Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
I hope that Edward doesn't humiliate Bella at that wedding! Oh my goodness I know he deserves some recompense but by then Bella will probably care for him! Oh lord...
Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
I knew it! I almost feel sorry for Bella now, because Edward certainly has the upper hand now that he knows how dishonest Bella was about his manuscript! It's reallly getting good now!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
I think that Edward found out that Bella manipulated the facts surrouding Aro's review of his manuscript. That doesn't bode well for Bella. I bet Jessica ran her fat trap because she was pissed that Bella got the editing rights. I can't wait to see if I am right!
And I want to smack Renee for brining up Leah and Jacob. Why on earth would she be so insensitive?
Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
I appreciate you letting us know.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Hm... I's absolutely impossible to tell who's winning right now! They both keep outdoing each other, the score is getting ridiculously high. Still, it was nice to see Alice thrown in the mix, and have all their friends witness firsthand all of the UST flying around between the two.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
Oh, hot damn! I loved Bella's instant respect to Rose, combined with her refusal to be intimidated by her. I also found your description of Bella's envy towards Edward as far as her parents are concerned.
"[...]it’s like wanting your parents to like your best friend and later resenting your friend because your parents like them too much…feeling like they like your friend more than you."
It was very well put! Thanks for sharing with us!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
This is one of my favorite stories! I really like the fact that your story has Bella as the boss, and Edward as the employee. Poor Bella likes Edward a lot, more than she has admitted to herself. I think that the tension between them is just right!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
Those two just need to cut the crap and admit they like each other. So much pretense, so little time...
I'm eager for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
Very unique idea! Love it so far!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
Wonderful! Cannot wait to see what morning holds for them!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
Edward is somehow really evil, but I guess they are both too deep into their game, that it is really hard to come clean and work on the differences.
But someone has to crack first or make the first move. Somehow I can't imagine, who it will be. Perhaps Bella, because it is to much for her and she will break down and hopefully Edward will be there to pick her up and not be indifferent towards her.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
:)
Date: 17 Jun 2011 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
:)
Date: 17 Jun 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
BOOM! Damnit I think I need to wait for three or four undates to come through so I can read then all in one go! This update was a fabulous surprise to kick off the weekend, but I want more !
I love the fact that both E & B are far from predictable and there is SO much we don't know about them - I am completely addicted .
Update as soon as you can !
xx
Date: 17 Jun 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
:)
Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
:)
Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
When is she going to find out that he knows about the book??? Orgasms that sounds like a wonderful Idea lol. Emmett knows there is more to the story than either of them are saying.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
I like your Edward POV. It sounds like a guy. All macho bravado and stupid on the outside. Squishy and stupid on the inside. Got to love them and Edward, too.
Again, you've got the cuteness factor down pat. It's a rom-com that I can live with.
Thank you.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
Yesssss you are back thank you, beautiful looking forward for "tomorrow"
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
Oh Edward.... he thinks he knows it all. Surely he knows the Jessica sucks as an editor and would benefit if Bella was on board... but no, all he knows is that Bella lied to him. Boo freakin' hoo... he would cut his nose to spite his face. Unfortunately well all like his face!!!
Sweet chapter.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
omg can't wait for the next chaptre
Brenda
Date: 16 Jun 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the smiles!
It let's me know that you're still with me and that you are liking what you're reading!
Much appreciated!!!
:)
xoxo
Date: 15 Jun 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
:)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
:)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
:)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
:)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
:)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
:)
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Holy hell! That was crazy hot....like I need a cool shower hot. Can't wait to see what happens next with these two. In regards to your grammar and spelling, I think you're doing FANTASTIC considering English is not your primary language. Don't take any criticism to heart, the story is entertaining and fun...I've seen worse grammatical and spelling errors from educated, English speaking adults. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Awww - thank you so much!
I have to say that writing smut is REALLY effing hard (I discovered) - but I'm glad you guys are enjoying it! I'll try to keep it up!
I'm posting the next chapter tomorrow, so keep a look out!
xoxo
Date: 15 Jun 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
Well, I'm an English Major and BELIEVE me...the grammar and spelling has not bee below par...your writing is excellent and I'm so bummed that we have longer to wait for updates...this story is so intriguing and I wouldn't worry about the bs any people are spewing...it's just not distracting and you're a great writer! So there...that's my opinion...your work is excellent!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!!
That's really sweet of you to say! Luckily I met a kind reader on FF that happens to be a Beta, and is willing to Beta the story for me.
I should be able to update tomorrow, so keep a look out for the next chapter!
xoxo
Date: 14 Jun 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
:)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
:)
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Great chapter and they had their fun with toying/teasing with each other.
