Date: 18 Nov 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more
Date: 18 Nov 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
oooohhh ok I know I am 45 years old and should know better, but just the thought of the beautiful Edward "hunting" me makes me all tingly inside lol. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm 47 and I wrote it! LMAO! I'm looking forward to writing the hunt!
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2011 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
And so the hunt begins. Somehow it is funny, to see an Edward who embraces his inner-beast that much like your Edward. He is much more animalistic.
I just hopes he accepts that Bella might (probably) has a special gift/ability, which is already manifestered in her human life. It is the opposite of Edwards. I am curious, when Bella is turned, if she has more power/gifts or just her shield from Edward and other mental attacks from other vampires?
Author's Response:
She will not be a "super" vampire. Just the one gift. There's a reason it's manifesting early...
Date: 18 Nov 2011 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
My my........looks like Edward is finally giving in to his beast and allowing Bella to see it. Can't wait to see what happens ;-)
Author's Response:
Glad you like it
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome, can't wait to read Carlisle. I donated, but haven't had time to read yet. I've been writing my story for the Toys for Tots Compilation. I'm doing a story called Moose on the Loose inspired by a moose in europe that got drunk from eating fermented apples. So you have one drunken talking moose and one drunk vampire and a ton of crazy insane Emmett.
If you want to check it out, here's the link: christmaswishescompilation[.]blogspot[.]com
Author's Response:
Thanks for the heads up on such a great cause! I wasn't aware of the ff fundraiser.
Date: 18 Nov 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awwesome, love the need to hunt his mate. love the maze.
Author's Response:
It just seemed like a sexy thing to do.
Date: 18 Nov 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 24
No, No! Don't stop! Don't make me wait! Need MORE!!!!!
Author's Response:
Next chapter before mid-Dec I promise.
Date: 18 Nov 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
oo girl...how i have missed you...you made me happy when i saw this in my inbox. please do not let us wait solong for the next chapter. this was a wow of a chapter.
Author's Response:
Next chapter before mid-Dec I promise. Consider it an early Christmas present.
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:21 AM Title: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires
Thanks for the update
Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:55 PM Title: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires
All done.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:17 AM Title: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires
Wow..
That was a great piece of the puzzle.. I can belive that.. Fate does have a way to come around, one way or another..
Date: 28 Oct 2011 10:48 AM Title: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires
:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
I just love medical mysterious, fascinating. I wonder what Carlisle will find out, can't wait.
lmao --> I shuddered again as the image of Emmett dancing, dressed only in a gold thong refused to leave my brain. -- While Edward shuddered I drooled. Now I can't get that image outta my head. lol
Awesome chappy! Thanks.
I hope your hubby's feeling better.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. I'm donating for Texas Wildfire Relief which is Carlisle's pov after ch 22. You'll find out what he knows.
I had to throw in something humorous to keep the element of lighthearted from disappearing and the story becoming completely angsty.
Hubby had some complications, but he's doing good.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
I guess there is a bright side in being late. *nods* I get to read another chapter *grins*
awesome chappy btw =)
Date: 23 Sep 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hi!!! is so good to have a new chapter!!!! I´m glad for your husband and I wish your family get better always!!!
xoxo come back soon
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chapter now.
Date: 21 Sep 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
What is Carlisle hiding? I can't wait to find out what he is thinking. All I can come up with is that Eskimos made him think of Alaska, which made him think of Eleazer and how he can tell powers, but that is just a guess.
Author's Response:
Half right, but there's more...
Date: 18 Sep 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad to hear your husband came through his surgery successfully and I will keep your family in my thoughts and prayers that everything continues to go smoothly. I love your story and always look forward to reading when you update, I can't wait to see Bella's reaction when Edward really sits her down and starts explaining everything to her about being mated to a vampire.
Author's Response:
Next chapter will be E/B time.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am so intrigued what has Carlisle found out? I cannot even begin to guess. I am looking forward to the next chapter when you can.
I am very glad to hear that your husband's surgery went well. Here's wishing for a speedy recovery.
Author's Response:
Right now Carlisle doesn't know, but he does suspect something...
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for the update, I enjoyed reading the chapter, not sure what's going on with Bella or why it matters if Bella has a gift already but looking forward to finding out.
