Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 41
Damn it you made me cry
Author's Response:
Don't worry--this is a Peter/Bella story, isn't it?
Date: 11 Sep 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed reading! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 40
Hmmmm....... I'm glad Peter got to Bella and that stuff is still up in the air. I think if someone needs a sacrifice, it should be Carlisle. LOL
Author's Response:
Oh, I agree completely that Carlisle needs to sacrifice himself--whether willingly or unwillingly. Thanks for reading and chiming in.
Date: 11 Sep 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11 Sep 2017 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you for the update and can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
You're welcome. I hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 25 Aug 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Bella! What will she chose?
Author's Response:
What will she choose? That's an excellent question. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
I hope you update soon all your stories. So good. I enjoy them. Please update more often. The stories keep you on the edge of your seat.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Aug 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 39
Well damn... I hope her and Peter get their happily ever after
Author's Response:
I hope they get their HEA, too. BTW, I'm known as the queen of the HEAs. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 39
That is aweful. Everyone is getting along just fine as supernaturals. She can't leave Peter. She should stay a vampire.
Author's Response:
Are they truly happy as supernaturals, though? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Aug 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
NOOOO WTF that was so not cool woman. It was a great chapter but I want to bitch slap Taha Aki and Didi to Bangkok.
Author's Response:
Aw...Taha Aki and Didi aren't that bad. Besides, sending them to Bangkok might be fun for them. I heard the food is absolutely delicious there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 13 Aug 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 38
i glad alice is dead
Author's Response:
Yes, it's probably better that she's gone, but at least she redeemed herself (slightly) in the end. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 38
Dun dun dun till the next chapter. How many chapters are left in this one if you don't mind me asking? Thank you for the update and I hope to see another soon.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. The story is complete, but unfortunately, I cannot tell you how many chapters remain--we'll call that author's privilege. ;) I will post regularly until the end--every week or two--because some weeks are just ridiculously busy for me. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 38
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 Aug 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. It was a fun chapter to write. :) XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
Welcome back!!! I can't tell you how excited I was to see this update!!! And what a great chapter to come back with! I absolutely can't WAIT to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2017 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loving it! Great story.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Author's Response:
I'm happy you like it. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 29 Jul 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 36
Woohoo thank you for the update I love it and can't wait for more please update ASAFP.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the update. Thanks for reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 28 Jul 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
Awesome chapter! Go Bella and Heidi! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Bella and Heidi are awesome! Next chapter will be fun. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2017 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please u need to finish this. I am so excited to read the end luv it chapter 36 need the next chapter please.
Date: 27 Jul 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
I could not stop laughing at the Walmart visit.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 36
great to see you back at it great job with this ch
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 26 Jul 2017 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 36
BEYOND FANTASTIC! I'VE MISSED YOU!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2017 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
wowsers. There are so many that need to die!!! Welcome back
Author's Response:
Yeah, we need to kill off a few bad vamps. Thanks for helping me get this chapter up XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
I know it has been years since you've updated the story, and I hope this review finds you having a good day. I would love to see more of the story, but I understand if that doesn't happen. You are a gifted author and I love reading all of your work :-)
Date: 08 May 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 29 Mar 2017 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hate Carlisle, Edward, Alice and Charlotte!
Date: 29 Mar 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Esme! Loved it!
Date: 28 Mar 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
I hate Carlisle and his family except Rosalie, Emmett, and Jasper!
Date: 28 Mar 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Poor Emmett and Rosalie!
Date: 28 Mar 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Victoria is hilarious!
Date: 10 Dec 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon i absolutely love this story hope you will be finishing this story
Date: 06 Apr 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 35
PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE
Date: 03 Apr 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
cant wait for you to update i wanna see what happens too oxoxox brandi neri
Date: 20 Oct 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well I just want to say I love this story,You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart".It is full of action ,adventure and it is just plain funny, I can't wait to see how it ends!
Sincerely, L.Jacox
Date: 19 Oct 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just want to let you know that I am loving your story, "You'll
Find What Your Looking for at Walmart". It is so different not to mention funny as all get out. Can never wait to see what happens next!! Keep up the excellent work!!