It is always a pleasure to read this story, even if it has some grammar/spelling mistakes. I am also a not-native-english speaker and I think your english is good, just with a few mistakes. The main content is understandable and the story is well written. There are far worse stories out there, which are written by native-english speaker and sometimes horrible to read because of the spelling/grammar errors.
See you next chapter, whenever this might be :)
Author's Response:
Date: 14 Jun 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
i love this stoery and can over look the spelling and grammar mistakes.
bb
Author's Response:
Thank you BB!
The next chapter is in the writing fase, and will be pre-read and beta'd, and hopefully posted by the end of the week.
Hope to see you around for the rest of the story!
xoxo
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
Oh, god. DO NOT DARE touch the first 17 chapters. They are wonderful just the way they are. I hope the Grammarians used proper King's English to point out the comma/period/whatever mistakes. Personally, whatever foilbles there may have been, they never took away from your fiction.
I don't do Rom-Com, but your's stands out. It's sweet, honest and too adorable for just mere English.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much lala43!
You have been a sweet and loyal reader and reviewer from the very start of this fic!
I'm busy with the new chapter, which will be pre-read by a really nice reader on FF who offered her assistance, and hopefully if all goes well, the next chapter will be posted by the end of the week!
Thanks for sticking around and for sticking up for me!
I'll make you proud! ;)
xoxo
Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
Hot Damn girl, that shower scene was soo hot, I now need a shower! I have been hooked on your story from the get go and am shocked this is your first story. You seem so accomplished with your writing and please, ignore those whose only comment is to correct your grammar. You can write and I will now be waiting for your next update, panyting. Do not leave me hanging, please!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the confidence boost!
The next chapter is in the writing fase and will be beta'd before it's posted. Hopefully by the end of the week!
I was shocked myself with that shower scene - I had NO idea I had that in me! :)
See you around for the next chapter?
xoxo
Date: 13 Jun 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Post Coital
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Preposterous
:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
First of all, This is an absolutely Brilliant story! I am in Love with it! As for the grammar and spelling. It is not that bad. Nothing that to the point of misinterpretation of the story line... AND with English not being your first language I would say that your Grammar and Spelling are Excellent! :) I am really looking forward to more of this story and hope to see a posting sooner rather than later.
XO
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the confidence boost!
I'm busy with the next chapter and have a beta just waiting to edit it so we can get it out ASAP! If all goes well, you'll be able to read the new chapter by the end of the week!
Hope to see you around for the rest!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
I am A English Prof. May i say that if you really get into the story you miss all the little mistakes. If they do not like it read something else. I love your story, I believe it is one of the funniest stories I have read. Thank you for
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the confidence boost!
I'm glad you find it funny - it was meant to be fun!!! :)
See you around for the next chapter - which will hopefully be out by the end of the week!
xoxo
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
:)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
Good for you!!!
I personally don't recall your grammer being an issue, but on the bright side, this will make you a stronger more confident writer. Word of advice, don't be too crestfallen when you see how much PTB corrects. When I went to them for "Control" I was devastated with how many mistakes were in the document. That's OKAY. They are there to help us writers put better fics out. Personally I rarely use them, only because it's a lot to keep up with my stories AND edit my previous works. I'm glad you're doing this and I wish you the best of luck!
I look forward to your return :)
--helluvabell
Author's Response:
Thanks for the heads-up! I guess that's part of the reason why I didn't want a Beta in the first place! I don't want writing this story to feel like work, you know? It's meant to be fun, and I'm scared s**less that it will turn writing this fic into a duty in stead of a plesure!
Nevertheless, I've made the decission, so yeah, we'll just wait and see what PTB comes back with!
Guess there's no harm in growing and becoming stronger as a writer (although it makes me feel like a plant in stead of a human)! ;)
Hopefully I'll see you around on the next chapter!
xoxo
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
I congratulate you on handling the criticism well, not too sure I could. I hope it was done in a nice way and not rudely. I love this story and am sitting patiently at the edge of my seat to see if Edward continues on with revenge in mind.
Author's Response:
Hahaha - trust me, I'm a very proud person, so constructive or not, it still pissed me off! ;)
But the reviews regarding the grammar and spelling was done in good taste and was not meant to be rude by any stretch of the imagination.
I'll update soon, I promise!
xoxo
Date: 13 Jun 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
I am so derelict when it comes to giving reviews and I really regret that, especially in this case. I am a former teacher and poor grammar, sentence construction, spelling, etc. usually put me in such a tailspin that I cannot read a poorly written story no matter how good the concept. When you referred to criticisms, I thought, "What is she talking about?" Whether your errors were so minor I didn't notice them or your story was so appealing I overlooked them, I don't know. But please continue soon, with or without a Beta. I was so excited to see an update today and would hate to have to wait to see this story continue.
