Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow what had bella done
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
oh god i pray someone help poor bella she suffered enough with the beatings she hasd endured from this man don't let her get raped
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
i hate the parents and dwyer all three
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh dear god those precious children are so scared .bella is being put through hell right now. but surely something will happen soon
Date: 14 Jul 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
trhe tears again and the amazing descriptive sex man yuou are killing me
Date: 14 Jul 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
he really is aderanged prick isn't he
Date: 14 Jul 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh god i can't control the tears
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
poor bella he is using her as someone to bear the blunt of his anger
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh god imagine that fitst kiss i but her heart stopped or missed a beat
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh god don't hurt bella
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
edward feels the pull toward bella his heartis about to feel the most amazing love around
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh god he is a mess, but he would move the world if possible to save bella, even the disagreement he had with her this morning he has put to the back of his mind he only needs her safe
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh yes you definatwely got me hooked thias has my blood pumping
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
The poor things losing a baby is the hardest thing in the world. I lost my first baby at 13 weeks, I was lost for so long. But 2 year later I got pregnant again and now have a beautiful 9 year old.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
They had such a sweet wedding. I can't believe Rose would be so cruel to Edward at this moment. The problems they were having at home would not have changed what happened in that classroom. That crazy man would have still come into the room. If she wanted to help, why did she talk and not accuse Edward weeks before. Edward and Bella's friends and family should have had an intervention and forced them to open up and face the pain of loosing a child. Now is not the time with Bella in a coma like state.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Another great chapter.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
So glad you are back here. Enjoyed this story so much.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to more
Date: 27 May 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
While I liked the back story. Your ending was just wrong. making us wait like this is killing me. I guess on the bright side we know she's not dead yet. If she was dead I would guess she would be seeing herself and everyone else.
This is a great story, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 22 May 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward just needs to stay close to Bella. She will know he is there and that he loves her. He will give her strength to heal.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella & Rosalie had a good time..........
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
wow.Esme is a piece of work
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
ok clearly Phil is one crazy mother...........What about Esme & Carlise, I couldn't believe they treated Bella that way.....My eyes were watery when I read that....What is there problem?...on to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well that was special......Poor Jessia ....lol...the girl is deranged.one dance , and she thought that adonis wanted her........loll.on to the next chapter
Date: 21 May 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Poor B having to deal with hateful inlaws. Loved it...looking forward to more.
Date: 21 May 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Missed you. Great update.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well alright...this man is clearly deranged.....what is Edward going to do?.Weher the hell is his kid......do they even go to the school?..or is the child so scared that they are sitting in the class with a disguise on.....lol.....maybe the child went to the school another time...I'm onto the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
that Alice ......she is something.........very cute story so far.on to my next chapter
Date: 21 May 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, want to see more of the day to day part!! please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yes Bella Edward & Jasper are on there way!!!.How did Edward know it was Bella class?.um....he just knows his wife to well....lol
Date: 21 May 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for another chapter.
Date: 21 May 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
looking forward to more
Date: 03 May 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was just wondering if you were going to continue with this story?
Author's Response:
I am. I had to take a short break because I had two books due into my editors by the end of May. One is done and in and the other is 3 chapters away from being complete. Then, I will be able to work on this and all of my current stories.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Squeal!!! lol Really good, intense.
Date: 12 Mar 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella is so proud and stubborn. She could never just accept his love. But he never gave up. Bella needs to remember this when she gets better. Edward and her might have been having some troubles before the stand off, but he as always loved her. She has to forgive him for the silly stuff that was going on the past few weeks, because does it really matter after what she has been through. Edward loves her. She needs to remember that fact as she is laying in that bed healing. She can't hold grudges and be stubborn.
Date: 05 Mar 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, didn't realize you had updated. That was a tough chapter. Please post again soon. great story
Date: 26 Feb 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope she makes it. Because if she doesn't Edward isn't going to be able to go on.
I loved the way Edward proposed. It was sweet in a off the wall kind of way.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for updating. I kept checking back every few days. Sounds like she doesn't have a spine injury so walking won't be a problem when Bella awakens. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Poor teacherElla and copWard!! :-(
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2012 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh my - I love this story and I have been hooked on it from the first chapter. I know that you are really busy, but I appreciate and love each chapter, so thank you for this one!
Michele
Date: 24 Feb 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good Chapter......
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks for continuing the story!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
Don't break my heart for to long, please. Great story. See you next time.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh she'd better pull through or Edward would never forgive himself.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome story!
Date: 23 Feb 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to thenext chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
I swear I started salivating when I saw this update in my email! )
I thought this chapter was GREAT! Very emotional! I cried right along with Ed, as I always do with your stories. They always touch me, BB.
