[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
omg hot hot hot
please more
happy Birthday Robert
Author's Response:
awe...only an hour of his birthday left in SA,but happy bday Robert,indeed!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
These two are incredible. Both fighting for dominance, each one alsways wants to have the last word, provocation the other and than the tension/chemistry between them.
It definetly isn't getting bored.
Till the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
I absolutely LOVED this chapter! so sweet and funny. You've written Edward so endearingly, and I cannot wait to read on!!!
Author's Response:
O,THANK YOU SO MUCH! REVIEWS LIKE THIS KEEPS THE PROCESS FUN!
:)
Date: 13 May 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
OMG, why did I miss chapter 14? oh yes I didn´t get the alert!!!! This is so hot, when the next one?
Author's Response:
HAHAHA! GLAD YOU LIKED! I'LL DO MY BEST TO UPDATE BY NEXT WEEK! :)
Date: 13 May 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
OMG!!!!! Lloved it.....gimmie more please...haha
Date: 13 May 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
well i hope she starts to imbrace him !
Date: 13 May 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
Love this chapter. You are killing me with your story, it's funny, sexy, and the tension between them is ahhhhhhh, too much to handle. Pls update soon, you made us wait too long for this one! ;)
Date: 01 May 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
I loves the episode and was not asleep lol jejejejjej thanks
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
At least he was honest with Bella that he was awake. I guess to see the evening unfold from Edwards POV would have been funny. The reunion with Jasper and the arm wrestling of Charlie and Emmett.
I am curious how long they want to deny their feelings to each other and perhaps talk about it or their arrangement. Because I don't think that they want to end being in a "relation" with each other anytime soon.
See you next chapter.
As for fanfiction-recommondations, it depends, what you like to read:
- a nice family story would be "Parachute" by KitsuShel (on coffeshop, fanfiction.net)
- "The Blizzard" by SheViking of an ex-soldier trying to go back in his live after the army (on fanfiction.net)
- "if we ever meet again" by bkrumova (on coffeshop)
There are so many more, but it all depends on what you prefer.
Author's Response: Mhhh... I hear you. Maybe I should do an outtake in EPOV of Chapter 14??? It would be fun to see what happened at the bar and to maybe reveal some of the things Jasper told Edward about Bella. Although,I have to tell you my initial idea was to have B think E knows more than he actually does... I'll give it some thought,though! Thanks for the rec's! I've read parachute...great fic! I'm going to try the other two now! :) I generally like story's with some meat to the bone, well developed characters and a story line that hasn't been done over,and over, and... You get the idea. :) Thanks for your thoughts!
Date: 27 Apr 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
She needs to just jump his bones now. They do so good texting and have fun at it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
Oh, dip! Hoping for a resolution (or at least the reveal of) the Jessica Situation (it deserves to be capitalized, IMHO) next chapter? Thanks for sharing; it was wonderful, as always.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
That is a nice wake up for her but now she is going to be so guilty. Was he awake cant wait to find out.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
Oh Lord, B! When it starts raining it will really pour! Trouble ahead!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
oh edward what are you playing at. hmmmmmmmmm wonder how bella will react now to him with getting the best O of her life. so love it
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
Oh, you KNOW he wasn't asleep!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
I wouldn't put it past Edward to be awake during the whole stunt. Probably to just prove a point, that she is attracted to him. But it seems, that their bodies already know what both of them try to deny with their heads.
I am excited to see who crackes first to realizing that there are romantic feelings involved.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
OOoooooh....was he really asleep. Could he possibly sleep through that? Smirk. Can't wait to read EPOV. Thanks for the update!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
Oh please he was NOT sleeping!!!! Good chapter, looking forward for the next one, things are getting hotter and hotter :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
They are so screwed! :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
pussy omg exelent
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
omg I love you
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
now we are getting to the good stuff. I cannot wait for the next chapter
Date: 18 Apr 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
They are definitely having fun. And the night should be very interersting. I can't wait to find out, who will not be able to keep their hands to themselves. But I think both will cuddle in the end. I mean, Edward likes to cuddle.
Fun chapter.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
You did wonderful I cant wait till they wake up wraped in each others arms and legs with his hard on press between her legs where she has been rubing on it and they both wake up stick because the cam all over each other ya that sounds good LOL.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
Great story I just hope Bedward.... hehe doesn't break Bella.
