[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad you didn't make it easy on Carlisle & Esme. I hate when authors do that. I'm curious now if they ever did make any sort of peace and if they're in their childrens' lives now.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
wow
love it, BB
Date: 24 Oct 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
loved the chapter im looking forward to the next chapter !
Date: 21 Sep 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Carlisle and Esme are still both reprehensible to me as parents. Hope the gang doesn't take out their anger on Bella. Now onto present day, all the kids are safe, now lets get Bella rescued ASAP, ok!
Date: 12 Sep 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think it is time for the police to come rushing in and save Bella.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
NOT FAIR!!! Come on Betty!
Date: 06 Sep 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Good Chapter.....
Date: 05 Sep 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
...Betty... lol
What a cliffhanger. Urgh.. Can't wait to see what's going to happen in both timelines!
Date: 05 Sep 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
lookign foward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
I believe in you, but that was just evil to end a chapter that way!
Thank you for the update. I do hope we will find out why Edward has been such an asshole to Bella? She was thinking divorce before this situation happened.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Gah what a bad place for a cliff hanger! I hope you're able to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
*clenches eyes shut having faith in you*
love, you BB. I dont get to say that enough to you lately, I am in a rough place... I will try harder, especially on FB.
*hugs*
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
Please hurry and update! this was a huge cliffie! i also hope that you show us more of Alice and Jasper at the justice of the peace (when Esme, Carlisle and Bella enter). Great chapter...patiently waiting the next one!
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad you don't let us hanging and continue the story ^~
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
uh, quite a fascinating beginning! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
Shit Bella! What did you do?!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't believe she got them there.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great job!! :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
So THIS monstrosity is the cliffie you mentioned on the boards?!?!
Dangit BB!!! *hugs you hard*
Cliffie are Evil, like shiny space penguin armies! *flashes back to Neopet days*
*snickers at own stupidity*
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good Chapter......
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
damn! awesome chapter! hope Edward really does get his head out of his ass after this!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my gosh, the beginning of this chapter had me in tears! I could SO feel Edwards pain and the fear and the hope from the little boy. I could even feel Rose's anger over the phone! Then nicely you throw in the humor from "Seven Years Ago". Thanks for the update. You are doing a great job w/ this story--and all your stories actually!
What are the names of your books? I want to read those too!!! Be sure to tell us!
Author's Response:
Two of them are posted here on TWCS, I entered them into the Romance original contest, Angel's Heart and What Should Have Been. Both are about 13 chapters in, and hopefully I will be able to complete them and get them publshied through the house here.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
im glad that in the end she got edwards and alices paretnst there but i think it would casue more problems
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter...I'm wondering what will happen to Bella. I also can't wait to read more of the flashback. Maybe Bella convienced Carlisle and Esme to change? Can't wit for an update!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
As a teacher of younger children myself, no there is no way in the world i could have chosen just two children to stay with me. It would be just too impossible.
I wonder what will happen. Can't wait to see Edward's POV.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
want more please hoping for more soon
Date: 21 Jul 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
well im glad that she got all the kids out and excited to see what happens next
Date: 21 Jul 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
i dont think that i could ever make that choice. love it and can't wait for more
Date: 21 Jul 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
I never could have picked. I would give my own life rather. That is something she would have to live with forever. Poor Bella, I am hoping Edward rushes in to help soon.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella should not sacrifice herself. She also should think of Edward. He won't be able to live without her. He will blame himself.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Once again, I am staring at the screen open-mouthed...you drop some really good hints about who his baby mama is...
I am really disliking Carlisle and Esme too...jerks...
Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
I won't cry, I won't cry, I won't cry. That's my mantra
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
Man, I should tear myself away from this and get some work done...but I just can't :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...you sure do know how to grab your audience! I love this already and my heart is literally in my throat...
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am so glad you updated!! I was missing this story! Thanks for giving us info on how/why Edward became a police officer! I had a feeling it was/ b/c his parents cut him off!
You are so right, there is no way I could have picked two kids---the pain she/they were all feeling was so REAL, I can tell by reading what EXACTLY they are all dealing with---which is what makes this a GREAT story!!!
