Date: 03 Sep 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 33
What a beautifully written chapter. As a mother that lost a daughter at 38 weeks, I can say that you captured the emotion perfectly and honestly. Grief and anguish doesn't begin to describe what you go through at a time like that. Thank you for your beautiful words.
Date: 29 Jul 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loving the story, praying he does not rape her but even more fearful he will shoot her. The Swat Team is going to have to go in there and take him out. At this point I want him dead, not only for the abusing of Bella and the threats and scaring of the children in that classroom, but somewhere there is a little boy who has been abused for God knows how long and which it sounds like his mother has been murder by this asshat. He does not need to go back to his father. He needs some happiness in his life, I doubt he has ever known true happiness. I am just hoping Edward will not enlist to go with the team to rescue her but I know he will. God help him on what he finds.
i could not chose two children to stay with me, I would have to be like Bella and offer myself to let him let the children go. Such sweet children who offered to stay with her. She knew that the kids had to leave, but I am guessing that the stress is going to make Angela go into premature labor. If for some reason they get the asshole as a prisoner, that he does not die than I hope he will be charged with endangerment to the children and the child in Angela. Ben will want to help Edward kill this bastard! The nightmares these two women and the children will have.
so I wonder how long it will take before Edward, Emmett and Jasper's parents show their sorry ass's up. You know they will want to help but they will want to be in front of the camera and reporter saying how they will help their son and daughter in law get over this tragic event!!! Excuse me while I go into the bathroom so I can go throw up! Those two sorry son of a bitch's can go and get in line to find a good seat in the bowels of hell!
Date: 23 May 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read and it isn't over yet!!! I have never read a more evil Esme!!! Why are her and Carlisle like they are?? Esme sounds like she is an alcoholic and she wants everyone as miserable as she is. To treat all her children as she does. It will be a miracle if all she does is lose them. I worry for Bella, Jasper and Rosealie, if all the kids have ever seen their parents like they are, then how the hell are they going to treat the people they have chosen to love and be with for the rest of their lives? Kids learn for words and actions and their parents seem to be the worse case of parents I have ever read!!! I fell sorry for them. Well on with the story.
Date: 13 Jan 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 41
i really hope bella does some series ass kissing for blaming edward, because every time he tried to put his parents out of his and bella's lives it was her that begged him to forgive them and have a relationship with them
Date: 13 Jan 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
now that should of earned one hell of an apology from bella to edward for the way she is always running out on him or thinking the worst of him at every turn. edward shouldn't be the only one that gets yelled at or threatened for acting like a moron
Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:14 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh how perfect. I'm so glad that they were able to really work though everything and they were given Evan. It's great that they feel complete now. I still feel a little bad that they were not given the opportunity to raise a baby. While it's horrible that a family had to die and that Carlisle was given such a light sentence I'm glad that in the end they got what they deserved.
I'm really going to miss this story.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 11:20 PM Title: Epilogue
This was an awesome story, it was hard to read and stay interested at times but I got through it. I can say now that it was so worth every frustration and you are an amazing writer to be able to bring it together like that. Thank you for your words.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 43
I truly love this story. They have been through so much and the thing that sticks with me is that they never seperated. I think that is the most telling thing about the two of them. It would of been so much easier for them to just walk away. But they stayed.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 46
Hmmm, I don't feel that you should have to justify yourself like that in the ending notes of this chapter. The fact that things aren't perfect for this is precisely the reason WHY I like this story. Yes, stories that are sweet and nothing ever goes wrong with the fantasy are great, but I love stories that are "real". Showing that something horrible can occurr and they can overcome it is a good thing. They get frustrating at times, but it works. I'm happy to see Bella recovering and her being able to stand. That's amazing! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 46
I have to say that you have a way of showing hurt that really hurts.
I feel so bad for both of them. I am not sure if I could have stayed with Edward. I mean Bella made plenty of mistakes. But that would have been hard for me to stay with him.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 46
I loved the ending. This story is the most "real" I've read in sometime. It may still be fiction but in reality that's how some relationships happen. You showed these fictional characters as human and I commend you on this. I'm glad I stuck with this story and I wasn't disappointed with the end. 5 stars!!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 45
So much miscommunication. Will there be a HEA ?
