Date: 22 Nov 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
Great story. It has been fun to read. I will be reading it many times. Thanks for your time and hard work.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
I have completely and totally enjoyed the journey you took me on today! I look forward to reading more & more from you!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
Great story I really enoyed it Keep up the good work
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
Can't wait for the christening!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 30: Baby, I'm yours
Wow I loved the names thanks for...........no Renessme. I really hate that name. Beautiful epilogue.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
That's a cute announcement - Love it! I too hope more writers and readers join us here at TWCS because I prefer my fanfics to be uncensored and read the way the writer's meant it to be read - Thanks!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
Awww for christening
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
The christening! How time flies, when you're having fun with twins! Still one of the cutest stories I've ever read, and I'll be watching for outtakes, etc.!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 31: Twice as nice
I agree love this story and it will be interesting to see how this place grows with certian other sites new rules i guess i just got here early :) love your stories.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 30: Baby, I'm yours
I really enjoyed reading this story and I am glad you didn't stop at the first four chapters. I can't wait to read any future takes you make for this story. the story made me laugh, get a little teary eyed, and brought me some joy as I read. A story that can do that is something special to quote what my grandmother says. I truely beleive that with this story.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 30: Baby, I'm yours
Wonderful end for a sweet story
Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 30: Baby, I'm yours
Where to start telling you what a wonderful story this is and how very much I have enjoyed reading it all? I loved the way Bella woke up and how silly she felt at first and her reactions to the babies! Neat idea that her pregnancy diet had let her wake with golden eyes. It was so lovely with all the family, Charlie included, gathered around, taking pictures and being happy. Teddy's middle name was genius, bet Rose was thrilled! You simply did a fabulous job! Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you enjoyed the epilogues! (It is so hard to come up with a Twi-pregnancy scenario that is different from the others that are out there. Luckily for me my Edward and Bella muses were on top of their game!)
This was one of the nicest experiences I've had in my life; being able to say that I wrote a story, had it published online, and readers telling me that they enjoyed it. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 30: Baby, I'm yours
This was a wonderful ending to your story. I've enjoyed this story so much and I love that you ended it this way. You created such wonderful characteristics and "voices" for your Edward and Bella. They were recognizable as Twilight's Edward and Bella, but they were also unique to your story in the nicest possible way. I especially loved your version of Edward. I liked the way both of them grew during the story. It was just a lovely story!
Date: 06 May 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 29: Come back to me, Baby
Boy! That was sure a dramatic birth. Rosalie came through like a champ! Charlotte popped into the world so easily, it must have shocked hell out of Edward and Rose. The second child was a huge bonus gift, I thought. A boys name does not immediately come to mind, though using the fathers, or the brothers as a basis might be nice. I love that Bella wakes up with golden eyes, can't wait to read the other half of the epilogue. This has been a terrific story!.
Author's Response:
Date: 06 May 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 28: Don't you want me, Baby?
I have a sneaky feeling that Alice just saved the whole honeymoon, and the rest of their lives, too. Can't shake the idea that Bella's breasts are so full, because she's pregnant! That would be the ultimate wedding gift for them both! A beautiful green-eyed baby! How fabulous would that be?
Date: 06 May 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 27: Post Card from the Edge
Looks like the honeymoon went as well from Edward's point of view, as it did from Bella's! Except for being jealous of a dolphin named Fred, of course.
Date: 06 May 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
I would have to say, that may be the description of a perfect honeymoon!
Date: 06 May 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 25: Forever Part Two
I thought the letter from Elisabeth Masen was probably Edward's best wedding gift, until I read the half-spoken, half-thought conversation between him and Charlie. Chief Swan is a really good detective and didn't panic when he figured out what Edward and the Cullens are. Both Bella's parents are going to be okay when she is changed I think. Wonderful wedding, too!
Date: 06 May 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
That was great, right up until they kickied over the soap drum! Both of them are turned on by the other talking dirty, how fun!
Date: 06 May 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
A wonderful chapter and I'm looking forwrd eagerly to the next part!
