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Reviewer: Twiclare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 49

Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing with us.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 49

Mason's journal entry was a hoot. I can just imagine all of it.

 

I loved the letter to Renee I can imagine her getting so angry.

 

Great story. Thank you for sharing it

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 48

So glad that Bella was able to get her revenge. Loved the part with Alice & Rose with Ellie.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 47

First this story was so good. You really didn't pull any punches & git to the heart of the abuse.  Very much like you did in Wisp.  I also liked how you made the characters more real than cannon. 

Loved how you ended it.  Can't wait to read the epilogues.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 49

tjis was an amazing story

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 49

Fantastic story!! I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting it. 

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 49

great story. i know i didn't like every detail but that's what made it yours! :)  and i know it's an older story but i still like to leave a little comment as a thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 48

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 47

Bella is still like Edward's master. And more than not she sees Ellie as hers, not theirs it seems

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 46

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 45

dead charlie=yay!!

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 44

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

Edward's like a servant....Bella's in charge, Bella's way

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 42

oh great

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 41

uh oh, pissed off edward here we come

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 39

go judge!

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 38

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 37

kind of sick of rose threatening edward all the time, she just needs to get over herself

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 36

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 35

happy for a court date, not happy how no one seems to think anything of bella using her touch and i love you's to manipulate edward into doing or feeling what she wants

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 34

ugh, everyone else can do for her but not edeard unless she allows it. isn't that her controlling him? when she didn't want to be controlled herself

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 32

now i have to say, i always hate when a woman says "my body, my choice"  it took two to make the baby, the father should be able to have a say about the matter. i know lots of guys that had they been given the chance they would of gladly raised their baby alone versus the girl having an abortion.  now in cases of rape..i completely see that it's the woman's choice.

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 25

well, that was just a bit too harsh. yes, he should of talked about his plan with Bella but then again it's not like if it was Emmett that was in danger Rose wouldn't do the same thing

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

she used him

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 21

i can't say that i blame edward for the choice he made 

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 19

:'( 

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

poor girl

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 16

oh no

Reviewer: milinpink Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am loving this story, and loving the fact you are willing to push your readers even more. 

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

:(   sad chapter

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

:( poor thing

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 49

I wish you still wrote on this site. You are a wonderful writer. I had this story a long time ago, and just found it again. I loved Wisp too.

Reviewer: jimmy dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Damn..almost got..heart attack..when reading this part..Bella story..this is too much angst...too cruel.. Well have to stop..reading..now.HEA will be damn...

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 49

OMG!!! That was by far the best story I have read on these characters. Simply amazing. Loved it and will read it again.
Thank you.

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 49

Wonderful story. You had me hooked :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 49

Glad Mason is such a cool kid.  The grwoing thing is def different.  Love Esmom.

 

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 48

So glad she got to get Frank off the streets.  What a sleezeball.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 47

Ugh for the Jacob imprint part.  Wonder what the rest of the pack is gonna think when he phases next.    Glad Heidi got them out of that state. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 46

Glad they got the baby ok.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 45

Tribe needs to mind its own business just like they turned their back on Bella all these years.   

 

Ugh  Flu sucks arse

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 44

Again, sucks that the criminal justice system sides with the criminals and not the victims.  Can't believe they gave him bail.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 43

Oh wow  Charlie has really lost it huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 42

oh no  Bella what are you doing?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 41

Glad Esme was there for her.   Ugh  Sometimes I hate the criminal justice system.  

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 49

what a beautiful story... i loved it.

now i need to make up time for all the things i didn't do because i was sucked into your story :-)

thank you for writting it and sharing it with us

Reviewer: mirveil Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your story has really captured me from the beginning and the suspense kept me going on till I finished reading it. Your writing is great and I'l read your other stories with pleasure.

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 49

Fabulous story. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it! Thank you for sharing this story with us. I thought this story was fantastic, sad and loving.
So thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us.

xoxoxoxoxox
Ashmerlin aka Alia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 49

Dear Cris, I really want to thank you for the gift of nine chapters at once, and a finish to this story! From what you said in your author's notes, you have had a rough time of it, between injuries, and clinical depression! Lord, girl it's a wonder you were able to write this last part! I never considered giving up on you and my faith in you was justified! This was one of the best stories I ever read, even with such an evil Charlie in it! Through the awful parts, I just gritted my teeth and knew you would make it come out all right! Thanks so much!

