Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:51 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:50 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:50 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:49 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:49 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:49 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:48 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:48 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:48 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:47 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:47 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:47 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:46 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:46 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:46 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:45 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:45 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:44 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:44 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:44 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:44 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:42 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:42 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:41 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:41 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:41 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:41 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:40 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:40 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:40 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:40 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:39 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:39 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:39 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:38 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:38 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist. Thanks for writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:38 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:37 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:37 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:37 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:36 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:36 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:35 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:35 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:35 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:34 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
Date: 26 Sep 2022 5:34 PM Title: Epilogue
So, what was up with Jasper and Rose and the comment about the funeral? Was it a fake funeral? Did they survive? Are the in the witness protection program or something. God, I wish you wrote a sequel. Great story. Some surprising twist.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2015 11:35 PM Title: Devil in Disguise
Oh, poor little Mikey isn't gonna get to be rid of Bella, now is he? Maybe he should just kill Mike and Lauren. LOL
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:55 PM Title: Epilogue
Great ending! Alice doesn't have her visions so she'll never know the truth!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:34 PM Title: Wicked Angel
This is just AAaalll messed up!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:08 PM Title: Consumed
I'm hoping Charlie got to her & killed jake.
Date: 06 Jan 2015 11:04 AM Title: Faith
Interesting Rose doesn't trust Edward but trusts Emmett. I think her trust meter if a bit off kilter!
Date: 05 Jan 2015 10:14 AM Title: Blazing Suns
The grilling chicken scene was hilarious!
Date: 05 Jan 2015 9:20 AM Title: Deadly Silent
So now Charlie even wants him to see her! That's exciting!
Date: 05 Jan 2015 8:44 AM Title: Killer Sentiments
So is Jacob going to be the first to die in this band of misfits?
Date: 05 Jan 2015 7:29 AM Title: Reality Check
I wonder if she will forgive him & will he really never do another hit?
Date: 05 Jan 2015 7:01 AM Title: Torture
So now she really & officially has a killing under her belt!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:55 AM Title: Epilogue
**repeat from other reviews: Witness Protection??? Please!!!!**
Great story!! Surprising plot twists!!
I really want an HEA!!!
:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:11 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow, what an ending! I definitely would read a "part two". Great job!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Wicked Angel
I knew Alice was evil and conniving!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 12:43 AM Title: Consumed
I'm so glad this isn't a cliffy where I have to wait for the next chapter to be completed. The suspense would kill me.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:47 PM Title: Torture
Woah, Edward and Bella seem to be perfect for each other.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Angel of Death
I think Alice is jealous or will be soon.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:51 PM Title: Death By . . .
I have the feeling Alice is going to be trouble.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:30 PM Title: Phantom Desire
Hmmmm...I'm feeling a little Possesiveward appear.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:54 PM Title: Devil in Disguise
Oh, Edward, I think you just got your future scrambled.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:18 PM Title: Prologue
Wow, they are a little twisted! Can't wait to see how it all plays out.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:15 AM Title: Epilogue
Oh.
Part of me all the way throught this was OMG, they are dead, then another part of me esp at the end, it saying they are in witness protection or something.
But never guessed that Rose and Jasper were FBI.
Fab story, loved every second of it, Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: Reality Check
I was fighting with the tears here
Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:57 PM Title: Torture
Oh.
Looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 7:07 PM Title: Phantom Desire
I'm loving this whole story line, very unique. Besides that it's really making me laugh. I also love the fact that the grammer and spelling are correct for the most part as I find it very distracting to read when it isn't correct. One question I do have is how in the hell do so many people write one story? I understand collaboration but you all must have similar devious minds. I look forward to reading the rest. Last thought is that it is refreshing to not be begged for reviews. I find it very disconcerting to find those little notes at the end promising sooner updates and/or teasers if you review that is one reason that I usually only read fiction that is complete. I know authors need feeback but some get ridiculous.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 4:03 AM Title: Reality Check
Oh, when I read the first part of this chapter all I could think of is that Bella set him up to perform the murder she really wanted. She would have made off with the money and he would have been the loser! Oh well, maybe I've been watching to many movies. It would have made a great flic, I love when the bad guy gets away!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:24 AM Title: Torture
Oh, you girls are so bad but I have to say it was different! Poor Mike he always gets the shitty end of the stick, but this time he really deserved it. Good work.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 7:55 AM Title: Epilogue
Surprising end, hell yeah! Edward and Bella are not dead, smirk. Poor Jazz didn't get his happily ever after, but I think the others did. Wicked Angel, Wicked Story, and Wicked Me to Death, Loved It from start to finish...Thanks for the brilliant story gurlz!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:25 PM Title: Epilogue
Well now!!! You writers fooled me!!!!