Sincerely, L.Jacox
Date: 17 Mar 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are you going to update this story, it was good funny and I enjoyed it
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am rereading this story, and Jane propelling Alice into the tomatoes is just as funny now as it was the first time hahaha. I know you've not updated in a long time on this story, and while I would love more updates, I hope RL is going well for you. Thank you for making me laugh so much!!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 35
I'm really enjoying this story - will it be continued? Thank you.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
this was wonderful.... are they gonna get carlise? is this finished?
Date: 25 Feb 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'd have fried the bratty pervert, too. Yes, it was a mistake to kill Edward before finishing his interrogation, but sometimes you gotta do what you've gotta do.
It's been a while since I've had the chance to do any real reading, and I always come back to check your stories. I can only assume that you and your family have been hit by the insane weather on the east coast over the last few months; it's a lot more immediate than writing stories, that's for damn sure. I sincerely hope that you and your family are all right and we will be waiting until you get back. Take care.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
I haven't read this chapter yet, which I'm sure is totes awesome. Since PM is disabled, just wanted to write and say I hope RL is going ok for you, miss you on here, and wishes for a happy 2013! Lots of love, Angelbones76
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 35
Yay!! I was so happy to see this chap in my inbox! But because it has been so long I had to reread the story. That is why it took so long for a review otherwise I would have reviewed the day I saw it in my inbox. Is Alice gonna be like Victoria from Eclipse? Is she going to create her own newborn army? Was that Fernando that took out Fatima? Awe, in the end I kinda felt bad for Edward til he went on the rant about the Quileutes. I think they coulda pumped more info out of him then ripped him apart but I understand where Sam was coming from, because my brother is the same way. Very protective over his sisters. I definitely enjoyed the chapter, specially Uncle Quil's rant about James Cameron and Titanic in 3D. Personally I had no problem with the original, a didnt even go see the remake, 3D tends to give me massive headaches.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 35
Buh bye fuckward. Though I agree they shpuldhave Interogated him more.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
I had my family worried for my sanity as I laughed like a lunatic at the mental picture of Alice in a shopping cart wearing a helmet. OMG. Hilarious!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 35
I can definitely understand why they lost it and got rid of Edward. At least at the end, Edward sorta saw where he had gone wrong. I love all the detailed characters of this story.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 35
Alice can be a big problem. Edward Cullen roasted and will continue in his roast for eternity.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 35
cant wait for more never stop your a good writer.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 35
AMAZING!!! Finally another group of the Evils down. I can understand why they decided to kill him so quickly, but also understand Jasper's frustration at not getting a bit more information before ending him. Can't wait to read more and see what Crazy Alice is up to! :) So glad that RL is getting a bit easier and you have time to write again I have missed your updates!! :)
-Kate
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Heard a little rumor (ok, I read it on a Facebook group page) that you might be updating soon. Crossing my fingers. I love your Peter like he was flesh and blood, woman!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 34
I absolutely love this story!!!
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 34
I cant wait till you update this story!!!! Please please update soon. This has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read. Hope all is well at home.
Author's Response:
Had some RL issues that needed my attention. WIll update soon. Thank you for your kind words.
