[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE
So glad he resurected their "game", it was perfect!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE
i love it! thank you, thank you, thank you!
seriously perfect!
any more outtakes? i love them :)
Date: 30 Mar 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
LOVE IT!! you are wonderful!!! thanks for the F-ing HOT story!!!! i loved every second!!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Perfection
again this story is F-ing the bomb!!!! love it
Date: 30 Mar 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
damn i love it love it love it!! you are the best!!!!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
gosh i am laughing so hard i am almost crying!!! so f-ing funny!!!!! love the story.. i know i have already told you that but i am telling you again!!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
your readership is very demanding!! wow.... ed is HOT!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 28 - The Parting
love it.. ed is sweet his bastard ways have turned and he is wonderful!! i am glad he made her do it though!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Proof
its a great story and yes you have progressed it very realistic... they still have to learn to trust each other before they let out the L word... i wonder who will be first?
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 26 - The Plumpkin
oh funny! i had no idea what that meant. i don't think i want to remember that!! loved it....
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 25 - The Pants
they are so cute together.... still i have a bad feeling.. i hope not.
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure
damn they are sooo hot together!!! i am still a little nervous that something is going to happen
Date: 30 Mar 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 23 - The Present
oh boy it happened.... damn... they both screwed up but ed screwed up more..
Date: 30 Mar 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Progression Part Two
girl you are really dragging this out... my stomach is in knots.... arghhh!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 21 - The Progression
again i am cringing!!! this can't be good... oh boy.... damn ed you are HOT!!! you can find my zones anytime!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line
she turns it on him everytime.. i thought they were going to come clean with each other... this is not good not good at all
Author's Response:
Just wanted to let you know...I've been LOVING your reviews! Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow
oh bella look out.... you are going to be crushed!! i am cringing just thinking about it.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two
okay bells, you turned the tables there... but he is really going to be out for blood..i worry for you
Date: 27 Mar 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
oh boy... where is this all going to go?
Date: 26 Mar 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
bella he is so playing you isn't he? i am afraid you are going to get really hurt it all this....
Date: 26 Mar 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
oh bella you have no idea.. i knew it!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
you know he knows... he had to be awake i know it!! evil man!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
like i said i am waiting for the bomb to go BOOM!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
oh boy this is all going to blow up big time... it is hurting me that i can see it and they are sooo blind...
Date: 26 Mar 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
oooh boy what you got cooking ed? bella you are going to be sorry for lying to him!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
knew he would find out... bella you are a fool!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One
i wonder what pissed ed off? i bet he found out
Date: 23 Mar 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Prepared
you are in deep bella and when it all comes out he is going to be pissed!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Practice
you are a complete mess bella. i know i already said it but this chapter just reinforced it!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
this is going to spiral out of control i can already tell... bella you have yourself in the middle of a complete mess!!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
Such a great story. I enjoyed every chapter!! Thank you for sharing this with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and for the support. :)
xoxo
Date: 22 Mar 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
Wow, I'm the one indebted to you for providing the pleasure of reading your writing. Thanks again for all you've created, it's been a joy to read.
Thanks
Your fan
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sticking with this story! I've loved hearing from you every time! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
loved the ending
Author's Response:
Yay! Thank you! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Post Coital
oh ed you are a player!
Date: 22 Mar 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Preposterous
she is a big B! hum i wonder if she will change?
Date: 22 Mar 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
ohhh! i love it love it love it!! can't wait to read more!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
I Looooove your story! Thank you do much for writing it! I can't wait to read more of your work!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much hon! Will hopefully be seeing you soon.
xoxo
Date: 21 Mar 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
Your story would be great without the homophobic passages and inaccurate information, i.e., South Africa is smaller than Texas, when South Africa is almost twice the size of Texas. Much of the grammar in your story is incorrect as well. Just like the original books your characters hail from, good story , poorly written.
Author's Response:
Wow...