Both your characters are delightful. Bella is such a mix of vulnerability and haughtiness and Edward is the perfect foil to balance those two traits.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much gretel!
I've have been bombarded by the most amazing reviews today that I fear I won't close an eye tonight? And why, you may or may not ask? Because I'm going to pull an all nighter to write the next chapter and completely ignore the critics out ther! Well, not really - but it felt good saying it (the critics part - not the all nighter part)! ;)
I've received some responses to an 'add' I've placed on adifferentforest for a beta, and I'm most definitely going to take the ladies up on their offer to help.
I will however refrain from keeping you guys waiting much longer!
As soon as chapter 18 (the real one) is done, I'm posting it! Hopefully I'll be able to do that by tomorrow or the day after!
Thanks again for parting from you tendencies to be a 'derelict when it comes to giving reviews'. ;) It means a lot!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
I love, love, love this story and had no issues w/any of that! Read for the enjoyment of the story, not the mechanics! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I'll do my best to get the next chapter out ASAP!
xoxo
Date: 13 Jun 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
Hi, Im with you, please English is not my first language, I did see grammar mistakes, but hey who am I to judge? It is great you have the guts to put yourself out there, I like this story, hopefully you'll find someone to help you and have it checked before.
Looking forward to hearing from you very soon.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
Oh Nooooo, Please contine the next chapters without having them beta'd. Look all the positive reviews that you have! We love your story as is!. If you think that you have to do it, just do it for yourself, not because a bunch of "don't have nothing better to do" is criticizing your writing . Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter.
Paola
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the words of encouragement!
I'm so thankful for the positive reviews!
I'm such a proud mo-fo (I am a Leo after all) ;), that I tend to struggle with critisism...even constructive ones - haha!
I promise not to keep you guys waiting long. I've been thinking that I could have the next chapters beta'd as I go along, and just have the first 17 beta'd when the story is done... I've seen a couple other authors do that, so why the hell not?
I was just worried that the grammar is really bad and everyone has been just too nice to tell me... But, I've come to understand from the rather passionate revies I've been receiving after my post, that the problem is really not THAT big and that it takes nothing away from the story.
So... I'll just carry on as I've been doing and see how it goes!
Thanks again!
:)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
Hey, thank you for the update , not the one I was looking forward to :) but at least you still here and are going to be writting , just not right at this time.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and can not wait for the coming chapters, I hope the writting fairy hits you with inspiration and that you carry on writting this stunning story.
Till the next chapter
x
Author's Response:
Hey! There you are!
I've been wondering whether you're still with me...you sneaky reader, you! :)
I've received an amazing response to my little declaration in 'chapter 18'. I'm thinking about continuing the next chapters without having them beta'd and just have the old ones beta'd as I go along, until the whole fic has been checked and re-checked for grammar and spelling and crap.
This fic is about the readers, right? So, if you guys don't mind the slight grammar and spelling mistakes I make...then F the rest!
:)
Will post the REAL chapter 18 soon!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 (or not)
I think you should do what you feel is right for you I would just talk the good reviews and go with them your story is wonderful and if some want to pick it apart I think they have issues. I will wait how ever long I just hope it wont be long :) I think some people have nothing else to do other than look for something wrong they must live a sad life.
Author's Response:
You're really sweet!! Thank you for the positve peptalk!!
I'm certainly not going to make you guys wait long (I know how terribly frustrating that can be)!
Hopefully I'll be able to upload the real chapter 18 really, really soon!
I love you!
Thanks again!
xoxo
Date: 12 Jun 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
when are they going to do it??????
Date: 11 Jun 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Great chapter, all the sexual tension between those two is driving me crazy. I wonder what or how is Edward going to get his payback SMH. Can't wait to read more of it. Hope u update soon!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Holly shit they are hot. Everyone of there friends know that they want each other. When is she going to tell him about the book???? Please tell me they are getting closer ;)
Author's Response:
:)
I WANTED TO BUILD UP THE SEXUAL TENSION A BIT BEFORE WE HEAD BACK TO THE MAIN PLOT OF THIS FIC - THE BOOK AND THE DECEIPT!
NEXT CHAPTER WE'LL SEE MORE OF THAT!