Author's Response:
Had some RL issues that needed my attention. WIll update soon. Thank you for your kind words.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
I definitely have to go with Def Leppard on a Trans Am. A pinto is just plain EW. Trans Am's are the bad boy car
Author's Response:
Def Leppard on a Trans Am is a good thing. And Charlie used to be a bad boy. *winks*
Date: 03 Jul 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Too bad Wal-Mart didn't last in Germany ! ;)
Author's Response:
I never knew that fact. Still Germany is a wonderful country. I'd love to visit again.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
you evil thing.. you cant leave it here. dang it. i am really enjoying this story. i am glad you told me to start with it first :)
Author's Response:
More coming soon. I promise. I'm just getting my groove back after dealing with home issues. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
Can't wait for the update! Just re-read everything as I had started reading it months ago on ff.net. Alice has no conscience but she was born and bred that way. Unfortunatly it is the nature vs nurture in effect. There is no way to save her, Edward, or anyone else manipulated by Carlisle and the Romanians. Loved the twister heat fight. And the girls fighting as well. Maria did the right thing in making them use real fighting skills instead of just practice. Positive renforcement....again nature vs nuture. Amun and Kebi are way too brainwashed. Amun is only good for information, but given the right motivation Kebi could be convinced to go on their side. So....how many chapters are you planning on continuing? Just kinda wondering if you don't want to say thats ok.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry the update is taking so long. I've had some issues at home that absolutely needed my attention. Alice has absolutely no conscience and it's ironic how close Bella came to becoming like her considering her upbringing, but she was saved by her visits to Forks during the summers. She was loved unconditionally by her father, Sarah Black, Aunt Molly, and Uncle Quil. Kebi really needs to be put out of her misery and Amun is just too brainwashed. He did give good info though. Not too many chapters left in this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
I need a spit guard for my computer. I'm laughing my ass off over here! The nuns. OMG, the nuns!
Author's Response:
Peter really was on his very best behavior with the nuns. Honest.
Date: 08 May 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 34
Wow a really great chapter, alot of action going on, I had to re-read it 2-3 times before i got everything. Can't wait till next chapter.....Anne-Marie
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 34
I think that Kebi is a sad, brainwashed soul that honestly believes women are inferior to men. This is from "Pretty Woman", but it is absolutely true: "If people put you down enough, you start to believe it."
As for Amun, for some reason I do not feel as bad for him as I do Kebi. I am not exactly sure why either.
I like Aunt Molly and her fierceness!!
LOVED this chapter of course!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Kebi is exactly how you described her. You shouldn't feel bad for Kebi because he made Kebi who she is. And Aunt Molly is awesome--she made Bella who she is. Remember that for future chapters, it wasn't Renee who had the most influence on Bella...it was Aunt Molly. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 May 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 34
Jiffy Lube.. I died laughing.
Wow .. good chapter Mama.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 May 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 34
Embry: lol for embry getting a prom date. lol for ALice holding up customs. WOw Carlisle is really going nuts. Can understand why he is having a hard time accepting Josh. Marcus' vaccine is such a great thing. Wow Poor Kebi being stuck with those slimy sharer boys. ROFL for being process served. Glad Jenks is far away enjoying his life away from the madness. awww poor Carlisle getting upset cause no one is calling him back....ROFL.
Garrett: Hmm hope the twister science works. Wow Amun is a real pussy. Go Ben!!! Go Bella and Picia!!!. LOL for the wolves overheating from Ben. Feel sorry for Kebi being mated to that arsehole. LOL for Aro inserting the Allah reference. OMG for the Lorena B references. LOVE strong Aunt Molly. Wow he really is brainwashed. Dear lord, does Carlisle have some gift no one knows about? Garrett was smart flipping the convo to "joining". lol for Jiffy Lube comment. Ahh time to catch Malice and Pussyward. LOL for kids whining about homework.
CYA next chapter hun
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 34
loved it.'ugh hate carlisle more and more....poor'kebi tough so manipulated and brainwashed. cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
We should feel sorry for Kebi, but unfortunately she's mated to a monster. Carlisle is atrocious. More coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 May 2012 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
It's entirely possible that Alice is hoping to kill two birds with one stone--that both groups will fight to the death and she can take out the winner in the end when they are weakened. She may blame both the La Push faction as well as Carlisle for Charlotte's death: one for the actual killing and the other for giving the order that lead to her death. Or she may simply have snapped and is going from lie to lie without a plan since her gift is failing her. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Alice has snapped and she's operating on her own agenda now. More to come soon. I apologize for the delay. I had issues at home that required my attention. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 02 May 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 34
awesome chapter! so excited for the twists and turns in the plot ;)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 02 May 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 34
LOVED IT!!! :) Poor Embry... remember no mercy for the enemy.... Loved that Charlie was there helping Benjamin with his powers. Bella and Picia... awesome! Aunt Molly gotta love her :) both Amun and Kebi have been brainwashed so badly... Can't wait to read more.... hope your muse stays with you and the chapters come out the way you are comfortable with... :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Amun and Kebi have been terribly brainwashed, but Amun is also responsible for Kebi's state. Bella and Picia have become awesome fighters. Charlie is a phenomenal father. Embry's a kind soul and his reaction is typical of someone who has never been to war. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 23 Mar 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
PPOV: wow the wolf explosion is cool. aww for lung cancer wolf being healed. ROFL about evil teacher swan. lol for Charlie's school rant. Stipend for classroom supplies? maybe in the 50s but not today. Love Maria tell the men they are coddling Ben. The bloodlust vaccine is really cool. lol for Josh and Aro ratting out the kid and Caius. Cant wait to see what B does. Bella is such a cool caretaker for them all. Yeah for getting away for private time.
