[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
I just want to hold her and beat the shit out of Jake. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh Bella. Jake is such a boy. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ya I did not see her working the 2 weeks. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thier banter is brilliant. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Whoop no Alice wedding hell. Love the monologs. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hope he does heal. Away from Bella.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow. You have done so awsome with your plot. It rocks! Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
F'n great. Go Bella she deserves a shot or12 to deal with jackass. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
UHg. He is such a tool. Thank god she has jazzy. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Arrogant ass. Can't wait for Bella2.0 to rip his just off. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great claiming. Oh em he makes me chuckle. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hot. Damn. Loved Rose.
Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love second-in-command for jazzy. Oh I hope I dont have hate rose in this story. She, Bella and Char could have such fun. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
5 points for jazz. I can't imaging her pain. Being adopted does give me some idea.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Eddie you dumb ass. Go Jazz! Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
Peter is awsome!!!! You have him as I picture jazzy.
Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
I like that you got her story out and done. Can't wait for Rose. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
So it seems the fun begins. Damn Alice and her texts.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love It hate texitng reviews.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Digits go Jazzy.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Quick chapter. Poor Bella this has to mess with her head.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the start. Can't wait to see her reaction.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just so you know, when I noticed your stories missing I about had a heart attack! You CAN NOT DO THAT TO ME!!! Ugh! I love love LOVE your stories.
XOXO,
Tryphyna
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 41
absolutely bloody brilliant!!! thank you for sharing. I've enjoyed every bit of the ride :D
and a Happy New Year to you.
Sammi xx
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 40
Bella - 1: Edward - nil! Yay!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 39
I opened my mouth to speak, but four other voices beat me to it: "We're ready."
How I laughed at the others chiming in!!
Hot stuff, girl. Keep it coming/cumming :D
Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 38
that was funny. what a great bunch of vamps!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 37
that was funny! I gave one of my vampire characters the same projecting and deflecting abilities as Bella - it's great to have fun with them isn't it lol.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 36
what a mix of emotions. quite a 48 hours.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
hmmm - judges, jury and executioners. I applaud the sentiment of making the perpetrators pay, but am not comfortable with them having been raped before death!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 33
great last part of that chapter - so real and so well described.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
The vampire and the werewolf eyed each other in silence for a long moment. I decided to intervene before I ended up getting peed on. ......I then looped my arms through theirs and with a little tug I led them down the corridor back to ICU, looking much like a fucked up Dorothy leading the Copper Man and the World's Sexiest Scarecrow. Maybe we could get back to Kansas after all.
I simply loved those two paragraphs and the way you weave high emotion with whipcrack dry humour like that.
And again, the lush erotica. Simply fab.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 31
that was simply brilliant. so spot on, it was awesome. Bella landing those verbal blows on Jake was superb and so right.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 30
"Don't be working your smooth Southern vampire dazzle voo-doo on my mom for your ill gain, Jasper Whitlock! Don't think I didn't fucking notice she's already smitten with your sparkly ass." She glared at me.
"Yeaaah, she loves me," I said airily. Bella whacked me with a pillow.
I just loved those lines - they had me hooting with laughter :D :D
Cracking chapter, loved all the banter and I love the multiple POVs you use which makes it all so interesting.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 27
loving your version of Bella.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
absolutely stunning. you write the sex scenes so well.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
that was incredible. oh fuck, I'm crying again! Am totally over-emotional today, a crappy New Year's Day for me, and you keep tugging at my heartstrings. I shall be reading your story until I'm caught up today.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can picture your scenes so vividly. Am loving the way you describe things.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
tears are streaming down my face. poor Bella.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
hahaha Mr Whitlock is really dominating isn't he lol.
loved the last comment from Em. he's a peach.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
that was hysterical! am enjoying this story so much. it's wicked :D
Date: 01 Jan 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
that was great. you've really got into Jasper's head and I love his dialogue.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
another fantastic chapter.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
a gripping chapter. it was great :D the only thing I had issue with was Edward calling her names and being aggressive. Being emo, I think he'd pummel himself rather than take it out on her.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
that was a hilarious chapter - way to go!!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
love the tension building :D happy new year to you!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
that was funny!! yummy too :D
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
that was very generous of Jasper. What a nice guy.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Doucheward? Hahaha!!! Great chapter. Am loving this story.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oooh I like Peter :D great banter, just love it :D
Date: 31 Dec 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
i loved this story so much. you wrote it extremely well and i cant wait for the sequel.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
very promising. I like the no nonsense way you deal with all the shit that went down in Bella's life.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh yeah - you can keep your hat on, baby!!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
great so far. and I loved Coyote Ugly!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok I really like this story. It is coming along and developing nicely. Can't wait to read more.