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Reviewer: glo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent, loved it. You totally captured Laurent.

Author's Response:

Thanks it was a writing challenge. i thought i would throw it out as a one shot for anyone interested in it. i needed to destress from edits for an hour. it worked wonderfully

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was um an intense lemon.  I always pictured the Denali girls to be very passionate like this.  I always considered Laurent to lust Irina but not love her - why do a favor like that for Victoria knowing what the Cullens meant to Irina and her family.  That to me is not love - it is using her.

You did capture him well.  I do wish he had loved her - if he had been a good boyfriend/mate/spouse whatever he wanted to be he would have stood beside Irina when the Volturi came and they would have come due to Edward's spring break trip. I always thought it should be been Victoria to go to the Volturi and not Irina.


Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes, I think you did.  So Laurent wants the Denali coven for his own huh?  Interesting!!!


Reviewer: samsamr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it very much ;) thanks!

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