Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
wait don't you mean isn't that enough monster for you indicating edward as the monster not like that monster meaning jacob?
Author's Response:
it is aimed at edward not jacob :) erm did that help, cos im a little confused lol n thanks for the review :) xx
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:22 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Favorite line:
"I’m not Edward, I wont be gentle. "
This is great writing. It shows that you've been sucessfull in defining that this was an experience with the monster, not "Edward." Bella realizes this when she says "The monster must have gotten what he wanted, I didn‘t mind."
I can't wait until Bella gets to experience "Edward" and the "monster" is left in the dark. Both of these pieces complete your Edward, but I think that Bella and Edward won't really get to "make love" for the first time until there is more "Edward" than the "monster" when they're being physical.
Hope that made sense!
GREAT CHAPTER!!
Author's Response:
:) im glad you enjoyed it :) and tht was one of my fav lines too :)
and yes totally, but first edward has to regain control over the monster :) and he pops out when edward is losing control lol sooooo edward needs to learn self restraint lol :) xx but im sure he can do it hehe xx
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:10 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
I enjoyed this chapter. You didn't take the whole "love" triangle the way I thought you would in the beginning of the story, which intrigues me!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 5:09 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
:) yummy... ilove sexy-psycho-kindapping scenes... lolzzz
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:56 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
I really enjoyed this story. You write the struggle edward has between the "monster" and his "human feelings" toward Isabella prefectly!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:33 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster
What did Jake give her?
Author's Response:
you shall have to wait and see xx
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:15 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster
=) loved the chapter, and the fluff-lemon
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
thank you, and cheers for the mugs :) x
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:27 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Intense, thoroughly amzing phycologically, and quite a read! Bravo!
Author's Response:
:) thank you very much :) xx
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:40 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
OMG!! Even the MONSTER is SCHMEXY!!! lol
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:22 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
I think you did a great job! At first I was a little dissapointed that the "Monster" was so rough with her but by the end it really just seemed to fit. Even the monster loves her.... that's pretty sweet even if he has different ways of showing it. :0) What's the deal with Jacob??? :0)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
great chapter. i loved it. i love both monster and edward. cant wait to read more
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:27 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Man i love that "monster", great chapter. Jacob??????? Can't wait for next chappy
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:25 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks.....
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Ok the monster is back. Will edward return? Love the update
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:50 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
I do hope Bella could get it out of Edward who this girl is. I think it was tanya. I do wonder what happened to her and if it has anything to do with MR. MYSTERY. Will we see more of Jacob. I hope we get to see what he is thinking though this. As always I can't wait til next time
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Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:54 AM Title: Waffles
I feel so bad that Carlisle was able to hurt Bella's feelings like that!! Now Bella is rejecting Edward..tisk tisk!! I hope that she finds out what she needs to know about Edward's ex so that they can move past it. It's already taking its toll on them both so I hope that they work it out soon!
I can't wait for the next chapter! I love these characters!! I am a writer too, and I find your work to be very inspriational!! I am a big fan! :)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:53 AM Title: Waffles
I feel so bad that Carlisle was able to hurt Bella's feelings like that!! Now Bella is rejecting Edward..tisk tisk!! I hope that she finds out what she needs to know about Edward's ex so that they can move past it. It's already taking its toll on them both so I hope that they work it out soon!
I can't wait for the next chapter! I love these characters!! I am a writer too, and I find your work to be very inspriational!! I am a big fan! :)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:38 AM Title: Killing the Corrupt
If I were Edward I would have pulled that tree right out of the ground. It would serve Jacob right!
I like the way that you've created two personas: Edward vs. the monster. *clapping*
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:27 AM Title: Manipulations
Carlisle's story is so sad. I hate that Esme was killed. I am hoping that she's really a vamp somewhere and not truly dead because Carlise deserves to be happy too. He's so bitter!
I think Jasper knew that Edward would listen to Bella's confession and that's why he did what he did.