Date: 06 May 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 22: Count Down
Great chapter, a few misty moments and a lot of laughs! Charlie in Edward's Volvo had me in stiches! I know how anal-retentive he is about his cars. Bet Rose wasn't too thrilled, either! Bella's diary/journal was a good way to catch them up, I enjoyed her take on events.
Date: 05 May 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
Waiting in the janitor's closet was okay, until the announcement of afterschool detentions! Telling Charlie they were engaged went about as I suspected it would. Kind of surprised me he had the tree by Bella's window cut down, though. Little does he know the futility of that move!
Date: 05 May 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
Though it may put a crimp in thei privacy, I'm kind of glad Edward's family is back, and hopeJasper returns soon. Edward and Bella have a lot of gratitude to express for all the good wishes and advice and caring they received this long weekend. Good chat Carlisle and Edward had, even if they aren't completely done talking.
Date: 05 May 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
Had to chuckle at them getting caught by one of Charlie's deputies, making out in the Vanquish. At least he promised not to tell her dad!. The interlude at dinner was really sweet, especially when Bella found out about Jennifer/Bambi's Marine fiance. That was so cool to have her and Edward find a way to give her some money for a ring! Then, fantasy of fantasies, sex on a bearskin in front of the fireplace!. They had a perfect evening to celebrate their engagment. Then, of course, reality sets in the next morning with Emmett's big mouth! Welcome home!
Date: 05 May 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
Even though one of the participants is a vampire, and has to be very careful, I don't think the amount of sex they have had is too much. They are teenagers, for all intents and purposes, even Edward! I'm happy just reading how happy they are! Back to real life soon, Cullens coming home and Bella going back to Charlie's.
Date: 05 May 2012 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
What a happy coincidence that Laurent had loved a young human girl, didn't change her when she asked him to , and it all went to hell as a result. Nice for him he's found happiness with Irina, and nice he was coming to warn Edward and Bella that Victoria was out for revenge. Still, it was scary for a minute. The cottage and Edward's boyhood bed turned up at an opportune moment, huh?
Date: 05 May 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
Where the hell is a wolf when you want one? Of all the luck, to go for a walk and run into that thirsty vampire! Especially when Bella had just worked out in her mind that she needed to be back at home with Edward.
Date: 05 May 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
Heartwrenching and yet wonderful to read. It's lovely to see them share and grow closer. Edward may have had doubts of his soul, but it shines out of him and Bella has no problem seeing it. I have my fingers crossed that she says yes to his proposal!
Date: 05 May 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 14:Tears for Lottie
As soon as Edward looked at the photograph, I suspected this sad tale or one very much like it. It's nearly Freudian to read about the color of Lottie's being so similar to Bella's. I can see now why Carlisle urged Edward to share these memories with Bella.
Date: 05 May 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bed Time Stories
Carlisle's letter was wonderful. Edward's whole family have expressed their love and concern for his happiness. It's no wonder he loves them too. I loved the story of his parents emigrating from England and settling in America. I know Bella can't hear enough about Edward's life, both human and vampire.
Date: 05 May 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 12: Guilty as Charged
I sure was off about happy tears, guess I forgot how wound up Bella was about what Rose told her. That's kind of sad to think she cried over seducing her man, not knowing that wasn't a seduction , just good loving! Glad they talked it out and had a bath and named Mr. Masen.
Date: 05 May 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 11: Compromised
I'm thinking Edward has just been introduced to happy tears! Who wouldn't be happy, having had the most beautiful lovemaking session of all time? For a couple of virgins with next to no experience, they did a fabulous job, especially for the first time! Just shows what utter love and adoration will do for you!
Date: 05 May 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Simple Man
Profane though he may be, Emmett is definitely on the right track with that letter. He's right, too, about being a simple man, but that is a plus, what you see is what you get! Boy, how great is it that Em killed Victoria? What a load of worry off of everyone's mind!
Date: 05 May 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9: Love Letters
Sensible Bella almost wasn't there for a minute. It would be so damn hard to say stop to Edward, I'm proud that she managed it! The changes in Edward's room shocked him and Bella both, I think. The beautiful letters, from Jasper and Esme were the nicest thing for them to do! How caring and loving a family are the Cullens.
