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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:13 PM Title: A brand new world of kink

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:46 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:24 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:59 AM Title: Surprise! Or not.

I'm with her, how the hell does one forget to tell his girlfriend about his daughter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:33 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.

Edward has some serious explaining and groveling to do. He talks about honesty. He needs to go to the whipping bench.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:40 AM Title: Surprise! Or not.

well there goes the honesty out the window.   I love Edward to death , but can not thinkof one good reason for this blantant omission/lie/betrayal.     Really enjoy your story thou

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:03 AM Title: A brand new world of kink

i always tell my son, that mommy knows everything !!!!!!!  I love it !!!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 2:31 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.

That does not bode well for Edward at all. He expects honesty but does not give it in return.  There have been plenty of times he could have brought it up.  When she talked about having kids or when he said he always kept himself covered.  Not good, not good at all.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 2:13 AM Title: Surprise! Or not.

well im excited for the next chatper keep them comming

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:32 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.

when the next update
please make it soon

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:33 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.

OOps!!!   That's a biggy!  He forgot??

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 7:54 PM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

good chapter. enjoyed it. and the phone sex was quite naughty and made me smile, bringing back some memories lol.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 11:14 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

I really like this story. I can't wait for more. Bella has been through so much and I think she will actually feel empowered through this relationship.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:11 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

these 2 are hot together! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:59 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

sign me up! what club can i find him at.....whew ;)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:00 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

squeee awesome chappy :)

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 11:29 AM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

good start.  am intrigued to see where this goes. 

I noticed a few words missing from sentences throughout, but it's like one of those IQ quizzes where you have to guess what's missing lol. Keeps the old grey cells exercised :D



Author's Response: Thanks. I had the chs checked for errors do u mind telling mevwhats missing so I can fix it? Thanks:)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:26 PM Title: A brand new world of kink

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Natsar Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 2:58 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Awesome start! Loved Jacob's idea of a threesome... What an ass! lol

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 12:57 PM Title: A brand new world of kink

yey! i loved this chapter as muvh as the last one! this story is already one of my favs!

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:44 AM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Great beginning.

Reviewer: gabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:18 AM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Great start!  I'm eager for more!

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 2:36 AM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

omg i love it and i can't wait for more

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