Great story and I really hope you all decide to carry forward in the future sometime!!!
Cory
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:29 PM Title: Epilogue
Nicely done ladies. Interesting story with some great plot twists. I always have a hard time reading stories where Edward has sex with other people but thank you for not writing a lot about that. Not a big fan of Jake's so offing him was cool. I love Alice as canon but I do get a kick out of evil Alice. I will hold onto the belief that Edward and Bella are still alive somewhere loving each other and the funerals were for show....is that considered denial? So be it. Again ladies, excellent story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 3:14 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow...I sure as hell did NOT see that coming. At. All. Good Job.
I'll betcha those were empty boxes over them holes. A clean break & a new life. At least that is what I choose to think.
Here's hoping for a sequel. Hope ya'll had a Wonderful Christmas & I wish for you a Safe, Healthy & Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 6:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Holy shit! I didn't see that one coming. But what is up with Rose and Jasper at the end? Are Bella and Edward really alive in some sort of witness protection? Are you ever going to tell us or leave us hanging forever?
Excellent story! It was sick and twisted and a hell of a lot of fun to read!!!
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:13 PM Title: Epilogue
what? I don't like filling in the blanks. :( *pouts* I really did love this story! I think it was a beautiful ending for Bella and Edward, truly fitting for their pained love story.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:21 PM Title: Prologue
DAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well call me a freak cuz I loved it!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 9:49 PM Title: Epilogue
is that to say that they werent killed and that the funureal was just a show that was good
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 6:20 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved the ending. I hope you all plan on either doing a part2 or at least another new story.
Happy holidays.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 9:11 PM Title: Epilogue
What an evil put freaking perfect ending to this awesome story.
I would like to believe that Edward and Bella survived but as far as anyone other than Em, Rose, and Jasper are concerned they are dead. Of course that is for their own protection against Alice.
You ladies did an awesome job putting together this deliciously dark and evil story.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 7:07 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved the story. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 6:15 PM Title: Epilogue
Can we all just say "Witness Protection" ????
Didn't see this coming at all but it is a very fitting ending for Alice.
I'll keep my fingers crossed for Part 2 !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 6:12 PM Title: Epilogue
Amazingly done! I would like to think that Edward and Bella survived, and the funeral was a fake out! Thank you for this wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:53 PM Title: Wicked Angel
I was barely able to make it through this chapter! So well written! I can't believe Alice!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 5:02 AM Title: Wicked Angel
Yep you left me crying and gasping for air! I don't think anyone could guess that ending. Can't wait to see what happens with our characters. Hope you update soon!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:21 AM Title: Prologue
I loved this, this was soo captivating and unpredictable, but it made me cry and i love happy endings, please dont kill the both of them though, suprise me, please, dont make me break down and cry and wish i never readed this, i hate sad ending, But never mind my babbling,, THIS IS AWESOME!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:44 AM Title: Wicked Angel
How in the world could ANYONE have guessed that ending?!? Of course no one did! I feel like my mouth was hanging open in shock through most of this chapter. Jake in love with Edward?! Alice seeing it all go down awhile ago?! Stunned!! I'm finally making it back to review after devouring all the chapters in 2 days and now I feel like I need to read it all again - especially before this crucial (and probably epic) epilogue gets posted. Can't wait to see what you have in store. Thanks for writing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 5:13 AM Title: Wicked Angel
wow that was intense i cant wait to c whats going to happen
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 5:20 AM Title: Wicked Angel
Wow i can believe it this is awesome...
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: Wicked Angel
Yes, to all the above. I am crying and i don't think it's very nice of you to make me do that! I cannot believe you killed them! I am in such shock right now! Of course I'm in even bigger shock that jake was in love with Edward, that's crazy and I never guessed that! Oh, and Alice, are you kidding me, that took me for a loop! But, given her character it doesn't surprise me. I can't wait for the epi! This has been one hell of a story!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:33 PM Title: Wicked Angel
Devisish
WOAH!!!!!!!
That was fabulous!!!!! Left me needing to know more. That's for damn sure!!!!
Post the epilogue asap!!!!
Cory