Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Maxine she is feeling like she is not important as a women??? James and Tanya need to die.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow.. James and Victoria quickly slipped to the bad side. just stepped right over the line. Damn. Happy you let Victoria and Mary get a second chance. I can't wait for those two to get it.
E/k
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
now why no kids born in 4 years.. interesting. James and Tanya need to be shot... just sayin
;)
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
James and Tanya need to be caught; they are totally causing havic and destruction.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm most curious as to why no one's able to get pregnant. I'll definitely be looking forward to reading more! Thanks! :)
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
This story is so wicked - love it!...I have watched Big Love and understand the concept of a polygimist society, where a man has more than one wife and families with each one, and they all get along most of the time...but you have gone one step further with having the wives all interact sexually with the man at the same time and with each other [and even in front of other family members] - sooo kinky!
The shooting was a big shocker, especially can't wait to see what happens to Maxine - please update soon!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
yeah you have updated cant wait till your next update
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow! That was some cliffie! I cannot wait to read more!!!
Keye
Date: 17 Feb 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Not only are James and Tanya the town's Bonnie and Clyde, there were too many witnesses. I don't think they will be finding too much help in their escape.
What happened to Maxine? Was she shot?
Date: 17 Feb 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Grrrrrrrrr.......i hate cliffies. hopfully a update soon *hint hint*
Date: 17 Feb 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Omg! Yeah, thanks for the cliffy. (sarcastic much, hell yeah) lol
That was a great chap. It makes it hard to wait for an update.. I swear it hurts. I just knew you would figure out a way to make Bella the "First Wife". I feel sad for Maxine if she dies. She was a nice character. (shruggs shoulders) Well too bad for her. haha. Sorry but I'm a sucker for E/B. Long live E/B.
Going to hold my breath, pout and stomp my feet til next update. haha
E/k
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Uhmmm...did you lag behind in your updates here? I'd swear i read this one already and it was great both times.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it very much and I loved this chapter thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.....
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
well i hope for their sake that shes alright! keep the updates comming
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hmm... I'm torn. The naughty side of me likes Edward having 2 wives, but after this chapter I'm kinda hoping Maxine doesn't make it. I know, I'm selfish to want him all to myself. I mean Bella!! :) I'm anxious to see how it turns out! Thanks for the great entertainment!
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
OH cool chapter! It was definitely worth the wait! Great lemon AND some action! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Excellent job my dear! I love this story more and more as I read it!
~xoxoxoxo~
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Dum de Dum.....So this leaves Edward and Bella? Does he marry two more? Oh dear me....nasty James and Tanya...poor Victoria, and where the Hell is Mary?
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
ohhhh the suspense is killing me!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow - what a cliffie! I didn't expect that ...love the story!
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh no, not Maxine too! Poor Edward.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh no Poor Maxine. But Go Eddie for protecting the girls...or trying too. Geez. Hope Skankya and Psycho get caught soon.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
victoria is still with her family but mary is with them both:(
Author's Response:
yes for the being vickie is home and mary is dragged on the run. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow that was hot......
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tanya is such a bitch, but at least now they wil not have to deal with her. I am really glad that Maxine and Bella seem to be so happy with Edward.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! That was intense. I don't know how I would handle the whole family watching, and having his other wives there helping. It was crazy, but really good.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
TOO HOT.
REALLY GOOD,KEEP IT UP!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hiya!
I just found your story and I love it! I can't wait to read more =)
~Jells
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was kind of surprise by this one with all the wives then again not... I always seem to hate Tanya in a lot of stories.. I am so glad when Carlisle told them to get out of his home and also when Edward told Tanya off..
Mia/Meli
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved it very much thanks for sharing and please update when you can....
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
loved it very much I am in the hospital right now so i am behind give me time I will be back.....
Author's Response:
Sorry to hear you are in the hospital! I hope you feel better soon! Nails233
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to see what Happens to Tanya and James .And to find out what will happen to Mary and Victoria.I have a feeling James will try to get back at Bella to lol .
