Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Song For A Winter's Night
great chapter.... but yeah I agree he looses some points for not making sure she knew this was a date.... and I totally think he was trying to tell her something! Can't wait to see the rest of the date :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, he really should have told her! The rest of the date should be up soon!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 25 - You and I
It's definitely slow, but it's SOOOO good!!!! :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you don't mind the slow pace. I tried to make things as concise as they could be without losing the great interactions they have together. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 25 - You and I
Great chapter! Can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! It shouldn't long before the next one is out.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Three Doors
Oh no!!!! The dreaded trip & time apart! I'm not looking forward to this! :( I love that things are getting fixed with Rosalie.
Author's Response:
(laughs) I know, it's almost worse knowing it's coming, isn't it? I was glad she got things worked out with Rosalie too. I hated writing them being pissed at each other. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Three Doors
SO great!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Three Doors
great chapter... and I don't think she forgave too easily... they had been friends for so long and she apoligized and was sincere about it :) Can't wait to see more!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 23 - I've Fallen In Love With You
good chapter... gah I think that she would be surprised by his reaction if she told him... but then he is leaving and we still need to see what happens with Clarie right?! LOL Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.
Yeah, I agree, she'd be totally shocked if they actually sat down and talked about their feelings. But they're kind of being idiots right now. His trip and her meeting Claire are really going to shake them up.
I just posted ch. 24, hope you like it!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 23 - I've Fallen In Love With You
They are so cute helping each other with Thanksgiving, and I'm not just talking about the food...wink,wink
They are both so scared of taking that next step; at least, they are afraid to say it out loud becuase then it makes it real. They really do need a conversation soon, especially if Edward is leaving to study abroad...talk about bad timing for a new relationship. Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
(laughs) Glad you liked it!
You're definitely right they need to have a conversation soon. The trip really is going to be a huge stumbling block for them. Thanks for the review! And I just posted ch. 24!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 23 - I've Fallen In Love With You
Aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!! They just need to admit their feelings. He's going to leave & they won't admit their feelings & then they'll get into all sorts of trouble!!!!!! Can't wait to read what happens next! I love to hate the angst, but I can feel it in the air!
Author's Response:
(laughs) I am guessing you're getting frustrated with them. And yep, that's exactly what's going to happen. But, there are some really sweet moments between them in the next few chapters where they TRY to tell each other. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Somethin' Stupid
I think Edward has been dropping hints hardcore! he's definitely got some feelings :) fabulous chapter :)
More soon pleaseeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response:
I am so sorry, I apparently somehow missed replying to this review! Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it. You're right that he's been dropping hints and Bella is missing them. He does have feelings for her. :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Somethin' Stupid
Two great chapters! My favorite part of this chapter was... well... all the sexy times, obviously LOL, but seriously, I love that she finally figured out that she loves him!!! He totally lo es her, too, but I think he's afraid to tell her because he doesn't want to scare her away.
Author's Response:
I am so sorry, I apparently somehow missed replying to this review! Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it. You're absolute right that he's worried about her reaction. He can tell she's afraid to start a relationship.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Somethin' Stupid
I think that his feelings are changing... but without seeing his side... don't know if he is actually in love with her yet... but I am sure he is well on his wayt there too.... Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
I am so sorry, I apparently somehow missed replying to this review! Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 21 - What Are We Gonna Do
I definitely think that they are acting like a couple in this chapter. Especially Edward's reactions.
Sorry that I don't review as often as I should. But just know your story is amazing and I'm loving every minute of it :) More soon please.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I think you're absolutely right about the way their acting, and about Edward in particular.
I understand, sometimes it's hard to review every chapter of every story. I struggle with it myself. So I really do appreciate every review I get! Thanks for all of the nice compliments and I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 - What Are We Gonna Do
gah! sorry I haven't been reviewing... all the updates got shuffled to the spam box in my email and I didn't get them... so I just read from Chapter 18 to this one :)
Can't wait to see the next one.... seems like they are both getting in a little deeper than they intented to :)
Author's Response:
That's okay! I'm not always great with reviews either, but I'm working on it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 - What Are We Gonna Do
Love that they are acting like a couple!
Author's Response:
Now if only they would realize it, right? Thanks for the review!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:35 PM Title: Prologue and Chapter 1 - The Way We Met
Oh good!!! I was going to be very disappointed if you were finishing it already. I'm glad you have the story mostly written...it means a shorter wait between chapters for me! :) Always looking forward to your updates!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I am impressed with writers who can do it chapter by chapter, but it's just not the way my muse works.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Just Can't Get Enough
It was a very sweet chapter. Are we already coming up on the Epilogue? If so, what about his trip away?
Author's Response:
Thanks! No, we're not even close to the epilogue yet. I just like to make sure the chapters are in order long before I need to have them ready. It's roughly a 50 chapter story. The body of the story is completely written, and the epilogue is partially done, I just wanted to have it ready to go when I do need it.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Just Can't Get Enough
They are so in denial that they are falling for each other :)
I bet if Alice listed the attributes of a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship, and Edward and Bella wrote out what they do, they would be almost identical just without the official title.