Yeah for Robbie, hope he mends quickly & perfectly.
Author's Response:
Bella having a gift already as a human is unexpected. The concern is if Edward's venom is affecting Bella. Carlisle also found something that has him concerned.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh I am so excited to see where this is headed!! Yay!
Eskimos wearing black have thrown me for a loop lol I love it!
Author's Response:
I wonder what she's dreaming about....
Date: 17 Sep 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hmmm her dreams are hilarious. Poor frustrated carlisle.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aww.. I will send my Guardian Angle to help look over your husband.. and my prayers go out that everything works out in one go..
The story is turning out to be a excellent mystery and when you get time for the next chapter I will be here with bells on.. don't worry, I won't dispear..
Your reader friend <3 Leona ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I know it's frustrating to read a story that doesn't update every week. My life just doesn't allow for that. I do my best between the two ff stories I'm writing, novel writing, working full-time and taking care of my husband and our daughter who is a senior this year. I gave up television completely other than one hour on Sunday nights to watch True Blood (which I'm beginning to feel is a waste of time), so I give every spare moment I have to CAM and LOMO.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Firstly, of course I will remember you and yours in my prayers. I hope everything goes really well.
I loved this chapter so much. All that growly thing was just so sweet. When you can I hope to read more.
In the meantime take great care of your self and family.
hugs.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Everyone seems to love the 'growly thing'. I think it's very sexy. I wish real men could growl. :)
Date: 01 Sep 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm not a religious person but you have my best wishes and happy thoughts directed at you and Robbie. Good luck!!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
I loved your story and was glad to see a new chapter. I'm so sorry for all you are going through in your family. I pray that everything turns out good for you!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
I will put in a prayer request in our 8:00 service for your family! Great chapter btw.
Date: 31 Aug 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love this chapter!! I really hope everything goes ok and I really did knock on wood for you!! Take care:)
Erin
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
Really nice chapter and the growling is really nice, that so two mates can call each other. It seems that Bellas shield ability is quite potent, even as a human. Can't imagine how strong it will be, when she is turned. dIt's great to see Bella help Edward calm down, when he is ready to attack everyone to keep her save. I guess it would be nice for Bella to get some sleep, it can't be good to be awake for this long time. Especially with what happened in this time.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome chapter, loved it. I will be praying for you and your family for the successful surgery.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter. lol for needle story....the monsters attacking her part.
Best of luck with your RL stuff
Date: 30 Aug 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
as much joy as you have given me in the last few years I wish I could do more than send positive thoughts your way. Good Luck with the surgery and the wedding and if your senior year is anything like my daughters your wallet is going to be thin. grrr. Best of luck to you and yours.
This chapter was adorable. I love that the purr is individualized.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good luck to Robbie and to you too Mic, hope everything goes better than you could imagine;D)
Thanks for writing, great to see an update.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you so much for the update......I love this story ;-)
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
I must say, I LOVE love love the growley thing...so sexy, so fun. Bella's denial in this chapter was a bit much for me, but hopefully she'll get over it
Author's Response:
Remember, Bella has had a lot thrown at her at once. She's a little overwhelmed and exhausted by everything. Don't worry though, she's no wuss.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Dude! I totally thought I would get an answer to what's going on with Bella!!!
LOL...that's cool, although...maybe it's that you've built so much back story into this already, but her experience at four sounds awfully fishy! Do I believe in coincidence?....perhaps.
I will keep your family in my prayers. I hope all goes well.
Author's Response:
They will find out what happened soon...and about her bad experience....
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awww Darlin' ... God Bless and yes... Prayers in adbundance are coming your way. I'd like to include you in our prayer circle at Church too... I'm sure that's ok, so I'll get the word out tonight.
As for your stories... SIMPLY WONDERFUL. They make me so happy and thank you for an update amongst all the chaos in your life!
What a lovely example of an author and human being you are!
Muah ~ love and prayers ~ Fangs
Author's Response:
Thank you for including us on your prayer circle!
I'm glad you like the update. Writing has become a great stress reliever for me.