Date: 14 Jan 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this! Don't let a few nasty old hags get to you- you were honest about what to expect & they clearly shouldn't be reading this if that's how they feel. I think it's great & can't wait to see where this goes. I'm thrilled it appears Tanya will be out of the picture. And even though this is clearly not the typical "one-to-one" relationship, I like the fact that Edward feels stronger for Bella than anyone else. Thsnks for the great writing! :)
Date: 14 Jan 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Just thought I would tell you that you are doing an awesome job . . . it is hard to write a story like this, and whereas it is graphic - NC17 for a reason :-)
It has a plot and a good characterizations, chapters are a good length that way in case I forget what is going on, I don't have to read a ton to catch back up. I like it.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Not much in this chapter other than a lemon.... not that I'm complaining btw.... guess I'm just antsy for Tanya and James' punishment. I'm also worried about Victoria's place in the house... huh? guess this chapter did stir up a few questions LOL. They were hiding behind the citrus!
Have I mentioned how much I'm loving this story? Well, just making sure ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad to see the family rallying together thru this, I can't wait to read more about the fallout from this tryst and what happens to James or Tanya. Are they both in hiding right now because of the consequences...and I say to your negative reviewers is bring on the porn! It's lots of fun so far so keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hurry! UPdate soon! I LOVE this story :) Kinky little shit, huh?!
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Thakn you for reading my story. Next chapter is almost done. then the beta gets her turn with it. but i hope to have it up soon rather than later. Thanks again for all your review i loved them all! Nails233
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
ugh! I'm depressed... one more chapter left and then I'll have to wait for updates... UPDATE SOON!!! Please...
Tanya is a bitch and I'm not a fan of James either... good riddence; although I'm thinking they're not going to go away that easily!?!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOL ... some of your lines are AWESOME! I cannot wait for chapter 3... here I go!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I wasn't sure what my thoughts on this story would be but it was really sexy. I'm definitley intrigued! Onto the next chapter... Tanya is always such a naughty girl... I wonder what Edward has instore for her? I don't know much about this 'lifestyle' but I'm guess she just did a major 'fuck up' ... LOL
~xoxox~
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hum, this is a twist with James and Vicky. LOL
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'll take a wake up like that! Or a little fun in the middle of the night, but I would prefer Edward and Jasper instead of Maxine! Can't wait to see what's next.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thankyou for another kickass review
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
hope he doesnt hurt Mary
Date: 11 Jan 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope Mary's okay! James better not have killed her!!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like the idea of this story because it is totally different fron anything out there, but I have a question. Is Bella still 16 when this part of the chapter is taken place?
-Lisa
Author's Response:
she is but its been bother me. i have been thinking of changing it to seventeen or eighteen. I know legally someone can be married at sixteen with parental consent but i have kids and its been bothering. so i would love your thoughts on changing it. the thought came to me for a contest and even though i know sec's do it earlier i think i would be happier if i changed.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella blaming herself for what James and Tanya did. I am glad that the rest of the family are trying to comfort her. I am sorry that some people are having a problem with your story I am enjoying it. I guess some people cannot read a story for what it is a story and if they find it afencive dont read. Looking forward to more
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
I soooo don't see the point of negative reviews unless constuctive - don't they know what the X in the corner means or did someone have a gun their head forcing them to read?
This is like my guilty pleasure - I love this quirky story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nails, you have done it again. This story is AMAZING! I can not wait to read the next chapter. *Bouncing in my seat and clapping my hands* Please update again soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
I find this story interesting and a bit lurid. It really makes you think that out in the world that this is reality within some religious frame of thoughts. I dont condone but it is what it is. Fro the sake of Edward and Bella and the rest of the "Clan" (and for this group it matches) I find it crazy that sex in public is condoned in a religious belief system but again how grps of people can change their religions to suit their own needs is greatly behind this tale. Did Tanya do wrng, yes she did, but Edward was culpable in her misdeed by not respecting his wifes feeling and helping her wrk thru them in accepting Bella instead of dismissing her like yesterday's trash, I'm gonna follow because I want to see your characters evolve and I want to see the "clan" evolve and what if any consequences, if any, will they have to suffer for said choices.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter! I appologize for whoever sent you rude reviews-not only did they not read the warning-they probably didn't read the title and summary-DUH!