Can't wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great update! I don't think aneone could make that choice. :)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
i freaking love this story!!!!! please keep up the great work :)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Definitely hating Dwyer more but the parents will definitely not be voted as parents of the year. They are verbal abusers and manipulators, Dwyer is a scumbag childabuser and probable murderer. I am wondering if Edward resents Bella now for the choice he made of being with her over the easy money?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
plz plz plzupdate soon cnt wit for morerly i cnt loli am complete hooked onto this story :)x Lil_Rebel x
Date: 13 Jun 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
They did the right thing. Many kids pay their way through school. It is harder, but they own it. It just takes longer. I give Edward credit for being as calm as he is. I know he wants to storm right in and take out the guy, especially after his comments. I am glad that they have gotten at least a few moments to talk. It has to end soon.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think i pretty much hate the Cullens and Dwyer equally. The Cullens because they are willing to throw away their relationship with all of their children because they don't approve of their signifgant other even though they don't know them. Dwyer is just a wild animal who needs t to be put down.
can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love the update! Brilliant story! :)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
well i hope that in the end they get to the bottom of this before he looses bella!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
When will we know why Edward went from worshiping Bella to resenting her?
Great chapter and thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, who do I hate more? That is a toughie!
Well, I would have to say Dwyer at the moment. Carlisle isnt my favorite person at the moment and Esme is drunk, bad on her, so I will say Dwyer for now :)
Love the chapter though, I cannot wait til they snipe Dwyer through the window *snickers*
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good Chapter......
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad you gave us another chapter!! Have been missing this story! I have to say, its a toughie for me too---who I hate more, parents or Dwyer! Can't wait for next chapter---you are doing a great job.......keeping us on pins and needles!
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hahahaha - I love Rose taking on Edward - that was beautiful :)
Dwyer just needs to die........
Thanks so much and looking forward to an update!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah - glad they worked things out :) Like I had any doubt,,,*wink
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love that Bella stood up to him!!! And I loved the moment between her and Rose....friends are a treasure :)
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Bella!!!! Well Esme is an even bigger piece of shit that the kids dad at the school!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
well holy shit - he is a real piece of work isn't he? And Esme is such a bitch!!!!!
Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 15 May 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love it!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
The story is brilliant!
Date: 14 May 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant start!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
*sigh*........he makes me smile :)
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh god your killing me here! Mmmmmm snuggling in bed with Edward...sigh:)
And this gunman needs to learn some manners himself! A first class prick!
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
*drools* I'd love to walk through a door and see Edward sitting there........
Thanks for the chapt!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love the chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
hahahaha - can you imagine Alice as your dorm mate? How fun would that be?
Thanks for the awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhh butt-puckering first chapter! Can't wait to read more - off I go!!!
Thanks so much <3
Date: 13 May 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good Chapter....
Date: 13 May 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hate to say this but maybe they needed something in their lives to make them realize how much they loved each other. Now this is a littel extreme, but it is causing them to think of the important things and not the petty things of daily life.
Date: 13 May 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
well i hope that these kids can last! keep the updates comming and i hope in the end that edward and bella can make it !
Date: 13 May 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very Good chapter---shows the love Bella has for those kids and her friend. I am glad you were able to update! Am looking forward to seeing what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
That guy is a nut case. What did he think!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh holy hell and shit! Kicking Bella doesnt bode well for that ass...
*sharpens fangs with werewolf knife*
Peter and I will toss his ass in a pit of newborns!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Phew... I finally got all caught up! Yippie! This had really been intense! I hate Esme and Carlisle by the way! Just wanted to put that out there! Lol! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
plz update soon
i need my fix of this story
i'm hooked!!! x x
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
absolutely love this story!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing chapter! I always look forward to your updates :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward and Bella knew from the beginning that their relationship was going to have chalenges. They just have to stick together.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
This Esme is a bit*h!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Good Chapter.....
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
well i hope that they can get them all out
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
:)
I would love to know why Edward started to treat Bella like shit?
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow, I would hate to be the object of concentration in a room full of angry parents... yikes! Poor ED!
Awesome chapter BB!!!
*hugs*