[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Famous last words, "Nothing is going to happen", never say them. Good chapter.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
love the story so far can twait to read more
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I am just about to post chapter 4 now.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
:O
Author's Response:
He he, thanks for reading and reviewing :-)
Date: 14 Jan 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
uh oh.... Bella is in trouble now...
Author's Response:
Yes, unfortunately the next chapter is not a nice one :-(
Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Pretty damn scary - I like the way you've built this, the original Jacob is amplified (not that I'm a Jacob-hater so to speak, but I didn't like that no didn't mean no to him in Twilight and that he thought he could make her love him).
Author's Response:
Yeah, I feel the same way about Jacob. I don't hate SM's Jake, but I'm definitely team Edward and I didn't like how Jacob was always so pushy. I especially didn't like how he forced a kiss on Bella in Eclipse. That is an assault, no matter how you look at it, and that doesn't sit well with me. Still, although I did try to work from SM's Jacob, you will see that the Jacob in this story is MUCH worse than the original. He's pretty evil in this fic.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
hoyl crap, Jacob needs to be put down, given a distemper shot or something !!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol, yeah. Jacob is NOT nice in this fic. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
awesome =) =)
Team Edward !! ;P
please hurry with the next one =)
xoxo Alica
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you're enjoying! The next chapter will be up soon.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
so far so good, wondering how this will play out. Hope Bella remembered the phone.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm posting chapter 3 now.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I wish that Edward and Jacob could get along... but it just isn't in the cards for them....they both love Bella....
Author's Response:
Very true. That's why Bella decided she shouldn't see Jacob anymore. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
thanks seems good story
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm posting chapter 2 now! :-)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I read this story on Twilight Archives, and liked it. It's a hard one for me to read all in one go, because it's all too real for me and brings back bad memories if I read too much in one go. Nice to see you on TWCS now!
Author's Response:
Ah, yes, this story is also on Twilighted. I wasn't planning on posting here since the story is already so far in, but then I thought, why not? Lol. Yes, it is a very sensitive subject to read and write, but thank you so much for giving it a try. Unfortunately, I write from experience myself, and it took me a while to work up enough courage to actually continue with this once I started and then post it. But I'm glad I did. Thank you very much for the review and lovely rating!