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Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:15 PM Title: The Truth Hurts

Woman what are you DOING to me? This chapter was brilliant BTW. :-) I just want to scream and cry and pull my hair out in frustration for poor Bella. That's the worst torture I've ever heard of. (You're so twisted!! LOL...I mean that in the most loving way, of course!) Gah, to have to watch your loved ones around you suffer would be AWFUL. I think I'd be begging him to kill me instead. I totally didn't see this coming. And I freakin love it! (As usual!) I'm about to head out for the night so I've got to run...we've got tons to catch up on though! I'll talk to you later :-) Update soon lady! Xoxo

Author's Response:

i know i know im evil to keep throwing you guys off cliffs haha, and thank you i enjoyed this chapter too :) and yes i feel that way too, and there shall be lots of begging and my twistedness seems to know no bounds haha. and dont worry about al the pain, it will all be ok. have a great night out and i shall update when i can hehe, email me woman! lol xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Manipulations

Naughty Jazz

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Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:04 PM Title: Peeping Tom

guessing Em makes an appearance next.



Author's Response:

he will be coming very soon yes :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:58 PM Title: Bitter Heart

Yeah  Bite me too.....but I prefer my southern boys......  lol   Well at least it explains Carlisle.



Author's Response:

hehe i love them too :) and yes tht is the little carlisle explanation :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:45 PM Title: Kitchen Confessions

ugh   Carlisle needs to get laid.



Author's Response:

haha i dont know when that will happen, or if it will, but yeh he dus haha xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:34 PM Title: The Truth Hurts

OMG!!! This is sooo intense right now, i'm about to pee myself! lol Can jacob be anymore creep?! Freakin intense chappie, totally loved it :)



Author's Response:

wow thank you very much, and i know, im so excited for the next chapter, i just hope you guys dont think i need to be locked up haha, and jacob is my own little creepy creation haha xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:55 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy

ugh.....evil wolved too?   Jeez.    Hmmm  I'm guess the evil woman being eluded to is Tanya.



Author's Response:

well you shal have to read on and find out, thanks for reviewing, and im hoping your enjoying the story :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:20 PM Title: Hopeless

dont like mean carlisle

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 7:50 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

Loved the chapter, as always, =)

i have faith in you and the story.

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you very much linda, i'm glad your enjoying it :) and thank you for the cups :) xx

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:57 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

Stupid, Stupid little Bella! She has put everyone in danger because she refused to trust the people who loved her. Instead, she trusted a dog, and now everyone who cared about her will suffer. Maybe she belongs with the dogs as it seems she is a selfish bitch...



Author's Response:

wow much bella hate! haha i dont blame you, but she will learn her lesson, and it wont be nice lol :) and she is very selfish, but sometimes we cant see what i right infront of us, so instead we skip the obvious, because we want to see the best in people. thank you very much for the review and the mugs, im glad your liking it :) xx

Reviewer: bekilm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:52 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

great chapter, I'm definitely sticking with the story!



Author's Response:

oh well thank you very much :) xx

Reviewer: Jennifer Walters Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 6:20 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

Yep, i definitely like it, please, hurry up with up dates!!!!!! :o)))

I hope that Jacob will be in pain soon cause I really don't like him happy!

?o))))



Author's Response:

i will try my hardest with the updates, i cant promise they will be fast, maybe every week, but thats pretty reasonable :) xx and jacob will be in pain, but not just yet :) xx

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:27 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

I hope the guys get to them quick!



Author's Response:

well i cant promise she will have a nice ride, but they will save her :) xx

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

Glad to see you made Jacob evil....I'm also a bit twisted ;)



Author's Response:

well then my friend you are going to love the next few chapters :) xx

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:12 AM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

OMG!!! Bella is so stupid! I can't believe she trust Jacob!

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger

Don't worry bout me i can take it...bring it on!!! lmao I really dont think u can go wrong to be honest its been a great story. Some people u just can't please tho so dont sweat over it lol can't wait to read more ;)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:03 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

:)

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:52 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

Sweeet chapter!!! I'm loving all the twisted drama happening...soo excited for the next few chapters lol Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

you're very welcome, thanks for the review and for reading, and im rli excited about letting all the cats out of the bag haha you guys may either hate me or love me, but i hope you trust that i will make everything kool in the end :) xx

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:48 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

I hope Edward, Jasper and Carlisle are ok. How in the world are Alice and Bella going to get out of this? Looking forward to the next chapter. :0)



Author's Response:

dont worry they will survive i promise :) but it aint gonna be a smoothe ride im afraid, but edward and the monster are now one :D so its gonna be a thrilling ride :) xxx and i cant wait to let you all see the next chapter, its not nice though :/ xx

Reviewer: beanbag_131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:36 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

OMG you left us with such a huge cliffy! What is going to happen! Will edward get there in time???? When are you going to post next??? Soon I HOPE!!!! I can't wait this is driving me crazy!



