sweet to Bella. She deserves it. :)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ugh - poor artistElla!! :-(
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
well at least everyone likes her paintings! keep the updates comming
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
omg omg omg!!!!!
love!!!!!!!!!!!! more plz x x x
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
awesome chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Gosh I just want to grab her and hug her!
So much sadness
Love it BB!
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Their reactions to her being the Isabella was so funny and Alice like! You are really working hard to make me cry, aren´t you! Lol!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
I´m glad she shared her story with the rest of the gang. That nap with Edward was a nice little treat, can´t wait to hear his side of things. You couldn´t have ended the chapter in a better spot. Newton getting the crap kicked out of him by Bella was priceless!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really hope that Edward goes after her, I know that he won´t tell what she confided in him, so I can just imagine how everyone feels about her running out of the dining hall.
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was intense, but I´m glad she let Edward in somewhat and shared with him the story of what happened to her mother.
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Looks like it´s going to be a bit of a tear-jerker. You love making me cry, don´t you! Lol! Love it as always!
Krazi
xoxo