Mic
Date: 26 Jul 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Interesting. So does this mean Bella's shield is making itself known before she is even a vampire? Will she be able to be turned into a vampire? Lots of questions.
Author's Response:
Answers in the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter! So I'm guessing Bella is turning. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Seems like Bella's shield works a little bit different than in Twilight. Probably blocking everything out, like Alice and her visions, while allowing Edward thoughts to enter her mind and also blocking Edwards ability when he is in her "bubble".
That it really cool, I can't imagine how strong or potent this ability will be, when she is turned.
Author's Response:
I'm tweaking things a bit...
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
WOW, that was truly interesting!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
well i am looking forward to seeing if bella is continuing to turn vampire or what is causing her to hear edward and why the missing pieces in edward's reading of minds and alice's visions. something is clouding it. hmmm makes me wonder. i am wonderign if bella could be half and half.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it~
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
hmmm mutating Bella cant be good.
Author's Response:
It's going to be interesting...
**I saw you're reading The Arrangement on lj. (TB is my latest interest. Do you have any TB or SSM ff to recommend? Preferably not on lj. That site is a pain in the ass to read on.)
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
finally your back! :) as always a great chapter. Also i am glad your book is doing great!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
OH my gosh! Great chapter... I want more... NOW!!!! LOL ... Muah ~ Fangs
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it
Date: 24 Jul 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter and growly Edward (sigh) so hot, please update soon so I can find out what's happening to Bella.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah an update! Looks like Bella's shield is already developing. Interesting. And it works on Alice to. That is an interesting twist. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my, what is happening to Bella. Has all that kissing somehow changed her? I was so very please to see an update to this story, I enjoy it so.
Author's Response:
Could be...next chapter will explain
Date: 23 Jul 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just checked this story. I was very pleased to find that there was a chapter.
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
Whew! You had me worried there for a sec! I thought they were about to be ambushed... the suspense, by the way, was wonderful ;)
I wonder what this means for our couple....hmmm....
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Carlisle has a puzzle to solve...
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! That was scary there for a minute!
Whats going on with Bells??
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for the update, what a turn of events. So maybe as Bella has picked up some of Edward's powers maybe Edward has picked up some of Bella's and he is able to block them completly from Alice's vision?
Can't wait to read more, congrats on your book completion;D)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
How scary to think you have just lost your Beloved son and future daugter inlaw..
I 'm wondering what kind of powers she has?
awesome chapter..
It is so nice to have you back.. I hope all is going good for your book.
:)Leona
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
First I didn't know that you have published any books. Were they books that you posted here on TWCS? If so, what were the titles here and what are the Published titles?
I really enjoyed the chapter, there was a lot of suspence in this one.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the chapter. My published novels are Blind Faith and The Darkness of Perfection under Michael Schneider. They are both offered on twcs' publishing house. I hope you like them.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it - glad you are back!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! can't wait to read the next one
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
Please update.
Author's Response:
The next chapter is with my beta now.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow. She can read his mind! I love, just love the twist. I really like your Edward and Bella by the way. :-))
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
What a wonderful chapter I loved it.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. I'll be updating soon.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
I really like this. Are you going to update soon?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story. Yes, I will be updating soon. I just finished my second novel and I'm taking a short break to refocus my mind back on CAM & LOMO.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
LOL now Bella can hear his mind but he cant hear hers. LOL Well maybe he will be able to later. gosh I cant wait for an update.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love that demanding growl that he does and calls to her. I have never read that before.
Author's Response:
I wanted to try something new. I'm glad you liked it. It seemed to be well received by everyone.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow what a story. I love this thing. I hope you plan on making this extremely long.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, it still has a ways to go.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow that was unexpected. Charlie knows about them? Ok now I am even more interested.
Author's Response:
I always had a problem with Charlie being so naive in the books. He's the chief of police, his best friend for years is Billy. There's no way he was that in the dark.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Gosh it doesn't seem like they are going to get a break huh? Poor guys. I hope the wolves aren't too much trouble.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love Bella standing up to Emmett. That was funny. Oh and I love that she accepted Edward so fast. That was awesome.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love Emmett protecting his sister. lol. I am so excited, finally they are on a date.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow that was an exciting chapter. I loved it. Emmett and Jasper holding him back. I was surprised that they were able to hold him off though. I didn't think anything would have been able to stop him but then I guess his draw to her will only intensify once they are together so he will only get more possesive. I love it.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sounds like she was getting a little help pushing Mike away. LOL I love it.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am loving this story so much. I just found it and I am really excited. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
WHAT??? oh my!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am so sorry that it's taken me so long to catch up, I love this story and this chapter was awesome!