Author's Response:

i know i know, im horrible, but i had to set you up for the next few chapters, the arent going to be very nice, so i needed to ease you in slowly, otherwise you would all be running away screaming, i will be updating as soon as i can, i promise :) xx

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:33 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

That was just evil!! You were VERY right...I LOVE this chapter, although I'm now having a minor anxiety attack ;-) Holy cow what have you done to our lil' Bella?? And you're right, I owe you one monster email! It's coming pumpkin!! Life has been kicking me in the behind as of late. As from what I've heard, life is beating you up too! I'm dying to know what happened the other night! I'm thinking about you!! Who do I need to beat up? ;-) BTW, I don't think I took a breath while reading this chapter. This was wild! Thankfully, I'm a sucker for dark stuff, hahaha. (Should this worry me? Lol) I miss you & will talk to ya soon! Xoxo :-)

Author's Response:

how did you know about the other night? and yeh it was pretty horrible, but i'll live, it just creeped me out thts all. and i know i am an evil little thing, but you know you love me :) and i love this chapter too, i love the dark stuff :) and i know little Bella is gonna have a rough couple o chapters ahead, i hope she can handle it and i hope you guys can too :/ i know i was holding my breathe too :) i got the idea of the lake when i went for a walk and saw a really beautiful river, i just thought it was the perfect scene for jake to catch up to her :) i miss you too, and no i love the dark stuff, im wicked :) xx thanks for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:12 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

WOW she is going to find out the hard way i guess loved it can't wait to see what will happen next update when you can thanks......



Author's Response:

hehe i love your wow :) and yes she is going to learn the extreme hard way :/ thank you very much for reading and reviewing and for the mugs :) xx and thank you very much for saying update when you can, cos ppl are starting to get a little impatient with me haha so its nice that your being so relaxed about it :) xxx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:14 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

OMG! WHAT???!!!! WHAT HAPPENED???! Is it jacob?? TELL ME!!! lmao



Author's Response:

Oh wow calm yourself hehe, it will all be ok, take a deep breathe, i shall not leave you hanging for long, i promise :) the next chapter is a coming :) xx

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:53 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you very much for the mugs, and for the review :) xx

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:57 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

Hmm! It's Jacob isn't it? hmm! I wonder when Edward will change Bella?



Author's Response:

it will all become apparent very soon i promise :) bt i think you know the answer to that question :) thanks for the mugs :) xxx

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:20 AM Title: To Touch a Psychic

Poor Bella is like a ping pong ball.  Edward better decide what he wants from her soon!  She has alot more patience in your story than I ever would have.



Author's Response:

yes she is a little like a ping pong ball hehe, but she is a little confuffled at the moment, and she does have a wee bit too much patients, but when you love someone you kinda do have patients xxx

Reviewer: beanbag_131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:05 AM Title: To Touch a Psychic

Omg I love this chapter! What did Alice see! I can't wait till the next one in posted!



Author's Response:

dont worry you will see what she has seen or rather felt very soon :) xx

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:57 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

Woman! You left me THERE? Really? Really. I'm shocked. Ok...not really but geez what a cliff hanger! I hope you are serious about a quick update! My heart can't handle things like that :) (In other words, I have the patience of a three year old, hahaha) I've missed you lady! Hope life and classes are going well. I assumed your updates would become further apart once classes got into the "meat" of the course. Just remember...deep breaths. And adderall. (I'm totally kidding. Sorta, haha) Starbucks works just as well. We'll have to catch up soon. Like you, life has been kicking my butt over here as well. Can't wait for your next update! Xoxo :) :)

Author's Response:

aww bless ya, i did leave you there and i am very sorry, and you better email me soon woman hehe :) i know i do love the cliffys, ur gonna loveeee the next chapter, i promise, you shall probably squeel with excitement, or shudder in revultion, im not quite sure how the next chapter will be perceived lol and classes are going rli well, i had a terrible night lastr night, bt i will explain tht wen u email me haha xxx

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:33 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

What did she see??!!??!!!???!!!!



