Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:03 PM Title: Hopeless
Wow, that was an exciting chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response:
hehe it may take a while but it will be posted xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:58 PM Title: Hopeless
DAMN....EDWARD IS ONE EVIL SOB!!
Author's Response:
hehe yes yes he is :) xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:23 PM Title: Hopeless
great (whilst very disturbing chapter) looking forward to the next one
Author's Response:
it may take a wee bit longer cos its EPOV xx and thanks for liking the chapter :) xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:02 PM Title: Hopeless
LOVE this story. And I Really love you for you frequent updates. Wish chapts were a little longer. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
next chapter will be longer :) and I cant promise to always have them up this fast :s sorry xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:00 PM Title: Hopeless
The darkest yet...I'm impressed!
Author's Response:
thank you :) xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:42 PM Title: Hopeless
Wow. Edward was obviously angry at Bella for choosing James because in their eyes, rape obviously isn't that big of a deal...Hell, Jasper was probably doing it to Victoria. Pretty sad. And now Bella's gonna hate Edward even more. I knew he wanted to show her he was a monster...will there come a point where he starts to show regret for hurting her and stuff...like, start feeling emotions for her other than possessiveness. Although, I do love the possessiveness. ;)
Author's Response:
well you shall soon see ;) xxx
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:09 PM Title: Hopeless
You posted!! Yay!! :) :) This chapter scared the pants off of me. Edward is nuts. I'm at a loss of words. But I loved the chapter update!! Please keep morw of your goodness coming :-)
Author's Response:
hehe, im glad you liked it :) and sorry it scared you but he is a vampire, not a bunny hehe xxx thank you for reviewing
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:52 PM Title: Hopeless
Well that was an action packed chapter! I can't say I'm sorry to see James off'd, or Victoria tortured, but it was a bit messy. HEE! All because Edward has self esteem issues and doesn't like being contradicted.
Author's Response:
oooft it took alot out of me writing it :) and yes he is a big baby haha bt i think she learnt her lesson xx thanks for reviewing xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:32 PM Title: Hopeless
Holy Crap!
Author's Response:
is tht a good holy crap or a bad holy crap hehe xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:36 PM Title: Hopeless
WOW! i´m loving this story so much! EvilEdward is so much fun :) hehe
I wonder what happened to Victoria...
and poor Bella :( anyway, great story, i can´t wait to read more! and who changed Bella? i hope it was Edward ;)
Author's Response:
hehe thank you i love wen ppl like it :)
and no it wasn't edward it was jasper, bcos edward was out finding victims hehe xxx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:12 PM Title: Hopeless
Who was holding her head??
Author's Response:
sorry it was Carlisle xxx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:44 PM Title: New Surroundings
I don't like "Darkward". He has characteristics of our Edward but in a frightening way.
Author's Response:
im sorry you don't like him, he may get nicer, but im not promising anything :/ xxx thanks for reading anyway xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:27 AM Title: New Surroundings
Yes, I am enjoying thye story. It is disturbing and strange but I am following the updates as they post. I know you are writting with a specific style, but I am finding the disjointed way the story is unfolidng slightly difficult to follow when there are longer stretches between updates. I am going back to the prior chapter and very often re-reading the entire piece, to recapture my place and remember what point we were at. Would it be possible to re-cap? Just a thought. I do want to see where you take this, but the site is a bit glitchy at times and after I try to move on to the new chapter I sometimes have to log in again to regain access to the chapters.
Author's Response:
right i will most certainly do a recap for you, i am very sorry if there is too long of gaps between chapters, it will get alot simpler i promise, these chapters are jus necessary is all :) but i will recap at the beginning of the next chapter :) thanks for sticking with the story though :) xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:29 AM Title: New Surroundings
your evil! :(
update fast!
Author's Response:
i will be updating, and Im not that evil :) Im alot nicer than Edward :) xxx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:15 AM Title: Ultimatum
keep going! :)
Author's Response:
dont worry i will :) xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:14 AM Title: New Surroundings
who are they
Author's Response:
you will soon find out my friend :) xx thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:49 AM Title: New Surroundings
Loved it! Cant wait to see who the 2 people are...HURRY UP AND UPDAT!!!!! LOL!!!!
Author's Response:
hehe you will see very soon :) :) xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:36 AM Title: New Surroundings
Poor Isabella. Can't wait to see who's under the bag.
