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Reviewer: Razeus1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 2:16 AM Title: Of Trouble in paradise 'n Mending Fences

Ohh, how I Love this chapter! The interplay between the characters is very much smile-worthy.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:12 PM Title: Of Trouble in paradise 'n Mending Fences

I LOVE this story...hope you date again. 

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 5:00 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

Wow Edward's human again.  

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:18 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

VERY EMOTIONAL

Reviewer: Eternal TwilightFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 6:59 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

Please keep writing the story I really enjoyed it, at the mopment the only happiness in my life right now is reading stories like this.


I really enjoyed the chapter and I hope to enjoy the rest of the story.

Eternal TwilightFan.

Reviewer: wcdelagarza Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 10:07 PM Title: Of Trouble in paradise 'n Mending Fences

great story...look forward to the update

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 4:14 AM Title: Of Trouble in paradise 'n Mending Fences

Thanks so much for the headsup, and good luck with your finals, may you ace them all! It's a bit wierd for Esme, Rosalie and Edward to no longer be vampires, but I'm really enjoying this story of yours! Looking forward to the upcoming chapters, to see how Victoria will be dealt with, and what is ahead for Bell and the Cullens!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 4:09 AM Title: Of Trouble in paradise 'n Mending Fences

I loved it...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

I am loving this. Edward is funny and ... human.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

love it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 2:57 AM Title: Of belated reunions and blissful unions

all I can do is smile.  I got the 3rd person. It is you..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 2:32 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

I know the drama factor. She loves him and he loves her. He did this for her. How much love is that? He gave up forever to give her a life time.  That is beyond wonderful. I think.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 2:14 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

great start

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 1:46 AM Title: Of Trouble in paradise 'n Mending Fences

Great chapter.  Love the putting the skanks in thier place.   Yeah for Em and all coming back.

Reviewer: LoviV Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

What an interesting story line.  I can't wait to see what you have in. Kind for the next chapter.

Reviewer: swimsing4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

this is sooooooo good!!!! Dont worry all good writers have truble with there stories!!!!!!!! youll get it soon



Author's Response:

thanks, I sure hope so. :) I'm glad you like it :) 

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

Now don't tell me you are going on hyatus when I just discovered the story ....

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2012 8:22 AM Title: Of belated reunions and blissful unions

About lemons: It is a moot point now, I see you have changed the rating. I dislike stories where it is just a lemon after another and no plot. However, if the story goes there, I also dislike fading to black. Because the way two persons make love gives another insight in their story and personalities. So I learned to write them (And in another language, since I am Italian!). In 1900 I even tried a Victorian Lemon (Poeople did not make love in the same way along the centuries. For instance a Victorian would be horrified by BJs (only whores were supposed to do that at the time), while Mr. Clinton maintained he was not even "having sex" with Monica ...

 



Author's Response:

Hi, I saw you reviewed several chapters but I'm going to reply to all of them at once. Hope you don't mind, lol. First things first: welcome to the story and thank you for reading it in the first place. I am glad you like my idea. I honestly don't know where it came from. Just popped into my mind one day. As for the lemons, no, this is not going to be a story full of smut with no storyline. It's going to have  a plot with a few juicy parts here and there. The lemon I wrote for this story is my first ever and I am not yet comfortable enough with lemons. So you don't need to worry about that part. :) As for the hiatus... I am sorry in advance. It's just that I have so many ideas for this story that my options are incredibly tangled and I need some time to sort them out and decide where I'm going to go with this. Also, I am currently near the finish line of my other multichapter story and most of the inspiration I get is involved with it. And last but most definitely not least, I am in my senior year of high-school and I have finals in 2 weeks - bloody difficult finals, then I have my country's version of an SAT test in about 2 months so I'm pretty busy studying. 

By the way, I love your country :) I always wanted to go there... I hope to visit one day.

Oh and thanks for adding me to your faves, it means a lot.

 

Hope I answered all your questions if I left anything out, let me know.

 

have a great day/evening,

 

Anna

 

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2012 7:27 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

Hey, great  idea and great start! I just added you to my faves.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

What would constitute a family emergency, I wonder? Things were sort of getting back to normal, and Bella and Edward were having some fun with the gossip. All things considered, I thought life was going pretty smoothly right now!



Author's Response:

It's not a family emergency per say. It was more of an excuse to get Bella and Edward out of class... Their life is smooth... mostly. However, there are some issues that need to be addressed sooner rather than later. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

lol for Eddie still not wanting to be in her pants.  LOL  but I agree they do need to actually do dating stuff this time.   Woo Hoo Em is back

Reviewer: Tonia Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

NOOOO!!! Dont give up!!! I am really wondering now who all was "Cured" as it were.



Author's Response:

I am NOT giving it up. Don't worry. I just need some time to sort out all the ideas I have for this story and to decide where I'm going with it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

Yeah Emmett's back. I wo dee who he brought with him. 

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama

I read this chapter over at ff.net awhile ago, and I'm so glad that your not going to give up on this story.  It's one of my favorites.  I wonder what the emergancy was that Emmett had to get them out of class? I can't wait to read whats going to happen next.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

yeah, you're one of my 'regulars' - I remember you. Thank you for the constant support. It means a lot to me. :) Sorry for not updating this chapter lately, it's just that I have so many ideas for this story and I need to sort them out. Real Life is also pretty hectic right now what with my senior year finals and Bulgarian version of SAT looming on the horizon... Yeah...

Anyway, just to put your mind at ease - the 'emergency' was more of an excuse to get B & E out of class. There is an upcoming issue, however, but it's nothing that can't / or won't be dealt with. (I haven't told this to anyone else, so you can consider yourself special) lol

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

They were just too cute in this chapter. I love Edward coming to the door with a baseball bat and scaring Bella half to death. LOL! It was cute how she was jealous of her pillow in his sleeping arms. I love the cooking lesson banter that they took from his kitchen into the store. This is a totally new experience for them to share. I love it that they stuck it Lauren and that Bella countered her rude statement by telling her to do her job. Awesome!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 8:57 PM Title: Of belated reunions and blissful unions

It was nice to see Bella still had some insecurities about Edward to work through in her head before deciding to see him.

I thought the declaration that morphed into a couple passionate kisses before turning into Bella and Edward having sex for the time was handled really well. You do need to go through and change some pronouns because it slips in and out of third person. Third person was a good choice with how you showed both reactions to what was happening.

It was funny that they slept on the floor instead of finding a room with a bed. I had to laugh at the cold feet argument which turned into Edward tickling her. Love the last line and sentiment. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful reviews! :) I'm glad you like the story. 

Actually, you are the only person that got why I was doing the third person PoV... :D  Yeah I know about the pronouns and I tell myself that I'll fix them every time and then I just forget... lol I'm forgetful. Well, they slept on the floor because making love was impulsive? and because Edward doesn't have a bed in his room yet (mainly because of that.) 

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 8:11 PM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

Wow! What a great father/daughter talk and I liked that it was in Charlie's POV. I love how Charlie, still the cop, was looking for holes in Edward's story as Bella talked. Bella was good in playing along and not revealing too much about Edward, yet still telling her dad how she felt. It was great when Charlie expressed that he was willing to give him a second chance and why. Most of all, I liked that Charlie accepted that this was her decision with Edward to make about her future and encouraged her to make it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

You're right, this was a very good chapter. The breakfast, the grocery shopping, and especially putting down Lauren.  I am curious about one thing, though, why has it been so very long since you have posted a chapter? I sure hope it's nothing awful, as this is a really good story and such a different premise. I would hate for it to be abandoned, just when things were getting good! Please let your readers know if you intend to finish this story. Thanks a lot!



Author's Response:

hey there,

I'm so very glad you like my story. :) I hope you don't mind but I'll use this one reply to answer to all of your reviews. 

I do plan on finishing this story. Unfortunately, real life gets in the way quite often. I'm on a summer job right now and it tires me (12 hour shifts... Just sayin'). Also, about the lemon, don't worry, you're not old and all, I'm just inexperienced. I felt weird writing it in first person simply because I wouldn't know what to write about. I've done my research and God knows I've read my fare share of fanfics, but as I've come to notice, reading about something and experiencing it is quite different... So if this little thing was out of place it is definitely my fault. Perhaps, I'll rewerite it at some point. 

The other reason aside from Real Life, that keeps me from updating say - once a week or so - is the fact that I have two other stories I need to update. I'm sorry it takes me so long, it's just that I can be a damn perfectioninst when it comes to my writing and I know just how great it feels to read a well written chapter. 

That being said, I'm working on the next chapter, so it shouldn't be too long.

 

Have a great day and thanks for your opinion and honesty. It means a lot.

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:26 AM Title: Of belated reunions and blissful unions

No need to rewrite anything, you did well for your first attempt. Bella and Edward being happy and in love has always made me happy, too. Third person got a bit confusing, but that's probably because I'm old and confused, so don't worry about it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:08 AM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

How about both? First, I'm a big girl and love lemons, lemonade and all things citrus, so go for it! As for Charlie and Bella I think you did a great job of father/daughter communicating. Charlie was pretty brave to share his feelings with Bella the way he did, knowing it probably means having Edward in her life again. I've watched my husband with our only daughter, for forty-eight years, and trust me, daddies never get over protecting their little girls, and you captured that sense quite well!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:46 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

Having a soft spot in my heart for Edward, I'm going to cut him some slack and hope Bella does likewise. The guy is pretty eloquent, baring his heart like that, hoping Bella will forgive him and take him back. Wait until she hears the full story, that should soften her up!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:22 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

Needless to say, I'm intrigued by this beginning, by Edward showing up in Charlie's office, looking human, green-eyed and telling this fantastic tale! What in the world has been going on with the Cullens? Have the Volturi found a 'cure' for vampirism? Or could there be another explanation? I can barely wait to find out!

Reviewer: Mztlynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 10:58 PM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

Just found this story. I really like it. :) Good chap.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: dann965 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

Please updte soon.

I wanna know what happen to the rest of the Cullens, and how they'll handle the pack and Victoria.

Reviewer: lorens Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

lmbo!! i can picture lauren's expression... cant wait for more

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 2:27 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

Edward definitely talks well under the gun. I am glad Bella heard him out. I think she just needs some time to digest it all. I love Edward's line to Jacob and that he showed that he wasn't intimidated by him.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 2:03 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

It was nice to Edward and not Alice explain why he broke Bella's heart when the family moved. It was good to see him face whatever heat her father might send his way.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

Still have not had the talk yet.  I am dying to see about the rest of the family.

I love that Bella is confident.  As you said in your authors note, "She is the one who has been human."  It is so cute that they went to the store together, and I was so happy that Edward and Bella acted like the couple they used to be.  Also, happy that Lauren saw them together and was jealous.  

Now that Edward has been changed into a human, does he still have any vampire characteristics?  Kinda like mates?  Is Bella still his mate?

Ready for next chappie in the kitchen.  Thank you for update.

 



Author's Response:

hey there, thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter.

I thought it was high time Bella and Edward started acting seventeen instead of seventy. They only get to be young once. As for Edward's vampiric characteristics: well, he's still unbelievebly gorgeous (but then again he is portrayed by RPattz so there's really no escaping that.), still is s speed demon and yes, Bella is is his mate. This hasn't and won't change in this story. Although, now that they are both human you could say that they are each other's soul mates. They were made for each other. Enouh said.

 

I'll be wrtining the next chapter soon.

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

I just finished reading this story over at a ff.net and I think you are doing an amazing job.  I like that Bella is going to give him cooking lessons.  Is this something that he will be find to be easy to do or will he be as bad as Bella had said when she said to Charlie that he is worse than him.  I'm hoping that Jacob won't be a problem in this story.  I am glad that Edward had talked to Charlie because he seems to not hate him as much as he did.  I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

hey there.

I checked my ff.net account and I saw that I got a review from you over there too. I'm just going to reply to this one. I hope you don't mind.

First things first, I'm happy you like what I've done with this so far.

As for Edward's cooking lessons, I haven't figured how difficult to make it for him... It would depend on the mood I'm in when I write the chapter, I guess. One thing I can pretty much guarantee - they're going to have fun.

Jacob will be a pain in their butts for a while but it'll be nothing like his behavior in the books.

And Charlie, he doesn't like him. But no, he doesn't hate Edward too. It's much worse - he understands where Edward's coming from and it makes it difficult to hate him, which in turn annoys the Chief.

 

I'll update as soon as I can.

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

If I ask real nicely, could I have more? PLEASE!



Author's Response:

hah,

Thanks for the review. I take it you liked the chapter?

You can and will have more of this chapter, unfortunately I can't promise a superfast update sice I've got a couple of other stories to write and also school and Real Life to worry about.

I do promise to try and update this story as quickly as I can.

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the rest of the Cullens coming home

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

Love this story and Love Edward acting like a 17 year old boy...fun

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping

Sweet chapter.   Love the idea of cooking lessons.   LOVE skanky lauren working at the grocery store.  Ms high-n-mighty



Author's Response:

Wow! That was fast! :DNot that I'm complaining.

I love th idea of cooking lessons too - so many different options to write.

thanks for the super fast review!

 

mimozka

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 5:44 PM Title: Of belated reunions and blissful unions

Sweet first lemon. 



Author's Response:

thanks.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 5:40 PM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

hmmm    Bella needs to find out exactly what Charlie was told.     Lemonade is always welcome but not necessary so long as its written well.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 5:34 PM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

surprised they didnt attack edward straight out when he showed up

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 5:25 PM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

interesting twist.  will to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 8:24 PM Title: Of belated reunions and blissful unions

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Your updates make me sooooo happy! ;)

Reviewer: newmommyak Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 1:28 AM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

I like it. Keep it up!

Reviewer: lorens Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:31 AM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

aww poor charlie

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 6:42 AM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

 I am liking where this story could possibly go.  Go forr the NC-17 rating.  I am sure that you will be just fine writing lemonade for all us perverts. :)

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:59 PM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

Yes, you were right about it feeling repetative.  I like the story so far, but it was hard to read each word in this chapter, so tempting to skip over paragraphs.  I'm still hopijng for the next chapter soon.



Author's Response:

I know what you mean. That's one of the reasons it took me so long to update... It bored me to write the same stuff all over again... Luckily, the story will pick up from here. What do you think about the rating though?

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 10:56 PM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

I love this story! Thanks for the update! I say, go for the NC-17 rating, Edward didn't go to all the trouble of becoming human again for nothing!
More Please!!



Author's Response:

My sentiments exactly. Glad to see you agree. :)

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:57 PM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

I would like an NC-17 rating and this is a pretty good story

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're sharing my views and that you like my story.

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 7:23 PM Title: Of hurtful pasts and hopeful futures

Thanks again for a Charlie POV. Neither Stephanie or Melissa did him justice in either the books or the films.

As for the rating, the story is so good it doesn't need the lemons!

;)

Author's Response:

you're very welcome! It was refreshing to write. Thanks for telling me what you think about the rating. :) I suppose I'll just leave the juicy parts for ff.net then...

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:19 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

I love drama and this story has it.... So a part of me wants her to give him hell. But then I think that they both have been to hell and back and that they deserve to have their happy ever after..... But really it's your story and I will be happy with whatever you chose. You do know best..

I was a little sad to hear that he can't read minds anymore. Plus what are the other Cullens? Humans or Vampires or maybe a little of both??????



Author's Response:

hey Irish_charm,

I'm in a similar dilemma as you regarding Bella's fiorgiveness... lol Yes, Edward can't read minds anymore, sad I know, but it comes with the territory and I bet he'd give up his gift any day to be able to be with Bella.

You'll find out more about the Cullens in chapter 4 - we have not heard all of Edward's stroy yet.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:15 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

Great update.  He should have to work for it some.  Minimal Jacob interference would be a plus.  His character just grates on my nerves. Haha



Author's Response:

Haha,

I know what you mean about Jacob being annoying. He annoys me too. Oh and don't worry he will interfere

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:41 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

Bella should be able to understand and forgive this much more quickly than New Moon...He gave up his imortality for her...BIG GIFT



Author's Response:

You are right, tlmorris. You make a very good point and I'm sure Bella will realize it once she has some time to let everything sink.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:20 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

I am totally hooked on this story! Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hey Kougas Older Woman,

I am flattered. I'll try to keep the suspence period minimal and I promise to update as soon as I can.

