Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yeh!! a new chapter! I'm so excited! Hope you keep up the good work and you update soon. I always check on this story because I like it so much!
hearts!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
How well do Bella and Jacob know the other, she has not said anything about him?
Author's Response:
you'll find out next chapter
Date: 05 Oct 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
The mall should get exciting once the boys arrive!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love Alice! great story!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
He found her!!! Awesome - now to get her to fall in love with him!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Rhut roh....the wolves are gonna be some huge kind a problem. Great update! AND I can't wait to see your book!! xoxodana
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow cant wait to see how this turns out
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it! I can't wait for more!
I'll be looking forward to your book as well.
Thanks for the update =)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it I just hope Bella is going to be OK they are already fighting for her but if Jacob is the leader he should have to marry within the tribe Gid I hope not a Jacob fan thanks for sharing and update when you can.....
Author's Response:
Nope, I'm a Vamp girl all the way! My daughter is a Wolf girl and this is her story. I've promised not to be TOO mean to the wolves, but it is a B/E story.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
Very glad to see an update. You know I'll wait as long as it takes, your writing is worth it!
Interesting, but logical idea to have the wolves & vampires naturally resistant to each others' gifts. Obviously Jake smelled Bella on Edward, hence the growls and immediate trip to Bella's house. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
As well, I can't wait for your book to come out, I'm eager to add it to my shelves.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I'm glad you lliked it.
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
:) I love how he says 'I wants her' like she is a puppy haha, on to read moree
Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
are you going to use your pen name or your real name for the release of blind faith? so i know wat im lookin for
Author's Response:
Blind Faith will be released under my real name. Michael Schneider. (yes, I'm a woman)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Congratulations on being published, I'll be checking out those chapters. :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Uh oh! Well at least they got a really, really good kiss in. ;)
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. The next chapter should be ready in a couple of weeks.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yay! Go Bella!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Grrrr! Charlie needs a whop on the side of the head. But it's date night! YAY!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
I really like EPOV. Poor guy, but like he says: "Soon....very soon." Hopefully!
Author's Response:
Hey! Glad you like!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm not liking Mike. He's getting under my skin. And what's up with Charlie, can't he see that Mike's a weasel. Grrrr!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's so nice to see an Edward that is pro-change.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh my god i wonder how this is going to go
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
this sounds like its going to be interesting
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'll say it again. Poor Edward. I hope he catches a break.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward, the guy can't catch a break. You made me remember all those awkward feelings from high school. ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
I knew Alice wouldn't be able to keep out. He he he.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love the way Edward decides Bella is his mate and then says "Now, how do I get her?" He's almost child-like and sooo out of his element. I really like that Alice is not going to interfere, too much. LOL This is going to be fun. (Grinning as I push submit)
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start! I like your explanation of nomads. I can imagine them wandering till they were mad with loneliness.
I love that Edward doesn't have any preconceived notions of turning a human if she's the right one.
I like the premise. I can't wait for more. (hands are clapping as I push Submit, then Next please)
Author's Response:
Glad you like!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my God, you are sooooo bad. We've waited forever (like a hundred years - haha) for this update and it was way too short. You left us screaming for more and a huge cliffy to boot.
Please, please continue to update this story, especially now that it's getting so exciting with the drama of the wolves (although I thought they only reacted/attacked vampires who were killing humans). The Cullens have a treaty with them - what gives?
Author's Response:
Ah my child...did I say the wolves KNOW there are vampires at the carnival. Did I say they know said vampires are the Cullens? Did I say the wolves are running to attack? Then again, I didn't say that they don't or they aren't. I wonder..... **cue Vincent Price laugh**
I promise you won't wait 3 months for the next update.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
There's something about Mike Newton that annoys the crap out of me too. He's probably cheating on Bella -- he seems like that kind of guy. I'd like to see Edward, Alice and Jasper really mess with him and get Charlie to dislike him as well.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was such a cute chapter. I loved Edward's inner dialoge, "Human Bella Swan is holding Vampire Edward Cullen's hand". Poor Edward, he really has it bad. I really like the insight to how a vampire male claims his mate in your story. As Esme would say, "So cute". I can't wait to see how Edward adapts to having to claim her the old fashioned "human" way.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved "The Perfect Wife" so much, I had to click on your name to check out what else you've written. I really enjoying this story and also, I hope you continue writing "Better Than Perfect".
Date: 07 Sep 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm really enjoying this story. i love the idea of Edward, and his family, going along with a plan for Edward to choose and win over "human" Bella to be his mate.