Author's Response:
I wanted to allow Benjamin to behave more like a teenager who'd always been searching for a father figure. In the original series, his character is more or less sheltered by Amun who cared and protected him only because he wielded a great power. I gave Benjamin a group of vampires to nurture him because they truly cared for his well-being--not because he could control elements. Oh, and you're darn tooting' that there's no stipend for school supplies--I'm sure you know what a toll the beginning of the school year takes on your pocketbook.
As for Pete and Bella's alone time--it was about time! All of this stress isn't healthy. Thanks for sticking with me and for your awesome feedback. We'll be getting into some action beginning next chapter as the Cullens return to the United States. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Mar 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 33
Another great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Mar 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
Well first I am sorry to hear about this story being stolen :(
Loved this chapter... gotta love how great men babysit LOL .... Love that Ben is acting more his age... Can't wait to see Cauis' punishment! I knew that Josh would imprint on Tiffany!!! :) yay for them! :) and finally some alone time for Bella and Peter... long overdue :) Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
These men fight, babysit, and sing karaoke. Charlie's a good dad--he's brought Ben back to life. Ah, Caius...naughty, naughty. Josh has been meant for Tiffany from the get go. Bella and Peter deserved some alone time. More coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 33
Haha, Brewmaster is on cheater patrol, hahahaha!
"Now, boys, before you take out the nasty vampires, be sure and finish your homework!" Haha
Haha, no matter her age, Blanca is still Daddy's little girl :)
The sight of Aro peeling carrots just cracks me up! It's almost as funny as him singing "Dont'cha" :)
I would SO love to go on a karaoke night with Aro!!!
I really like how everyone is working to put the Cullen cluelessness to their advantage :)
Author's Response:
Brewmaster is very loyal to Bella. LMAO! I love your little quip, "Now, boys, before you take out the nasty vampires, be sure and finish your homework!"
Yes, Aro peels carrots now--maybe I should have him peel carrots while he sings karaoke?
More coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 32
well Alice knows.... I guess that proves that they really were true mates, I don't think she would have known any other way..... Stupid Edward ...ugh can't wait to see him go down.... and I can't believe (well maybe I can because they are so evil) that they were going to kill Tia and blame it on the quileute wolves. Loved hearing from Uncle Quil :) So glad that Tiffany knows everything.... (oh and I think that Joshua is gonna imprint on her!) Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Alice knows and that can work either in favor of the good or the bad guys. Her instability makes her a liabitlity to one or both sides. Only time will tell. Edward is selfish, but we all knew that. Yes, Tia was going to be killed--now you have an explanation for Amun suddenly letting Tia and Benjamin go. His plan backfired though and they've lost, possibly, their greatest asset. Tiffany deserved to know everything. I've always felt this way. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
Well, I am a fan for life, now that you've mentioned my two favorite True Blood characters: Alcide AND Eric...haha :)
Well, I think it only appropo that Ben and Tia take Amun out together. What a jerk...
I like how everything is working together and I like how they are doing the best they can to max themselves out on learning to kick some serious butt!!
Author's Response:
Amun's plan backfired in a huge way. Our group is learning to live and work together in peace.
Alcide and Eric--yep, they are two gorgeous male specimen. Man alive--none of the Twilight actors compare to those two.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes