Date: 24 Jul 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
I was hoping for a lemon, but this was good too..... I know u probably had ur hands full doing a book, doing an original story for the contest, plus someone using ur work as their own. I hope evrything goes well for you and thanks for doing this little story.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Lemons love lemons hate bitches that still other peoples stories. You should take it as a complement that your story is that good that someone wants it as there own but it still doesnt make it right. :(
I am so glad that Edward greeted Bella the way he did the man says all the right words.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hey Darlin' ~ loved the little chappy update. Of course I would have LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED the lemon but I gotta say; I laughed my ass off when I read "insert lemon here" that was CLASSIC!!! Bwuahahahaha!!!
Sorry that there a bitch on FFN that's stealin' your stories. Won't FFN revoke their membership? Seems like they wouldn't want that crap goin' on but who am I to say?
I will wait patiently for the next update and check out your recommendations. I promised myself I wouldn't read anything else until I get my chapters updated, though... so I think I've found my motivation.
Love ya, babes!
XoXoXo ~ Fangs
Lemon being wriiten for my besties will get it out as soon as it gets the once over! Thanks hun, its awful that she's litterally copying and pasting my story and ff isn't taking it down. she's hit mac_214 and 22blu, too. Thats what i do too! for every chapter i write i get to read one. :) Luv ya babe!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well I don't hate it but wow... you really jumped ahead. LOL ... will there be more chapters or is this it... I forgot to look to see if you said 'yes' or 'no' as to whether the story was completed... guess I'll go look now...
Muah ~ Fangs
P.S. I miss your other stories... Third Wife is awesome and I love Be My Sub too... I miss those stories... *sigh*
Date: 02 May 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome... you totally need to expand this. I can see all sorts of wild and wonderful things to cum... oops... I meant, COME... LOL
XoXo ~ Tracy
There is another chapter already for this one. the beta has it. as soon as i get it back, i will post it. nails233 xoxox
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
congrats on the book!
this chapter was so cute in it's awkward sexiness. eddie is just too... overwelmed i guess? he finally got what he has wanted and dreamed about, pair that with only ever having self love and he is just waiting to explode! heehee
thank you for sharing your story
Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am sorry you are Blue I wish I could help but I dont know how to do much other than read and review. I want you to know that I look forward to every update you do. I enjoyed the second chapter her I think you could go on with this story it is full of love and hot naked men I love it LOL. I hope that someone does some banners for you you deserve that you are a great author thanks for your effort.
Thanks for your sweet words. You have always been one of my best fans. It's okay, things will get better. I am going back to my original beliefs that I am just going to write for the love of the story. thosa who enjoy my work will let me know if they so choose to, and if they don't i will live without it. as for banners the only thing they really do is attract new readers, so i can live without them too. now enough whinny stuff from me.
i do have another chapter almost ready. and i will add that one too. this story will be a short one, but i hope you enjoy it.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice.... So u going to continue this little drabble? or did u do this to kinda tie up the loose ends?
I've started this reply 3 times, unsure if this was meant insulting or if it just came out that way. either way, i needed a way to writeout some issues i was having and this was the only one i could do it with. as for will it continue, i do have another chapter just wrapping up. the story will be a short one maybe 5 chapters.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
So frat boy forgot the golden rule about wrapping his shit....... I wonder if there will be a little frat baby, because as much as the timing would suck it would serve them right getting knocked up the first time out. It could make for a really funny story.... Frat boys changing a diaper..... What a great way to torment new pledges...
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved these:"My eyes zeroed in on the one thing I desired more than my degree, Edward's cock." and "my coochie started doing the 'I'm dying tend to me first cha cha."
Priceless! Fun and sweet lemony goodness.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Adorable little drabble, could have the potential to be something more......
That's exactly what it was. And if it does continue, which i am still unsure of, I would make it like all my stories, much more complete. But for now it's just a fun little story for a freind. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Have a great weekend! nails233