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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2023 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 46

Great epilogue 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it! Poor Bella!

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it! Poor Sam! I don't like Edward!

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it 

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 32

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 04 Nov 2022 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 27 Oct 2022 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it. 

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Date: 26 Oct 2022 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 26 Oct 2022 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it 

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

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Date: 24 Oct 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hilarious chapter! I absolutely love Aro!

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it 

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it 

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Poor Esme!

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved  it 

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

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Date: 23 Oct 2022 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Luna sFfalenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

I have truly loved reading this story. So far I'm only on chapter 12 and I have never laughed as much as I have while reading some others. The way that you have written these characters is absolutely fantastic and I love it. Great job and I look forward to reading the rest of this story. You are a great writer. 

Reviewer: Luna sFfalenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

I have truly loved reading this story. So far I'm only on chapter 12 and I have never laughed as much as I have while reading some others. The way that you have written these characters is absolutely fantastic and I love it. Great job and I look forward to reading the rest of this story. You are a great writer. 

Reviewer: Luna sFfalenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

I have truly loved reading this story. So far I'm only on chapter 12 and I have never laughed as much as I have while reading some others. The way that you have written these characters is absolutely fantastic and I love it. Great job and I look forward to reading the rest of this story. You are a great writer. 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter! I don't like Carlisle,  Alice,  Charlotte, or Edward!

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter! I don't like Carlisle,  Alice,  Charlotte, or Edward!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2020 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

Terrific!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2019 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! Poor Peter!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2019 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! Poor Peter!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2019 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

This story is hilarious. How do you keep all the names straight??

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Poor Esme!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

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Date: 14 May 2018 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter!

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Date: 14 May 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

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Date: 14 May 2018 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 46

sweet ending.  Glad they all got a HEA.  Ty for writing and sharing with us all.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 45

aww for them meeting.  It is nice that she is just Bella back home.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 44

B doesn't see herself clearly does she.  Nice that she has family to help her find her passion in life

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 43

Nice seeing them all having family time.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 42

Well well well.  Nice that the kids are all having normal lives

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 41

Just cruel to make B suffer more

Reviewer: tsalagi mama Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 46

I have waited for this ending for a very long time. Excellent and well worth it! 

 

Wado, Mama, Wado. (Thank you.)

Reviewer: rkelekoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2018 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 46

I absolutely loved this story. You are an amazing story teller.

Thank you for all your hard work and for finishing Peter and

Bellas story.

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2018 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 46

THANK you!   T

Reviewer: onlyareader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am so sad to see this story end. Thank you for the many hours of escapism.

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 46

Oh my word! I did not know this had so many updates! I like how it ended, and thank you for writing it!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 46

I always hate for a great story to end.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 45

I didn’t know that Christmas also came in March. Loved all the updates.

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 41

that was just mean to leave us hanging lol 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 41

I know you love HEA but I'm still mad

ad

Ridiculous that Bella has to continue to suffer for everyone else. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 40

Charlie is too funny.   Wow, the spirit world is getting crowded.  LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 39

Wow everyone is on the Use Bella train.  Jeez.  Can she catch a break anywhere?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 38

Glad Bella was able to get through to the Psycho at the end at least.  Vlad got off easy

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 37

Gotta Love Aunt Molly.  She's gonna be badass.

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2017 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

I cannot believe how much I am loving this story!!!  At first I thought that I wouldn't because I have always preferred bella/edward but I am loving peter...and I love how you are able to tie everyone else in as your story progresses...and I absolutely love all of the Wal-Mart interactions!!!  Plus it has been awhile since I laughed out loud while reading facfiction but you are just great at bringing out the humor!!!

Reviewer: Luner Kat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 41

....why!!!!!! 

Omg how can you rip my heart in two...

 

Please.. please.... please get them back to each other...  

 

The feels....

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

So far...this is just crazy!!!!  I love it!!!

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

So far...this is just crazy!!!!  I love it!!!

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 41

in all the months that i have been waiting for you to start updating this story i did not see you going this way with the story please tell me that bella and peter find there way back to each and they find the rest of there vampire family i think bella is thinking of everyone else and is going to regret making peter forget about her looing forward to seeing where you go from hear with this story so please update soon 

 

sincerly 

reneesmay 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Reguardless they still need one.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 41

WTFH I really want to bitch slap those fuckers they are now the top of my fictional bitch slap list.



Author's Response:

Ah...but spirit warriors can't go back on their word--they have to be creative about things.

 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 41

OMG.....I am bawling now.  Why can't Peter and Bella just live as vamps together for eternity?   My HEA is definitely ruined now.  I am so sad.  Peter forgets Bella even existed???  I hate that.   

You better duck.  Here comes a tomato.  Big meanie....  :(      LOL



Author's Response:

Don't worry. This is not the last chapter (far from it) and I'm a firm believer in HEA's.

Reviewer: queenbee311 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 41

Jerks



Author's Response:

Hmm...you might change your mind about them in a later chapter. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 41

Damn it you made me cry

Author's Response:

Don't worry--this is a Peter/Bella story, isn't it?

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed reading! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 40

Hmmmm.......  I'm glad Peter got to Bella and that stuff is still up in the air.   I think if someone needs a sacrifice, it should be Carlisle.   LOL



Author's Response:

Oh, I agree completely that Carlisle needs to sacrifice himself--whether willingly or unwillingly. Thanks for reading and chiming in.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 40

Thank you for the update and can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. I hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!  Poor Bella!  What will she chose? 



Author's Response:

What will she choose? That's an excellent question. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: Cherie100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 37

I hope you update soon all your stories. So good. I enjoy them. Please update more often. The stories keep you on the edge of your seat.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

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