Loved it! I hope you arent letting stress get to you. Writing is your passion, and readers are privileged to read your work. You write for yourself, it is up to you alone to decide to share it with the audience. Never let anyone tell you different.
*hugs*
Date: 01 Feb 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Can't wait for more. Congrats on the book!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aw man, you left a cliffe from hell. Please post again soooooon!!!!!! I need to know that everyone will be ok even though it is fiction.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Such awesomness!!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Good Chapter....
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Ugh a cliffhanger! :) Hope you update soon.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
This is my favorite fic, I have told you that before ;)
And that was amazing! She got shot? Oh no!
I am gonna worry!
Great update BB :)
*hugs*
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Another great chapter. I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 29 Jan 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Date: 09 Jan 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
It is about tme they go in there and get Bella. They have wasted so much time. It is a good thing Bella is a strong person.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you so much for this chapter and it was well worth the wait! Can't wait for the new book!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Who do I hate more? At the moment, I think I gotta go with the Cullens!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
It's a shame a knife wasn't included in one of the sandwiches.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well God, who could blame her? I'd have left too.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
Holy shit...the cullens are mean!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
So sweet that they were each other's first. Can't wait to find out who the hell Edward was pissed to see at the school.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
The wet dry humping was steamy. Great chapter. I hope someone pops a cap in that guy's dome sooner rather than later.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love how you're telling two stories at once. Must be a daunting task. I can barely keep up with one story of my own! Great job
Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved how they met. : )
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Outstanding start! I just found this today and couldn't wait to dive in. I love your stuff and am looking forward to this one.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
I hope the team gets in there in time to save Bella before that lunatic does more damage. Edward will kill him!!! Please don"t make us wait to long to find out what happens!!! :)
Date: 03 Jan 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Fabulous chapter, now, back to the present day situation please.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for the next ch!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Brilliant story!
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope you bring out the next chapter soon. I love this story.
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
good Chapter.....
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to the next chatper
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh please no more waiting. I found this little gem and I cannot get enough. I love that you left it were you did the next chapter is gonna be a real ringer though, at least I hope so
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
*chuckles* Evil? You? Nah, its just when the cliffies drag you to the dark side...
Great chapter! I was on the edge of my pillow when they were getting into position! Whoa!
Love it, BB! :)
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
On ne sait jamais si ce n'est la dernière fois...
je vais aller lire sur fanfiction pour être capable de laisser des review avec mon ipad. bye
Date: 30 Nov 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
In the past segment, Bella was a real bitch to Edward. There was no reason for her to act like that to him. As a person who usually got A s on papers and test, you can't expect people to get excited about another A. All they do is acknowledge it and go on with life. I was the one who wanted straight A s in school. They were proud of me, but they would have said about they same thing as Edward said. They would have said more if I didn't get an A. They knew I worked hard for my grades. I worked so hard because I wanted to get the results. Bella does the same thing and she needs to realize if she doesn't want to work so hard don't do it. The world will not end if she gets a B. Edward will still love her and she might be a happier person. She sounds miserable now. She can't even enjoy being around him when that is what she wants, because she is acting horrible to him over a comment about a grade. Sounds stupic to me.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no i hope Edward can rescue her soon.
There relationship is interesting. When you go into there past they seem to of had a difficult time. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Date: 27 Nov 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good Chapter....
Date: 27 Nov 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
loved the chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope we get another update before the holidays, but I certainly understand if you don't.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow! This was a great chapter! So they had problems in the beginning... everyone does!
I cant wait to see what happened to make it this bad so far in the future...
Love it, BB!!!
*hugs*
Date: 30 Oct 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
okay now, Great story. I waited for you to get this far, before I started to read. I am hoping you will update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) next update will be a couple weeks, Real life is a bit insane right now:)
Date: 30 Oct 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella trying to make them stay together as a family. Bad parents and all. She knows the value of family, better than they all do.
Author's Response:
She really does...
Date: 30 Oct 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
ahh now I get why you keep going back. TO show Bella the nasty Cullen parents. Bella tried to reason with him about not throwing them away for her.
Author's Response:
To understand where they are now, we have to learn where they were then:)
Date: 30 Oct 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
You never know when those words you say could be the last time you speak to one another. So YOU have to remember to count and sometimes not speak. Just say have a nice day instead of screw you asshole. Like you want to.
Author's Response:
Wise words:)
Date: 30 Oct 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good Chapter....
Date: 24 Oct 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
loved it! can wwwait for more :)
Date: 24 Oct 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love the story!
Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great! An update! But never enough - Can't wait to read more of your story :D
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am so glad that you did not let him slink their way back into their childrens lives.
I do hope that Bella does not get sexually abused by the insane man. I wish that Edward would be able to kill me.
Thank you for the update. I hope that life slows down for you.