 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 48

Didn't bother me a bit when Bella took her revenge on Frank, something he so richly deserved! I'm sure Ellie's slow growth is a joy for all the family, since they get to enjoy her childhood for a long, long time! As for Jacob Black, he can fend for himself! That was such a sweet scene where Bella talked to Ellie on the phone and Edward played her lullaby !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 47

No worries here about Bella becoming a vampire, I know she will when the time is right. The gift of this place that means so much to her, and to Edwrd was a truly wonderful gesture on Carlisle's part! I think Bella has everything about the way she wants it and not much else to ask for!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 46

Too damn bad Charlie couldn't have died before he infected Bella with the flu virus. She had enough on her plate without having his nasty disease to fight too! At least Ellie is okay and maybe now Bella can get well !

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 49

Congrats on being able to hit complete. Will be sad to see this story go but happy to have been on this journey with you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 45

This chapter makes me want to dance around singing,"Ding dong, the with is dead!" I am so grateful that you killed him off! Now, providing she has no repercussions from this flu, Bella never has to worry about her rotten father ever again!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 44

It's going to happen soon, and I really hope nothing bad occurs during Bella's delivery! I'm going to cross my fingers that all will go smoothly and Charlie will never be a problem again! Just sayin'!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 43

Nothing with this girl is as easy as it might be! Thank God Alice saw that Jasper needed to guard Bella and protect her from Charlie's wrath! I wish they would throw the book at him, attempted murder at least, but who can say?It may have scared Edward and the rest for Bella to di this, but it was good for her to try it on her own. What she told Edward is the simple truth, she has to stand up for herself and her child!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 42

Please tell me you're not letting Bella anywhere near that psycho bastard father of her's? He could do anything to hurt her, and if, God forbid she harms him, what then happens to her child and her family, especially Edward? She couldn't have thought this through, or she wouldn't be risking this!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 41

It is so good to see you again! I'm really happy you found time and inspiration to finish this story! Can't wait for the results of the tests Carlisle did! It was so sweet for Bella to hear her babie's heartbeat and see her in the sonogram! The session with Esme was cathartic, I'm sure and very necessary for Bella's emotional well-being! Last of all, I'm kind of glad that they won't try Charlie, while still wanting him to pay some sort of price for the horrors he visited on Bella!

Reviewer: crystal misty Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 40

In this story i hope charlie go to jail

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

Holy fuck!!  Thank God for Esme!!!  Gotta love her!!  Thanks for an awesome story!!

Reviewer: Lady Ali Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 40

I have read this story all the way through and I must say I couldn't stop! I started it yesturday and couldn't stop like I said.  I just now finished it lol.  I LOVE THIS STORY  and can't wait to find out what happens next. 

I must say I yelled Hell yeah when the judge gave her verdict.  Great job with this story its great.  :)

 

Lady Ali

Reviewer: TwilightDramaTeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just finished reading all 40 chapters, when I noticed the story had not been updated since July.  It's Nov.1.  Please tell me you have not abandoned this story.  It is very well written and deserves an ending.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: misskT225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 40

pleas hurry up and update..im officially addicted to this story

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Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 40

great story! I can't wait for more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 40

Kinda thought the story with Renee was something like that.   Charlie will try something I'm sure. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 39

well at least the judge made the right decision in the end. Wish the judge could have held them in contempt of court. Poor Edward. Lord knows what was going through charlies mind


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 38

Love her surprising them all with the phone. Poor b. Charlie needs to pay. What a skank Renee is

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 37

Poor bella. Such a confused girl.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

Hope heidi can help her. Yummy quiet time for them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 35

 

Wow Heidi sure has a sucky job, a truly needed one, but a sucky one none the less. Poor Bella. Hope she can stay strong. Hope everything goes ok. Ya never know with these psycho court systems. Too bad charlie doesnt get drunk and fall down the stairs and break his neck

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 34

Glad edward presented her with options. Smart not hiding stuff from her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 33

nice talk with esmom

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

Glad to see you writing again. RL happens to us all. Can understand Rose's need to talk to her. Hope she really thinks things through

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 31

Too bad too many people think like billy does about parental "rights".


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 30

Such a lovely sweet chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 29

glad she invited them all to visit her.

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