See ya next time:)
Jo
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Geez! Poor Victoria, but seriously, James left bruises all over her neck? What a creep!
I hope Edward doesn't have to take another wife to replace Tanya, I don't think he needs more then the two he has since they seem to like eachother enough, and Maxine seems to understand Edward's obsession with Bella and doesn't seem to mind playing second fiddle.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like just maxine, bella, & edward! Good riddance to Tanya!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
well i cant wait to see what they do to them~! and its totally hot! keep the updates comming
Date: 10 Jan 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
I started reading this story in hopes of some porn like action:) which you deliver every chapter. So Thank You keep up with the great work
Author's Response:
It was my pleasure! Thank you for giving it a shot! i am almost done with the next chapter. i am going to be throwing in a few curve balls, but plenty of *clears throat* action. I hope you like it! Nails233
Date: 10 Jan 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
cant wait to see what happens to James and Victoria
Author's Response:
More to come real soon next chapter is almost done. lots of things are going to be happening. I hope you enjoy them. Thank you for reading it!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward cracked me up when he was saying that Bella was so "selfless" in giving without asking for anything in return. Oh yes, but good things cum to those who wait, right??? LOL!!!!
Can't wait to see what happens with James and Tanya and, of course, to find out about what Mary and Victoria's options are now.
Don't blame you for disabling anonymous reviews. Not at all!
Keye
Date: 08 Jan 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
still loving this and I can't wait for more, which is why I'm reviewing quickly so I can move onto the next chapter!!!
Date: 08 Jan 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is Irish Cullen from facebook and can I tell you this is very good so far I'm liking it. I wouldn't mind getting married if I could get married like that.
Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well whatever happens to Tanya, James deserves the same or worse. Of course those two completely deserve each other. I enjoyed reading the update and I look forward to the next one.
Keye
Date: 04 Jan 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is like the MAJOR league guilty pleasure...and for only having sex twice before B our boy Eddie sure is a dirty talker - very verbal...but I guess in that family...that community he has been exposed to everything. Man, there are so many things I don't want to see in my lifetime - major one being my brother forcing his wife to go down on him *shivers*!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, okay... I really like your pervy story ;)
So Tanya's in trouble. James is in trouble. The plot thickens!
I'm intrested to see what the fall out is. Did I read that correctly-- Tanya can be stoned? Hmmm...intresting.
Great chapter!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Uh oh. Tanyas's a Baaaaaad Girl!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Just get rid of her, she doesn't know how to play nice..Edward doesn't want her anyway, never did.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Call me a pervert, but I am really enjoying this twisted and, uh, let's say unconventional love story. These Cullens are one kinky family, that's for sure. At least one of the wives is embracing Bella as the newbie.
Interesting that everything with Tanya is coming to a head so quickly. I figured that she would cause more trouble behind the scenes instead of all out cheating and getting caught intentionally. It sounds like there are some pretty serious reprecussions from cheating with another family member so I am surprised they went that far. Does this mean Tanya is out of the picture? Do these kind of marriages allow for divorce? I am very interested to see what happens next. Thanks
Author's Response:
The trouble with tanya is just starting. they are not going to slip away quietly. there will be major things happening. There is no divorce in their society. Thank you so much for giving it a shot! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tanya put herself in a lot of trouble along with James. Carlisle is really angry and will probably take strong actions with this. I wonder how will this affect Victoria? She is his daughter.
Edward was always clear with Tanya and Maxine and now Bella. It seems that for now it will be him with Maxine and Bella, I don't think Tanya will be coming back.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward had wanted Bella for a long long time. Before her he got two others, Tanya and Maxine. While the first resents her position, the later seems to have accepted it and tries to get the best out of her situation. Should we feel bad for Tanya? Or will she make us hate her through the story?
Date: 03 Jan 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is a different social and family structure, but as she said, it has worked for them, and they are used to it. Women seem to have no voice or opinion, some accept it, others not that well. Still the family shows love and affection, and there are little to no inhibitions.