I just hope when they do admit their love they don't get scared and run from it.
Author's Response:
(laughs) yes, they are. Although Edward's getting there faster than Bella.
You're absolutely right that they're acting like they're in a relationship, even if they're refusing to admit it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Just Can't Get Enough
Love it! These two are adorable!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Just Can't Get Enough
Gotta say I.am so excited.for claires arrival love drama and some odd arangments
Author's Response:
It won't be too much longer before Claire will arrive. Thanks for the review!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Be With Me
I had to review & tell you how much I am enjoying your story. I keep holding my breath waiting for the heartfail I know is going to come--please tell me you are a HEA kinda girl? I can totally see where Bella is coming from with her thoughts on a relationship. Between her parents and the fact that she is so young, I think she is being pretty realistic as far as not being ready for a long term thing. That being said, what our mind thinks and what our heart decides are often 2 different things! Please tell me there is hope for an eventual happy end?! Thanks for writing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I can absolutely promise that there will be a HEA for Edward and Bella. Getting there is going to be kind of rough, but yes, they will get there!
I'm glad you think Bella's concerns make sense, and she will start to realize that her head and her heart are in two different places.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Be With Me
Ok, the argument with Alice was a long time coming. I think Bella's reasoning was valid in her own head. She doesn't see Edward wanting anything more & she has watched as he pulls away if a girl seems too needy. I love your story! Keep it up, please!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Oh good! I am so glad you thought the argument with Alice was necessary. I had such a hard time with it. And I'm glad you think that her reasoning makes sense (at least from her perspective). It shouldn't be long before the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Be With Me
Looking forward to the next update! loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 08 Feb 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Ecstasy
I was surprised by Bella's reaction. She seems to be very confident in her relationship with Edward. I must say, I'm with Alice. I don't know how Bella kept from bitch slapping her! :) Interesting that she finally acknowledged her feelings. Loved the chapter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
She has acknowledged some of her feelings, but she's still a long way from being ready for a relationship.
It wasn't easy writing the scene with Alice, but I thought it was important.
Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Love Me Two Times
ok first I must apoligize for not reviewing every chapter... but I just had to keep clicking next to get the next chapter! :)
This story is AMAZING!!!! I am loving it soooo much.. can't wait to see more!! How long until Clarie comes into the picture and Edward leaves for Italy?
Kate :)
Author's Response:
It's okay that you didn't review each chapter, I know I do that when I get really into a story and just want to see what happens. I am so glad you're enjoying it.
To answer your questions about Claire and Edward, the next chapter is going to be Halloween. Edward leaves just after New Years, and Bella meets Claire that next week. So, that's about 10 more chapters!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Sunday Morning
Loved their weekend!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Lover
I am not sure why Bella is so reluctant .... Very hot chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. You'll find out soon why Bella is having such a hard time with the idea of a relationship!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11 - I Need to Say Goodbye
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Bad Boyfriend
I am not liking Rosalie at all!
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's pretty awful for a good portion of this story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Love Me Two Times
She totally has it bad!!!!! LOL! Loved it! :)
Author's Response:
(laughs) yes she does. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 - It's Over Now
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Burning For You
Very hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks! There will be a lot more lemons as the story continues! :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Hope Tomorrow Is Like Today
Really enjoyed this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Things You Said
:)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:06 PM Title: Prologue and Chapter 1 - The Way We Met
I like it so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's so nice to hear!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Sunday Morning
Another great chapter! Surprise weekend in a hotel... SOOOOOO HAWT!!!! :) I love that they talked about growing old together, I hope that comes to fruition. Looking forward to your next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I know, wouldn't you love a weekend in a hotel with Edward?
It's definitely going to come to fruition that they grow old together. Just give them time to figure things out!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Lover
I can't figure Bella out, other than she's afraid of commitment because of her parents???? It seems they're both really into eachother & should stop fighting it. I'm loving your story! I always look forward to your updates.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it! I was starting to wonder if anyone on here was reading the story. Good guess! Her parents are a HUGE reason why she's afraid of commitment. I am so glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks!
Date: 16 Jan 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 7 - It's Over Now
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Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 7 - It's Over Now
bien muy bien espero que Edward este enamorado de Bella
y de Rose creo que va a ser una perra
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Burning Up
por favor dime cada cuando vas a actualizar
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Things You Said
me encnata tu historia
actualiza pronto
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Burning Up
their interaction?....funny! i can't get what Rosalie is hinting...or maybe Rosalie will be trying to get Bella & Edward together? maybe Edward had a talk with Rosalie about Bella...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the interaction.
Your thoughts on what Rosalie was hinting at is really interesting. I won't spoil it, but it will become more clear as the story goes on just what it was.