There willbe. What you have to remember, especially with one regular chapter left is that the past is now to the point where chapter one has started, and they weren't in a good place there.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 44
The first part of the chapter is so sad. I feel so bad for Bella. In the second part, both she and Edward needed that visit from Evan so much. I think it really helped them. And I'm glad that Garrett refuses to give up on her recovery. I want to see them progress and for Evan to go home with them. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 15 Feb 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 43
Well, I am glad that the start of the chapter they are at least on the same page. It sucks that she can't feel him, though. That's a bit depressing. And the flashback...that's just really sad and absolutely tugs on my heart strings and I feel so bad for the both of them. They really seem to have a huge disconnect on communication. Maybe things wouldn't have been so bad if they'd actually bothered to talk to one another. But I get it. It's not always that easy when things are so off track. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 41
Hmmm, not really sure with this one. It's like a transition chapter, I think. Bella really needed to have that confrontation with Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett. I'm a little shocked to learn some of their background info, especially Rosalie. And I'm not surprised that Edward's anxious about adopting Evan and is worried about it. In regards to the flashback, I actually kind of like it. I think what they did with "that" house is awesome. I would so pull the same kind of stunt. I feel bad for them that the new house wasn't really working for them. I would like to see it become a positive place for them, eventually, though. And I'm glad that Edward has realized he wasn't there for Bella and wants to change that. It's a start. thanks for sharing!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 41
Wow... so much hurt! They both need to talk to someone. Bella needs to deal with the loss of her daughter.
Edward needs to let go of the guilt.
Looking forward to more. BTW. This chapter didnot suck. I thought it was very good.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 40
Bella needs to stop this pity party and work hard to get her life together. She can't blame Edward for his parent's sins any longer. She is the one who pushed him away. Before she can adopt Evan, she needs to love herself and Edward again. She has numbed the pain. Now she needs to work through it.
Date: 15 Dec 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 40
Wow, that's a horrible thing that Seth did to Garrett. I'm glad that they've gotten over it. I know Seth will never forgive himself for it, but at least, he's able to still have his friend and will never do something like that again.
I'm happy that Bella's finally sharing her feelings with Edward and that she wants to adopt Evan. I think that will be good for both of them. It's something they need, but I'd like to see Bella make some progress before that happens. She really has a lot that needs to come together before she's in a place where it's beneficial for her to adopt him.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 39
it has been so long I will have to go back and read about Carlisle and Esme. Edward and B started out in this story almost at divorces door. Edward was ready to leave her. Then the hostage situation and he felt guilty. Then she could not walk and they are where they are now. Disfunctional and he stays with her because now he feels he has to. I get you have other stories it just is hard to keep this one going so the readers can follow along.. You know give us a a/n and overview of what has happened and where we are.
Date: 11 Dec 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 39
thank you for the update......a lot of abuse in this story.everyone has been touch by violence.........The little boy whose father was crazy as a bed bug.....The doctor his father was really crazy abuse your own children, I can't fathom that.I have three children that worjk my nerves something but I would NEVER harm them like that...I hope Bella walks again and they get their family....Edward needs help to resolve his issues with his family..well done....until next time
Date: 11 Dec 2013 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 37
Aww, that's not good at all. Poor Bella. Poor Edward. I really like the letters from the kids that have more insight than the average adult. That flashback is really hard to deal with though. But, it needs to be in there, so I get it. I just don't like either character so upset. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 08 Dec 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 37
I have read this whole story and I keep seeing that this distance is all Bella's fault. Edward tried to take care of her, but Bella didn't want to do anything but drown her sorrows. She never once thought how sad and angry Edward was also. He lost a child just like she did. Bella needs therapy, but she wouldn't take it. She just wants everyone to feel as bad as she does.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 38
i was so excited when i saw that chapter 37 was updated but after i got done with that i saw that this chaper was done as well, i was thrilled! i literally yelled "2 chapters in one day?!?" haha i scared my mom with that! but i love them and i cant wait for the rest of the story! i was nervous for Bella reaction to Evan but i love how it turned out. she really is a teacher at heart!
Date: 15 May 2013 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 36
Total emotional chapter. Seriously like had me crying. I'm glad they are finally talking about Charlotte. That's needed to happen for a while for them. For them to move past it and get back on track that HAD to happen. And yes, she's going to be bitchy for a while. If anyone was in her place, they'd be a bitch too. LOVE Angsty stories. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 14 May 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
I don't think Bella is being a bitch at all. I lost a baby at 17 weeks, and I couldn't function for months. It's like my world just stopped. I did a lot of stupid things because I couldn't see past my loss. I think it's truly a testament to how much they love each other that they are still together.
this story really something special. I am so excited to see what happens next. I hope that reading those letters will help Bella. Because while I'm sure a few will be horrible, I know that the majority will be good for her soul.