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
thanks good chapter
Date: 12 Apr 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
That was a great dinner and wow Edward gets to stay the night tomorrow. Bella has to be excited deep down I cant wait to see how this works out.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
Just caught your story - I'm liking this plot and can't wait for everything to explode :). Hope to see you update soon. Cheers!
Author's Response:
Goodie! Always nice to meet a new fan of this fic! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
A sleep-over for these two "love birds" is coming, that should be fun, especially when they are not really together. More and more UST is programmed ^-^
There must me some feelings for Edward from Bella, if not she wouldn't have become so jealous over the waitress.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
Hehe. Bella has girl balls! I read that somewhere, and I have no idea where, but it sounds like an Emmett... Thanks for updating; I can't wait for whatever deserving punishment Edward receives, as well as what his retribution will be!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
I really love this story and eagerly look forward to updates.
Thanks for sharing it with us
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking to it! :) I hope to update tomorrow!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
I was dying without an update, but you did not dissapoint , it was amazing - thank you. Can't wait till the next update. Hope RL doesnt take up too much time
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking to it! :) I'll do my best to get the next one out by tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
Love it! Your dialog is great & the slient interactions are perfect. :)
Author's Response: Oh,what great encouragement! Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
I dont know but CANT WAIT to find out!! Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Relieved to hear I'm still on the right track! Thanks for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
Oh man, please say that the Daffodil Festival is a real thing?! That sounds amazing, and exactly the thing I would love to see Charlie grumble for being forced to go! I am already dreading the embarrassing hijinks that appear to be ensuing at Jacob's wedding; I really hope he changes his mind or plan before then...
Author's Response: It's real,believee it or not!! It's this Saturday, 9 April and kicks off in Tacoma! :) Hahaha!
Date: 05 Apr 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
Oh my how mean is he planing on getting. I hope they get that loving feeling before he does something they will regret. I hope Bella will break down and tell him about the book.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
I'm beginning to like this story very much. Please carry on~~
Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
so wondering what is the idea/plan rolling around inhis mind
Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
Bella's walls are still up. Edward is knowing bits & pieces of Bella's life & family. but to continue being a player will certainly hurt Bella again. hope Edward realizes what his intentions will do for Bella. wonder if Edward continues to be a player...i have a feeling once their emotions/feelings set to build up, everything will change.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
well i hope he sticks it to her but dosent get away with it! keep the updates comming
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
Seems that Edward is trying to play dirty, I hope his ploy doesn't bite him in his ass. The same works for Bella aswell with her double agenda of Edwards book. But I can imagine, that they will have lots of real fun during the activities with Bellas parents. Perhaps they are really in love already when they visit the wedding. That should be fun.
Author's Response: You're so good at this! ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
Yikes! I have no fear of Edward and her parents together, but...him at Jake's wedding? I hope he doesn't humiliate her at the wedding. As bitchy and underhanded as she is does she merit that sort of cruelty? Good chapter!!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
Loving this!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
LOL :) my parents married on the 7th of May! no exes around though xD
I'm up for the next chapter!
xxxLiss
Author's Response: Cool! Will dedicate the wedding day chapter (of course there will be one)to your parents then! Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 04 Apr 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
OK so I didn't say my two cents in the last chapter cause I wanted to read both chapters together so I got the whole night in one shot. It was worth the wait!
So, Bella is acting like a hurt girl and Edward is acting like a spitful boy- Oi! This is always a recipie for fun times. I really want to see them hash this out but for them to have to spend more time with eachother but have the parents there pushing them as only parents can do. Yip this is why I read stories and don't write them .
As always I'm loving this story and every chapter gets better and leaves you wanting more fast! No pressure or anything :)
Happy writting
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
loved the story till this chapter, and Jessica sticking her nose into things
Author's Response: have a little faith ;) Jessica is not going to have a starring role in this fic. She's only the catalos of some serious sexual tension between B&E. Hope u stick around!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
you sure is building our interest in this story! hope things will change especially some of Edward's feelings of betrayal....
