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Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

YOU HAD ME GOING!!!! I was thinking to myself, "This is a depressingn E/B story!" I was wondering wher the hell you were taking this!

Good one!

Reviewer: vanilla-bella36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

WHo would've thought that it was Bree?! I thought at first that it was Bella coz you mentioned almost the same characteristics of Bella to Bree. But it's good. Amazing. I just hope there's some sort of sequel or something. I would love to see what happened in the bar, how and what Bella felt when she saw Edward, his family's reaction to Bella and how Edward coped with his life with Bella. But all in all, it's great. Love it. Keep it up. :DDD



Author's Response:

In the book they describe Bella's shampoo smelling like strawberries, her blood smelled like freesias. So I changed that up for human Edward as Bree's cheap strawberry shampoo gave the freesia smell to Bells. They both have brown hair but we never new Bree's eye color. I don't know if I'll make a sequel yet, I'm still working on my other story Haven. Once I'm finished with it, I might go back and write at least another chapter to describe what happened in the after math. I'm glad you like the one shot. Thank you for reviewing. 

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