ONCE AGAIN - THANK YOU)
XOXO
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Just came across this story and read it all at once...FUCK...that shower scene was hotter than anything I've read in many many moons! And I've read lots! I think I've re-read it at least three times so far! LOL...BRAVO...and I can't WAIT till you update and I get to review again! I'm on the edge of my seat! You're a fantastic writer that draws us in! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
WOW! I CANNOT BEGIN TO TELL YOU HOW GREAT IT WAS TO READ YOUR REVIEW!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE KIND WORDS,THEY ARE MUCH APPRECIATED!!
:)
SMUT IS EFFING HARD TO WRITE...I NOW DISCOVERED. SHIT BALLS! BUT I'M REALLY GLAD YOU ENJOYED READING THE SHOWER SCENE AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED WRITING IT!
HOPE TO SEE YOU AROUND ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!
XOXO
Author's Response:
WOW! I CANNOT BEGIN TO TELL YOU HOW GREAT IT WAS TO READ YOUR REVIEW!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE KIND WORDS,THEY ARE MUCH APPRECIATED!!
:)
SMUT IS EFFING HARD TO WRITE...I NOW DISCOVERED. SHIT BALLS! BUT I'M REALLY GLAD YOU ENJOYED READING THE SHOWER SCENE AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED WRITING IT!
HOPE TO SEE YOU AROUND ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!
XOXO
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Ah, the player got played...well done!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
The shower scene was HOT.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Oh my...very nice! Lol, I love it how the power trip gets switched between the two of them when they least expect it. I also think that Emmett might just be pulled in on Bella's side. I'm sure that whatever Edward has planned was helped by Emmett but I think he's gonna see things in Bella that maybe Edward won't. Excellent job, one question though and I'm not sure if you've answered it before, do you know how long this fic will be...roughly? Again, loved it! ;)
Author's Response:
Hi!
I swear, smut must be the hardest effing thing to write!! Hiehie *blush*
Anyway - I think I mentioned on ff how long the fic will be, but not on TWCS. I'm thinking probably 30, 35 chapters MAX! I already have another story brewing which I'm just dying to start writing, but I won't even dare such a challenge until this one is finished.
So yeah, it would appear as if we more than halfway to the finish.
Thanks for reviewing! I enjoyed it as always!
xoxo
PS: Just a quick question before I forget? Are you guys seeing this fic in the right format, or are there < > where there should be " " ? One of the readers mentioned this in her review, and I for the life of me I can't find anything wrong on my side.
Date: 08 Jun 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Damn! I have nothting to say, but Damn.
You are NOT our Mistress. You are our Goddess.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Wow loved it ! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
Another great chapter. The shower scene: Wow, FANTASTIC !!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
I like the story, but what word processing system are you using? The arrows make it tough to read. I'm going to keep reading though.
Author's Response:
Shit balls!!!
I had no idea you guys were seeing the stories with <>!!! I'm using normal Microsoft Word...
I don't see it on my side, though. I've checked and re-checked all the chapters!
Can you PLEASE do me a favor and let me know if the next chapter is giving you the same problems? I'll make sure to do whatever I can to rectify it!
Thanks for reading - even with the horrible <>! I can only imagine how frustrating it must be!
xoxo
Date: 07 Jun 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
I love that Bella stepped up to the plate with the bathroom scene.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
I was really happy to see this update! Worried that maybe it fell off the map. Glad you're feeling better! Enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
Cannot wait for your next update!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
I love that he was awake that morning and that he wants payback!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
She playing with fire now. Nicely done.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
Oh Mistress,
I've been reading your story all day, and I must say I love it!
I love it so much that not only did I add this gem to my Favorites list, but I will be rec'ing it in my next two updates :)
God, their lust/hate relationship is so yummy. I really hope he doesn't break her heart too terribly.
Great story, sweetie!
Author's Response:
HI!
WHAT A NICE REVIEW TO RECEIVE FROM A FELLOW WRITER! EXCITED TO SEE YOU'RE WRITING TWO FICS! DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT!
I'LL BE SURE TO R&R THEM TOO!
XOXO
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
Great stuff!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
Cannot wait to read on and see how that sleepover goes!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
I would be irate if I found out my boss had done soemthing like that to me! I agree with Edward....revenge! LOL
Date: 30 May 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
Oh my...this chapter was excellent as always, but I have to admit, I can't wait to get back inside Edward's mind! Great job. ;)
Author's Response:
CAN'T WAIT TO START WRITING IN EPOV EITHER!
IT'S A LOT MORE FUN AS HIS THOUGHTS ARE LESS INHIBITED!
THX FOR STICKING AROUND!
XOXO
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
Loved it!!!!