We'll see how Bella's life progresses.
I just have one question, why does Carlisle only has two wives?
Author's Response:
You picked up on that little hint. no one else has asked. in this society you are only allowed 3 wives period. if something happens than that doesn't change, i can't say anymore with out spoiling that chapter but it will come. Thank you so much for all your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
The little Rebel!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow great chapter! Love the story!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Tanya needs to be gone anyway.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was so good.I can't wait to find out what happens to James and Tanya .Great story
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
of course bella would blame herself.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am afraid that Tanya & James may seek revenge on innocent Bella! Loving the story!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
off with their heads!!!! haha good riddence to them both. yeah
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Stone the bitch! LOL! No, I'm not that mean. I guess the Scarlett Letter treatment is good enough.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
kick her ass to the curb and let her rot! cant wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
oooohhh what tangled web we weave. Edward was a big part of the problem, he completely rejected tanya and acted like an ass. a lil bit of respect to her would have prevented all of this. I know in their lifestyles it doesnt work that way and tanya gets what she deserves at this point and the community at large will judge her but Im hopong some mercy will come her way. Naughty lil diddy but the bigger plot is really well written as well
Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh, i like this so far! can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
hhmm well this is interesting. They just go at it anywhere as long as there is no kids...wow
Date: 28 Dec 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
very interesting like to read more
Date: 22 Dec 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm thinking WOW! Interesting story. The rules are interesting too.
I always knew I was bigger than every male in our family. It's not hard to miss when no one thinks twice about bending their wife over the couch, dining room table, and even the stairs. There was only one hard and fast rule, that there never be any children present.
I'm guessing it can tend to be a sight to be in that household for very long. No telling what you might see.
I have never understood why a man would want more than one wife. Normally they cannot handle or please just the one so why would they want more? I don't get it but I still watch that show on HBO about it. Forget the name of it at the moment. So, I am guessing that it is all about the sex perhaps and passing along the family genes? Who knows. I mean, I know what they say but I don't know if I believe it ......the whole "in the name of religion thing". But I don't judge. Not my place.
Glad that Edward has found some happiness with Bella. Too bad he cannot get rid of Tanya. I think she is going to cause major trouble!!
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmm me thinks Tanya is going to cause more trouble.
Author's Response:
In a major way! and it's not just the Cullen's who will have to have eyes on the back of their heads. Folks is about to experience a whole new side of Tanya and James. Thank you so much for reading it! Nails233
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was definately something different, thanks for sharing. Have a great christmas!!!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
This sounds like a good story! I look forward to seeing more!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well you know what they say, "hell has no fury like a women scone". Tanya is going to have Bella for Breakfast, Lunch, and Dinner. I hope Edward can keep her safe.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure anyone will be safe once the tyrade starts. and it is coming. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! the fun has just begun. Nails233
Date: 21 Dec 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
i cant wait till ur next update
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving the hell out of this story. Their family is sooo naughty! And I'm glad that Bella is, of course, his favorite.
Looking forward to the next chapter...I have a feeling Tanya is not going down without a fight.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for giving it a chance! Tanya will different be making a mess of things. I hope you like it! Nails233
Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
This sounds like a really good story. I hope that you update soon––I'm curious.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I suspect Tanya may get a tad nasty? Do these people believe in divorce, because I think old Tanya's gotta go! Or do they all have to have 3 wives?
Author's Response:
Nope they do not believe in divorce. All males are allowed up to 3 wives. but they cannot be replaced. So if you have 3 wives and one dies you can not take another. Hint: it's why carlisle only has 2. but that will be explained later. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can......
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Holly shit I am sure Maxine is happy that Edward has Bella as one of his wifes at least now she will get some loving from him. I wonder if Tanya will change the way she is acking now she knew all along how Edward feels about Bella.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOWWWW! I really like the story, at first i didn't think that it was edward and bella because it doesn't say it in the characters. Thank god i looked. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for pointing that out. I think I have fixed it so it will say it now. Thank you for giving it a shot! More to come soon.