Date: 25 Nov 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wait...no!!!! Who said that?!?!? I think I know, but one can never be too sure.
Argh! Thanks for the update. Loved the backstory you put in here :)
Author's Response:
I'd love to know who you think it is.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
WoW, the more drama the better!! Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story... it's great!!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hi there, congrats on the book. I've been searching but can not seem to find it anywhere. Do you mind posting a link that will go directly to you book for sale?? Thanks a ton!
Author's Response:
It's not available in B&N or Amazon just yet. Right now you can purchase it directly thru the writers coffee shop. click on twcs ph (this is the publishing house). You'll need to set up a user/password to securely order the book. It's called Blind Faith by Michael Schneider
Let me know if you still have any problems. It's available in paperback and ebook format. I'd love to hear what you thought of it.
Take care,
Mic
Date: 11 Nov 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story!!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
I originally started following this story on Fanfiction. Please keep the chapters coming. It's a very good story so far ;-)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait to see how the telling of the stories is going to go with them all there. Ready to rip out each others throats!! Great chapter!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
I had to re-post my review because somehow it showed up with only 4 little coffee cups. I thought I gave it 5 :/
Well, anyhow, great chapter! Looking forward to the next.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Just found this story and it's really good, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter! I need answers!!! lol Can't wait!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow! Love this story! Imagine if she's turning into a vamp without being bitten! This is an interesting take into the whole vamp world. Looking forward to where you take everyone because like Bella, I am totally confused about Renee and what role the Vamps and wolfs play.
Author's Response:
I'm working on the next chapter now. Answers soon
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update. :)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
i can't wait for the next chapter.
so i am taking it that charlie knows all about both worlds. somehow renee got mixed up in the world and was taken from bella and charlie. wow at first i thought maybe somehow bella was pregnant from kissing. huh isn't that what are parents used to tell us, you'd get pregnant from kissing. so me and my friend at work where fighting over that section. so it seems maybe bella is a hybrid. she is changing from kissing edward. again love the chapter and can't wait for the update
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
A very interesting turn of events. I guess since she smells like him that means she is meant for him.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
SOOO cool, i can't wait to see how this turns out!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Interesting! I really like the twists you are putting in your story.I'm looking forward to some explanations. Thanks for continuing to share this with us!
Author's Response:
I finally found my groove!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
lol so they want to force her to imprint on the pack..... lovely
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Gah!!!!! I love it love it, the suspense is killing me, and I love it!! :)
See you next chapter!!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
What? This is starting to get a little weird. Which of course means I love it! Don't keep us waiting like this! I beg of you.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow, good chapter, Bellas character is stuck in a war zone.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Please keep updating I am so on edge of my seat......LOL great story so far thanks
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
ha. I mate is a mate.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Whoa, this is a whole new approach to the story. You've got me intrigued. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
Holy Crow! What an awesome twist on the story. I can't wait to see where it goes and I have been patiently waiting too! LOL Thanks for not forgetting this story. I really believe you have a great twist going here. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my god you are so evil!!! I wanted read more, and now I´m crazy here for to know what are happen... that chapter was so cool I don´t want to stop read anymore lol I loved it and am anxious for the next please keep going ;D
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
I just love this story!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapters!!!!! :)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, this story went places I never expected. Now I am really curious, please don't leave us hanging for long.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
loved it very much thank you for sharing and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can because I'm hooked.....
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update, talk about a cliffy, yeah I feel like I don't know anything though.ha
I guess Edward's saliva provided the venom he needed to have in Bella to mark her as his. Yeah!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Okaaaay .... really anxious to know what's going on. Kinda hope Bella isn't a werewolf - I have a hard time getting through those stories. But, there's always a first time!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Whoa...a cliffie! Nasty...:(
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!! I'm excited! ?But you already knew that! Big squishy love for this story and the author! <3<3
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Okay? What is happening? I look forward to more information. I am enjoying this story.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
What a wonderful chapter! As much as I loved TPW, and I really did, I think this is my favorite of your stories. I love a possessive vampward! And I hate Jacob, so I am hoping that some ass kicking might take place later on! Can't wait for EPOV on what is going down, too. Seriously, I am just in love with this story!
I am looking forward to buying your book when it comes out. I saw it on the TWCS, but will purchase it for the kindle. Can't wait to read it. If your fan fiction stories are any indication of what you are capable of, your published novel should be outta of this world!
Congratulations on your awards. TPW and you totally earned it!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
aagghhhh the tension is killing me. Charlie knows too great chapter by the way, I can feel the emotion running through the crowd.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
this is getting really good
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, this is a different twist, I like it and am looking forward to the next update & some answers to what the heck is going on;D)
Author's Response:
The next chapter is in the works now. I should have it posted by next weekend.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Looking forward to another!
Thanks for the update =)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
OK. I'm caught up but now I'm hungry for more. I'll be waiting for your next update.
Great job. **hugs** Kat
Author's Response:
Working on the next chapter. Should be ready by next week.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow! You are a busy lady. Where do you find the time to write all these different stories? I have trouble keeping up with the updates on just one story. I'm impressed. Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
What a great chapter. I loved fiery little Bella taking on Edward and then Emmett. Her interactions with the Cullens are going to be so much fun to read. If only she knew...
Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait to see how Bella reacts when she realizes that her blankets smell like Edward. Great little detail to add to the story. Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
I never thought much about it in the Twilight books when Edward would sneak into Bella's room while she slept. This time it seemed a little creepy. The 'Soon, my love, very soon' made me think of Dracula or something.
But then again...it's Edward. He could sneak into my bedroom anytime...not sure that my husband would appreciate it though (lol).
I'm loving this new story of yours. Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward's jealousy is going to bite him in the butt. Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
the chapter was realy good and I can'T wait to read more. I'm looking forward to know what'll happen. I hope that Bella will side with the cullens.
please update asap ^^ ;)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, that was an unexpected disturbance. Look forward to more CAM. :)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oops i did it again, i knocked over my chair, got lost in the 'YEAH's
Oh Update! Update! Update!
Sorry, ever since that Britney Spears Glee episode i've had Brit on the brain.
Anyway great job, yet again. Thanks for another update, can't wait for the next.
;)
Author's Response:
Try sitting on the sofa so you can't knock it over. :)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think i might be a little confused. is charlie aware of billie and the pack? if so is he aware of the cullens as well? it seems as if she considers billie her uncle. but it doesn't seem that she knows about the pack. i wonder how she is going to take the news. edward and bella's relationship is rather new, hmmmm
love it
Author's Response:
Don't worry, answers come in the next chapter. It's halfway finished. :)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bedtime... but I want to keep reading. Oh well, there's always tomorrow. Kat
Author's Response:
Bedtime for me as well. No more writing tonight. Its starting to look like giberish.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
uh oh. This isn't going to be easy on Edward...**giggling** Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
So sweet! Back off Mike...Edward's movin in! Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I can't wait to see how you progress things.
Kat
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow, good cliffy, can't wait for the next update of the Red headed step child!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
Nice action and emotion here! Kudos!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
Nice buildup to the action here!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
ohhh man!!! what does alice need to say? so excited for this! I love your story it's my favorite for the moment. I hope you update soon!
hearts!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Just the thought of tiny Alice being knocked down by one of those wolves makes my breath catch. What a great chapter; can't wait for the next one!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yea way to make bella listen. just start attacking the man she loves.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
O my I really loved this chapter, and the battle!!! I don´t receive no one update for months and now I had one and two chapter in line, it was a great presente!!! I can´t wait for the next chapter and to know how Bella will react and what Renne have to do with all it lol
thanks
xoxo
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Mmmm cool update!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh wow!!!!! Awesome! I cant wait to see what happens next!! :)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
So Charlie knows all everything? What was Alice talking about when she mentions Bellas family tree? I really cant wait until the next chapter.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow suspenseful ending - I look forward to seeing where this goes and how Alice chairs the meeting that is surely to follow.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well that went well! haha.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, I was not expecting this, can't wait for more.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow, Poor Bella, i have a feeling this is going to be hard on her!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Another great chapter, i used to read this story on fanfic, im glad u are writing more on it. Until next time
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Its seems that Jacob smelled Bella on Edward when the wind blew and moved his shirt.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Please update!!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
I thought they had a treaty with the wolves? Why would they be coming to the carnival?
Author's Response:
The wolves are coming to enjoy the carnival same as anyone else. They don't know the Cullens are there yet..
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
The family is ust a little bit smothering huh?? I can see why Bella was getting freaked.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Charlie wasnt too happy about it being Edward at the door.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think Edward may drive himself crazy waiting for Bella.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I guess Edward was getting a little upset in the woods.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
I like this"bolder" Edward.
Author's Response:
Just wait...
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great job! Can't wait for the next episode.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
I just want to say thank you for the great time you gave me by reading your story.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
You are so talented
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks, it's my pleasure
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
A very well written chapter, dear
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Surely they are not leaving her there, Charlie would not like that.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder what the other problem is with Bella? Does it have to do with the wolves?
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
I guess he is frowning because he cant read her mind.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward sure cant wait to meet her. He does need to remember that she is human.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Seems interesting. Good chapter.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love at first sight and possesive already. I like it.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
I read your chapter, it was originally, Thank you
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your writing is beautiful and fluent, always a pleasure to read you
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
I could have lived fine without the wolves. I know Jacob. That so does not work for me.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, it's an E/B story. Jacob won't stand a chance!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
aww shyte....now don't go treating this like a red headed step child!!! lol...i love getting your updates on this story. i think it's very creative.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
hmmmm jakee's a jealous boy
Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
YEAH YEAH YEAH (Im chearing out of my seat, which has fallen back to the floor)
whew, okay i got it out of me, im ok, i might need a new chair if this keeps happening.
Great update. Keep it coming.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
"Edward, what's wrong? Why are you making that noise again?"--probably one of the best/funniest lines I've read in a while? I don't know why, it just is. Thank you for posting another chapter and I love that this Jacob seems a bit more mature than the one I'm use to.
Author's Response:
I thought Jacob was very nice to look at in NM and Eclipse, but I couldn't deal with the fact that he was younger than her, so I aged him a bit. If Edward can be 107 the least we can do is have a legally adult Jacob as well. :)