Date: 14 Mar 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 36
This story is so compelling and your last chapter was really riveting! I can hardly wait to see how you weite the battle royale - because I'm pretty sure Aro and Felix will just leave without a fight for Bella.
I hope you and your family are doing better. God bless and stay positive. We'll be here waiting patiently until you can update. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work. I love your writing!
Date: 15 Jun 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 36
Yes, I am till with you and the story ;)
I wouldn't be surprised, if the gentlemen, that Bella met, was Aro from the Volturi. But than I am curious, why Alice has not seen him in her visions.
The story of Renee was very heartbreaking, but at least it enlightens her decisions and hopefully Bella can understand her a little bit more. Very tragic the whole episode was.
With the last sentence I would assume, that maybe Paul followed Renee and Bella in his wolf-form and now, that he heard the whole story is even more angry, that Bella is not his imprint.
But I guess I have to see until the next chapter is out. :)
Date: 27 May 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 36
Interesting cliff hanger... I understand not regreting having your children but I also don't agree with staying for the sake of your children. If you are that miserable, than it will effect everyone else around you. So did Renee think that if Paul imprinted on Bella that it would bring things full circle? Also, we never did really get an answer to why Renee didn't do more to communicate with Bella over the years.
Date: 27 May 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
Sorry I'm still with B being pissed. Charlie is wrong to force Renee on her after all this time. Only cemented by the digs Renee did on Edward. "Are you sure?" Really? Sorry she still doesn't get a past for disappearing for 10+ years.
I don't like Renee neither. Nothing excuses leaving a child behind. Charlie doesn't excuse her behavior either. He's just hoping Bella can move past her bitterness if she understands the reasons behind Renee's decisions.
Date: 27 May 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 36
This chapter clears up a lot of Bella's misconceptions, so at least she and her mother are in a better place. The scary thingis the deep angry voice from the woods! The little geek in the grocery store parking lot was probably a vampire, too, so that's a worry also!
Date: 27 May 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wonderful to see this amazing stories update. With you till the end! Wow, loved Renee's back story. Hard for Bella to hear but loved you giving us answers. Little concerned with the ending, hope to hear from this story soon. XOXO, Cheri
Glad you liked it!
Date: 27 May 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 36
Im here, still do not like Renee... nothing excuses what she did to Bella!! NOTHING!
You dont leave your kids!
Looking forward to more,
Welcome back :)
I don't care for Renee much myself. I understand her motive, but not her ability to carry it through to actually leave Bella behind. I didn't like her in the books, movie or in pretty much any fanfic story. She's not a very strong person.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow, you definetely know, how to place a cliff-hanger. If it wasn't enough that the arrival of Bellas Mom is highly awaited, now the Volturi are also there. Probably to know, what happened to their experiment.
Pretty excited what will happen next. :)
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 35
Just gotta say it, wonderful to see this story back. Loved it for so long. Do have to go back and read a few chapters to refresh my memory. Thrilled with this. XOXO,Cheri
Sorry it's been so long between updates. Thanks for sticking with me!
Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
I really hope Edward finds an outlet for his rage, he's going to need a cool head to deal with what's coming! It feels like you are beginning to tie up all the loose threads of this story, and I think a big ending is on it's way!
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thank you for the new chapter! Glad your internet is back up and running. :) It's funny - I've been watching 24 and relized that one of the baddies on the show is played by the same actress who played Renee, so when I read about her impending visit, she went from the flaky, flighty Renee we know and love to a sort of badass version of herself, lol. I'll never be able to see her the same way again! ;)
**off to read Legends**
It would be hard to see her in a serious role. lol! Glad you liked the chapter.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Did I really never make my way back to this? Yeah, I guess not, but something made me think of it today. And yeah, he should definitely familiarize himself with the term girlfriend. ;)
Thanks. Its not finished but the next chapter is in the works...if I could just get time to write.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 34
HOLY SHIT!!! FELIX IS MOST LIKELY TEARING THROUGH VOLTERRA AND THE VOLTURI...THEN HEADING TO FORKS TO GET BELLA.....HER MOTHER IS ON HER WAY AS WELL AS THE DENALIS.....AND WE NOW KNOW WHY SHE HASN'T BEEN EATING!!!! Sorry....got a bir excited...MORE SOON PLEASE!!! LOVE IT!!
Things are about to get interesting. ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow, slowly Bella is becoming a vampire, without knowing it. At least it is a less painfull method, than the usual bite. And she gets more pleasure from it. I mean, who wouldn't want to be kissed by Edward ;)
Well I am curious, what light Renee's arrival will shed to the whole vampire experimenting with humans/mystique legends.
Until the next chapter.
And good luck for you and and your family.
Glad you like it. There's more going on than they know...
Date: 03 Jul 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
Whether she wants to admit it or not, Bella is changing, and not too slowly, either! What a mess! Can't wait to see how she reacts when Renee arrives! Hopefully, Eleazar will be able to help when he finally gets there, someone needs to! I sure hope your mom is doing well and you are feeling okay, along with all the rest of your family! Take care of yourself and we'll be seeing you later!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 34
Make sure you take a little time for yourself. Don't feel guilty for giving yourself a half an hour a day to just be...