Date: 05 May 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 8: Pick-up truck pick me up
And a zesty one it was, too! I am highly encouraged by how these two are interacting . If they keep this up, it might just turn out okay.
Date: 05 May 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts and Broken Thongs
I don't blame Bella for trying to get Edward to talk things over. What good does it do to yell and harangue? Maybe it might feel good for a minute, but it sure doesn't accomplish much. A long weekend sounds like a real good place to start!
Date: 05 May 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 6: EPOV In which I find my voice
Edward has taken the most important step to fixing things between him and Bella, he's staying here and fighting his usual inclinations. Good for him! Plus he knows he has to have Bella's help to straighten out their mess.
Date: 05 May 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 5: Into the Woods
As long as things don't get out of hand, like Bella getting carried away, this may be a good thing. It could be just the wake-up call Edward needs. Maybe now he won't be gone when Victoria comes for Bella.
Date: 05 May 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 Beer Blast
Bella better make up her mind, is she going to seduce him or send him packing, or what? This scenario isnt playing out quite the way the girls told her this morning, so I'm hoping she doesn't mess it up!
Date: 05 May 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Divine Miss Hale
Rose and Alice are on a mission here, to build a better Bella, evidently, and from your description, they have outdone themselves! Edwardis going to have a heartattack when he sees her! I can hardly wait!
Date: 05 May 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 Bitch Slap
Well Hallelujah! This is much more like it, more the way I would have seen Bella reacting. She's going with the best defense is a good offense, I see. Rosalie is just the woman to help with that, with her opinion of men being what it is. I know she loves Emmett and cares about Edward, Jasper and Carlisle, but to her they are first of all , guys!
Date: 05 May 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 In Which I am the Clairvoyant
Just a bit different ending for Bella's birthday! For Edward to so forget all his precautions like that was rather eye-opening, not to mention hot! I'm glad Bella woke up with Alice on her bed, maybe there's a way to prevent extreme New Moon heartache.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 29: Come back to me, Baby
That was the best....
Date: 24 Apr 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 29: Come back to me, Baby
Hhhmmm......how about Edward Carlie (a combo of Charlie and Carlisle) for baby boy Cullen ;-) Maybe Elizabeth Marie for Charlotte’s middle name. What do you think :-)
Date: 23 Apr 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 29: Come back to me, Baby
How about Jett or Scot?
good chapter, although a little hectic lol. still enjoyable though. can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
Scott was my first boyfriend, so I probably won't go there! But now...Jeff? Well, that has long been one of my favorite names for a boy (I almost named my last son Jeff!)
TWCS didn't send out any alerts so I am not sure if you knew the second epilogue was published over a week ago. Go read it and see if you like the name E&B chose.
Thank you so much for all your reviews and support-you have been a faithful reader from the first and I appreciate it more than you know. XO!
Date: 23 Apr 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 29: Come back to me, Baby
Surprise baby boy. Colton Charles Cullen. LOL
THis chapter was so funny.
Author's Response:
Mary, Mary,...did you know the second epilogue was published over a week ago? Of course not because TWCS didn't send out any alerts! (I wondered why until today the only reader who left a review was my beta!)
Colton is an adorable name! Go see what B&E ended up choosing. XO!
Love your reviews and thanks for being such a loyal reviewer!
Date: 23 Apr 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 28: Don't you want me, Baby?
pregnant.
Date: 22 Apr 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 29: Come back to me, Baby
I was laughing so much through most of the chapter. Hmmm boy names huh? I hated Renesmee. TY for not using it. Although I do like Carlie. Charlotte Carlie? Boy names......Maybe name after Rose somehow?
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! If you didn't receive the alert (and no one did on TWCS) the second epilogue was published over a week ago. The story is now completely...complete!
Let me know what you think of the names! Thanks so much for all your lovely reviews. XO!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 28: Don't you want me, Baby?
Can't wait to read the epilogue and see why they had to wait. p.s. I love both those songs too!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 28: Don't you want me, Baby?
