Date: 07 Nov 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
Their honeymoon was wonderful, despite Edward's underlying problems. His mindset of never being worthy or deserving of love was what almost did in their marriage. If Bella wasn't who she was, it could have all been ruined or thrown away!
Date: 05 Nov 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
The description of Kathleen explains why Seth has such a crush on Isabella, she's the spitting image of his first love! I see why Seth became an angel, he was so caring and loving to his family, sacrificing for them before himself! The flashback to 1986 was hard to read, because you could just see the hard shell growing around Edward's heart! Who could blame him, when his so-called parents didn'r give a damn about him?
Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
That conversation between Edward and Jasper, about Alec, was pretty sad. When a man can't talk to his wife, who he loves beyond reason, you have to find out why! Very insightful of this group talking over new circumstances surrounding Bella and Edward!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
This was very interesting. Thanks for posting this outtake.
There was a small mistake:
but he was pretty sure the main reason none of them had ever brought it up was because no one liked to think about their own immortality.
I believe you mean to say that they didn't like to think about their own MORTALITY. (in other words, the fact that they are mortal and will die, as opposed to immortality which refers to living forever.)
I normally try not to point out every little typo, etc. unless it might be confusing to a reader. I hope this is helpful.