Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter16 - 26th June 2010 - Island of Spetses - Greece
First things first, amazing story. It's nearly 0100 and I am still awake reading your story. Just a few little tid bits that may help you in the future, a Lat and Long reading only has the degrees, minutes and seconds, like a clock. So 10 38.64S 105 86.04E is all the numbers you need. And when your purposely sinking a boat, its called scuttling. But the info you have so far is amazing. Really loving the research you;ve put into the reality of they're situaiton. Keep up the great work, moving onto the next chapter now :-)
Glad you liked it. :) I can see exactly what you're saying on the Long and Lat, but when I wrote this story I'd based this part on some research into radar and sonar I'd been doing and the GPS tends to get a bit more exacting on military grade equipment, so used the reading from a simulator I'd been playing with. :) As for the scuttling, yep I can see you're point there too, but the intention isn't to scuttle the submarine, more so to use it as a diversion so that they can escape in one piece, hence the comments on pressurisation of the main cabin and the use of the wet entry. Obviously if I was totally evil, I could've made the seals on the wet entry hatch between those two afformentioned areas of the sub fail and... BOOM. However if I did that, it sort of kills the story dead and there wouldn't be much left of the sub to scuttle. Instead I chose to flood the ballast which would give them the chance to get out before it hits the surface and they can make a reasonably unseen get away. I hope you enjoy the rest! :o)
Date: 06 Nov 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 10 - 21st June 2010 - Volterra Italy.
Wow Bella is taking quite a beating and still hasn't told them anything. I am quite upset that they did not look for Edward further. I mean I cant believe that would do that in the real world, just say "Oh there is his gun and there is blood so he must be dead" yeah I dont think so. I would hope they would not stop until his body was found.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 25 - 5th August 2010 - Mclean, VA.
yayyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!! i had a pretty good idea that it was Mallory because-
1. Vic called the traitor a bitch, and how many females could be the traitor?
2. When Dawyer asked her for the file, I sealed my guesswork right then.
I know its not much of a guesswork.....lol................but, I loved your story. You did great without any lemons, which I am thankful for. Love the way you connected Cullens and Hales. And you don't have an idea of the relief I felt knowing your awesome story was complete.
gotta go now.........have an awesome story to read
Date: 27 Oct 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 - 15th June 2010 - Somewhere in the Pacific Northwest.
this is not good. i hope she is not there... i don't think so cause i know the 4 guys with her wouldn't be that dumb! i wonder who the spy is? lauren? hummmm or the big director..
Date: 22 Oct 2011 3:25 AM Title: Prologue
I really really enjoyed your story, but the ending! I never thought that you would kill them off - seriously? They have gotten out of everything else, couldn't you have let them get out of that one???? totally ruined it for me - I like HEA!
Date: 19 Oct 2011 9:33 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm not really surprised they died I kinda had it figured out when they were going down with the plane. I am sad that they didn't really get to have their HEA but in the end they did get to explore their relationship and were together till the end. I know ppl are going to be nasty to you in the reviews but I'm hoping its not that bad and that they keep in mind that even in real life we lose heroes. Had a blast reading this fic. Congratulations on the completion.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 9:14 PM Title: Epilogue
I am really sad that you killed them off.
I understand that that is your choice but it is not like we got to know any of the other characters intimately....so we could say..." Oh, well. but at least @#%$# is OK and happy."
I read Fan fiction to escape from real life and thus I avoid non HEA.
If I had know this....I dont think I would have read this story.
So I am just going to pretend that your story finished with the plane going down :)
All the best
Date: 19 Oct 2011 8:39 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow, I'm freaking speechless. I thought u were somehow going to saved them. My jaw hit the floor and couldn't close it. All in all. I thought theybwere going to walk in any minute. Oh wow. Great story btw. I thought it was brilliant even if u killed them off. *sniff
Date: 19 Oct 2011 7:07 PM Title: Epilogue
Though I'm sad that B & E died I do understand why you did it. I really enjoyed your story. I looked forward to each and every Saturday. When you went MIA, I was very worried and figured that RL just got the best of you. I'm was sorry to hear that you were in the hospital. I hope everything is ok now and that you are getting better. I hope you write another one really soon.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 33 - 6th September 2010 - End Game
NO WAY ! DONT LET THEM DIE PLEAAAAAAASE!!! DONT LET EDWARD AND BELLA DIE THEY DIDNT EVEN GET THEIR HAPPILY EVER AFTER! I MEAN JESUS THEY JUST SAVED THE FRIGGIN WORLD OR WHATEVER ... SHE WILING BROKE BONES IN HER BODY ! DONT LET THIS BE THE END AND DONT LET THEM DIE PLLEASE
Date: 18 Oct 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 32 - 6th September 2010 - Washington DC.
Great story. I started yesterday, and I just couldn't put it down, please I hope Edward and Bella jumped out of that freaking plane. I hope u came out with a brilliant escape for this part. Can't wait for more
Date: 16 Oct 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 30 - 22nd August 2010 - Colorado Springs, CO
I am so sorry you had to spend five weeks in hospital, but so so happy to have you back again - I was so worried, when I saw the new update alert all I could think was thank you god and it was not for the actual chapter : )