Date: 18 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, and I thought that I should post. I would love to see this story get 400 reviews.
Author's Response:
I would too. Problem is I started the story on ff long before I put it on twcs. There are over 1600 reviews on ffn. I doubt this will catch up, but I'll keep trying. Maybe next story. :)
Date: 14 May 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it. Firefox kicks explorer's ass.
Date: 13 May 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Their bond is getting stronger.
Date: 12 May 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the excellent chapter!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh Snap Take that E she can hear you but you can't hear her lets see how he deals with the tables turned No more surprises Go B show him who's boss now LMAO thanks for sharing this with us....
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
WOW, Bella can now read Edwards mind. I didnt see that coming.
Author's Response:
Looks like there might be a side effect after all from ingesting his venom. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
woo hoo private time with eddie.
Date: 11 May 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
oooh snapp!
cant wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter!!!!!!!!1
Date: 10 May 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Dun-dun-dun!!! Interesting development!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
uh oh................whats going on??????? Love the update wish it was alittle longer.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, lil Bella is full of surprises! I LOVE this story!!1
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, now. That's an unexpected development, isn't it? I love your twists on canon. The mating growl is fascinating, and Bella's new ability is bound to make Edward a little bit jealous!
Author's Response:
Seems Bella may be having a side-effect from ingesting his venom after all. ;)
Date: 10 May 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
WHAT????????? omg update soon!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ha, Edwards gift is turned "against" him. That is funny. Especially when you have to read this paragraph for 5 times or so, to completely get the meaning (as a not native english speaker).
It is definetly an interesting thing, that Bella as a human is perhaps able to use Edwards gift on him. The question is, if this works just when they are intimate or if it works on a regular basis, and if the other (Cullen) have experienced this too. But I don't think, because, if they got the gift of their mate it would have been mentioned.
Now the question is, when Bella is finally turned, what extra ability she has, the same as in twilight or something new? Although I like her shield-abilty.
Like I said in a previous commet, I like that you give your story a new extra within the whole vampire universe.
Date: 10 May 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
She's picked up his mind reading;D
Thanks for the update, I've missed reading about these folks.
I'm so glad Charlie's got her back & is being understanding;D
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow... Bella has powers as a human... totally cool! She's going to make a kick-ass vampire!
Lovin' the chapter... can't wait for another!
Hope you had a great Mother's Day. As far as errors, if there were any, they weren't terribly noticable so no worries =)
Muah ~ XoXoXo
Date: 10 May 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG TOO GOOD!! I can't believe you left there!! I hope you can write soon!!! Loved it:)
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ut oh, he may have the growly thing, but if she can read his mind to any degree, omg Emmett's going to have a field day with that one aside from the fact that he will now know how everyone else feels when he is constantly reading their mind, no privacy.
Author's Response:
She's developed an interesting little side effect from his venom. More will be revealed next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!!! I'm loooving the mating call. OMG! That's so hot! Lol @ Bella saying the growly thing. *giggles*
Author's Response:
Glad you like! I loved your update tonight also! Is it bad to beg you for another update when I'm so slow? LMAO!
Date: 10 May 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow what the hell!!!! Bella is reading mind now??? I want so bad to see it please don´t be evil don´t take so long I really missed this story!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
My novel is almost finished and then my focus goes back to CAM and ff. It seems there is a side effect from ingesting his venom. Just not what they expected. More will be revealed next chapter which should be up in June.
I promise she isn't absorbing everyone's powers. I hate stories like that. ;)
Date: 10 May 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
now that was mean for such a sort chaoter and two damn you for the cliffy!! but thanks for updating! i loved it. it seens that the more bella ingest his venom she gets to hear him.
Author's Response:
Interesting little side effect. More will be revealed next chapter which should be up in June.