Author's Response:

You will find out very very very soon, dont worry :) I promise not to leave you hanging for too long :) xx thanks for the cups :) x

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:01 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

loved it update soon great cliffy thanks....



Author's Response:

thanks very much, im glad you liked the cliffy and thanks for the mugs :) Xx

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:31 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

Love the moments with Bella and her Edward.  Wonder what Alice saw and what's going to happen next. :0)



Author's Response:

you will see what alice felt very soon :) and thanks i love the edward bella moments too :) xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:24 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

nice and cliffy! just the way i like it! great job



Author's Response:

hehe i love cliffys too :) xxxx

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:14 PM Title: To Touch a Psychic

Oh man...I wonder what she saw...or who



Author's Response:

well she only felt, she isnt a fully pledged psychic yet :) xxx

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:39 AM Title: Peeping Tom

Ahhh Your reveal of the mystery man.  Nice one!!

ek



Author's Response:

hehe im glad you enjoyed it :) xx

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:38 AM Title: Peeping Tom

Ahhh Your reveal of the mystery man.  Nice one!!

ek

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 5:05 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Favorite line:
 
"Edward was always using his abilities to make me a willing slave."
 
I love this line because it shows how out of pocket Bella has become with her emotional roller coaster rides.  She wants to be Edward's slave but she resents it! "Willing slave" is a great way to put that!
 
LOL @ Edward getting undressed and delicious so that Bella would want to look at him in that kitchen.  That's so sexy! I know why Bella caved because I would have went with him too! HE HE
 
You did such a great job conveying the battle between Edward and the monster for dominance.  I am sooooo glad that Edward won and Bella finally got to experience the gentle Edward!
 
What a sweet chapter! I loved it!

Reviewer: Jennifer Walters Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:25 AM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Nice job! Everytime I think that I know what will be in next chapter you totally surprise me. Thanks

And about Jacob, he's bed, very very bad boy!!!!! ?o))))

Btw I love Edvard, of course! :o))))

 



Author's Response:

hehe well your going to be very surprised by the next chapter then :) thanks for the review :) xx

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 7:43 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

I'm hoping Jacob is a baddy!

Reviewer: bekilm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:26 AM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

I have been reading and loving all the chapters so far but gah bella needs to get a grip and realise Jacob is not nice! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:40 PM Title: Magic Eight Ball

:)

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:24 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster

:)

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Hopeless

:)

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: New Surroundings

:)

Reviewer: nails233 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:04 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

i am hoping he's a baddie but wouldn't stop reading either way.. nice job thanks michele

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:03 PM Title: Monster

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 10:53 PM Title: Ultimatum

:)

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 10:41 PM Title: Trapped

:)

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 10:32 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger

:)

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 8:23 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Loving it!! (As always, duh!) :) :) So I want to hear all about college life. That's pretty much what my email contains, so don't answer that one until I FINALLY send it,hahaha. Can you tell life's been a bit crazy lately??

So...back to the story. To answer your question: Jacob is, of course, this horrific person that has no problem with using (and hurting) Bella in the process simply to get even with Edward. I'm totally on Edward's side 100% here. (Granted, I feel for Bella because she's just too much of a good person to see the dirty, bad intentions Jacob truly has.) There's no shades of grey in that equation if you ask moi!! Booo Jacob :) :) :) (Now...when it comes to Taylor Lautner, I'd give you a completely different response as he is HOT...hahaha. But that makes me feel like a major cougar, as I'm 24, and he's like...what? 19? 20? But there's no harm in looking...right?!?) Hmmm, I never asked you...Team Edward or Jacob? I'm personally an Edward/Bella fan over here :) :) That's just...the sane way to think! Ha :) Anyways doll, I better run. Going to the grandparents for Easter! I hope you have a fantastic Easter! Christ is risen!! :) :) Xoxo bye girly :)

Author's Response:

hehe wow another long one :) hehe and i am totally for edward, can you tell haha :) thank you for the mugs and i cant wait for the email :) and finally your the one person who has realised, bella is not fickle, she is naive lol she trusts everyone lol so yeah :) and bella will see jacobs dark side in chapter 25 :) which i am soo totally looking forward to writing :) xx happy easter to you too :) xx

Reviewer: twilightme1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:47 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

 

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:47 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

 

Reviewer: starlight07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:37 PM Title: Trapped

Even if it did hit his chin, it would probably just bounce off and break into peices. Atleast she tried.

Reviewer: starlight07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:27 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger

He hit HER?! Damn, I know that hurt.