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 12:42 AM Title: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters

Don't let Bella drag this out. Make him sweat just for a short while - she has to believe him. He's done this for te both of them

Author's Response:

hey Fanfictionfan1664,

I'm happy to hear from you again ;)

Don't worry, Bella just needs a little time to think over everything Edward told her, becasue let's be honest here he dumped lots of info on her.

She'll come to her senses eventually, I promise.

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:30 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

I like it and it is definitely worth a full story.



Author's Response:

Thanks TwilightTucker, the next chapter should be up by tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:19 PM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

Really good chapter.  Hope you continue it.

Reviewer: lorens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:06 PM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

DO NOT LEAVE THIS AS A ONE-SHOT IT HAS ME INTRIGUED AS TO WHERE YOU PLAN TO GO WITH IT AND ITS JUST A SOMETHING I HAVE NOT READ FROM ANYONE ELSE. HOPING YOU KEEP WRITING IT.

Author's Response:

I won't leave it as a one-shot. Noit now when it has interested so many people. :) Tanks for the review lorens! It means a lot.

See you next chapter!

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:18 PM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

No, don't leave this as a one shot. I really want to know more - and you said you have the next couple of chapters written so let's have them!

It makes a nice change to get a Charlie POV.

So, looks like Edward is now human. Did he tell Charlie the truth about his 'procedure'? What about the rest of the Cullens?

How much time has passed since they left? E mentions 2 months for the treatment and another month in a coma.

Please post chapter 2 soon!

Author's Response:

Hey Fanfictionfan1664,

I won't leave it as a one-shot! :) Many people expressed intertest in that story, I don't have the heart to do this to you guys.

Glad you liked the Charlie PoV. And yes, Edward is human. He told Charlie the 'public version' of the truth. You will find out the 'real' truth in either chapter 2 or 3 I'm not sure yet.It's been 4 months since he left it says so in the summary of the story. :)

I'll post as soon as I can.

Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: TwilightAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:20 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

WOW!!!!!  This is just........WOW!!!!  Can't wait for more and to see where it goes from here.  Just amazing!!!  Love the Charlie POV, there should be more interaction with Charlie and his POV.  Gives a better understanding of all things Bella and how Charlie handles it.

 

AMAZING the possibilities that this can go.  will she forgive him easily or will she make him work for it???

 



Author's Response:

Hey TwilightAddict,

I'm very glad you liked where this one is headed! :)

There will be more of the Charlie PoV, after watching Eclipse I realised just how awesome he is! Of course we don't get to see that in the books because in them he's just Bella's father, and let's be frank no teenager likes the parents.

I'm not very sure about how easily she'll forgive him, that's what I have trouble writing... All I know is that it's going to be very emotional and healing for the both of them. One thing is for sure though, forgive him she will!

till next time,

Mimozka

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:13 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

I really liked it. I have never read anything quite like it and I a excited to see where you are going with it. I have sooo many questions, Did the Cullens find a way to be human again? Was it only Edward or are all the Cullens going through with it? DOes Edward still have his mind reading ability, if Alice and Jasper are now human as well do they still have their powers.  

Oh the possibilities..... Can't wait for more, please continue it.



Author's Response:

Hey Irish_charm,

Those are lots of questions you've got there! XD Luckily for you, you'll find out the answers to most of them within the next two chapters. :)

I'm happy you liked it!

 

till next time,

Mimozka

Reviewer: DaniMc Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:49 AM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

Interesting idea for a story! Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Hey DaniMc,

 

Glad I've managed to intrigue you and I hope you stick around for more! I'll try to upload the next chapter as soon as I can.

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:23 PM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

Great story idea...can't wait to find out more



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:17 PM Title: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts

I really like you story so far, has he become human? or contacts? can't wait to hear more!!!!!!

Pat



Author's Response:

Hey Pat,

You are observant. Good for you.

I knew those questions would come up in the reviews and I promised myself I won't answer them so that you'd find out by yourselves. The answer to that question is in the next chapter, but since you're the first one to review this story I'll answer it: yes, he is human. That is all I'm saying, to find out the 'why's and 'how's you'll have to wait till next chapter. I'll try not to take too long to update :)

I'm very glad you liked the chapter! :)

 

till next time,

 

Mimozka

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