Date: 16 Sep 2018 6:54 PM Title: Epilogue 2
Enjoyed your story. I'm glad they got their happily ever after
Date: 25 Jul 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was crazy messed up him being brought up on charges!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm thinking some emergency with Rose made him go home but why didn't he ever call?
Date: 25 Jul 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I totally did not expect that!
Date: 26 Apr 2014 2:48 PM Title: Prologue
So far I like it a lot.Good job
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is a good chapter.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:15 PM Title: Prologue
I love this first chapter.
Date: 23 Aug 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow, he really means to keep her for good, this is a beautiful short story
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
they are moving fast
Date: 04 Aug 2011 7:56 AM Title: Epilogue 2
Very realistic and convincing birth. Thanksgiving dinner was really a great launching pad for that scene, it was just like real life, with a wonderful family vibe. That last part, when Juliet is six months old, was darling! This whole story was just a lovely tribute to your little angel, Abigail. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:57 AM Title: Epilogue
Silly people, they should have known a 5:am phone would be about something serious or important. Of course, when it's Bella and Edward in bed together, it does tend to be distracting! Glad everything turned out so well for the Cullens and Bella and the Whitlocks. Oh how I love a happy ending!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
What a beautiful ring, I love old-fashioned things! That was probably the most romantic and amazing proposal scene ever! Ain't love grand?
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fear not, you did a beautiful job, of everything. I was laughing , with tears , by the time this chapter finished. That was so sad, so heartbreaking and finally so lovely, I just can't quit crying. Trying real hard not to get my keyboard wet here. Need I tell you how much this story touched me? I'm getting to be a weepy old woman, for sure! Loving this Edward and Bella, and nice to see Angela again, too.
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
If I had to hazard a guess, it will be this fake engagement of his that will get in the way of Edward and Bella being happy. It sounds okay now, but we know the other shoe is going to drop sometime. Oh drat!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
There's a glimmer of light down the hallway, and it starts to make sense. The misunderstanding at the hospital in 2010 is rooted in the past of Dartmouth, 2002, right? Now you're about to enlighten us all as to what really happened, I'll bet!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:00 AM Title: Prologue
What a rollercoaster ride Bella's emotions must have taken. First she sees Edward covered in blood, then sees he's not injured, then finds out he's there for Rosalie Cullen! I would have jumped to the same erroneous conclusion she did. Let's hope she gives Edward a chance to explain what seems to be between them.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:48 AM Title: Epilogue 2
Awww, this was a cute little story. Im glad things urned out good for them.... I know all too well what its like to have a premme. My son was born 6 weeks early. I was on bed rest from about 30.5 weeks til i was 34 weeks along. Love this story, and Im glad things worked out for them.
Date: 08 May 2011 3:36 PM Title: Epilogue 2
great story, i really enjoyed it :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 4:39 AM Title: Epilogue 2
I really liked this story even though I understand it was a Novella and meant to be short, I really wish it could have been longer, but I must say you really did get alot of information and wonderful information into this story to make it very interesting. Loved the lemons and the wonderful love felt and expressed by our little couple
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:02 AM Title: Epilogue 2
I really enjoyed this story! It was really cute!!!
Date: 24 Apr 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the back story of this chapter..
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:55 AM Title: Prologue
Just read your first chapter, I loved it and think you should keep wrighting.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 10:56 PM Title: Epilogue 2
Very cute story!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm sure something had to have happened with Rosalie or their families for Edward to just up and leave like he did.