Date: 18 Apr 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think this story is great. I "feel" so much emotion whenever I read about your chacters. Keep up the good work and am looking forward to the next chapter. Its such a nail biter at times, but I do love it!
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
hahahaha! now THAT'S one tough cookie! :D
Date: 05 Apr 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella has spirit. She is tired of this idiot controling the situation. She knows that bullies are really cowards.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
well i hope that he ran after her after she left his parents house! cant wait to see what happens next with the hostage situation
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
good chapter....
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm not sure who is the crazies.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
Whoa, where did Bella get that brass set of cajunas?? Holy Shitballs!
I love this story BB!!
*hugs*
Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Man, Bella just won't listen to you will she???? haha.....very good chapter, I do enjoy "looking back" into their history....as I keep saying (and probably will continue to say), I can so feel the emotions that you are putting into your characters. I felt Bella's pain from 8 yrs ago and what she is feeling in the present!
Keep up the good work and thanks for this story!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
ooooooooooo my GOD!!!!
please please update sooon cnt get enough
of any of your stories they are just tooo good
:D x x
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
WOW, this is a different E&C. I'm glad the kids stood up to them. Great chapter!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor current and flashback Bella. Good for Edward for sticking up fro Bella with his parents (and Alice adn Emmett too). I'm nervous about the crazy guy who has captured Bella and her classroom but am hoping it will all work out okay.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, they sure have had a rocky relationship. Even from the start.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
well i would leave after his nasty ass mom ! keep the updates comming
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope that Edward can save Bella and the kids and I hope they make up. I like seeing into their past. I hate that Carlisle and Esme are so cruel to the people that their children love.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good Chapter....
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
Needless to say, "Oh-oh, spaghetti-o!!" - poor StupidWard!! :-(
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
omg omg omg omg
love love love
plz update asap cnt stop readin this story x
Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
They just need to pack and go back to school. Maybe if they loose their kids they will realize how great they really are.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
*cries*
Well at least I know he finds her... thank god for that!
Now, for the shitstorm in the present... fuuuuuuuuuck!
*hugs*
Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
This story is EXCELLENT. I can so feel the RAW pain he is feeling against Phil and the ANGER he felt w/ his parents. Makes me want to join him in his going after all of them! My heart is breaking AND ITS ONLY A STORY!!!
GREAT JOB!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm just speechless...
in a good way. ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
WHAT. A. COMPLETE. AND. UTTER. BASTARD!! :-@
Date: 18 Mar 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
These poor kids are never going to forget this crazy man. They are going to need years of therapy.
Edward should have warned Bella that his parents were world class snobs. Did they not know she was coming?
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
That man is a real nut case!
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Date: 17 Mar 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
now im wondering how they even got married if his parents show the dislike for her at the beginning! cant wait to see what happens next
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THank you:)
Date: 17 Mar 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter. I wonder how Bella's relationship with the elder Cullens is now. Carlisle seemed nice enough but Esme, she was so mean! Edward was very sweet to her though (which is why she and everyone else loves him :))
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good Chapter....
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Date: 16 Mar 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great update.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
OH GAWD! So, you are going to let us suffer again until we find who Edward snapped at at the end of last chapter?! Ugh...
*goes into teenage drama fit*
OMG! like, my life is, like, so freakin OVER~! I needed to totally know who was like getting yelled at, like, you know, by Eddie, hotness personified! Anyways, like, now I dont know and I cant go on, like, ever!
*slaps self*
Yikes, hopefully I have retained some dignity. Enough to say~ Well done on this chapter BB! I had to raise an eyebrow at Ma and Pa Cullen, but you have a plan and reason for everything, so I cant wait for the next chapter!
*hugs*
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Date: 15 Mar 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am glad that they are finding out more about this crazy person. How many hours have past? The young Edward and Bella are so cute.
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[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
WOW, great chapter!
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Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm nervous for Bella because Phill seems crazy and abusive (well, duh. I'm so articulate some times). he doesn't seem like a nice guy and all Edward wants to do is protect his wife. Can't wait to read some more!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome story! I can't wait to read the next chapters :)
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Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Really good chapter! I am now on pins & needles waiting to find out who showed up at the school and has ticked off Edward!?!
Am really enjoying this story!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
OK, great chapter, had to have their firsties, of course!!
WHO walked up to Ed and Alie and them that would cause Eddie to curse at them like that?
Cliffies are evil... *growls at you*
*gets smacked on the nose with a rolled up newspaper by Peter*
Sorry for growling BB.
I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
*hugs*
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Thank you, Sweeite:)
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great update.
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Thank you:)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
This man must have just lost his child in a court. I hope they are checking this out and cross referencing with the children at the school. Where is Penelope Garcia of Criminal Mind when you need her? This man is go crazy that I don't know how long he will last without a death. Bella can't take much more abuse. The kids screaming and crying only makes it worse. Angela can't seem to calm them down like Bella does.
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*picks up phone and calls the BAU* This is the BAU, we can't come to the phone because we are busy, making a TV Show. Let us get back to you. *hangs up the phone* Dammit!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow that was a roller coaster ride. The beginning was sweet loved it, but the second half was intense. I can´t wait to find out who his boy is. Would the real Mrs. Gribble please stand up, so he can stop kicking Bella´s arse! LOL! Great chapter, Hon!
Krazi
xoxo
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, my GOD!!!
Who is this freaked out man?!?!?!
Poor Bells :(
BB, this story gonna have a HEA? *gives puppy eyes*
*hugs*
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What's your defintion of a HEA????
