Date: 04 Nov 2015 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved this mystifying story...
any possibilities of answering some of the many unanswered questions?
such as, why, how and HOW?
:)
wish there was a way to make her be more permanent rather than
having to jump back into the canvas every night. although, i suppose
he can spend ALL of the time with her and have his downtime
while she rests on the canvas...still would love for them to be
able to have their forever and perhaps even a family...if they want!
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
That was actually a very sweet story. I liked it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
OK A LITTLE BIZARRE BUT ENJOYABLE
Author's Response:
LOL, thank you so much. I have a bizarre brain sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
VERY INTERESTUNG START
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Another goodie. Your stories leave me wanting more. A sure sign of a good writer. Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I really appreciate that.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Okay, mission accomplished, I have big goose bumps! That was wonderful, as in full of wonder, most definitely! When Edward's eyes filled with tears, mine kind of misted up too! Should have known Alice wouldn't steer him wrong. He forgot the emerald, that seems to be the catalyst for the magic, though I'm not sure why. Maybe it has something to do with how Bella died and became Edward's muse. Interesting to theorize. Sure am glad my daughter(1918) nagged me to read your story. She told me I would love it, and sure enough I did!
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
This could become a real problem for Bella and Edward, if they can't find a way to be together for more than an hour. Turning to paint and disappearing isn't helping much either. How is he painting a dead girl he's never seen and conjuring her to semi-life, and making love with her? Curiouser and curiouser!
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Fairly clear on what happened, just not sure of how and totally in the dark as to why! Edward's painting of the darkhaired girl with emerald, got down off the canvas and got all over him, literally. Quite passionately, too, I might add!
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Okay, now it's getting interesting and spooky!, What is so different about these paints? Why would it make Edward sick to his stomach to mix them with his old paints? Last, but not least, why is the dream emerald on the dream girl, who's not in a forest, but on a rock in the sea? Questions, question!
Date: 03 Sep 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Don't know if I've ever met a more different Edward in a story. The idea of his paintings, I must admit, is very intriguing. The way he dreamt of the emerald and the darkhaired girl in the forest pretty much grabbed my attention too. Ever onward!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your reviews. I am so glad you enjoyed this story.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
*Giggling* I loved your story so, so much. Thank-you for your wonderful imagination and great writing! =)
Author's Response:
Thank you again.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well now I'm feeling scared, sad, and frustrated. But I just love your story, it's such a puzzle. =)
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:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
:O What, she comes out of the painting, they make love, and then she's melted, or what? I immediately assumed that the white blob of paint on the floor next to his bed was her dress. I'm frowning now, because what if he keeps painting her and she keeps disappearing? Those magic paints that he bought aren't going to last forever, are they? Oh, I had to mention that the new cab driver sure sounded like Emmett, and the tiny woman at the paint store sure sounded like Alice. I can't wait to finish your story, only two chapters left. =)
Author's Response:
I love all your thoughts, you know all your answers now, but I appreciate you taking the time to review every chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is so cool; I love it! I'm excited to read the rest! =)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I had a very mysterious feel as I was writing this, it was very unique for me and I'm glad it came across.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooo, I can't wait to read the rest. My curiousity is in overdrive. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 18 Apr 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOAH! I LOVE IT! I really loved the ending. I almost cried at the fact that Bella was human but isn't anymore. But it's still happy! I just wonder what happened to Bella and what happened to her before she died and how she died. Did she burn or something? I really wanna know. I hope that there will be an outtake or something. That would really be awesome. LOVE YOUR STORY!! :DDDDD
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...an outtake eh? Hmmmm, maybe....
Date: 08 Apr 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your smilies , I'm glad you enjoyed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
So sweet! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is such a mystery!
Author's Response:
Yes, this is my first shot at mystery, glad it came across.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
She came alive & then returned to paint? he's going to be painting her a lot, I think!
Author's Response:
LOL, more like shedding.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love the dreams! I cannot wait to see what the special paints do either ---- loving the story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, so glad you are enjoying
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
So interesting!!!
Author's Response:
THank you so much
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
You are truly wonderful. I'm crying. Thank you so much for such a lovely short!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Aw, please bring her back.....for him!
Author's Response:
Don't worry. Thanks for reading.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very intriguing. Hum, on to the next page. You got me!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Intriguing.
Author's Response:
Thanks again
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful
Author's Response:
Thank you so much