Date: 18 Sep 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad to hear your husband came through his surgery successfully and I will keep your family in my thoughts and prayers that everything continues to go smoothly. I love your story and always look forward to reading when you update, I can't wait to see Bella's reaction when Edward really sits her down and starts explaining everything to her about being mated to a vampire.
Next chapter will be E/B time.
Date: 18 Sep 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am so intrigued what has Carlisle found out? I cannot even begin to guess. I am looking forward to the next chapter when you can.
I am very glad to hear that your husband's surgery went well. Here's wishing for a speedy recovery.
Right now Carlisle doesn't know, but he does suspect something...
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for the update, I enjoyed reading the chapter, not sure what's going on with Bella or why it matters if Bella has a gift already but looking forward to finding out.
Yeah for Robbie, hope he mends quickly & perfectly.
Bella having a gift already as a human is unexpected. The concern is if Edward's venom is affecting Bella. Carlisle also found something that has him concerned.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aww.. I will send my Guardian Angle to help look over your husband.. and my prayers go out that everything works out in one go..
The story is turning out to be a excellent mystery and when you get time for the next chapter I will be here with bells on.. don't worry, I won't dispear..
Your reader friend <3 Leona ;)
Thank you! I know it's frustrating to read a story that doesn't update every week. My life just doesn't allow for that. I do my best between the two ff stories I'm writing, novel writing, working full-time and taking care of my husband and our daughter who is a senior this year. I gave up television completely other than one hour on Sunday nights to watch True Blood (which I'm beginning to feel is a waste of time), so I give every spare moment I have to CAM and LOMO.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Firstly, of course I will remember you and yours in my prayers. I hope everything goes really well.
I loved this chapter so much. All that growly thing was just so sweet. When you can I hope to read more.
In the meantime take great care of your self and family.
Thank you! Everyone seems to love the 'growly thing'. I think it's very sexy. I wish real men could growl. :)
Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
Really nice chapter and the growling is really nice, that so two mates can call each other. It seems that Bellas shield ability is quite potent, even as a human. Can't imagine how strong it will be, when she is turned. dIt's great to see Bella help Edward calm down, when he is ready to attack everyone to keep her save. I guess it would be nice for Bella to get some sleep, it can't be good to be awake for this long time. Especially with what happened in this time.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
as much joy as you have given me in the last few years I wish I could do more than send positive thoughts your way. Good Luck with the surgery and the wedding and if your senior year is anything like my daughters your wallet is going to be thin. grrr. Best of luck to you and yours.
This chapter was adorable. I love that the purr is individualized.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
I must say, I LOVE love love the growley thing...so sexy, so fun. Bella's denial in this chapter was a bit much for me, but hopefully she'll get over it
Remember, Bella has had a lot thrown at her at once. She's a little overwhelmed and exhausted by everything. Don't worry though, she's no wuss.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Dude! I totally thought I would get an answer to what's going on with Bella!!!
LOL...that's cool, although...maybe it's that you've built so much back story into this already, but her experience at four sounds awfully fishy! Do I believe in coincidence?....perhaps.
I will keep your family in my prayers. I hope all goes well.
They will find out what happened soon...and about her bad experience....
Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awww Darlin' ... God Bless and yes... Prayers in adbundance are coming your way. I'd like to include you in our prayer circle at Church too... I'm sure that's ok, so I'll get the word out tonight.
As for your stories... SIMPLY WONDERFUL. They make me so happy and thank you for an update amongst all the chaos in your life!
What a lovely example of an author and human being you are!
Muah ~ love and prayers ~ Fangs
Thank you for including us on your prayer circle!
I'm glad you like the update. Writing has become a great stress reliever for me.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Seems like Bella's shield works a little bit different than in Twilight. Probably blocking everything out, like Alice and her visions, while allowing Edward thoughts to enter her mind and also blocking Edwards ability when he is in her "bubble".
That it really cool, I can't imagine how strong or potent this ability will be, when she is turned.
I'm tweaking things a bit...
Date: 24 Jul 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
well i am looking forward to seeing if bella is continuing to turn vampire or what is causing her to hear edward and why the missing pieces in edward's reading of minds and alice's visions. something is clouding it. hmmm makes me wonder. i am wonderign if bella could be half and half.
I'm glad you liked it~
Date: 24 Jul 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
hmmm mutating Bella cant be good.
It's going to be interesting...
**I saw you're reading The Arrangement on lj. (TB is my latest interest. Do you have any TB or SSM ff to recommend? Preferably not on lj. That site is a pain in the ass to read on.)
Date: 23 Jul 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
Whew! You had me worried there for a sec! I thought they were about to be ambushed... the suspense, by the way, was wonderful ;)
I wonder what this means for our couple....hmmm....
Glad you liked it. Carlisle has a puzzle to solve...
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for the update, what a turn of events. So maybe as Bella has picked up some of Edward's powers maybe Edward has picked up some of Bella's and he is able to block them completly from Alice's vision?
Can't wait to read more, congrats on your book completion;D)
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
How scary to think you have just lost your Beloved son and future daugter inlaw..