I'm dying to know if Carlisle put something in Bella's food or drink to make her fall asleep so she'd miss her date with Mike (since the family's all actively helping him with his plan)?
Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Its getting really interesting!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
uh oh....the Pack is Back
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG you came back!!! I`m so happy to have a new chapter I loved it and am anxious for the next ;D with wolves
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm soooo glad you are writing this again!! I loved this story!! Please update as soon as you can!! But the story is going in a good direction. Can't wait until they go to school too! Mike's reaction will probably be funny!
hearts!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Congratulations on the book :) i look forwad to it.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
first that;s aweome about your book! :) I was excited when i got the email that you updated this chapter and how you ended it shame on you!!! LOL!!! It was great!! Oh and keep us posted o when we can pick up a copy of Blind Faith.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
how did i miss this chapter?!! yay...woman keep writing and stop treating this like a red headed step child! LOL!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
great story please kep updating thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Congratulations! I'm so excited for you, and am going to have to go read those chapters. I'm pleased you're published, I think your a very talented writer.
My only complaint about this chapter? Too short! Edward definitely has his hands full if the wolves are coming on the scene...
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. I promise you won't wait 3 months for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
wow the wolves are descending. this is getting good. too bad bella doesn't know she has made a life altering decision. she will soon enough
man oh man she will not know what hit her. i am curious to see if the wolves make a move and how bella will react
i love that your writing again. i can't wait for your book to be released. if you do a book signing in la i will defentiely want to be there. can't wait
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
YES! YES! YES! YES!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.
Phew. Okay love it, I saw no errors so that was awesome.
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.
Hrmhrrrm. Sorry. Anyway, what will your update schedule be like, or is there one, Just curious. Ok and oh what else was i going to say....
Oh right:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMING BACK, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.
When I logged on and checked my favorites i saw a banner i've never seen before and i read the title thinking what is this and then my chair fell backwards because i was jumping up and down squeeling YES! YES! YES!
So Anyway great job bringing us back into the story and great cliffy, even though it is a cliffy and those just give everybody nerves until the next update but still good job.
Thank you so much. again. I can 't say it enough ;)
Author's Response:
I'm sensing you're pleased with the update? :) Honestly, I have no update schedule. I never have. I don't plan my stories in advance so I really have no idea what to write next until it hits me. I know it drives everyone crazy, including myself. I promise it won't be 3 months before the next update though. I've got an idea for the next chapter and no other deadlines staring me in the face right now.
Mic
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yea, we missed you! I am so excited that you came back to this story. I loved TPW, but this one is by far, one of my favs. Thanks so much for sharing your talent and I look forward to the rest!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I promise it won't be a three month wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
love it! so glad you updated
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
OOO so happy you didn't let this story go!! I love the sensuality of a vampy over protective but soooo smexy Edward who wants to give into Bella!! Oh yeah bb! xodana
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update! This is one of my favorite stories that I've been following on FF.net since you posted the first chapter.
I loved the chapter. I can't wait until Edward marks Bella. You know that I LOVE marking. LOL It's hot, isn't it?
Congrats on your book too.
Looking forward to your next chappy.
Author's Response:
I laughed when I realized your story that I follow talked about Edward marking Bella the same day I was posting the same concept. I liked the idea you have of the venom being a different color for the marking. I still haven't worked out the details how Edward is going to mark Bella in CAM. I can scratch out red venom. LOL
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank goodness you're back!!! I'm so glad that you're continuing the story, I'm excited to see what will develop in this story. Btw, congratulations on the publication of your book!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I promise no three month wait for the next chapter.
Take care!
Mic
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yay you updated!! Your writing is some of my favorite out there!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I promise no three month wait for the next chapter.
Take care!
Mic
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Congratulations! Really glad you continued this story and look forward to more!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it very much and excited to see what will happen next.....
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
So happy that you finally updated this story. I love your writing. Love TPW so much too.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for updating this story. I'm glad that you're still working on it.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
so very awesome
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story, and I've stuck with you through pulling it and reposting it, and having be the "red-headed step child" to TPW, and I was super excited when TPW was completed so you would be able to focus on the story like you talked about (as well as the roller-coaster ride of emotions that amazing story took me on), and now I see you've started another story. PLEASE say you haven't forgotten about us CAM addicts (because believe me, even after months of no updates, I still love this story, and there aren't any other stories I can say that about). Please don't forget about your red-headed step child and her adoring fans!!!