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:09 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Loved the chapter as always, =)

I don´t trust Jacob, but Bella seems to..

Best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: 22amazing Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:00 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Great chapter!  ,  I am having trouble deciding which Edward i like better, but i am pretty sure that the monster is winning lol.  I think jacob is a baddy, but i am biased toward edward.

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:53 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Um definitly a baddy! Well at least i kinda want him to be lol Its much more fun when u have someone to really hate lmao, I was so happy for edward in this chapter! Thanks for the update Happy Easter!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:27 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Can't wait for more Jake!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:24 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

great chapter!

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 3:53 PM Title: Fighting the Monster Within

Hmm! He's a baddie since you said you don't like him. He's evil! lol. 

Anyhoo, when are we going to see the fight with Edward and Jacob? Bella needs to see the real Jacob. I mean Emmett and Alice doesn't trust Jacob and they are human. hmm! I wonder if they know something that Bella doesn't. Why don't they just tell her?

I love how Edward is fighting the monster but I still say the monster and Edward needs to work together. They are one in the same person. Compromise!

 

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:39 AM Title: Trust

Let the monster out...he'll get her to see reason!



Author's Response:

hehe :) dont worry edward can sort her out :) xx

Reviewer: Twi224 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger

Yeah, that did make sense, about the whole Edward has vampire instincts thing. Thanks!



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your very welcome :) im glad i sorted it out for you :) xx thanks again for the mugs :) x

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:39 AM Title: Trust

Is it ok to be angry with Bella? because I am.... How can she trust Jacob over Edward? Edward even though he's a monster has been nothing but straight forward with her heck she even loves the monster. She really is being really stupid at the moment. I'm so upset with her I kind of don't care if Jacob does get her. Then she'd see...... :0)



Author's Response:

It is perfectly alright to be angry with Bella, thats exactly what i wanted, she is being very silly, and i wanted this reaction lol bt im not doing it for fun hehe its all for a reason, n she will come to her senses, i mean do you really think alice would let her trust jacob. you remebber her face when edward found the note? she aint gonna comfort bella, she gonna knock some sense into her :) xx

Reviewer: Twi224 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:19 AM Title: Trust

Does Edward have a personality disorder?



Author's Response:

I suppose you could see it as that, but not rli, he jus has the instinct of a vampire, and well i tried to capture the fact that edward may be evil, but every vampire has ther instinct and it is very different, did that make sense, and thanks for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: twilightme1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 10:15 PM Title: Trust

Ok so Bella is stupid for beliving Jacob over Edward. Hell the monster is better for her then Jacob... Dont keep up hanging



Author's Response:

I'm sorry hehe it ul all work out dont worry, and im a sucker for the cliffee's hehe :) thanks for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:03 PM Title: Trust

I can't belive Bella just walked away from Edward, I thought she loved him. She doesn't even know Jacob.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:15 PM Title: Trust

Did he really just let her walk away?!!



Author's Response:

yes yes he did, they are both as bad as each other, but its all for a purpose, i promise :) thank you very much for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:27 PM Title: Trust

Hmm! Evil Jacob. Wow! He really is evil. Poor Edward. They need to really form a bond the monster and Edward because in actually they are one in the same. He just needs to accept that he can't let go of the monster and vice versa. If they do both will die. 

Bella's innocent and I can see how Jacob can manipulate and deceive her. Let's just hope she picks it up more quickly. Hmm! I wonder what Emmett and Alice are saying to Bella. hmm! 

Hmm! I like how Edward is somewhat giving her a choice. hmm! I wonder what happens if Edward did leave? hmm! 

 

 

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:21 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger

OHHHH very interesting clue! lol Now I'm super excited! Thanks!



Author's Response:

Your very welcome hehe, i want you to be excited, i am, i cant wait to finish the next chapter :) xx

Reviewer: nybellanena Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:54 PM Title: Trust

I would like to believe that Bella isn't that stupid and naive...so I hope there's an excuse for her actions

 



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it will all become clear very soon, but she is a sucker im afraid. but she will see the truth very soon dont worry :) thanks for the review :) xx

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Trust

WOAH...what happened !?!?



Author's Response:

You will see very soon :) xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 12:43 AM Title: Trust

OMG did that just happen? What the hell bella? She is so gonna pay for that...i actually hope the monster comes out and rips her a new one she totally earned it. Plus monster edward is just sooo hot lmao Awesome chapter! Happy Easter!