I 'm wondering what kind of powers she has?
It is so nice to have you back.. I hope all is going good for your book.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
First I didn't know that you have published any books. Were they books that you posted here on TWCS? If so, what were the titles here and what are the Published titles?
I really enjoyed the chapter, there was a lot of suspence in this one.
I'm glad you liked the chapter. My published novels are Blind Faith and The Darkness of Perfection under Michael Schneider. They are both offered on twcs' publishing house. I hope you like them.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
I really like this. Are you going to update soon?
I'm glad you like the story. Yes, I will be updating soon. I just finished my second novel and I'm taking a short break to refocus my mind back on CAM & LOMO.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow that was unexpected. Charlie knows about them? Ok now I am even more interested.
I always had a problem with Charlie being so naive in the books. He's the chief of police, his best friend for years is Billy. There's no way he was that in the dark.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow that was an exciting chapter. I loved it. Emmett and Jasper holding him back. I was surprised that they were able to hold him off though. I didn't think anything would have been able to stop him but then I guess his draw to her will only intensify once they are together so he will only get more possesive. I love it.
Date: 18 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, and I thought that I should post. I would love to see this story get 400 reviews.
I would too. Problem is I started the story on ff long before I put it on twcs. There are over 1600 reviews on ffn. I doubt this will catch up, but I'll keep trying. Maybe next story. :)
Date: 10 May 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, now. That's an unexpected development, isn't it? I love your twists on canon. The mating growl is fascinating, and Bella's new ability is bound to make Edward a little bit jealous!
Seems Bella may be having a side-effect from ingesting his venom after all. ;)
Date: 10 May 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ha, Edwards gift is turned "against" him. That is funny. Especially when you have to read this paragraph for 5 times or so, to completely get the meaning (as a not native english speaker).
It is definetly an interesting thing, that Bella as a human is perhaps able to use Edwards gift on him. The question is, if this works just when they are intimate or if it works on a regular basis, and if the other (Cullen) have experienced this too. But I don't think, because, if they got the gift of their mate it would have been mentioned.
Now the question is, when Bella is finally turned, what extra ability she has, the same as in twilight or something new? Although I like her shield-abilty.
Like I said in a previous commet, I like that you give your story a new extra within the whole vampire universe.
Date: 10 May 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow... Bella has powers as a human... totally cool! She's going to make a kick-ass vampire!
Lovin' the chapter... can't wait for another!
Hope you had a great Mother's Day. As far as errors, if there were any, they weren't terribly noticable so no worries =)
Muah ~ XoXoXo
Date: 10 May 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ut oh, he may have the growly thing, but if she can read his mind to any degree, omg Emmett's going to have a field day with that one aside from the fact that he will now know how everyone else feels when he is constantly reading their mind, no privacy.
She's developed an interesting little side effect from his venom. More will be revealed next chapter.
Date: 10 May 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!!! I'm loooving the mating call. OMG! That's so hot! Lol @ Bella saying the growly thing. *giggles*
Glad you like! I loved your update tonight also! Is it bad to beg you for another update when I'm so slow? LMAO!
Date: 10 May 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow what the hell!!!! Bella is reading mind now??? I want so bad to see it please don´t be evil don´t take so long I really missed this story!!!
My novel is almost finished and then my focus goes back to CAM and ff. It seems there is a side effect from ingesting his venom. Just not what they expected. More will be revealed next chapter which should be up in June.
I promise she isn't absorbing everyone's powers. I hate stories like that. ;)
Date: 10 May 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
now that was mean for such a sort chaoter and two damn you for the cliffy!! but thanks for updating! i loved it. it seens that the more bella ingest his venom she gets to hear him.
Interesting little side effect. More will be revealed next chapter which should be up in June.
Date: 10 May 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh wow ... thats a heck or a twist there lol. I wish my hubby could do the growly thing too!
Mine does, but it's not sexy...just annoying as hell. I think it would help if he looked like a vampire. Maybe I should buy him a cape and fangs. lol
Date: 10 May 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh no so now she can read minds. I wonder if next chapter he will explain to her the importance of the bond to her. I think it is funny she said "growly thing." I do have to say in her defense I don't blame her. It would be nice for the women to have something the men couldn't ignore. Maybe not growling but their scent maybe. Like always I love this story and this chapter, and can't wait for the next one.
Not to worry. The women have a secret weapon as well. As a woman would I give all the power to a man? I think not! lol More will be revealed next chapter. I'm almost finished with my novel which means focus reverts back to CAM and ff.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is such a fabulous story. I can't believe that Charlie and Renee have known about the immortal world. Such a twist! I usually read fanfiction, so I've marked for alerts. Can't wait for more.
I'm glad you like the story so far. I should have the next update sometime next week. I always thought it was wrong to make Charlie clueless. He didn't get to be the chief of police by being stupid and burying his head in the sand.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
My faith is restored. I was imaging a lots of chapters full of hard discussions and explanations from all the characters in order for B&E to get together again ! Thanks !! I can't wait to know what will come next !!
I'm glad. This night was just a minor hiccup in the road for them.