OMG I almost fell out when Edward asked Bella "“Do you think you could take it?” Your Edward is soo sexy!! I can't wait for them to do it already! :)
Did you ever find a beta? I am available if you still need one!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:08 AM Title: Peeping Tom
Favorite lines:
"I fell in love with the beast, not the beauty."-B
"You are my angel. I cannot take away your wings, I will not destroy your halo.” -E
I think Tanya is the insider that Jacob is speaking about at the end of the chapter. Or maybe Rosalie...
Author's Response:
:) i really do love your reviews, your fav lines are the ones that i love as well, your the first person to talk about them hehe it makes me very happy :) and you shall have to wait and see on the little insider :) xx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:56 PM Title: Bitter Heart
WOW Carlisle's story is so sad! You've done a great job developing the characterization in this story.
Author's Response:
thank you very much :) xx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:47 PM Title: Kitchen Confessions
Carlise is so mean!! I am glad that Bella has come to her senses. Your story flows very well! Thanks for the great story!
Author's Response:
oh thank you very much, i was worried that it would be jittery and unreadable haha, i panic a wee bit, but thank you very much for your reviews, they are very comforting :) xxx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:36 PM Title: Taking Control
I can't wait to find out why Alice gets hurt when she touches Bella! Damn Jasper and Alice and their co**-blocking! LOL :)
Author's Response:
haha well you shall be happy to know i am writing the first sex scene lol hehe, i thort u guys had waited long enough :) xx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
Another great chapter!!!
Favorite line: "Is that monster enough for you?"
This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories ever!
Author's Response:
oh my gosh, thank you very much, I'm so glad your enjoying the story :) i like that line too :) xx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:09 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
I like that you made Jacob evil!!! He's like James in Twilight. WOW this is great!! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:53 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
OMG I love this line:
"I was a helpless rabbit, but I wasn't falling into a rabbit hole, I was jumping in head first."
Edward is softening up! Good job conveying the tension between B & A at the end of the chapter! I LOVE the fact that Bella stood up for herself by saying that she had already won! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
hehe tht was my fav line too :) i just love the idea of it :) thank you very much for the review and for enjoying the story :) xxx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:34 PM Title: Magic Eight Ball
I loved the end of this chapter because we start to see that there is something "there" between B & E. I enjoyed your take on Alice. Why was Edward cut their visit short? I guess I will see in the next few chapters! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:12 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
I am sooo hooked on this story!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:56 PM Title: Hopeless
I can't believe Edward and Jasper! This was a great chapter!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:46 PM Title: New Surroundings
OMG you shocked the $hit out of me with this chapter! I thought Edward killed Charlie!
You are very good! :) I am so glad tha tit was only a dream! Are all of the Cullens nasty like Edward, Jasper, and Carlisle? My goodness I hope not!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:38 PM Title: Monster
This is a great line:
I hated my bodies willingness to the man.
This is an excellent storyline. You've certainly got my attention!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Waffles
Yeah Bella is pathetic! She NEEDS to ask him! Great chapter ;o}
Author's Response:
yh she is haha, but i mean, wudnt everyone hav low self esteem with him :) haha xxx thanks for the mugs :) xx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:26 PM Title: Ultimatum
Wow your Edward is a bastard...but I love it!! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:14 PM Title: Trapped
I love this story! I can't wait to read more. On to the next chapter...
Author's Response:
well, hello, i know this isnt an actual reply to an email, however this is the only way i could think of getting the link to you as the emails arent working, so here you go - http://misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/ i really hope this works.
I hope emails start working soon as well xx
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:56 AM Title: Waffles
Damn...I want waffles now!
I hope Bella soon just asks Edward about this other woman. It'll drive her crazy if she doesn't.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: Waffles
Hmm! I wonder if it was Tanya. hmm! I wonder if Carlisle just said that to be mean. Hmm! Seriously! I think he's still grieving over Esme. Maybe someone should set him up. Another Esme by chance. hmm! I don't know but that boy needs to be laid! lol.
Are you sure this is not Stockholm syndrome? lol.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:21 AM Title: Killing the Corrupt
Hmm! At least he's finding out that Jacob is spying on Bella. When the heck are they turning Emmett and Alice? Good Grief! lol. I mean they are freaking outnumbered. I miss Esme.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:05 AM Title: Manipulations
hmm! I don't really like Jasper in this story. Then again, all the vampires here are somewhat ruthless and cruel very unlike the book/movie. hmm! Even Carlisle.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:53 AM Title: Peeping Tom
What? Rosalie and Jacob in cahoots? Seriously?! Is that Emmett she's carrying? Really? Finally!
By the way, when did he kill James for her?
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:19 AM Title: Taking Control
Okay, what did he do to ALice? Why is she wearing gloves again? lol.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
Aww! I feel so bad for Carlisle. Aww! He lost Esme. Poor Esme. Are you sure she's dead and not a vampy? *pouts.
Protective Edward (*swoons)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Kitchen Confessions
Aww! She's scared. Poor Bella-Boo. aww! Where the heck is Emmett and Esme?
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:10 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
That's it? that's a tiny kiss. Passionate but tiny.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:34 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
I can see you don't like them. lol.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:33 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
Hmm! So they love each other then? I haven't even read them kiss yet. When are we going to see that?
Stockholm Syndrome is sometimes an outcome when you are kidnapped and held captive for a long period of time. Some people develop love and loyalty towards their captive despite the treatment they have over their captors.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:02 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
So the werewolves are evil here ehh?
Author's Response:
yes yes they are :) xxx i dont like them lol so i thort i would make them baddies :) xx
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:54 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Okay, Are you stockholm syndrome? Where is jacob in this story?
And where is Rosalie, Emmett and Esme. Plus, Alice is not a vampire? She's human? hmm! Interesting!
So they fell in love already ehh? hmm! That was fast. Is this true love or not?
Author's Response:
Erm i suppose you could call it true love, and yes it does happen very fast, but Bella is a little like a love sick puppy, she has never reli had anyone interested in her, and she gets very curious :) And rosalie and emmett are coming, and you shall find out about esme :) and no Alice is not a vampire, she is a likkle human :) and whats stockholme syndrome? xxx thanks for the mugs :) xx
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:28 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
Great chapter! How are his eyes green? I love Darkward. ;o}
Author's Response:
hehe u shall know soon :) thank you very much for the mugs and thanks for reviewin so earli on, not many do that, so thanks :) xx
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:14 AM Title: Waffles
really loving your story..
good luck with uni!
Author's Response:
thank you very much.
And I'm kinda nervous, but rli excited :) xx
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:22 AM Title: Waffles
Really love your story. Can't wait for next chapter. Good luck with university! :)
Author's Response:
thank you very much, I'm looking forward to it :) and thanks for the mugs :) xx
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Waffles
Good chapter, poor bella thinks she's not good enough for hot ass edward. lol
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Waffles
Why did Bella do that? Does she like to punish herself? She makes me angry because she does silly things. She should know that Carlisle is saying those things to get to her, what is wrong with her? She frustrates me. It's no secret that Edward has probably been with other women, she should know that.
Author's Response:
dont worry it wont last for long. Bella is just silly. xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:15 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
Anyone angry at someone trying to better themselves doesn't deserve to know them!!
Author's Response:
thank you very much, it means alot that you got my back hehe :) and your very right, however some readers are just like that lol but i think i have pretty good readers :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:03 PM Title: Waffles
We'll still be here whenever you can update!! Love this story!!
Author's Response:
thank you very much, I'm glad your not angry with me :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:50 PM Title: Waffles
Loved it very much update when you can I just hope there are not being very truthful with her update when you can thanks...
Author's Response:
well you shall find out soon :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:22 PM Title: Waffles
He needs to make her feel more confident that she has no compitition.