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
I'm impressed that he could prioritize! Wow, well she is playing him soooo, he's going to play her! It's getting really fun!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
Hah! I love how Edward's resolve to mortify Bella just slowly melts away, until he has to justify his non-reaction to himself... This was a great chapter! Thanks for sharing with us, and thanks for showing more Charlie and Renée; I'd love to see more of them!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
well edward has every reason to be pissed. looking forward to see whta he ends up doing about it. jessica you naughty girl. seems as if the skanks stick together. well guys what a road we have ahead of us. charlie seems like he will get along fine with edward and renee is already won over. loving it
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
well bella i am thinking edward has found out you dupped him and is pissed. now your shit in your life is thrown in your face how sad. i guess you guys have a lot to deal with and having the parentals around oh getting godd. love it
Date: 03 Apr 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
Thanks for the update
: )
Date: 03 Apr 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
Drama baby, drama!
I would say Edward got somehow the little information, that Aro was informed about his book before Bellas telephone call.
I just hope that Bella opens up a little to Edward after this conversation and he is her shoulder to cry on ;-)
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
Did he find out about his book????
Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
OMFG!!!! the shitith has hitith the fanith..........cliffie.
Date: 02 Apr 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
its funny taht the parents like edward! catn wait to see waht happens nex
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
Uh oh!! Someone's talked to Edward about the publishing deal... and poor Bella! But, it'll be good for Edward to see a break in her cold façade. I love Renée and Charlie, by the way! They are so complimentary!
Date: 02 Apr 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
some more things exposed on Bella's past...wonder how Edward takes this ...
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
What happened??? Did Jessica get to Edward?
Date: 01 Apr 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
Poor Bella the shit is really hitting the fan now!! :)
Date: 01 Apr 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
wonder what happened ..... why woudl renee dump that kind of information like that
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
Yikes! Could that little bomb be dropped at a better time? And, is Edward on to Bella's plot with regards to his book?
Date: 01 Apr 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
Eagerly awaiting part 2!
Date: 30 Mar 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
Well the day started rather well but I guess the meeting of Bellas parents will be be more interesting.
Personally I think Edward should stay with 'baby' as a petname for Bella. It sounds nice.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
love their e-mails echange! i'm getting giddy to read the next update. so anxious to know what will happen on that meeting with the parents...
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
i love their little banter
she needs to lighten up and he is the one to do it.
loving the story and i can't wait to meet the parents
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
loved the email banter
Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
At least they are teasing that is a good start. I cant wait till 6 when he meets the parents how will he greet Bella????
Author's Response: Oh, I've been thinking of a few possible scenarios regarding the greeting for a couple of days now! Good question! I'm dying to write it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
good chapter but cannot wait till he meets the parents!!
Author's Response: tomorrow, I promise! ;)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
Ok now things are getting exciting, I am really enjoying this Edward, he's fun and teasing just like real guys act when they interact with girls they like. And I am loving how Bella is the 'together' one .
I can't wait for Charlie &Renee to se them together im sure it will make entertaining reading. Also I like that there is a more serious side to both charaters I hope you explore that more .
I thought the song just set the scene perfectly, Bella really is a control freak :D
Anyway, thank you I am really enjoying this so far , think its most certainly going to be one of my favorites .
Author's Response: i'm definately going to explore the more serious side as the story progresses! Hope you liked the little footnote (*) i made at the end? ;)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
I really like your story so far.....:)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
I think I hope they break all there rules LOL. It should be interesting when he meets the parents. I wonder how things are going to be in the office???? He is going to be pissed if he finds out about book??
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
You've definitely set them up for Edward to figure out just why she's the Ice Queen. :)
Author's Response:
Just uploaded chapter 7... Check it out! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Wow, just a few hours gone and already a new chapter is there. You're pretty fast.
Anyway, the chapter was pretty funny, especially the verbal sparring. It will be definetly interesting, when her parents will arrive.
Author's Response:
Chapter seven ready and waiting... ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
I hope that all will play out, the way Bella wants it, but I doubt it. The whole deal with Edward will probably work for a few days until her parents find out the truth about their relationship (or lack of) or Edward will know about his manuscript and then be really pissed of Bella.
And in the mean-time the fell in love with each other ;)
But what is a cool story without a little bit of drama. I just hope that everything will work in the end for Bella and Edward.
