Date: 09 Mar 2019 10:30 PM Title: Jasper and John Barleycorn
Genius having Esme the ability to physically shield because of her maternal love is BRILLIANT! And Carlisle actually healing without medicine is so appropriate. And also, why didn’t he do that in canon. Shh...I love it! I love all the powers. Well done!
Date: 20 Apr 2017 8:43 AM Title: Training
They sure do need to get away from all of those cock blocking people esp wedding nazi Alice. ugh..... You can't FORCE someone to be your maid of honor. It's supposed to be a question to someone and they either accept or not.
Date: 20 Apr 2017 7:03 AM Title: Scorched
I love that everyone went the hell awasy so Edward and Bella could comfort each other alone and talk to each other in private. I'm human and I could never live with that many people. Forget about it if the people could 'see' and 'feel' and 'hear' everything you and your husband talked about or did together. Living along would be a must.
Date: 20 Apr 2017 1:00 AM Title: Confessions and Realizations
The only thing that is ugh... is prudish old fashioned Edward. I hope that changes soon. My parents didn't tell me as a 25 year old who I could or couldn't bring home and where they would sleep. Charlie needs to back off.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:11 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved this!! I liked all of the neat powers and abilities you gave everyone. then getting to see the deceased loved ones is wonderful! you ought to write a sequel where the angels in heaven have to help the vamps defeat the demons from hell. that would be great!!
Date: 22 Sep 2013 7:09 PM Title: Forks
I don't understand why she doesn't want Edward to have his family there but, Edward would move mountains for her to have her father there for her. This Bella thinks of herself first and foremost! I'm not very taken by her!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:13 PM Title: Reactions of All Shapes and Sizes
Bella annoys me. She's really immature and behaves that way often. The way she uses her powers is so childish that I just want to slap her. I keep ready hoping that she'll grow up. Her and Edwards lemon was great but she still annoys me!