Right now time to myself consists of my hour long drive to & from work everyday. At least I can use the time to think about the next chapter. :)
Date: 30 Mar 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm sorry but any story in which Bella is involved with mike, especially with Edward in the picture is a huge no no... and kissing him? yuck. how can she be interested in him if she is Edward's mate? and Edward has to see or hear her with the other guy, not cool, not cool at all
She'll figure it out real fast who she should be with.
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh my.....I so need more!!! What will happen when Felix gets there? I think he is her imaginary friend.....which means she's already been claimed! Will he and Edward fight to the death for her? Or will someone enlighten Felix that Aro killed his mate/wife??? Please update again soon....I SO NEED MORE!!! LOVE IT!!!!
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 27 Mar 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 33
Bella struggels to understad what had happened to her and tries to get her feelings in order as well as how others might feel, regarding of the "experimentation". Do they love her because of despite of this. But fortunately Edward was able to get to her and convince her, that he loves her unconditionally and that they were made for each other.
I am excited, to see, what will happen next.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Bella needs to feel that same level of trust and confidence that Edward does that their love is real and rock solid. She's going to need that faith...
Date: 19 Mar 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah you got me all worried and freaked me out! Felix is almost as bad a Jake to me.....or Mike and James, etc........
Jake isn't a bad guy in this story. He really is just a family friend (no hidden feelings). Mike is just...Mike. James and Felix? Well, wait and see...
Date: 16 Mar 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
Soooo Sorry it took so long to review. I love this chapter, how she is all inside her brain but still lets him in. Hopefully soon she will realize that no matter what had happened that she and Edward are ment to be.
I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 15 Mar 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 33
thanks for the update. This was a great chapter. I wonder if the wolf in her mind is an image of an imprint she might have had if she had not been used for the expirement, or if she has her own wolf inside her
Bella does not have a wolf inside her. She'll find out about her imaginary friend soon.
Date: 15 Mar 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
You've done a great job here of making their manipulation of Bella obvious to the reader without it being ridiculous that she's unaware of it herself. Can't wait to see inside their heads and how they justify this behavior...
Date: 14 Mar 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 33
Poor Bella. I hate that she is feeling like she is. I hope she has realized that the feelings that she and Edward have for each other are real. I am so glad that you are back. I have missed you and your story.
She's had a lot thrown at her to make her unsure, but Edward will help her overcome the insecurity.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 33
You just think you're worried now, young Mr. Cullen! Wait until you see what's coming to take your mate from you! You can't imagine the hell that's on it's way! Unfortunately, I can and it is scaring me to pieces! There is going to have to be some miraculous way out of this mess, or people are going to die, and I hate the thought of who it might be!
There's a lot coming at them and Felix is one scary mo-fo.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 33
just finished chapter 33. What a wonderful story, I hope u update, I'm dying to see how this story goes.
Glad you're enjoying the story. Working on the next chapter now. Should be up in a few days.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 33
Uh oh. Wow, this is quite the twist. I can't wait for the next update, hope its soon!:-)
I'm glad you like the story. The next chapter is being a pain in my ass so it's taking a little longer than I planned to finish. Soon though.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella the mate of Felix?! Are you crazy? The poor girl could now be the mate for Paul, Felix and Edward. OMG. fortunately she is mated with Edward, who will do everything in his power to protect her. And of course the Cullens too.
So many twists and turns, that nobody would have thought.
I am excited, how everything will play out.
Her life does seem a bit complicated doesn't it? Don't worry it's still an E/B story with a HEA.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh dear...oh wow, things are about to get nasty. Edward will not let his girl go, Bella will not want to go, and Felix seems like a nasty piece of work. Aro, is delusional isn't he?
Aro is full of his own inflated ego. Felix is on the edge of insanity, but in a small way I feel sorry for him...he wanted to be more than he was and didn't think about the consequences of that decision. He lost his wife in the process and has missed her every day since.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 33
How the hell is Bella going to be Felix's mate, when she already is mated to Edward? I can't believe Aro could be so unaware of developments in that quarter! It's looking worse and worse for Bella and the Cullens. The shit is about to hit that well-known fan! We had best all duck, quickly!
Aro has been sending vamps to check on Bella over the years. He doesn't have someone staying around the clock to watch over her so he wouldn't necessarily know the Cullen's have moved back to town. He's about to find out a whole lot of truths.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
When reading the chapter I was like ruh roh...bella. but you are making this story even more interesting. And.....I got this message last night at 11:31pm!!! I would have read it but I was tired. I need to read this with a rested brain!!
I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
I'm all confused. Is Aro referring to Bella? I apologize if it's obvious from info learned from other chapters.
You made Felix some what sympathetic character. It would be cool if he got a happy ending not at the expense of Edward.
Chapter was engaging & brought me into the character's feelings. Excited for the next update.
Yes, Aro is referring to Bella. I do feel a little sorry for Felix, but this is an E/B story, not F/B. :)