Author's Response:
yup he sure does, but she needs to tell him first :S which is going to be a huge deal. Eddie doesn't like talking about his past xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:19 PM Title: Waffles
Ok i like this, but carlisle can kick rocks lol. I get where he is coming from, but they are just as bad as humans are when they torture them if they just fed from them i'd understand, but that is not the case. I really am disappointed in how edward still thinks he wont change for bella when it comes to feeding on humans, but he supposidly only preys on the bad people. I do love this story and I wasnt sure if i would have liked him, but apart of me does.
Author's Response:
well all i can say is tht ur queries on carlisle will all become apparent soon, he does have a gd reason, he is just too pigheaded to tell bella. And Edward is very self ritious, he believes bella isn't changing him, when in reality she is, he just doesn't like the idea of a human being able to hurt him, but i totally know were ur coming from.
Everything will become clear :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: Waffles
Why is Bella letting what Carlisle said get to her now? He said stuff before and she brushed it off. I don't like her feeling sorry for herself. Edwards over 100 years old it's quite possible there would have been someone else in that time. I hope she gets over this quick. :0) I just don't think it's a good reason to push him away.
Author's Response:
well your completely right, but bella has extremly low self worth and carlisle preyed on that. he hit her weak spot. it wont last for long, she is just being silly, Edward will get her out of it, i promise :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:06 PM Title: Waffles
love it cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
hehe you shall get more soon, dont worry, and I'm very happy your enjoying it :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:51 PM Title: Waffles
Good chapter- i think i would definitely act the same as Bella is acting. Because technically, he is a bit of a whore- he called on tanya for a booty call didnt he? he cant just expect her to forget that.
I like that shes finally, even though its in this little way, taking control of herself. He cant make her change her thoughts, and im glad he cant read her mind- he deserves some angst after what hes put bella through!
cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
hehe well karmas a biotch haha And our little Eddie will pay :) however little bella probably cant stand the heat of the kitchen so she is being silly messing with a vampire, so eddie is gna get his own back too. but thats angsty stories for you :) I'm glad your stil reading. And the next chapter wil be up as soon as i can :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:37 PM Title: Waffles
Poor Bella! She really is "on her own" isn't she? She has trouble talking to Edward, she's afraid of Jasper and Carlisle and Rosalie, and Alice is nowhere to be found. Wonderfully emotional.
Author's Response:
thank you very much, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. She is very silly, she is the only reason she is alone. But she just keeps digging the hole deeper, But dont worry, she wil be ok, sort of. xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:05 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
Getting things from Edward's viewpoint is a fascinating switch at this point. Yin and Yang. Great!
Author's Response:
:) thank you very much, I'm really glad your enjoying it :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:33 PM Title: Waffles
Loved the chapter, =) as always,
can´t wait to see what Edwards former love was like, *curious*
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
hehe you shall know soon :) thanks for the review and for the mugs :) and I would like to welcome you, I love new readers :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:14 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
Lets see that monster...
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:24 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
Loved the chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
thank you very much, the next chapter is coming in like half an hour :) and thank you very much for all of your mugs, sorry i didn't reply to all of your reviews, i was waiting for you to finish. thank you very much for reviewing each chapter, it makes me very happy :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:19 PM Title: Manipulations
Loved the chapter,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:06 PM Title: Peeping Tom
Loved the chapter, as always, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:08 PM Title: Bitter Heart
Loved the chapter,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:56 PM Title: Kitchen Confessions
Loved the chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:35 PM Title: Taking Control
Loved the chapter =) (what a surprise hehe)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:19 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
Loved this chapter, too =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:03 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
Loved the chapter, as always, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:47 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Loved the chapter,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:33 PM Title: Magic Eight Ball
loved the chapter,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:20 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
Liked it, a lot, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:07 PM Title: Hopeless
Loved this dark chapter, too. =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:59 PM Title: New Surroundings
Loved this chapter, too, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:46 PM Title: Monster
Love Darkward, loved the chapter
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:32 PM Title: Ultimatum
still loving it =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:22 PM Title: Trapped
loved this chapter, too.