Author's Response:
You will see them soon i promise. thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) xx
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:15 AM Title: New Surroundings
Update soon I love this story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, the story will be updated very soon, i promise :) xxx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:30 PM Title: New Surroundings
Oh, you are an evil little tease! Holding the nexp chapter hostage, tsk tsk. (j.k. *wink*) I am liking this story, a lot. Glad the next chapter is longer, this one felt like a teaser- it was getting so good! Hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
hehe holding it hostage you make me sound like a cheesy bruce willis film hehe :) and well all of the chapters seem short but i work alot on them :/ u try make em longer but its hard lol xxx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:26 PM Title: New Surroundings
This story is so intense. I love a Dark Edward. I can't wait to see what happens next and find out who the mystery guests are. Hope you will update soon.
Author's Response:
i love the way you said mystery guests hehe :) and i will be updating soon xx
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:23 PM Title: New Surroundings
Wow can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
thank you and by the looks of things i will be updating soon :) xx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:19 PM Title: New Surroundings
OMG
Please Hurry up next one please!
Love the story
Author's Response:
hehe it will be up very soon :) xx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:51 PM Title: New Surroundings
ooooohhhhh!!!! this is getting good, i can't stand it update,update update, PLEASE.
Author's Response:
hehe im so glad you like it :) i will be updating soon :) xx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:46 PM Title: New Surroundings
I love this story :-) Please post your next chapter sooner rather than later :)
Author's Response:
aww bless ya, it will be up today i promise :) xxx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:38 PM Title: New Surroundings
Who are the people tyed up? I hope Bella makes a friend soon, all of the Cullin men have been mean to her so far.
Author's Response:
you will find out very soon i promise, and she may be getting a friend soon ;)xx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:14 PM Title: New Surroundings
so what is he up to?
Author's Response:
You will find out very soon :) thanks for the review :)
sorry for the whole getting so many reviews thing, i just wanted to see if it would work is all, i promise not to do it again :) xx
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:58 PM Title: New Surroundings
good
Author's Response:
hehe thanks :) sorry about the review thing, I was just curious :) xx
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:17 PM Title: Monster
I do like the banners!
Good story...curious to know how the "accident" first occurred and what Edward is really thinking...would be neat to see an EPOV!
Thanks!
Author's Response:
oh thank you :)
and well i could explain the accident to you now, because im sorry but i dont see any EPOV in the future at the moment. however i may do a one shot of the accident to him :) for you! hehe
thank you very much for reviewing :) xxx
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:08 PM Title: Trapped
I am really enjoying this story and intrigued to see its progression!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. Im excited to see where i take it aswell, I just go with it, it has a life of its own :) xx
Date: 19 Feb 2010 10:21 AM Title: Monster
Awesome! Cant wait for an update!
Author's Response:
Thanks, and the update will be coming soon :) xx
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:47 PM Title: Monster
i am really liking this story so far, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :) next chapter will be up soon :) xx
Date: 18 Feb 2010 9:49 AM Title: Monster
Great story can't wait till the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :) next chapter will be up soon :) xx
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:52 AM Title: Monster
So far so good. I have a feeling things are about to get interesting! Hope you update soon ;)
Author's Response:
:) things are about to get interesting hehe :) xxx
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:52 AM Title: Monster
So far so good. I have a feeling things are about to get interesting! Hope you update soon ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:37 AM Title: Monster
wow! Im hooked! excited for the next chapter :D and great writing by the way :)
Author's Response:
Oh thank you very much :) i try my hardest :) and the next chapter wont take long, iv got it all planned out :) xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:03 PM Title: Monster
Great update! Loving this story :) And your banner is awesome! I wish I knew how yall did those :) Very cool. Can't wait for your next update :-)
Author's Response:
aww thank you very much :) your awesome for reading + reviewing hehe
and thanks so much for liking the banner, can i ask which one you like?
and il make you one if you want? xxx :)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 10:06 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
WOW:) very amazing, i love when people make Edward dark i cant wait for more:)
Author's Response:
oh thank you so much :) im so happy that you enjoy my dark edward hehe :) he's about to get darker :) xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:57 PM Title: Ultimatum
Love it!!! Can't wait for the next chapters.
Author's Response:
aww thank you, im so glad you like it, and the next chapter is up tonight :) xxx
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:23 AM Title: Ultimatum
I love darkward. Keep him dark!
Author's Response:
hehe well if you love darkward now, then your going to absolutly adore him soon :) he gets a lot darker :) xx thank you very much for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:46 AM Title: Trapped
This sounds great so far :) I feel so bad for Bella...I have no clue what I would do in her situation. At least she has enough guts to come after him with a rock. (Although we know it will do her no good...it's better than just choosing death.) I think I'm going to like this story.
Author's Response:
oh thank you so much, i love when people review, and you've spoken your mind so i love you even more :) and i hope you stick with the story im just writing the forth chapter :) so it will be up very soon, thank you so much again :) xxxx