Date: 12 May 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 36
I love this story. I hope the next chapter doesn't take as long to get out.
Date: 12 May 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, love this story and hope you will post again soon.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 36
Does Edward realize that was their first kiss in months? I think he needs to be made aware of that if not.
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it really hope they can work it out
Date: 19 Apr 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 35
u got me crying but i love it
Date: 18 Mar 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 35
God they have suffered so much. I hope that they get something good in their lives soon. I hope that they can start rebuilding their marriage and their love soon. I love this story and am completely invested in their lives.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
Looking forward to more
Date: 17 Mar 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 35
They sure have been through hell and back!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 34
you had me in tears with the whole baby thing, so far so good, can't wait to read more of this, it's addictive
Date: 24 Feb 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yay!!! She's getting feeling back in her feet that is a good start!!! :)
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 34
Bella has every right to be pissed off and HATE Esme and Carlisle and I can't blame her at all. I know she's scared and upset and I get that. It's understandable. I'm happy that she did go see Angela and Ben's baby. That they named the baby after her father and Charlotte, that's the sweetest thing and the fact they want Edward and Bella to be the Godparents, that's very nice and thoughtful of them. I really hope that they accept. And I'm ecstatic that Bella's got some feeling in her toes! Things are looking up there! I hope the progress continues and she's not permanently paralyzed. Thanks so much for sharing. I love this story!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh God. I have a horrible sinus infection so crying my eyes out is a very bad thing. Oh this chapter had me crying like a baby.
See getting up and moving was what she really needed. Now that the swelling is going down and her body is healing maybe she can start to heal her mind as well. Hopefully she will start letting the others in.
Okay this may be a really weird question and I don't know if it's something you even thought about but did they preserve Bella's eggs? A friend of mine was in a horrible car accident when we were in our early 20's. There was so much damage to her hips, pelvic area and stomach that they ended up having to do a hysterectomy. But the doctors preserved her overlies then removed her eggs to be frozen. 3 years ago her sister become her serigate and she is now the proud mother of twin boys. Her sister in law has offered to carry for them again if they would like to try for another baby. I was just wondering because these types of things happen all the time. And Bella seems to have so many people that love her and I'm sure would be willing to give Bella and Edward that gift.
Author's Response:
I'll just say this to your questions: It's one of the avenues in which I am considering following. I see several options for them and that is one of them.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm glad that Bella went to see Angela and the baby. I'm sure it was hard for her and Edward to do. I think going there helped her to think of something else and not her legs. Sometimes her mind over thinks thinks things and that might have been holding her back. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 34
Omg do not wait too much longer for another chapter. It gets good the. U cut us off. Ahhh need more
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 34
looking forward to more
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
A great chapter. I can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
I hope they can get through this.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 2nd which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 30 not 33!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
Date: 01 Feb 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 33
ahh, you made me cry.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
Wow, this chapter is very emotional. Several times I just wanted to cry. I absolutely hate Carlisle and Esme in this story. I don't understand how people can be that cruel. It's just mind boggling. I feel for Alice, Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie that Bella doesn't want her to see them, but I understand where she's coming from too. Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 33
Reading this chapter was hard, but had to be done. I can only imagine how hard it was to write.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 33
Looking forward to more
Date: 26 Jan 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is so wrong to think Edward won't love her. She has been betten down in so many ways I hope that she will get a happily ever after soon.
I was expecting Bella would lose the baby that was already known, but to never be able to have another is devestating. I hope that after they get through Bella's latest health scare that they could adopt or find someone to carry a baby for them.
Date: 15 Jan 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
The last two chaps were so heartbreaking. :( Keep it coming.. lol :)
Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 32
Looking forward to more
Date: 10 Jan 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
UH OH. WHAT THE HELL DID ESME DO TO HER?! Poor Bella! First she's upset over not being able to use her legs and doesn't want to see family. I get that. I hope she's not permanently injured. Now, the flashback...If Esme pushed her down the stairs...UGH. I can totally see her shove Bella and in her clumsiness, she falls. I DO NOT LIKE Edward's parents. UGH. Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG if I could catch you. NOOOOO I need more....
Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
Leaving readers with a cliffy is torture! Update soon!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31
WTF!!!!!!! Yes you better run and run far far away....run forest run.............Wow didn't see that coming....You better hurry up and post the next chapter.............Anne-Marie
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 31
Well that's an intresting turn of evnts Looking forward to more
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
Now you need to update! Esme pushed her??? This is called torture in some cultures. Worst cliff hanger ever.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
I can't believe you ended it there.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 31
Fuck! Sorry but there was no other word I could use to describe this chapter. I hope Esme didn't push her. Okay logically I know she didn't. Edward would have her in jail for a long time if that had been the case. But I can see Bella turning away from her and Esme grabbing her arm to stop her only for Bella to lose her footing and falling. God this is so sad.
As bad as Bella's condition is at least they are together. Edward is just going to need a very tough skin to get through the next few weeks to months. Especially if Bella never gets the use of her legs back. But I'm taking it as a good sign that Bella hasn't kicked Edward out of the room yet. But I'm sure that's coming at some point. Hopefully Edwards won't listen though.
I love this story. Even if it tears my heart out. Lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
BB, what?.....
I stare at the words, not comprehending what is written across the screen.
Did she? Did she just?...
Did Esme just become MORE of the dog shit on a kids shoe?!
Oh, I cannot WAIT for this one to be explained... I have an urge to backhand Esme in the next story I see her in!
*huffs and stomps off*
;) Loved it, BB *hugs*
Date: 05 Jan 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
I never put the two Angelias together in the story until now. I just never thought of it. I'm glad she's awake. Even if she can never walk again at least they are back together. But I fear this is going to put a whole new strane on both of their fragil emotions. Bella no doubt will feel even more inadequate. I know I felt horribly inadequate after my miscarriage thinking I was less of a women because I couldn't protect my unborn baby. Edward is going to feel even more guilt about not being able to protect Bella better.
I really love this story and am glad that they have each other again.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 30
She's awake! Yay! She's paralyzed! Boo! LOL
Date: 03 Jan 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 30
I hope it is just spinal compression. Bella would hate to feel needy and she would if she couldn't walk. She would not let anyone else in a wheelchair feel this way, but she would feel this way about herself. It is Bella's way.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
she is awake, thank you
Date: 03 Jan 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm so glad that she finally woke up, but that sucks that she can't feel her legs. I hope that it's not permanent. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 03 Jan 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
OMG, really you had to stop right there?? Ugh............love the story
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 30
you're not gonna make her paralyzed are you?????????
Date: 03 Jan 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 29
absolutely love this and cant wait for more!
Date: 31 Dec 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 29
They are all better off without their parents. They are so cruel and I don't understand how a mother can crush her children's spirit so many times. Parents make mistakes, but these two can't seem to learn from them. They seem to enjoy watching they hurt, sad, and mad faces of their children.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 29
Knowing that something happens to the baby I don't know if I'm happy or sad. I'm happy because of course you are when someone's having a baby. But I can't help feeling the overwhelming sadness that the baby isn't going to grow up or even get to live at all. In my mind I am thinking that Esme and Carlisle somehow cause a late miscarriage. But you haven't revealed that yet so well see.
A question though it isn't still 4 years in the past at this point right? If I'm thinking right it should be closer to 2 years in Tge past? Sorry I'm a little confused.
Author's Response:
At the chapter, we're closing in on the end of 4 years, inching toward three years later. There was about 2 years between the baby and present day
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm glad that the horrible tragedy didn't stop this story. Enough has been lost.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
Okay...not really sure about this chapter. It's happy and it's sad. I still want to know what happened to the baby. And I don't even want to think about her not waking up. She SO has to wake up. I don't think I can deal if this story doesn't have a HEA. I mean, you're free to write as you please and I'd never tell you differently, but haven't they been through enough? I so don't want him to lose her. (Yes, I know I'm whiny. Not trying to be offensive, though.) Thanks for sharing!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
Jasper is talking about pulling the plug. No sign of life. Oh no.. will Bella not make it? Then Edward will forever remember those hurtful words from that morning. The fact they had grown apart.
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
looking forward to more
Date: 29 Dec 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
Please wake her up soon. The angst is killing me.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
aww its so sad when someone loses a baby. why do they lose thier daughter???
Date: 28 Dec 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. I can't wait for Bella to wake up.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 28
I also thought of this story after the recent events. It was too close for comfort. We need a happy ending for this story.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter. Happy Holidays to you as well.
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thank you for this BB. I loved it.
*hugs*
Date: 21 Dec 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
I can understand you hesitation with events of the past couple of weeks, but yours is going to have a happy ending so that makes it better. (I think happy ending you may have other plans and that is fine I am with you for the long hall).
