Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent, loved it. You totally captured Laurent.
Thanks it was a writing challenge. i thought i would throw it out as a one shot for anyone interested in it. i needed to destress from edits for an hour. it worked wonderfully
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was um an intense lemon. I always pictured the Denali girls to be very passionate like this. I always considered Laurent to lust Irina but not love her - why do a favor like that for Victoria knowing what the Cullens meant to Irina and her family. That to me is not love - it is using her.
You did capture him well. I do wish he had loved her - if he had been a good boyfriend/mate/spouse whatever he wanted to be he would have stood beside Irina when the Volturi came and they would have come due to Edward's spring break trip. I always thought it should be been Victoria to go to the Volturi and not Irina.