Date: 30 May 2011 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
So everyone knows but her parents???? She needs to stop being such a hard ass
Author's Response:
PATIENCE YOUNG GRASSHOPPER! ;)
THX FOR STAYING WITH THE STORY! ALWAYS NICE TO C U AROUND!
XOXO
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
Wow, it is really getting hotter. The club will probably be a whole teasing from both sides and I can image, that their friends will be perhaps not so nice and keep pushing Bella and Edward together.
Date: 30 May 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
This is too cute and I would like to think that I am too old for cute. Nonetheless, bring it on.
Author's Response:
Date: 29 May 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
Yeeessss please more, when the 2nd part?
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
WOW...... Gotta say I think that is the hottest most annoying cliff hanger I have come across in the fandom yet! Please tell me you are updating soon?!??
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
Hot & frustrating all at once. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
wow i am truly loving the story. when the truth finally comes out about the book and their relatonship oh my it is going to hit. i wonder if their relationship or whatever it is will still be standing or will it all crumble. love it
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
Oh my...it's a little hot in here. Whew! I'm pretty much ga-ga after this one. I'm caught up now and that kind of sucks but I can't wait till the update. Thanks for replying to my review, not alot of authors do that anymore. It's nice, makes me feel special. Anywho, Excellent job, can't wait to get back into Edward's head and see how conflicted he is. Again, great job. ;)
Author's Response:
Well, I enjoyed reading your reviews too much not to respond - so in my book that does make you special. :) I honestly don't reply to some of the reviews simply because I feel like a douche doing it... Feels so condescending to say - 'Hey, thanks that you like it...it's great, right?' Other times I'm too afraid to reply in fear that I might give away the plot... People ask the strangest questions. Anyhoo... Maybe that's true for some of the other writers too.
Hope to see you around on the next chapter!
xoxo
Date: 19 May 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
I new his cocky ass was awake! Can't wait to see how things go between them now. Great job. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
Oh he was totally awake! He might not have been in the begining but he definitely was at some point. Can't wait to find out. Loved it! ;)
Author's Response:
I JUST HAD THE MOST FUN READING YOUR REVIEWS!!!! HAHAHA!!
THANKS FOR LETTING ME HEAR YOUR THOUGHTS!
I HOPE YOU LIKE THE REST OF MY FIC!
XOXO
Date: 18 May 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
I've got a dirty mouth for you Cullen! ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
I'm dying to see how that little sleep over goes! Excellent job. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
I can't help but feel a little bad for Bella. In her defense, she never intended to "hurt" Edward. Looks like he's going out for blood. Still love this though. I'm hooked. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
I understand where Edward is coming from but I can't help but think he's going to regret hurting her. Another good one. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
What is going on with Edward. Did he find out about Bella's reason for why she is doing this? Is he on the defensive that him and Emmett talked about? Can't wait to find out. Excellent chapter. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
I loved their emails. Heck I love everything already. I'm so glad I found this fic! Great job. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
I am in love with this fic! I want to read it all in one sitting and I just might do that. Hell...who needs to go to work? ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
She's not as bad as she seems. Though she is using him to further her career. Can't wait to see how things go next. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Playbook
I can't help but think that Bella's hiding behind a mask. Can't wait to see how she feels about everything and to get some answers to why she lied to her parents. Great chapter. ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Post Coital
He's a little freak huh? Lol, love it! ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Preposterous
Oh, this is gonna be fun! ;)
Date: 18 May 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
Sounds interesting, can't wait to see where you take this. ;)
Date: 16 May 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
I loved the mixture of adult and teenage behavior! It ranged from "work work work mode" to "oh wow! He thinks I'm hot!" again and again; I found it utterly charming and unassuming. Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
Wow, she can be a bitch. Wait until he hits her with the fact that he knows about the book situation. That might take a little wind out of her sails.
Date: 15 May 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
Newbies to FF. I remember when. WA was my first. Actually, I would have never gotten into ff if I hadn't discovered one insomniac night. Not to toot my horn or take advantage of your segue, but if newbies are interested, check out my favs at ff. I've been around the block and I think I have the classics.
Now, onto my rave about your gem. I usually don't do sweet romantic anything. Just ask any of family and friends. But your caught my eye and my "heart". Your Edward makes me want to say "awwww".
Date: 14 May 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
Love the story so far. Bella really is a stuck up Bitch, I can understand her being upset about Jacob but after so many years pass and she is still heartbroken she really needs help. Bella needs to loosen up. Edward i really dont know what to think about him he needs his cocky ass taken down a notch and maybe an STD test with him just taking anyone home with him after being so drunk he hardly remembers what the chick looks like. cant wait for next chapter