Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
As much as I am going to miss TPW, I am absolutely thrilled that you are continuing this story! I love it, love it, love it! I am such a sucker for overprotective vampward.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Please post the next chapter soon!
I like this story. No I love it !
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
My evil little mind is screaming...bite her...bite her NOW!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
aaahhh I knew there was a reason to read slow...I need more.
Thank you for your story, I love it lots and lots and can't seem to get enough of your stuff.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Beautiful
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just want to say how much I am loving this story. I wasn't going to start it because I hate having to wait for updates, but I saw you said on your perfect wife site that you were going to put some time into this story. so then i got curious about it and now i am hooked on it.
thanks for your writings and i really hope for updates soon.
Author's Response:
As soon as the epilogue is posted this story will get my attention. TPW epilogue should be ready sometime next week
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
The Cullens play great interference against Mike, don't they? Very well played. It'll be interesting to see Bella's reaction when she figures out where the smell is from.
Charlie is too funny - I worry that Mr. Snowy will be that way with 2 girls when they get older!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really liking this story! I'll look forward to reading more after you finish TPW!
Author's Response:
I promise this will get my full attention as soon as the epilogue is posted for tpw. (other than the work I need to do to publish tpw later this year)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
so sweet. love it :)
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
loving this story cant wait for an update!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
omg i cant wait til da nex chap!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have enjoyed the story so far... will you be updating anytime soon?
Looking forward to more soon~!
Author's Response:
Right now I'm focusing on finishing TPW. That story only has 3 chapters left. I may try and put out a chapter for CAM sometime next week but I'm not promising.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
You know, I've never read your work outside of The Perfect Wife. This is really good. I'm looking forward to reading more!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
The Perfect Wife was amazing, but then I started to read this and I love this one EVEN MORE! It's such an amazing story. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Now that I've gotten thru Esme's garden, I'm going to write a chapter for CAM & BTP before working on the next one for TPW
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please post the next chapter soon!
I like your story *The perfect wife* but I love this story.
I think it would be fun if Mike would kiss Jessica and Bella would see it, then Bella would hit Mike and have a fun day with Alice.
PS: I only came to the writers coffee shop because of your storys.
Hope you release the next chapter soon,
xD Kprincess
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love how you did this. Having the Cullens interfere every time Mike tried to make a move. That is awsome.
I've just re-read this story and I fell in love with it all over again. Please tell me you haven't forgotten about it, and that you will come back to it soon. You'll break my heart if you don't.
I also am a huge fan of THE PERFECT WIFE. I've been reading it since it was on FanFiction and that was a while ago. It's so intense and I actually had to wait for you to write a few chapters at a time before I would read again because I couldn't stand be left with the cliff hangers you would leave or with a feeling of absolute dread when I would finish reading a new chapter. (This is good. I just easily get into a characters mind set, its hard to walk away without taking something like what's been happening to Bella with you when you turn off your computer.)
You are such an awsome writer and I can't wait to see what you'll do next. But I'm majorly looking forward to CREATING A MATE. So come back soon.
Thanks for letting me ramble. ;)
Author's Response:
i promise a chapter for CAM & BTP after I post Esme's secret next week for tpw. I couldn't leave everyone hanging waiting to see if Edward really hurt Bella or not. I'm not quite that cruel. :)
Date: 26 Feb 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love all your stories.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
love the story. it's an interesting twist on Twilight and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'll have another chapter in a couple of weeks.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story and I really hope that you'll post the next chapter soon!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
i needed to give it's 10 cup rating
Date: 16 Feb 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
I likethis story it has a certain charm
however is Bella going to react a bit cookcoo when she discovers they have been messing wiht her emotions and future
hmmm...
or is it part of the story?
i can't wait to find out!
Author's Response:
It will be a while before Bella finds out about the manipulation, but she will.
Date: 06 Feb 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
i love all your stories.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awww... their first real date. How will Edward screw it up? And will Bella figure out the scent that's been haunting her is coming from him?
Date: 04 Feb 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am truly horrified that Edward ripped Emmett's shirt! How thoughtless! I am also excited that Bella doesn't need that much help from Jasper to be annoyed with Newton.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ewww yuck Newton! How did they keep Edward from killing him? Poor Jasper and Emmett must have been working over time!