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
:) im very happy your still enjoying it :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:16 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
loved the first chapter,
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
:) thank you very much, i hope you enjoy the rest :) xx
Abi xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:38 AM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Bella couldnt be more fickle even if she tried. She sees this vampire kill, yet a few days later shes in his arms? realistically, that doesnt make sense. Nobody in their right mind would process any of the events that way, and that quickly.
Author's Response:
well if you dont like it, you dont have to read it. thanks for the review anyhow :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:26 AM Title: Killing the Corrupt
I was wondering if he could feel jacob that close that was a good chapter!
thank you! Do you ever sleep? LOL
Author's Response:
lol yes i do sleep haha i just dont have a life, and i dont understand, feel jacob that close? and thank you very much xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:20 AM Title: Manipulations
lol Jasper is so different actually more believeable in this way..
Author's Response:
well thank you very much :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:08 AM Title: Peeping Tom
ahhh emmett? and jacob like this is fun.. LOL
Author's Response:
yess indeedy that is our little Emmett hehe and i thort people may like the sick and deranged mind that is jacob :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:00 AM Title: Bitter Heart
awwww.... I love the bite me part.. YES PLEASE!!
Author's Response:
hehe i know, doesn't every girl want Edward to bite them? haha xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:55 AM Title: Kitchen Confessions
awww... that is so cute........ love it.....
Author's Response:
hehe well he can be sweet too :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:47 AM Title: Taking Control
how could you do that to me? I so want some more smut here!! can't wait for this story to continue so I am going to keep reading..
Author's Response:
hehe i gotta keep u wanting it, and plus when it does finally come, you'll be happy :) xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:37 AM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
that was a really great chapter I am smiling.. it is so different from other stories I like how dark and twisted you made the characters..
Author's Response:
aww thank you :) im kinda in a bad place, but not that bad lol and wanted to write it down to get rid of my frustration haha by torturing bella lol xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:09 AM Title: Mr Nice Guy
loved the ending of the chapter I like how all the characters are different.. and look on the front page of the library (home page) on the right hand side...
Author's Response:
hehe i knw i just saw, i almost cried when i spotted it, ever since i came on the site, iv been longing to be on it :) hehe i sound very gushy lol il stop, but thank you so much for enjoying my story and for placing it on features and im glad you like my twisting of the characters :) i thort they were better this way :) and i sent u a PM on ffnet xx thanks
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Killing the Corrupt
that was great being in his mind can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
Author's Response:
hehe no thank you for the mugs and i'm glad you enjoyed it :) x
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:35 AM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
wow this is greatness I am going to put it up as a featured story! thanks for writing it!
Author's Response:
wow what does that mean, and were will you be putting it? hehe im all excited and no seriously thank you xx
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:23 AM Title: Killing the Corrupt
So glad to see the softer side of Edward. Love the story. Keep updating
Author's Response:
i will dont worry :) xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it
Author's Response:
hehe im glad you liked it :) and im ecstatic that you love the story. thank you so much xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 9:38 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
Good change!
Author's Response:
thank you very much :) xx and ta for the mugs :) xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:54 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
When is he going to give in to Bella? I can't belive Jacob got away. I bet Rose does have something to do with it.
Author's Response:
well im sorry i cant tell you that, but this story isnt very based on the physical side, more the emotional, but there will be physical, i just dont know when. the story kinda takes its own turns :) and you shall find out about rose very soon :) xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:29 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
hmm wonder if Rose really is helping Jake???
Author's Response:
You shall know soon my dont worry :) xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:59 PM Title: Magic Eight Ball
hmmm Alice was different! I like this alot. and my download is finished so I will talk to you tomorrow!
Mandy xxx
Author's Response:
thank you very much Mandy :)
Abi xx