Thank you for your honesty. As it is in life, there will always be those who love something, and those who don't.
Thank you for pointing out the SA v Texas size difference. It's been said so many times in passing conversations, that I thought it was true, but after reading your review - I stand corrected. I would however like to mention that I did not say SA is smaller than Texas, but that it is not bigger. Regardless, I was wrong in my assessment.
I would agree that some of my grammar is incorrect (especially in chapters 7 - 17 which is still unbeta'd). I would be the last one to argue with you on that point as I admitted my shortcomings in chapter 18 and subsequently seeked the guidance of a beta (chapters 1 - 6 and 19 - 33 is beta'd). We're still working on getting everything edited.
I'm not even going to touch your homophobic reference - I disagree wholeheartedly. But of course, you are allowed your own opinion in this regard. Given as you already dislike my writing so ardently, I think that trying to convince you otherwise will be a waste of both your time and mine.
I would like to point out that most authors of fanfiction writes to have fun. I never set out to try and convince anyone that I'm the next JRR Tolkien or JK Rowling, and most certainly am not trying to make a career out of this. In short, I won't be quitting my day job! ;)
I respect your opinion and trust you will find other stories on this sight that might be more to your liking.
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
This was a wonderful story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 20 Mar 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
I have very much enjoyed this story. It is well-written, witty, sexy, and a hell of a read. I can't wait to read something more from you. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much!
It was great taking this journey with you!
Keep well and keep writing.
xoxo
Date: 20 Mar 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Perfection
EXCELLENT!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
Thank U so much. I really have a good time following your story:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the support! :)
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 32 - The Perfection
What a wonderful story. Look forward to whatever comes from you in the future! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
:)
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Perfection
:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Perfection
love esme! and renee in this story:)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
thanku U sooooo much:* u are amazing. i laugh, i cry with this story and now i'm sad cause this is the end:( maybe U could put some outtake:D? with daughter?? i'll be missing this story but i'm happy what U do whit this stroy from begining to the end - one more time -AMAZING!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your support, honey!
I appreciate it so very much!
I will be posting an outtake soon... ;)
xoxo
Date: 19 Mar 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Proposal
I have so enjoyed this story so thank you for this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the support!
I appreciate it more than I can say.
xoxo
Date: 19 Feb 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
I think it was an awesome chapter. Great ILY's and hawtlawnchair sexcapades;-}
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
so damn sweet. Loved it! Hate that its almost over.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
she is SOOO screwed!!
love it!!
Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
rec'd by a friend who has never let me down.
just from the first chapter alone....I'm sure she's picked another winner
lovin' this so far!
Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 23 - The Present
bella is a mother? I don'"t understand
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
great story...is this the end or is there more...
Date: 11 Feb 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure
Wow, not what I was expecting this chapter and for that...thank you!! Cheri
Date: 11 Feb 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
OMFG that was so hot and sweet and HOT ;) I love that she was able to talk to Jacob and tell him how see feels and she is over him
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Play Date Part One
wow!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
hot...hot...hot...
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 14 - The Pretender
wow!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
I am in tears- that was beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
LOL
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Parents Part Two
J'ai des petits problèmes à lire sur fanfiction aujourd'hui. Je ne sais pas jusqu'à quel chapitre j'ai lu... je vais relire chaque fin de chapitre!
Google Translate. French.
Montréal, Québec
Date: 10 Feb 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
They way Bella ended things with Jacob was beyond perfect. LOVED IT!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
Wow. very nice.