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Boy this chapter was fun but then intense! You are doing a good job---I can "FEEL" the love, then pain, anger and anguish they are all feeling. GREAT Job!!!
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Thank you!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
i hope edward can step up to the plate for this one!
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THank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm really getting into this story. I like how you've written it too, with the chapter half present day/half eight years ago.
<3 it!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKK!!! What a cliffie!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
So sweet of Edward to help her unpack. And then later he falls asleep as he thinks of her chocolate brown eyes... *sigh*
Beautiful, bb.
And so funny when Edward said that nobody should use baby talk with their girlfriend!! ROFL!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Cool flashback. I loved my freshman year of college, too, lol.
C'mon, Mr. Edward, come save the day! Cute nickname. ;)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
These two like each other, but neither one is brave enough to admit it.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
well in a way i hope everything works out for them cant wait to see what happens next
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really like the way to tell this story from the present to the pass. Nice touch!
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Once again, another very good chapter. I can so feel his pain, and regret! I am being sucked right into this story. You are doing a great job, keep it up!!!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG! *sobs*
The present is nerve wracking! Eddie shouldnt have been such an ass. taking for granted what you have as a privelage... he is finding that out first hand that he is a douche.
And for the flashback... nice :) maybe he should remember how it all started, then maybe he will appreciate it more.
This is some tense shit BB!!! ;)
Of course, I love it!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sweetie:)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
This guy is crazy. I bet Edward is about to go ballistic. I hope some one is holding him back. Bella means everything to him.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Whoa! That was intense! I love how we´re getting back story and present day all at the same time. I am so dying to know who this crazy gunman is! Can´t wait for the big reveal! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
So far so good... Where´s Rosie? She´s the only one missing from the gang. Hopefully, she´ll make an appearance soon and the group will be complete. Great chapter!
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She's coming:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yes of course I´m up for the ride, even though it looks like a bumpy one... I´m gonna hang on tight! Lol! Loving where it´s going, can´t wait to find out who this deranged man is! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm.... somthing old... something NEW! Look what I found a new story from you! One that started out great might I add. So, I´m off to find out what´s going on the classroom and holding my breath, hoping no one is hurt. Love it so far, but of course you knew that already! Lol! Great start!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
omg omg
eeeekkkk cnt wait love it x x
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
well thats not good! cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved It I think this gunman is a crazy mofo lol but this is soooo good can't wait to seee what Edward has to say to him I am loving their past as well .XO The new site is awesome!!!!!!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
You are doing a great job with this story---am excited to be finding out about their history...... Also can't wait until Edward the present gets to go into action.....thanks for doing this story!
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[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it.I just hope Edward can save her and they they can work things out .I have faith in you BBC you never fail to gie us our HEA xo
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Thank you, sweetie:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Holy crap!!! That was scary, and now you leave us with a gun to her forehead?! Eesh, my blood pressure is through the roof now!
:)
Love it BB!
*hugs*
*runs over to fanfictionaddiction and registers* :)
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I feel so bad for Edward. I know he loves Bella so much. They are just going through a rough patch like every couple goes through and then this creep threatens her life. Now he feels so guilty. The problem isn't all his fault, but he starts thinking it is because he loves her so much. He fogets her faults.
Author's Response:
Exactly, they are both at fault here:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is great! I will definitely vote for your Diva. LOL
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Thanks, SWeetie!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
well i hope he realizes that he such a duche to her cant wait to see how it began and where it ends
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Thank you:)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
ooooooo
cnt wait
loving it x x
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Time to go vote like crazy!!!!
I am definitely sticking by you on this one BB!! I love this story, I love the way it is written, I look forward to the updates on it :)
Good Luck in the Twinklings!
*hugs*
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Thank you, Sweetie:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
You have me on pins and needles.
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Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
good start :) interesting plot can't wait to read more
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Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Who could not fall for the Cullens. They make you feel welcomed at the first meeting. I don't know why Edward and Bella are argueing, but Edward will always save Bella. No matter what he loves her. He always will.
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Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
omg omg
love love love
cnt wait for more x x
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[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
BB, I am trying real hard to hold myself together so that I dont become too impatient...
but holy cow, this is a scary one!
The flashback was beautiful, but the present makes me want to cry.
Love it BB, I cant wait to read more of this story!
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
I always love reading how these two loves meet!! Thanks for putting that in---I know you said the whole story will be in flashbacks, but thanks for putting that in right away! You are doing a great job---KEEP IT UP!! :-)
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[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I am so excited about this story. It is off to a great start. Update soooonnn!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
omg omg omg
love already
cnt wait for you to update x x
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Thank you:)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more of this story.
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Thank you:)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
The 1st chapter sounds really good. Can't wait for the next.
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Thank you:)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your stories. You are my favorite author. Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you :)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like another GOOD one!! I have no idea how you have time to do these great stories!! Please keep up the good work!!!
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I don't know either :) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it !!!! I can't wait to see what happens at the school with the crazy gunman and how Edward and Bella got into the mess they are in .I know you will make this another great story so I will just sit back and enjoy the ride .
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
GASP!!!!!
OMG, great beginning BB!!!!!
I cant to see this one play out! :)
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far. AH right?
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Thank you:) Yes, AH
Date: 08 Jan 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow so it seems they have come to a crossroads in life and are wondering is it worth it anymore. now it seems they will be in a situation that will make them relax yes they love each other and they things we have been fighting about lately are minimal. or it is time we go our separate ways. so it should be interesting to see what happens
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Thank you:)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start. Cant wait to see where it leads ....
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Thank you:)