Date: 05 Mar 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
Okay that was way to calm. Forget the teenage sex if you want it happens. But the adult training your minor child on sex and using a dominants playroom without his permission? The punishment is not matching the ick factor.
Date: 21 Feb 2016 9:08 PM Title: A brand new world of kink
That's pretty funny, him thinking his folks don't know about his life style, and his mom already clued in! I admire Bella for wanting to seriously consider all angles of this relationship before making a decision.
Date: 21 Feb 2016 8:46 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
A little different Bella and Edward, I must say! Also, let's beat up some on Jacob, the cheating bastard! I don't like the way he controlled Bella, in every way! That's not what a loving spouse does!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
I know the has been out there for a long time. But, I jut read this and loved it. Looking over your other work and wondering if you'll ever continue writing?
Thanks for sharing your amazing talent.
I do write some. I forget to update here. Lol. On ff I'm twilightaddict2007.
My goal is to finish all my stories, I've just been really busy and have lost my muse :/
Your kind words help!
Date: 29 Feb 2012 3:54 AM Title: Surprise! Or not.
i remember you started writing by stating that you don't practice this lifestyle. i guess i'm just curious and interested, like you are. anyway, i just wanted to say that in this chapter, i came across the first and only time i've ever thought domward was sweet and sensitive. your edward told bella that "[his] life depends on her happiness." i was really touched. i love reading domward stories, but so many of the doms seem to enjoy being cruel. yours doesn't. :)
Date: 16 Feb 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMGosh!!!! This was an awesome story. I so loved seeing Edward and Bella growing into a beautiful couple that they are. You did an amazing job writing this story. Thank you for sharing your story with us. I am sad to see the end of this story.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
Edward is so sweet. I loved the he did take Bella's feelings in to consideration when it came to Jacob. I just hope that Jacob has really changed. I am laughing at how Edward is with Bella and her bed rest. But with her history I don't blame him.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad Bella and Edward had a good honeymoon. I can not believe that Carmen showed up with out telling Edward. I am glad that Bella called him. I do not trust her. I am worried about Bella not pressing charges on Jacob. I know Tanya said she would punish him and keep him away from Bella. But what if the time comes that Jacob no longer wants to be Tanya's sub. What then???
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Shitty Dom or not, Edward can be my Dom anytime!!!!! lol. Glad that Edward and Charlie are getting along. Loved that Edward messed with Seth. That is just like a dad. But I think Edward is one of the coolest dad I know. My dad would not have been kidding with any boys like that. He would have been serious. lol.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved thte slug story. I can not believe that Bella is not going to press charges. What is Edward going to say when he finds out??? I was also surprised that Edward was not upset with Seth and Claire kissing. LOVE LOVE LOVE this s tory.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMGosh!!!!! Renee lied to Bella about her father. Wow, Bella and Claire have a lot in common. I am glad that Bella and the babies are ok. So glad that Bella has found her father. Loved that she is making Edward wait on marrying him. lol.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMGosh!!!!!! I can not believe that Jacob really kidnapped Bella. What is he thinking?????????????? Edward is going to kill him. Hope to goodness nothing happens to her and the babies. That would be awful. So glad that I can go to the next chapter and do not have to wait for an update. Happy Me!!!!! Loving this story. What is with Jacob, he is the one that cheated on Bella, why is he so hell bent on getting her back. Is it, if he can't have her no one can????
Date: 16 Feb 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward has really screwed up. But I can understand why he would be questioning what he should do. I also understand were Bella was coming from. I am glad that she stood up to Edward. She should not have left though. What in the hell is Tanya doing there??????????? Please do not let her comfort Edward.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 10:48 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
As a parent of girls, I can see why Edward would be upset. But Claire is 15 and Edward was 15 when Carmen became his Domme. I am not saying that that was ok, because it is not. But you have heard of the pot calling the kettle black. lol. I am glad that Edward has finally collared Bella. What is going on with Jacob???
Date: 15 Feb 2012 9:46 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.
I do not blame Bella for being mad and angry. How could he forgot. Least see, Bella gets her ass whoop for forgetting to call Edward when her plane landed but it is ok that he forgot to tell Bella that he had a teenage daughter. That is not fair.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 8:45 PM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.
Loved her calling him Master. She is so going to get in so much trouble as his sub. I can not believe that he did go to Florida. But I did kind of figure that he would since he said "you have call my hand". I am sooooo off to the next chapter. I am glad that I do not have to wait for updates.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 7:56 PM Title: A brand new world of kink
This is awesome!!!!!! I am loving it. Well, it seems that Edward's secrect is really not a secrect from his family. lol. I would be like Bella, I don't know if I could take the punishments. I am glad that she asked to see what it was like. Off to the next chapter.
Date: 15 Feb 2012 5:06 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
I am excited to find your story. It sounds very interesting. Can't wait to continue. I am a little confused about somethings. Bella said that had to ask Jacob for money and that she agreed to put her savings and her paycheck into his account. What kind of job does Bella have? She said she did not want anything from Jacob in the divorce, what about her savings and her share of her money that was in the checking account? I hope Jacob gets what is coming to him. I am off to read the next chapter.
Date: 24 Dec 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
That was a perfect Ending.. Edward is not a pussy, you just can't be a dom and switch mid sentence and be Edward.. that is too emotional on both parties..
I like the way the ended up just playing at the club.. home life was family and friends..
I have to admit The teenagers kind of scary.. I turn a blinded eye to my 16yr old Sex life.. Don't want to know. I know he safe and that it. Not saying I agree. But you can't stop it. you have to figure which is the worse evil.. lying and sneaking around is werse it destroes trust.. I am glad that they compermized with the kids.
And Bella that a lone is beatiful. I hope to be there one day..
The family is awesome has usall.. funny has hell..
This was a fantastic story..
Merry Christmas and happy New Years.
<3 Leona :)
Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
I really 50/50 here.. I hate Jake.. so I would not like him with her.. NOT AT ALL...
and I am upsett with Edward, I can say yes take a break to get his head back in the right place.. But Bella needs punishment..
Why is it okay for her to yell and stuff. and him not.. She wrong too.. Fights are 50/50 So god I hope this will not be Edward turning into a wimp..
You know you never read that when bella is the domme and Edward is the sub. Why? So I don't understand why it the other way around.
Okay I sorry, I got carried away.. I think he is doing good..
She is doing good too.. they just need to get their reg shit undle frist.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 31
This has been a very great story from start to finish. I hate to see it go, but I honestly dont think theres much you can do with this couple anymore. Keep up the great work, cant wait to see what your going to come out with next.