Guessing they will cut the honeymoon short now? Alice has some timing. Lol for dancing.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 28: Don't you want me, Baby?
awwww what now??! Damn Alice and her timing lol. Can't wait for the next update :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 27: Post Card from the Edge
Thanks again for the mention of the Edwardian/Victorian difference. I got a kick out of Edward being slightly jealous of the dolphin, and the ending (sixty-nine) made me laugh out loud. Let me tell you, not too many stories make me laugh out loud!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
As always, it was sweet, funny, and so sexy. It's really a talent to be able to combine all those things together in a story.
Edward: "Bella . . . MINE!. . ."
If that one was for me, thanks! - although I KNOW I'm not the only one that pants for possessive-ward.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 25: Forever Part Two
Great ending for the main part of the story! I'm looking forward to the epilogue and outtakes!
I always love a story that allows Charlie to be "in the know" and allows him to be more in Bella's life with Edward. Charlie is one of my favorite characters, and you've done a great job with him!
Date: 11 Jan 2012 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 27: Post Card from the Edge
who hoo..
Date: 10 Jan 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 27: Post Card from the Edge
Love dirty eddie
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
This story was great you did a wonderful job. I have to say I like your version of New Moon better. :)
Date: 08 Jan 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
a lovely chapter. good to see Edward relaxing and enjoying, and lucky lucky Bella to come so often during sex!!
Date: 08 Jan 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved Bella's postcard ;-)
Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
yummy honeymooon.
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 25: Forever Part Two
awsome story...i wish it wasnt over. I will keep a look out for more stories from you
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 25: Forever Part Two
thanks good chapter
Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 25: Forever Part Two
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. It has been tremendous. I think it's a huge oversight that AFITR has not won any awards :( but please don't let that stop you from writing.
I have loved this story from the start. As an amateur writer I know that things often take on a life of their own and will go their own route, but that's the beauty of writing and the wonder of the imagination.
There were things I might have picked you up on in this story re. use of Edwardian language but all in all, it doesn't matter, because your storytelling was so spot on. You've done a great job. Am looking forward to the epilogue and any outtakes that hive off the story. Bring it on!
Btw, I watched the original Twilight film over 150 times when it first came out. I read the books at least 20 times. Was besotted with it, lived and breathed it for a year. I stayed up nights to write my stories. Then it stopped. I haven't watched anything Twi related in months. My take on the Cullens has changed so much with all the fanfic I've read. My other half doesn't understand it. Yet! So, with it being November again, yesterday I got the BD book out to re-read (and hopefully break my writer's block on my own BD story). This morning I got the Twilight DVD out and watched it. Am about to watch NM again. I'm hoping to persuade my other half to take me to see Breaking Dawn next week, by which time I'll have re-read the book. How did we ever exist without the Cullens in our lives pre-2007 lol???
Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 25: Forever Part Two
I really loved this last chapter........the whole story really. Can't wait to read your next story ;-)
Date: 27 Nov 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 25: Forever Part Two
wonderful chapter. A sweet letter from mom, a long talk with the FIL, some lovely dancing, and off our kids go. Been a great ride. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Nov 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 In Which I am the Clairvoyant
I have loved reading this story and am sad that it is over. Please write a sequel!!! :)
Date: 27 Aug 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
yay!!!!!! what a pussy you are!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
HA-HA !! Sooo funny he fell. Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
So will I...
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
I loved the outtake! It was so sexy, yet still very sweet.
I don't think you should worry about using the "p-word." It seemed just fine in this outtake. IMHO.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
yummy and funny
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
Hot sexy funny and sweet..... :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
lol, that was hawt and naughty!!! Love it!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
Ooooohhhh........too funny ;-)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
OMG....I dont know if I want this to end!!! This is how it should have gone. We didnt need Jacob at all!! This is the love story that we needed and the Bella that needed to come about.