Author's Response: Let's hope I'm still able to surprise you yet! ;) Although all love stories seem to have the same basic structure, I guess it's all about how you play with the characters...and play I will! :) Thank you for reviewing - honest feedback is always appreciated!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
:)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
i'm really loving your quick posting of updates here! well, maybe they'll be breaking their own rules here especially those of Bella"s. Three weeks is long enough to soften Bella's rules / resolves...
Author's Response: Yip, I'm sure three weeks will do the trick, don't you? Somebody will have to back down,and it remains to be seen who! ;)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
In this chapter i can read through the lines and see how truly damaged Bella is that she can trust anyone or depend on anyone but her self. She can even enjoy a kiss and close her eye and like Edward said has to be in control and have a sharp mind 24/7. I feel sorry for her : ( Hopefully Edward will be able to brake those walls because she is not living her life at all.
Author's Response: Thanks for the very perceptive review. Your thoughts on Bella's state of mind are appreciated! :)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Best chapter so far! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: I'm typing my fingers to stumps! ;) Trying to get as many chapters out while the interest in the fic is still high! Stick around!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
That's just too cool! Im in SA too, so Im loving your timing!
Just so you know, you rock, two chapters in two days -you are awesome. Totally loving this story!!
Author's Response: Awesome!!! Planning on quoting lyrics from a couple of SA songs in later chapters. Keep a lookout for our homegrown talent! ;) I'm currently eating,sleeping and breathing TACA (my clever little abbreviation for the title of this fic) ;) So,I'll definitely be updating soon!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Love da story but is Bella 28? Nd how old is Edward? ;)
Author's Response: Bella is 28 and Edward will be turning 27 soon...
Glad you like it!
:)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Bella is screwed she needs to show him she is not a bitch.
Author's Response: But will she? ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
love it
bella has got herself in a tangled web. good luck bella. edward thought it would be easy to overpower bella but once again she has proven him wrong. good luck edward. looking forward to the story.starting off with a bang
Author's Response: Very accurate summary! They are both caught between a rock and a hard place...and things are about to get even more complicated! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
really screwed! nope, you're not spoiling us...you're just keeping our interest getting higher in every update.
Author's Response: chapter 6 posted! Go check iy out! :)
Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
This should be fun, can't waittttt!!!
Author's Response: me either! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
I like it! Wasn't sure at first, but you are certainly making it worth the read!
Author's Response: awesome!!! Hope I don't disappoint!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
oh she may be screwed but she's gonna LOVE IT as we all would if we had this chance with edward!!
Author's Response: truer words have not been spoken! ;)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Bella is not as hard as she seems .... I hope she caves to Edward!
Author's Response: loving the double review! I can just imagine you sitting there,piecing the story together! ;) I'm sure Edward has the ability to...persuade... We'll just have to wait and see - maybe Bella has some tricks of her own!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
Bella is still an ice queen .... I hope Edward can change that!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Ok 5 chapters in and I'm already loving your Edward & Bella! I hope they continue trying to out smart eachother.
This is story is getting fun, thank you for spoiling us with such frequent updates I hope you will continue spoiling us.
Thank you for writing this, I need more !
Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
she is such a bitch cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
interesting story line, kind of like the proposal, is that what you have it based on?
Author's Response: Hi! Only the office setup,but not the plot. I just liked the idea of Bella being the boss and Edward being flustered...for once. ;) The rest of the story won't have much in common with The Proposal...even though I do love that movie. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
So far a great start and for the story line it seems to be interesting. It will be funny, with Bella and Edward somehow fighting against each other and then "loving" each other the other second to appear to be a real couple.
I am curious, where this goes.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
well, i wonder how they'll go about that "physical" aspect...
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
Great start and I can't wait to read more to find out what happens between the two of them.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
I cant wait to find out what the deal with Bella is. I like Edwards game plan maybe Bella has her own game plan???
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
that was so awesome. i am really loving this story
Author's Response:
Yippee!!! :)
Stick around, there's still a few interesting twists and turns ahead!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Post Coital
As long as Tanya understands he is not hers. I cant wait for the terms.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Post Coital
well im looking foward to his terms! keep the updates comming