Date: 19 Feb 2010 8:56 PM Title: Bring Me Life
Wow...that was a great one-shot. Some are so crass and this one had some class...no really nasty euphanisms or crass words. I think you handled it well and still made it sexy as can be. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:07 PM Title: Bring Me Life
Well that was unexpected!
I was expecting to see more of Edward's regret as he changed her, but I guess a guy losing his virginity at his age doesn't have much for thought beyond that? *smile*
I kind of want to see how he is handling her burning, what the family says, how they clean up after... And so on. LOL
It's a great plot bunny, in other words, and I'm glad to have read it!