Author's Response:
I love my red-headed stepchild even if I tend to neglect her. lol I meant to add at the bottom of the o/s a note to all of you. The next chapter is almost complete and should post in a few days. I have a lovely surprise to add to the story as a gift for all your patience. Someone made me a wonderful banner for the story that I'm saving to put up when I post the chapter.
The new story won't start for a few months since it's in a contest. So I will be able to work on CAM uninterrupted.
This summer I wrote an original book that's being published this fall which has kept me very busy. It's finished and off now.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
This definitely has to be one of my favorite stories. Will you post more soon?
Author's Response:
I actually have most of the next chapter written. I've been focused on an original project all summer and my deadline is today. As soon as it's out of my hands I'll finish the chapter and get it posted. It should be this week once my beta goes over it. Thanks for your patience. I'm enjoying your new story as well.
Mic
Date: 02 Aug 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
When are you updating? I thought there was going to by one in early July?? I'm losing hope.
Author's Response:
Don't give up on me! I'm working on the next update, but have to finish another deadline this week. I'm hoping I can get an update up by the end of next week. I swear I haven't forgotten this story. Its my daughter's favorite story so she won't let me forget it. Thanks for being patient with me. Mic
Date: 11 Jul 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Please update soon! its great!
Author's Response:
Soon, I promise
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hi I just found you story "perfect wife" a few days and I loved every bit of it!!!was perfect!!! and then I can not stop seein your new story, hope you can update soon, I loved it too!!! you´re a great writer!!keep the story interesting, and us not had a lime yet lol I loved it ;D
please update
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story. I'm working hard on a new project that has a deadline. I promise to get back on this very soon.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
i love this! update asap!
Author's Response:
I'm wrapping up a huge project that I will be announcing soon. I should be focused back on this story in a couple of weeks. My daughter will kill me if I don't. :)
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
ROCKY HORROR PICTURE SHOW STYLE!
Don't get strung out by the way people hate
Don't judge your book by it's cover
You're not as famous by the light of day
But by night you're one hell of an author
You're just a sweet awesome author from awesome author places
so let me review and make you feel better
you look like you're pretty stressed out
if you want something visual thats not to abysmal
look at those reviews on your screen!
Author's Response:
A girl who knows what her Momma likes! That's why you're my favorite Chocolate Eyed Baby Girl. My toes are tapping to your review.
Love you!
Momma
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Alien style!
Bee boop! dee la doop daloop! doo da doo doo duhhh! Flaggen haffer shaztin dee doo daloop baduhf BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!
Translation: UPDATE!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Review: Phantom of the Opera style!
In sleep he watched over her
In dreams the vampires came
that voice which spoke to stephenie
and said edwards name
and do I dream again
for now I find
you're a much better author than she
inside my miiiiinnnnnddddd
UPDATE
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your story! Break it down now!
Lovin' your writin' sweet momma
Wouldn't never ever have anotha
You do your sweet thing and update
but don't tell your publisha cuz then she be hatin'
Ohhhhhhhhh word!
UPDATE
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know you were upset about the other story plagiarizing yours. It is sad when people have to do that. That said, I'm glad I read reviews when stories are written poorly. That story is a poorly summarized version of this one. And now I can read the plot and not get a headache from the spelling mistakes. Which is what I was going to write to the other author was that she had a good plot, but she needed a beta. You have a good plot and you have a beta, or you're just an amazing editor. So I look forward to seeing where this goes!
~Cassie
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the story. I think what upsets me the most about the plagiarism is just how very, very BAD her story is and that it's still recognized as mine. LMAO! If you're going to steal my story, please don't write it so badly!
I'm 46 and have a beta, so my grammar had better be good. :)
Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just a request...is there any way that you can do a quick summay of the last 11 chapters at the beginning of the next chapter? I'm kinda forgetting what went on and don't want to read it all over again. Thanks!!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
I read all 11 chapters! It is very interesting story! Really looking forward to a new chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Hopefully by 4th of July I'll have the next chapter ready. I've been working really hard on a new project that has a dead line.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Please post the next chapter soon. ;)
I'm waiting but there aren't new chapters, like for 2 months already...
I hope you'll write a bit soon, cause it's my favourite story.
Love it ^^
Author's Response:
I promise to have a new chapter up by 4th of July. I've been working very hard on a new project that's taken a lot of my time along with rl
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
fuwaaaaaahhhh can't wait to read more~! haha. edward is so cute in this story! *mweeheeeheehee* *foams at the mouth in a good way* <3
Author's Response:
can you imagine the possiblities? Dark night, all alone, carnival music in the air....