Date: 21 Dec 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well, hopefully this will open up their eyes again to each other. Time is short and you never know when your day will be here and you will be gone from your loved ones. I only pray that my day comes after my children and grandchildren. I don't want to bury them. Selfish? Yes. When my spouse and I come to that point I am prepared for that. We always knew if we could stay married at one point death would take one of us. Sadly if I die first our daughter and son will have to take care of daddy. He does not know how to wash clothes, clean or pay bills. Yep I have spoiled him.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
Very well done!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
Please don't give up on this story. Excellent chapter.
Date: 21 Dec 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
looking forward t omore
Date: 15 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh shit! I didn't think that Carlisle and Esme could get any worse. I wonder if it was really their fault or if that is just how Edward is seeing the situation.
I hope your daughter is doing better. There is nothing worse then your baby being sick.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
I reread the whole story. Can not keep up when the updates are so slow. Please give us something more often even if it is just a half of a chapter. That way we can keep the story in our heads..
Date: 13 Dec 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
They both seem to get wrapped up in other aspects of life and forget what is really important. Bella needs to remember that and forgive Edward for what she was mad at him about before the event. None of that matters now that she has almost died. They love each other. This is all that is important.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to more
Date: 13 Dec 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
Aww, I really like the flashback part of the chapter. And why do I not remember what Edward means when he yelled at Carlisle and Esme about losing their daughter? I don't remember that at all. Poor Edward, always having to deal with Bella working and school and stuff. That would be frustrating. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Because I haven't gotten to that part in the past yet.
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
AHHHH no!!!!! She can't die!! Please don't let her die! Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
ooo can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for the update!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good chapter, can't wait to see what happens next....
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
looking forward to more
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for the update. I love this story and can't wait for Bella to wake up.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
eeeekkkkk!!!! please update again soon
poor bella cnt wait for more hooked!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh! Whoa! From hitting her head from overreacting to BAM being brought back from the light... Whoa BB, thats deep!
I love it!!!!
*hugs*
Date: 21 Oct 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
I've loved this story from the beginning... keep em coming :)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Rose needs to stay out of their relationship. It is hard enough to be married without having your famiy and bestfriends take sides because they know to many intimate details. Edward needed support for his loss as well, but he coulded go to his brother because Rose would kill him if he support him. It would go against her supporting Bella. This is just wrong. Edward and Emmett are brothers. They should be their for each no matter what. Just because you are married doesn't meant you can't support your brother. Rose doesn't understand this because she doesn't have family. All Edward has is Emmett, Alice, and Bella. He also claims Jasper, Rose is such a shrew that she is hard to love, but he would fight for her if anyone ever tried to hurt her.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
I can't see you letting Bella die. There is to much unfinished business between these two. If she were to die Edward would never recover and I don't see you doing that. I have faith that she'll pull threw and they will be able to really talk and work out their differences.
Loved this chapter like all the others before it.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
thank you for the update............I hope Bella is going to be ok
Date: 16 Oct 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
looking forward to more
Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
Update as soon as you can. I will be here to read it when you get a chance. I love the contrast between the future and the past. This is a great story. Good luck with all your writing in November.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well, I can see why you needed protection from the masses, but never fear I am still here!!
*snickers at cheesy line*
Great chapter though, Edward is going out of his mind, I feel for him, no matter what they were going through.
WTF is Carlisle and Esme doing there?! Freakin meddlers!
Love it, BB!!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
great chapter. can't wait to read more!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
great story so far cant wait to see wat happens next update soon
Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well they had a amazing honeymoon. I hope that Bella can fight her way out of the coma with Edwards help.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella needs to come around soon. Edward has to be going crazy. He loves her so much.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
looking forward t the next chapter
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
edward and bella need each other their love is epic their lives is destined fate saiod they are to be a couple
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
bella please wake up and be ok
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
oh my god trhe tears again
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh god don't stop here what happened
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh my edward has to be going in sane after all he did promice to keep her safe
Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
oh jesus two hopurs edward do something any thing
Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
i liked the bella/edward time it was great. i liked the fact bella told edward his patrent's needed him . they have a lot to work on that's for sure ,but gaining your childrens respect and love back will take time. bella ia so selfless she knew that alice needed her parent's .the cullens got a first hand of the wonderful person bella really is when she ask edward to forgive them
Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
nooooooo!!! you son of a bitch