oh B   Stay pissed....the beer was prob not a good idea though

oh yeah b...get pissed.   and rose helping too.   yeah.

good chapter thanks

awwwe poor Edward  good chappy and great insight to hiis protective nature poor little lottie. though i have to be a smart ass and ask was little lottie fonder of dollor of goblins? sorry had to throw that poto reference in there.

What a powerfully written chapter!

It starts out so very sweet, with Edward making breakfast and Bella dreaming of Edward as her husband someday. To me, this is a more realistic reaction for a teenage girl who's in love. The reluctance of SM's Bella to accept Edward's proposal just never rang true IMHO!

And then the chapter takes such a serious turn. The back story you are creating for Edward's human years is fascinating and so creative, yet it "feels" right for Edward and (except for the tears) does not seem OOC. I'm looking forward to finding out about the tears. I know you'll make it interesting!

Loved the latest chapter. I am glad that Edward and Bella continue to work things out between them. I loved Carlisle words of wisdom, and Eward sharing memories of his mother with Bella. I can't wait to see who the little girl is, and what she means to Edward. Please don't keep us all waiting to long for the next chapter.

I want to know about Charlotte. I loved the time that they spent together. So carefree and fun. I also like Carlisle letter.

a great chapter!

charlotte - do tell.  This was such a touching chapie.

My son's nickname is teddy - he is theodore though.  He is a tiny little rascal - he is 17 months old.

Where did they get him from, he never told her he was not going to leave...

that was an absolutely superb chapter, so beautifully written and very powerful.

too cute....  :)

OMG this chapter was GREAT!!! I have had a really crappy day and needed a awesome laugh so thank you:) I'm only 32 and I remember the term very well from my childhood-especially about a little boy in like Kindergarten when I was in like 2nd or 3rd grade that whipped it out on tyhe playground and his like 100 year old teacher almost had a heart attack!

Jo

We still use Tally Whacker in the East... well, in Ohio anyhow.

I laughed so damn hard during this entire chapter!  Love it!

:)

I love Emmett.  Everybody needs someone who is brutally honest and loving at the same time.  He has the perfect combination of both.

I love Edward because he such a gentlemen, well read, devoted, passionate, and handsome.  But he is such a boy in so many ways.

Emmett is a gent; he is obviously well educated by now, but he lacks Edward's refinement.  He also does not have Edward's arrogant streak.  He is hte brother I wish I had.  I am an only child.

I was thinking that i felt bad for Edward because he has no idea why Bella is crying. I can imagine he is thinking she is upset.

Well finally!!!! That was one of the best ones I have read. Please let him stay with her now....... Can't wait for the next update.....

Oh my!  That was such a great chapter:  sweet and so sexy!  I imagine that getting the right mix of sweetness and sexiness in a lemon like this must be quite a challenge, but you did a great job!

Eddie Eddie, she is crying because you finally overcame one of your many victorian hangups.

Hmmm She wants to get off the pill.....

Please no sick imprint and maybe a pretty name.  Renesme - cough.

Yes I really did SM just glanced over poor delicious Emmie.

OMG!!!!  Tissue warning with this chapter!!!!

Emmett's words are so humble they literally have me a blubbering mess.

*wipes eyes again to see the screen*

I just caught up with this story.  I love it, I am going to pimp it, definitely.

I love Emmett, he is the big brother EVERYONE wants.

nuff said.

Now, Eddie, get your ass in that house and claim your woman.

Bells, get over it and accept.  Your mother is your mother.  YOU ARE NOT HER!

I loved loved loved the letter from Emmett!  So different from the one from Jasper.  You've got them both nailed, with all the detail and their reactions.  Am blown away by this story.  Keep it coming, please.

I'm so glad to get EPOV of the scene in her room and esp. in the back of the truck!

I loved Emmett's letter.  I think you've definitely captured his "voice" and his spirit!

Great job!

You gotta love Em, he is so great. He saved Edward ass as usual.

 This is great!! I was laughing almost the whole chapter. My face hurts from smiling. This is just so awsome. Bravo Bella!!