Author's Response:

Yes I'm afraid it did :( she will pay dont worry :) And the monster shall not be the one to teach her the lesson, but i dont want to reveal too much at the moment. And thank you, happy easter to you too :) xx

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 11:49 PM Title: Trust

Well she will learn won't she update when you can thanks....



Author's Response:

she will learn :) dont you worry :) and thank you very much for the wonderful mugs :) xx

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Trust

Loved the chapter, =) as always,
can´t believe that she´s falling for Jacobs words.. silly Bella..

Happy Easter, Linda



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i knw but she will learn her lesson :) and thank you i hope you have a good easter too :) xx

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:30 PM Title: Notes

Jake is so messed up...I love it! Bella's in more over her head than she can even remotely comprehend. Poor Bella...she has no clue how scared she really should be right now. How do you come up with this stuff? I'm very pumped about the next chapter. Update update update :) :) :)

 

 



Author's Response:

:) im glad you like it and its jus bcos i hav a twisted little mind :) hehe and the update will be coming soon, thanks for the mugs :P i loves you xx

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Notes

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:01 PM Title: Doomed

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: 22amazing Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:01 PM Title: Notes

OH Crap, damn that jacob. Can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:20 AM Title: Notes

I can't believe that Bella is falling for Jacob's nonsense.  I like the way that you've made him so diabolical.  I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: chlon2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Notes

I really love this story. I also love how fast you update and dont leave us hangin forever. Can't wait for the next chapter. Good work as always!

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:11 AM Title: Notes

What the hell J?...Alice?!?!?

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:40 AM Title: Notes

hi....thank you for up dating .hope your new classes are good . i love the way you described the i love ou in the begining of this chapter the way bella hand was writing in edward chest it was so kind and romantic . i really liked . emmm i really love to know more about alice and emmet feeling toward to thir rose and jasper are they also have monster within themselves that alice and emmet recognized too

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:16 AM Title: Notes

Wow! Jacob's really crazy, deceitful, manipulative, and evil here in this story. This chapter is very well written you captured your version of the characters very well.

Hmm! I still am wondering who the vampire Carlisle was talking about. I wonder if it really is Tanya. Hmm! 

I somewhat want Jacob dead. Hmm!

Edward needs to learn to balance both the monster and his real self. We know he wouldn't hurt Bella but he still needs a balance. 

Will Emmett be changed? How about Bella?

 

 

 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:56 AM Title: Doomed

Hmm! So Carlisle hates Bella because she reminds him of Esme. Hmm! Kinda sad but in a way it's true. 

I was wrong how Edward was not there when she woke up. Hmm! They are going to need to talk soon.

Jasper and Carlisle are still mean to Bella ehh? I wonder about Rosalie but I think she'll still be mean too. Gah!


Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Unleashing the Monster

Aww! Very cute. Hmm! I'm still wondering who the other vampire is. Hmm! Tanya maybe? 

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:45 AM Title: Notes

:)

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:10 AM Title: Notes

OMG!!!

Bella could be so trusting.  I hope she doen't regret it in the end.

ek



Author's Response:

hehe you shall find out very soon :) xx

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:07 AM Title: Notes

Great chapter. I'm still worried about Jacob. I hope something happens that ruins his plans. :0) Is Edward the only vamp with a split personality like that? Just wondering because obviously Jasper has a dark side too. So why does Alice dislike Edward so much? Really enjoying reading this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :0)



Author's Response:

well you shall have to wait and see about jacob. And yes, edward is the only one with the split persona, because well, the other ones dont fight the dark side as much as edward, so they are at peace with the inner demon, whereas edward tries his hardest to subdue the beast :) And Alice just doesn't trust Edward, because she loves Bella, and she has seen the marks on her wrists and neck, and is worried. im glad your enjoying the story :) and the next chapter shouldn't take me too long. it is EPOV xx

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:55 PM Title: Notes

Jake is just as twisted as Edward!



Author's Response:

haha yh bt edward is alot sexier :) xxx cheers for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:11 PM Title: Notes

Loved it but really worried for her update when you can so excited....



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dont be too worried, everything will work out, and hopefully the update will be tomorrow, bt i dnt wanna promise anything :) xx

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:18 PM Title: Doomed

Awe...that was sad, but sweet. I understand Carlisle more now. No wonder it's so painful for him to see Bella and have her around. It's like a constant reminder of Esme. Bella just needs to open up and talk to Edward. BTW, I LOVED finally getting to "meet" Emmett! He's precious! I love his character :) :) And I'm also loving the whole Bella loving "two" indiviudals in one. Very "Buried Amogst The Begonias" (Awesome story BTW...you have to read that one if you haven't)

 

This story is getting better and better! Loving it, as always :) :) You better know I'm your number one fan ;) Talk to you soon!