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
i loved your other story so much i wanted to read everything else your write immediately! my eyes hurt sooo bad and i'm sooo tired but reading has always been my weakness. haha. at least i remember to snack every once in a while...i swear if i were immortal and didn't need sleep, i'd probably read the entire time..rofl
Author's Response:
I read like you do. I hate mornings I have to go to work because I've been up til 1 or 2am reading. Weekends I read until 3am then read or write all day. My yard is suffering this year from neglect. LOL
Date: 20 Jun 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Such a cliff hanger....love this story so far, it is another great one.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
Never bet against Alice. Lucky Bella, I know I'd love it (Edward on the Ferris Wheel) sigh!
Great Story! Hope it's not over yet.
Author's Response:
Yes can you imagine the possiblities? Dark night, all alone, carnival music in the air....
Date: 16 Jun 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Eeeeeeeeep! I can't stop smiling. I really enjoy this story, so please update soon. :)
Author's Response:
glad you liked it
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to a little ferris wheel fun!
Thanks for the update;~)
Author's Response:
soon!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward seems to have stick up him bumm.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
fun start to this story
Date: 22 May 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Another good chapter, as always with you. Thank you !
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting premise - I look forward to getting into this one. Glad I was able to find your stories again!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you like it
Date: 14 May 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
hhhhmmmm wonder what is going to happen on the ferris wheel???
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was a little nervous there with the whole diner thing and the "talk" after but am so glad to see there together now!!
Date: 13 May 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love how Bella reacts to all the events : she's proud and strong headed ! I love this plot and can't wait to read more ! I thank your girl who motivates you to continue to write it !! LoL
Date: 13 May 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story. Happy that Bella is strong minded and not a push over.
Date: 13 May 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
So...Bella isn't questioning the growling and the "waiting a century" comment? I love the story so far, just a little confused by this.
Author's Response:
Right now she's a little overwhelmed with the warm fuzzies. Next chapter she'll be putting her thinking cap on.
Date: 13 May 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love it! Didn't take long for her to feel that pull huh? And I love the personality changes! Always love a strong Bella, even if she has some of the "plain old Bella" traits! Great fic so far! Can't wait for more!
~Sarah
Date: 13 May 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great Chapter, awesome job. I love how this story is progressing. I think it's great that Bella automatically knew that she had to calm Edward down. She just knew.
Thanks so much for coming back to this story. I don't know if you read my comment on TPW but even if you did, i still want to give you props. That was an awesome story, very well told. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what you do next.
Author's Response:
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
OOOOoooo, okay now you are into new stuff. I am so tickled you came back to this story. I know how hard you worked on theTPW, but I just love this one. Looking forward to the rest and Mike's reaction! I bet it will be funny. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response:
Next chapter should be interesting
Date: 12 May 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
Aww, she said yes! Let the good times begin..I think..lol
Date: 12 May 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can´t say how much i love reading this story. Overprotectiv Vampward and "for the first time in Love" Bella.....
What´s Mike gonna think or do?
I love the behavior of Bella in this story. She goes against Em, incredible!!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
So glad to see an update. I know you're busy, and this chapter was worth the wait. Yay, Bella said yes! But I love that Bella stands her ground with Edward. And Emmett!
“Stop that,” I ordered as I turned to look at him, my eyebrow raised. “You cannot tell me your own father is thinking anything inappropriate about me. Now behave or I’ll go home.” - I think that was my favourite line in the chapter. Well done, Bella!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad you liked it. I get to have more fun with this story.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
love it..cant wait for the next..
Date: 12 May 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yay!! your back to this story!! I loved TPW. I'm looking forward to more with this story!!!
Date: 12 May 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Finally!! YAY!! please post again soon :)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man, out of story, I wanna read more, Im very addicted now.
:) My addiction to this story and your work is second only to Emancipation Proclimation (sorry that story rocks, along with the completed Perfect wife, hehehe).
Looking forward to more posessive Edward and the drama that is sure to follow.
Author's Response:
Please don't apologize. I freaking live for EP updates!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love this story, I was board and looking for something to read. I started reading and then looked at the author, to my surprize it was someone who's work I love (Perfect Wife). Yes, my night just got brighter with something of quality to read before bed. Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you like it
Date: 12 May 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
Aww *cuddles the red headed step-child* Im so glad you are getting back to this one!! LOVE IT!! xoxodana
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love it. I hope to read more of CAM now that TPW has ended. I love your stories.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
that was great loved up your mike newton can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 08 May 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
When are you going to update next?