"Edward, 1918 called. They want their prude back. Sheesh"  <-- classic!!

awwwe jasper is so sweet. a well loved Cullen.  yeah I am team Edward and team Jasper.

Aww Jasper is so sweet, I just want to eat him up. I agree with you, he has a panty dropping Southern drawl. Good chapter.

That sandwich has made me ravenous.  My lunch salad while yummy did not last long.  I went from hungry to ravenous.

I loved those letters.  Please let them work through it.  Pretty please.

There is always the speech you plan to say, the speech you give, and the speech you think of later that you should have given.  Always three of them, never just the two.

I don't agree with some, no, I don't think she should have stayed 'pissed' at all.  You only stay pissed if you don't mind him leaving and can live with that.  If you love someone, you have to know when to put yourself second and put the relationship first.

wow i love this story and cant wait to read more!! please up date soon!!!

YEYYYY! i loved this chapter!

Wow!  Frottage, round 2, and on the pick-up truck again!  Makes you wonder if that old truck has ever seen this much action.  I hope Edward knows how to do laundry.  Hopefully, Alice left him an extra pair of pants (or maybe several extra pairs . . .??).

Thanks again for your kind words.  Some people can create great fiction and some of us are just lucky enough to touch it with a few commas.  I thoroughly enjoy doing it.

hmmm waiting eagerly for the next chappy

This was a very good chapter, the psycology was so right. I hope you'll update soon, so that the mood you have created is not lost.

I love the way Bella wakes up and doesn't even realize that Edward is there and then is startled by his voice.  How could she possibly stay mad (or even say no) when he keeps telling her, "I NEED YOU!"  Who could resist that?

A long weekend? . . . I hope they can spend it together . . .

Yay!! I'm all for righteously pissed-off Bella, but who can resist a begging Edward?

LOL you are silly...love the chappy and hopefully Edward will be reasonable or carslisle will say "ok enough is enough Edward change her"

well, it was a long time now tht I did not find something worth reading on this site (Unless it had been already published somewhere else). So, congratulations.

I just love the mental voice of your Edward.  It’s so unique, yet it doesn’t feel OOC.   I love the little sayings and phrases that date back to the time of Edward's human years.

I like how this chapter had Edward reflecting on his history with Bella from the time he met her until the night before.  I always prefer stories with multiple POVs.  Thanks for doing this.

Poor Edward but i am glad Bella put him in his place ; ) I am sooooo looking to see what happends now with the new event that unfolded!!!

i love this adding to my favourites also i think ur banner is coool A marks super job look forward to reading more

Tell her the truth.  She might forgive and yes - be a little friendly with the hands.  Forgiveness is a 2 way street.  He must forgive and she must do the same if not then part.  Let her have her dog.

I must admit a cat mouse game does not sound fun.  Those two being equals does - them arguing can be funny.

though if she does not forgive him - perhaps alice or rose should invite tanya and encourage her to enroll in forks.

The first step is always the hardest....  1) Admit you are a dumb ass.   LOL  hehehehe  I love it.  Poor stupid Edward.  Well, at least he is one the right track.  Maybe he will eventually get there.  :)

well that was a real arse-kicking - RESPECT!

I thought the aim was to keep Edward...not to break up with him...

I'm a bit confused, but well, let's see what the next chapter brings.

please update soon

M4troth

OOOOOhhhhhh my word, i had to read all the chappies, i just couldnt stop to review, and now sadly there are no more to read. So get cracking, Im loving this.

Gotta tell ya, I was reading this at work, and my occasional loud giggle outburts had my co-workers worried.

Keep it up, Im loving Bitchella.

I did have a situation like bella except i acted like the bella from alice's vision which i will forever regret because he got to see me broken. love the story and can't wait to read more

Author's Response:

Aww, sweetie...I'm so sorry! But trust me when I say, most ALL of us have been there at one time or another. Sigh...I think thats why I wrote this chapter...it is very cathartic to be able to set things right. If only we had someone to help US script our words ahead of time...wheres a good author when WE need them!

I really enjoyed the way Bella took charge of the situation!  No curling up in a pile of leaves for THIS Bella!  You Go Girl!

That chapter made me cry for both of them.  sigh...  Update soon.  :)