Author's Response:

i have read it, and it is like my inspiration lol :)

im glad you enjoyed the chapter :) and i knw, i love Emmett and Carlisle is very tortured, but hopefully he can put it aside. 

thanks for the mugs, and yes i shall hear from you soon

and i knw your the number one fan hehe :) i love ya for it :) xxx

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:07 AM Title: Doomed

Pooer Carlisle!



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i knw :(

thanks for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:59 AM Title: Doomed

Interesting chapter,glade to get a glimpse of Carlise's reason for not liking Bella.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:11 AM Title: Doomed

that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks



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thank you very much, and thank you for the mugs :) xx

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:19 AM Title: Doomed

Really liked this chapter. Poor Edward having to fight the monster within himself. It was good to see why Carlisle hates Bella. I had wondered if it was for that reason. Perhaps he doesn't hate her as much as he thinks because he cared enough to talk with her and explain his feelings to her. If he truly hated her I don't think he'd care either way. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:12 AM Title: Doomed

Favorite lines:

"When you cage a beast, they get angry, they want revenge."-- Talk about good vs. evil! This line is perfect for this chapter!

"I wished he would just leave me alone, get out of my head!"--WOW this one was good!  Edward doesn't like the monster and this shows that he doesn't want to be one with the "beast!!"

"If the monster was part of the package, I would take it willingly--" I love this line because it shows the depths of Bella's love! She wants Edward either way!

"I tried to avoid my hips and throat, they were really painful to touch, but I didn’t mind. They were my little reminders of my night with the monster. I would be sad when they disappeared.-" This was so effective!! It says so much that she will be "sad" when the bruises are gone.  YOU ARE GOOD!!!

This chapter is gold!!! I REALLY like the deliniation between the monster that made love to Bella and the "true" Edward that woke up the morning after.  You did a great job showing Edward's remorse for actions that he can't yet control.

*resounding applause*



Author's Response:

I absolutely love your reviews, because you pick out all of my fav lines too :) the one with bella and the bruises was my ultimate fav :) and the fight between edward trying to break free :)

Im really glad your enjoying the story :) the next chapter should be up soon :) thank you very much for reviewing :) xx

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:29 AM Title: Doomed

sweet

Reviewer: SouthernBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster

Woman!! You should see my face. It looks like :-O!! LOVE this chapter...hahaha I am speechless! Seriously...you are SO past rockstar status! I don't have a word for that because "rockstar" is totally usually the best props I know how to give...but you've surpassed it :) :) You're a word I don't know!! LOL

Sorry I've been MIA! Life threw me for a loop, but I'm back! I've missed this story. It's too fantastic for words :) :) So how's everything going with college? I just graduated this past December. I miss it...it's hard, but so much fun once you learn to balance everything. Gah I've got to send you my email! It was asking you all about college and such. Anyway, I'm about to head out for the night so I'm going to make myself stop tying so I can finish getting ready. (I'm always the last person finished getting dressed. But you know what they say: never rush a lady!) Hope life is FANTASTIC and can't wait for your next update :) Talk to you soon



Author's Response:

:) your reviews always make me smile :) thank you very much :) im glad you liked it, i was very worried that i had ruined it lol cos well u knw how nervous i was about making a sex scene, or maybe u didn't lol

and its alright, i understand u hav a life outside of my story :) hehe and erm yh uni is gr8 :) its only the first week, so havnt done tht much rli, jus lik introductions lol bt next week is gna b difficult. Im gonna try get the next chapter out this weekend :) cos even if im constantly doing work, i will always try make time for the story, cos well im wanting to get it all out of my head haha, its jus floating around in there haha im as excited as everyone else :)

i hope to get ur email soon :) and hope you have a gd nite out :) xx

Reviewer: MrsZ49 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:33 AM Title: Beautiful Stranger

Intresting! Why did he hit her! Is this Edward, or another Vampire??? I like it!



Author's Response:

im glad your enjoying it :) and you shall have to keep reading to find out :) xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:44 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster

nice job! well done! :)



Author's Response:

thank you very much :) xx

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 9:14 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster

Yay finally! Totally worth the wait I loved it!



Author's Response:

oh thank you very much, im very glad it lived up to your expectations :) xx

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