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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 12:01 PM Title: For All

wonderful, you would have had more reviews I think if you had not posted the story complete. when there is aleady a mext chapter you tend to hit next instead of review

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 11:38 AM Title: At Long Last

yay

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Date: 25 Nov 2015 11:14 AM Title: What Happens Next

oh no

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 2:32 AM Title: Do Over

why Berkley?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:53 PM Title: What a World

sad

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:48 PM Title: The Things We Do for Love

so good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 12:26 PM Title: Man and Wife

jacob I bet

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Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:59 AM Title: Changes

whirlwind

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Date: 24 Nov 2015 11:34 AM Title: Sometimes Good Things Come in Threes

AAA
++++

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:16 AM Title: Revelations

hot

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Date: 23 Nov 2015 12:48 PM Title: The First Twenty-four Hours

so good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 12:37 PM Title: Sexting

tease

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Date: 23 Nov 2015 12:16 PM Title: Dreams Come True

wow

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 11:45 AM Title: Discoveries

great should have more reviews

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 11:11 AM Title: Just the Beginning

good start

Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:17 PM Title: Changes

:)

 

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Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:15 PM Title: Sometimes Good Things Come in Threes

thanks:)

 

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Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:14 PM Title: Revelations

good:) yess..

 

thanks

Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:09 PM Title: The First Twenty-four Hours

thanks to share:)

 

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Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:07 PM Title: Sexting

:)

 

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Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:04 PM Title: Dreams Come True

thanks:)

 

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Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:01 PM Title: Discoveries

thanks:)

 

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Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:01 PM Title: Just the Beginning

thanks:)

 

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Reviewer: Mayfall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:15 PM Title: For All

Amazing!

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:53 AM Title: For All

LOVED IT!!!!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:04 AM Title: For All

Beautiful.  Just beautiful.  Made me cry....but they were good tears.  Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:38 PM Title: For All

great story, lots of ups and downs but HEA wins out! and Jacob is in jail... PERFECT! :)

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 11:58 PM Title: For All

Awww such a great ending!!!! everyone had a happy ending :)

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 8:41 PM Title: Sometimes Good Things Come in Threes

foursome I say foursome

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 2:58 AM Title: Just the Beginning

creeper! lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 12:44 AM Title: For All

I loved it and I really loved Charlie and Renee getting back together.  Thanks

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:58 PM Title: At Long Last

I am so happy they busted Jacob he is such a creep.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 9:51 PM Title: Waiting

Thank god they are Edward's.  Jake is a creep for doing what he did and making them go through all the time thinking that the babys maybe his babys. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 8:45 PM Title: What Happens Next

Please tell me this is not so.  Please tell me that Edward got the call that the sperm was there something was wrong so the baby is his and not that creep Jake.?????????????

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:52 PM Title: Do Over

That is cute everyone needs a puppy.  They need to get back to there horny selves lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:44 PM Title: What a World

That is so sad such a happy moment and then shit!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:34 PM Title: The Things We Do for Love

What a honeymoon wow.  Is she going to suprise him with a baby well one in 7 or 8 months lol??

Reviewer: nikki62581 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:19 PM Title: For All

GREAT STORY, I'M GLAD JACOB DIDN'T GET HIS WAY.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:01 AM Title: Man and Wife

I thought Alice was going to blow a gasket but she did good.  I have heard about what Edward was doing having multi orgasems hell I would be happy just have one before he did LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:36 AM Title: Changes

Married swoon  LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:10 AM Title: Sometimes Good Things Come in Threes

I think that was priceless what they did in front of Tanya and I dont think Edward can stop thinking about it.  Breaking in the new bed should be fun will Emmett let this happen???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:37 AM Title: Revelations

Just think they could of been fucking like this for years LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:58 AM Title: The First Twenty-four Hours

So Rose was part of the fun with Bella and Emmett???  Jake needed more than just a punch.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:34 AM Title: Sexting

Edward always the gentleman.  So Edward did the Jess and Tanya thing poor thing.  Bella should light that bed on fire but then again Edward should light hers for the Jake action in it.  What is Jakes problem he thinks she is going to take him back??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:35 AM Title: Dreams Come True

Well at least Edward knows how strongly she feels for him there is no ? that she wants him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 4:45 AM Title: Discoveries

Ya that was a shocker about Emmett and him telling Edward.                              

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:52 AM Title: Just the Beginning

so he has been spying on her for how long.  this sounds like it is going to be very sexy story cant wait.

Reviewer: Kaycy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 1:00 AM Title: For All

I enjoyed reading your story.  I just sat down and read the entire thing.  It was short and sweet and worth every chapter.

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