Date: 10 Feb 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
i freaking love it! all of it!
her seeing edwards love, her telling jake they ate forgiven, and definately her telling and showing edward her love!
perfect!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
:)
Date: 09 Feb 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
That was awesome, hot and totally beautiful. I can picture in my head is such a turn on!! Way to go.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
that was AMAZING!!!.thanks for the update..I'm sorry it's coming to and end.I love this story it reminded me of the proposal with Sandra Bullock and Ryan Reynolds...Well Done Bella will get her HEA and so will Edward....I liked the ladies at the wedding swooning at Edward and Bella loving it!!! until you post again
Date: 09 Feb 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
I love Bellas response to Jacob "we can't be friends cause I don't respect you" Kinda irks me when everybody forgives the cheater and they are all besties again. He will be happy in his life but he will always know that he ruined a special friendship and it will always be his fault and no one elses. Nice chapter loved it
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
fantastic! I am so glad he didn't go on with his payback plan until the wedding. It would have been super angsty and very damaging for eveybody (including me...)
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
Finally the wedding day is there. I had to laugh with all the ridiculous nicknames Edward gave Angela.
Bella and Edward are so cute together and now the wedding is going to be hilarious. I mean Edward already (more or less) insulting the the groom and the bride.
Loved it.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Prevention
You just keep surprising me...thank you -Cheri
Date: 08 Feb 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 13 - The Paranoid
This Bella is in so much trouble... and I love it!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
Just started reading this last night, lovin it. Can't wait for more!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Prick
Don't know about writer's block, but I thought the chapter was wonderful. Love the "cat" and mouse! Cheri
Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Paragon
Alright, game on!! Can't figure out which one will be the winner...maybe both? Thank you for this story! Cheri
Date: 07 Feb 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
loved it!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
She loves him to there is nothing that Jacob has that she wants it is Edward all the way.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Player
Really enjoying your story, just want to say thanks. Cheri
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
This chapter was great, very funny Edward/Bella & Angela interaction. I also liked his repulsiveness to feet and the ref to Jacobs probable nasty feet. Great reading, and great build I can't wait for Edward to tell Bella he loves her!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
That foot joke had me fucking rolling.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One
Great! please hurry!
Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Well I guess I'm not just a fan of yours but Jadapattinson too!
Great chapter you had me kinda scared that she was going off the deep end of doubt for a minute there.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
A little bit drama and more drama is coming, but Edward and Bella are stronger than before. Jessica was great, although she threatend Bella to expose her relationship with Edward.
I am pretty excited for the wedding.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
That was a tough night for them and then to see Kate push herself on Edward. Bella needs to know she should not have to worry maybe she can do that now that she has let the Jacob bull shit go. Jess is still in the bathroom????? I am glad she is not as big of a bitch as I thought she was.
Date: 18 Jan 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Wow, just wow. Nice work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Love how he came after her and knew exactly how to talk her down from the ledge...smart guy! Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
thank goodness for that persuasion:)
Date: 17 Jan 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Im not one to normally review. I usally read and move to the next fic, But I just have to tell you I am a huge fan of this fic. I look forward to reading this every time. There is only two other fics that I cant wait to read. I am a huge reader of fanfiction and this fic is one of my top five, probably top three. Thank you so much for contiuing the upadate somewhat regulary, I will always be waiting in the wings for this one.
E/k
p.s Always well worth the wait.
Date: 16 Jan 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Wow! I wish everytime I got pissed at some chick coming on to my partner I would get that reaction. If only we the fnatic readers could invoke the storylines we want in real life! I know that's why they call it fantasy! Thanks that was fun...
Date: 16 Jan 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 16 Jan 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Wow that was exciting.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Letting go of the insecurities that Jacob caused couldn't have come at a better time. I can't wait for the wedding. Should be loads of fun. E&B need to find Jessica a man. They owe her.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Amazing!!!
Date: 16 Jan 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Prowling
Mmmmmmmm. I'm not back down to earth yet. At first I thought Edward using sex right then might be a mistake but it turned out perfect.
Date: 11 Jan 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
Please keep these characters headed in the direction they need to be on.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 28 - The Parting
Beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 28 - The Parting
It must have been very frustrating for Edward to not hear the question/statement from Bella he longed to hear. But Bella finally figured it out that she can't be without him.
Jabobs wedding should be an interesting.