Cant wait to see the final few chapters!! Loves <3
Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
What a wonderful story!!!!! have loved every minute of it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
Wonderful chapter. Renee is quite perceptive when she wants to be. LOL for the rollers in the driveway and Alice's reaction.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
thank you so much for this great chapter, which echoes some elements from the book and integrates into your narrative so well. congrats on the award nomination - well deserved. good luck!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
good story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
There were a lot of moments in this chapter that I really enjoyed. I have to confess that I particularly liked the midnight trip to the meadow. Edward's bold request in the meadow was unexpected and, quite frankly, fuckhot.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
A really nice update. Love the gift the kids got for Charlie. It was sweet and generous of them.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
I cant believe we are at this point already! I feel like I have been with these kids since the beginning :)
I love how you have written this, its beautiful :)
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 23:Forever part one
I loved this story.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 22: Count Down
I understand Edward wanting a new haircut for a new stage in his life. I loved this chapter. I really want to know about the dententions Edward got.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 22: Count Down
OMG a haircut, love it! Our little Eddie is growing up!
I love Caveward too, no hating on it here :)
I cannot wait for the next chapter, but I am going to be sad to see this story go *sbos*
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 22: Count Down
OMG that was hilarious, esp the pepto bismol and the bathroom detention.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 22: Count Down
Thanks for the dedication and kind words!
I really like the way the diary entries turned out. They were a lot of fun to read and made for great chapter!
I'm still recovering from the shock of the haircut, but I think Edward's explanation and reasoning made sense. Plus, you're right - it definitely looks shorter in what we've seen of BD.
Date: 09 Jun 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts and Broken Thongs
Why would someone be mad that she forgave him? My gosh the few times my husband and I had situations like this in highschool and college we forgave right away. That's love.
Author's Response:
I agree! But you'd be suprised at how many of my readers wanted to flame her for forgivng him so quickly. I think it's a residual anger that stems from the original New Moon!
Thanks for your review!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 5: Into the Woods
Been there two times but I took charge of those two myself. The first one ended for good but number 2 came running back. Been 20 years and you could'nt run him off with a stick. I am enjoying your story very much!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 22: Count Down
This chapter was well worth the wait - you are a wonderful story teller. I am going to miss these characters when it ends and that it the mark of a very good story. I like the way Edward handles Charlie - he is now taking care of Bella and let let Charlie know that - it was so cute! Thank you!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind review. The part you mentioned about the way Edward handled Charlie was planned for many months. It was my favorite part of the chapter to write, so thank you for remarking on it!
I am sorry to bid this story farewell, but I have several new stories in the works. I do think we will hear from these two even after I hit the complete button. Maybe they'll send us postcards from time to time!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 22: Count Down
good chapter thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 27 May 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
this story is awesome i LOVE it keep writing :) xxx
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
I found this chapter to be very funny. The whole broken zipper thing was LOL funny. My family thought I was crazy laughing like a loon. I cant wait to see what happens in detention.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
I have three words for you: SUCTIONED and DRAINED! I am STILL LAUGHING everytime I think of that!
Oh, and Charlie cutting down the tree - priceless!
This was such a fun chapter. I loved poor Edward, stuck in the janitor's closet.
And, bravo to your Bella. It's nice it to see a Bella who takes Edward's feelings and sensitivities into consideration. I'm glad she decided to do the right thing for Edward's feelings and tell everyone (except Renee) about the engagement. Good for her!
BTW, I think it's "Sunflower" awards, not Sunshine.
Author's Response:
Grin! Thanks for your support, awesome editing skills, and your reviews! Good luck in the Sunshine Awards...you so deserve to win!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
great chapter. Aww poor eddie's gotta go to detention.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review...Poor Edward, definitely NOT his usual MO!
Date: 25 May 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
You know this story is so very funny.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you think so! We all need a good laugh or two...God knows I do. Tell me a joke, somebody! Srsly...
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
Good chapter. I'm glad that bella took edward's feelings into account and didn't try to hide or put off the telling of the engagement.
Author's Response:
Same here. I like to think that these two are a lot better at sensing each others needs and communicating their own a little better than the original. That was my intent when I started this story SIX months ago! Thank you for your consistent and positive reviews trbuie...very much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
*gigglesnorts* HAA HAA HAA!!!
Edward has detention!!!! *cracks up*
LOVE IT!!
Author's Response:
Well...he deserved it! But I promised him I wouldn't say why!
Thanks for your review! xo