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Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wait...no!!!! Who said that?!?!? I think I know, but one can never be too sure.

Argh! Thanks for the update. Loved the backstory you put in here :)



Author's Response:

I'd love to know who you think it is. 

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 16

WoW, the more drama the better!! Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: joblackero Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love this story... it's great!!

Reviewer: stacylm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hi there, congrats on the book. I've been searching but can not seem to find it anywhere. Do you mind posting a link that will go directly to you book for sale?? Thanks a ton!



Author's Response:

It's not available in B&N or Amazon just yet. Right now you can purchase it directly thru the writers coffee shop.  click on twcs ph (this is the publishing house). You'll need to set up a user/password to securely order the book.  It's called Blind Faith by Michael Schneider

Let me know if you still have any problems.  It's available in paperback and ebook format.  I'd love to hear what you thought of it.

Take care,

Mic

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love this story!!!!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

I originally started following this story on Fanfiction.  Please keep the chapters coming.  It's a very good story so far ;-)

Reviewer: amgrant3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

I can't wait to see how the telling of the stories is going to go with them all there. Ready to rip out each others throats!! Great chapter!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

I had to re-post my review because somehow it showed up with only 4 little coffee cups. I thought I gave it 5 :/

Well, anyhow, great chapter! Looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: glo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

Just found this story and it's really good, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome chapter! I need answers!!! lol Can't wait!

Reviewer: PreciousDazzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow! Love this story! Imagine if she's turning into a vamp without being bitten! This is an interesting take into the whole vamp world. Looking forward to where you take everyone because like Bella, I am totally confused about Renee and what role the Vamps and wolfs play.



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapter now. Answers soon

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 15

wow

Reviewer: MidnightSinger73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update. :)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

i can't wait for the next chapter.
so i am taking it that charlie knows all about both worlds. somehow renee got mixed up in the world and was taken from bella and charlie. wow at first i thought maybe somehow bella was pregnant from kissing. huh isn't that what are parents used to tell us, you'd get pregnant from kissing. so me and my friend at work where fighting over that section. so it seems maybe bella is a hybrid. she is changing from kissing edward. again love the chapter and can't wait for the update

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

A very interesting turn of events. I guess since she smells like him that means she is meant for him.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15

SOOO cool, i can't wait to see how this turns out!

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 15

Interesting! I really like the twists you are putting in your story.I'm looking forward to some explanations. Thanks for continuing to share this with us!

Author's Response:

I finally found my groove!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

lol  so they want to force her to imprint on the pack..... lovely

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

Gah!!!!!  I love it love it, the suspense is killing me, and I love it!!  :)

See you next chapter!!

Reviewer: ENTER THE STARGATE Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

What? This is starting to get a little weird.  Which of course means I love it!  Don't keep us waiting like this!   I beg of you.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow, good chapter, Bellas character is stuck in a war zone.

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 15

Please keep updating I am so on edge of my seat......LOL great story so far thanks

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

ha. I mate is a mate.

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

Whoa, this is a whole new approach to the story. You've got me intrigued. Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

Holy Crow!  What an awesome twist on the story.  I can't wait to see where it goes and I have been patiently waiting too!  LOL  Thanks for not forgetting this story.  I really believe you have a great twist going here.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my god you are so evil!!! I wanted read more, and now I´m crazy here for to know what are happen... that chapter was so cool I don´t want to stop read anymore lol I loved it and am anxious for the next please keep going ;D

Reviewer: rhapsody9278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

I just love this story!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapters!!!!! :)

Reviewer: rjh Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, this story went places I never expected. Now I am really curious, please don't leave us hanging for long.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

loved it very much thank you for sharing and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can because I'm hooked.....

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update, talk about a cliffy, yeah I feel like I don't know anything though.ha

I guess Edward's saliva provided the venom he needed to have in Bella to mark her as his. Yeah!

Reviewer: TessLouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

Okaaaay .... really anxious to know what's going on.  Kinda hope Bella isn't a werewolf - I have a hard time getting through those stories.  But, there's always a first time! 

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Whoa...a cliffie!  Nasty...:(

Reviewer: Seraphslastkiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!! I'm excited! ?But you already knew that! Big squishy love for this story and the author! <3<3

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

Okay? What is happening?  I look forward to more information.  I am enjoying this story.

Reviewer: OliveTrusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

What a wonderful chapter!  As much as I loved TPW, and I really did, I think this is my favorite of your stories.  I love a possessive vampward!  And I hate Jacob, so I am hoping that some ass kicking might take place later on!  Can't wait for EPOV on what is going down, too.  Seriously, I am just in love with this story!

I am looking forward to buying your book when it comes out.  I saw it on the TWCS, but will purchase it for the kindle.  Can't wait to read it.  If your fan fiction stories are any indication of what you are capable of, your published novel should be outta of this world! 

Congratulations on your awards.  TPW and you totally earned it! 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

aagghhhh the tension is killing me.  Charlie knows too great chapter by the way, I can feel the emotion running through the crowd. 

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

this is getting really good 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, this is a different twist, I like it and am looking forward to the next update & some answers to what the heck is going on;D)



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in the works now. I should have it posted by next weekend.

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter! Looking forward to another!

Thanks for the update =)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

OK.  I'm caught up but now I'm hungry for more.  I'll be waiting for your next update.

Great job.    **hugs**  Kat



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter. Should be ready by next week.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

hmm..

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow!  You are a busy lady.  Where do you find the time to write all these different stories?  I have trouble keeping up with the updates on just one story.  I'm impressed.                    Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 11

What a great chapter.  I loved fiery little Bella taking on Edward and then Emmett.  Her interactions with the Cullens are going to be so much fun to read.  If only she knew...

Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 10

I can't wait to see how Bella reacts when she realizes that her blankets smell like Edward.  Great little detail to add to the story.              Kat

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

I never thought much about it in the Twilight books when Edward would sneak into Bella's room while she slept.   This time it seemed a little creepy.  The 'Soon, my love, very soon' made me think of Dracula or something. 

But then again...it's Edward.  He could sneak into my bedroom anytime...not sure that my husband would appreciate it though (lol).

I'm loving this new story of yours.    Kat

 

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

Edward's jealousy is going to bite him in the butt.    Kat

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Amazing!!!!!!

Reviewer: K-princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

the chapter was realy good and I can'T wait to read more. I'm looking forward to know what'll happen. I hope that Bella will side with the cullens.

please update asap ^^ ;)

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, that was an unexpected disturbance.  Look forward to more CAM. :)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oops i did it again, i knocked over my chair, got lost in the 'YEAH's

Oh Update! Update! Update!

Sorry, ever since that Britney Spears Glee episode i've had Brit on the brain.

Anyway great job, yet again.  Thanks for another update, can't wait for the next.

;)



Author's Response:

Try sitting on the sofa so you can't knock it over.  :)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

I think i might be a little confused. is charlie aware of billie and the pack? if so is he aware of the cullens as well? it seems as if she considers billie her uncle. but it doesn't seem that she knows about the pack. i wonder how she is going to take the news. edward and bella's relationship is rather new, hmmmm

love it



Author's Response:

Don't worry, answers come in the next chapter. It's halfway finished.  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bedtime... but I want to keep reading.  Oh well, there's always tomorrow.    Kat



Author's Response:

Bedtime for me as well. No more writing tonight. Its starting to look like giberish.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

uh oh.  This isn't going to be easy on Edward...**giggling**      Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

So sweet!  Back off Mike...Edward's movin in!   Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  I can't wait to see how you progress things.

Kat

 

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

wow, good cliffy, can't wait for the next update of the Red headed step child!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 14

Nice action and emotion here!  Kudos!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

Nice buildup to the action here!

Reviewer: LittleMiss1104 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

ohhh man!!! what does alice need to say? so excited for this! I love your story it's my favorite for the moment. I hope you update soon!

hearts!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

Just the thought of tiny Alice being knocked down by one of those wolves makes my breath catch. What a great chapter; can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

Yea   way to make bella listen.  just start attacking the man she loves.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

O my I really loved this chapter, and the battle!!! I don´t receive no one update for months  and now I had one and two chapter in line, it was a great presente!!! I can´t wait for the next chapter and to know how Bella will react and what Renne have to do with all it lol

thanks

xoxo

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

Mmmm cool update!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh wow!!!!!  Awesome!  I cant wait to see what happens next!!  :)

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

So Charlie knows all everything? What was Alice talking about when she mentions Bellas family tree? I really cant wait until the next chapter.

Reviewer: T101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow suspenseful ending - I look forward to seeing where this goes and how Alice chairs the meeting that is surely to follow.

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well that went well! haha.

Reviewer: rjh Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, I was not expecting this, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

wow, Poor Bella, i have a feeling this is going to be hard on her!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

Another great chapter, i used to read this story on fanfic, im glad u are writing more on it. Until next time

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

Its seems that Jacob smelled Bella on Edward when the wind blew and moved his shirt.

Reviewer: adoxography Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Please update!!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

I thought they had a treaty with the wolves? Why would they be coming to the carnival?



Author's Response:

The wolves are coming to enjoy the carnival same as anyone else. They don't know the Cullens are there yet..

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

The family is ust a little bit smothering huh?? I can see why Bella was getting freaked.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

Charlie wasnt too happy about it  being Edward at the door.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think Edward may drive himself crazy waiting for Bella.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

I guess Edward was getting a little upset in the woods.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

I like this"bolder" Edward.

Author's Response:

Just wait...

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great job! Can't wait for the next episode.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

 


I just want to say thank you for the great time you gave me by reading your story.

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

You are so talented

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks, it's my pleasure

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

A very well written chapter, dear

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

Surely they are not leaving her there, Charlie would not like that.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

I wonder what the other problem is with Bella? Does it have to do with the wolves?

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

I guess he is frowning because he cant read her mind.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

Edward sure cant wait to meet her. He does need to remember that she is human.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Seems interesting. Good chapter.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love at first sight and possesive already. I like it.

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

I read your chapter, it was originally, Thank you

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your writing is beautiful and fluent, always a pleasure to read you



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

I could have lived fine without the wolves.  I know Jacob. That so does not work for me.

 

 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, it's an E/B story.  Jacob won't stand a chance!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

aww shyte....now don't go treating this like a red headed step child!!!  lol...i love getting your updates on this story.  i think it's very creative.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

hmmmm  jakee's a jealous boy

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

yikes!!!

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

YEAH YEAH YEAH (Im chearing out of my seat, which has fallen back to the floor)

whew, okay i got it out of me, im ok, i might need a new chair if this keeps happening.

Great update.  Keep it coming.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

"Edward, what's wrong? Why are you making that noise again?"--probably one of the best/funniest lines I've read in a while? I don't know why, it just is. Thank you for posting another chapter and I love that this Jacob seems a bit more mature than the one I'm use to.



Author's Response:

I thought Jacob was very nice to look at in NM and Eclipse, but I couldn't deal with the fact that he was younger than her, so I aged him a bit.  If Edward can be 107 the least we can do is have a legally adult Jacob as well.  :)

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