Date: 04 Feb 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm... I wonder how often Alice's visions will enable them to cockblock Newton? Oh, I dred the thought of them not being able to interfere in time.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love the Cullens for keeping her busy throughout the day.
Okay, I think Mike is more irritating than in the book. Great job with that :)
I wonder if Bella will be upset when she realizes the smell form her blanket is Edward.
Loved Charlie! Nothing better than him going into over-protective daddy mode.
I'm really enjoying this story and so happy to see it over here.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awww...The first session of Bella Barbie! Let's hope Edward can keep up his less annoying momentum he has going.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love me some jealous, over protective Edward. And really, what woman doesn't secretly love that in her man. I know Bella doesn't know they belong to each other yet, but come on, he's Edward.
Date: 03 Feb 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jasper certainly has his work cut out for him countering Bella's annoyance with Edward.
Date: 03 Feb 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Edward and the gang are successful in getting Bella back to their place so she doesn't go out with Newton. I also hope Rose doesn't scare her away during the shopping trip.
Date: 03 Feb 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow...Newton? In what universe could he ever be competition with Edward! I just seriously had a flash of Seinfeld... Newman.... Newton.
Date: 03 Feb 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
He should have known when he decided Alice would know where to find her!
Followed all of my favorite authors here to the new site and that includes you. I have a wicked mind and you feed it with The Perfect Wife. Tortured and abused Bella is a guilty pleasure of mine, what can I say?
Thank you for writing,
Amy
Date: 02 Feb 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm liking the story, hope you update soon.;)
Date: 30 Jan 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it. Edward's night time visits are a big boost to his confidence. I loved Jasper and Emmett working to keep Edward at bay, and even more that Bella's frustration at Mike was all her own. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Date: 30 Jan 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Interesting chapter! I'm impresses that Edwar didn't outright attack Mike, and hope we get to see his POV.
Date: 30 Jan 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really liked this chapter. Edward's POV was enlightening - especially when he went after Rosalie...
Date: 29 Jan 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
It was nice to get into Esmee's head - she has such love for her family. The hinted intimacy between she and Carlisle was a beautiful touch.
I loved how Alice so completely overwhelmed Bella - too funny, and well done. So now Bella is curled up with Edward - will he wake her up to send her home to Charlie, or be unable to resist keeping her? LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Date: 29 Jan 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really like this story so far. I was wondering what the other problem is that Alice keeps talking about. Also there's been no sign of Jake so far, is he in this story? As always your working is amazing. I'm also reading The Perfect Wife
Date: 28 Jan 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
It strikes me that vampires and werewolves are quite similar in mating. Although Edward didn't imprint on Bella, per se, that compulsion, desire and need remind me of imprinting.
I do have one question - how is it that the others can read Edward's thoughts as he reads theirs? Unless I'm missing something, it appears they are having conversations?
Anyway, another great chapter!
Date: 28 Jan 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
yay! lol...lovin' it!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh!! I can't wait for their date. I had so much fan with the rest of the family trying to keep her away from Mike, haha!!
Thanks for sharring.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wonder what was "so close" in the car - although I do have my suspicions on that. Edward isn't doing the best job on wooing Bella right now, is he?
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
I like how you are describing the feelings of a vampire towards their mate. And love everyone's teasing of Edward....
Date: 27 Jan 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting. I'm looking forward to finding out what Alice knows...
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it
Date: 27 Jan 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting first chapter. Edward's attempts to find someone, then being willing to try with Tanya only to find he was too late? I felt so bad for him....
Alice is definitely keeping something from him, and I'm curious to see exactly how Rosalie is going to try to stop him.
Great first chapter, you have me intrigued!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it
Date: 26 Jan 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really like your Edward!!!
Jasper's reaction to Mike's staring at Alice - it's just the same as Edward's.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Date: 26 Jan 2010 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
i love this story too. it will be interesting when bella finds out that edward is a vampire. love it.
Date: 26 Jan 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have so had that happen before...Smelling something that you know you have smelt, but you can't place where...It is maddening...
However...mine did not end up being a hot guy that sneaks into my room to watch me sleep... (DARN IT)...
I think it was more along the line of Grandma's hand soap or something...ANYWAY...this is not what I wanted to say...
Great Chapter.. I love this story, and I am glad that Bella is feeling something for our poor lonely Edward...
Thanks
Author's Response:
Oh if only all good smells led to a hot man or at least good chocolate.