Date: 14 Sep 2020 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 14 Sep 2020 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 14 Sep 2020 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 14 Sep 2020 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 14 Sep 2020 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 29 Jun 2013 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it! Jake is an ass! Poor BELLA!
Date: 31 May 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! Poor Bella! Edward is an ass!
Date: 31 May 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! Way to stand up for herself!
Date: 31 May 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Peter is hilarious!
Date: 31 May 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG That wedding scene was the funniest shit ever!! Seriously had tears running down my face I was laughing so hard, for like 5 whole minutes before I could start reading again.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 41
Great loved it
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loved her speech to the crowd. Hmm her outfit sounds hawt. Making fun of Jazz' accent, not cool. Hope Bella fucks Aro up. Buh Bye Jane, stupid little biatch. Stupid Pussy Trio trying to escape. ROFL for squeezing in the Scooby Doo line. Aww She's gonna be President. Poor thing having a moping party, not that I can blame her. Woo hoo for sexy times. ….. Off to the sequel.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 40
Woo Hoo for going home to boston and back to college. Good thinking by Daddy C and the private jet. Sigh…..of course the V would have to show up eventually. Woo Hoo for Alice coming and Bella being kewl with her. Major B is hawt too. Edward is an idiot. Poor Tanya for having to deal with him. Glad B put him in his place. Tink…….gotta love it.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 39
Oh jazz…..talking down to her is not going to help your situation. Glad Peter is there to talk to him. And Char for B of course too. Woo Hoo for control. ROFL for the bee. Wow Bella's showing some yummy bedroom skills.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 38
Hee hee for knocking the boys head together. Horndog Daddy C. Go Protective Jazz…put him in his place. Aww Eddie's getting married. Glad B is there for Esme. Hawt for hot monkey lovin'.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 37
Petey's gonna get another punch if he's not careful. LOL for the Sam call. Silly jealous Jazz. Hmm another new power. LOL for projecting too.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
Lamaze breathing lol. Glad she's trying to remember everything good and bad. Ha ha for punching Peter and feeling herself up. Surprising Jazz already….WTG B. Woo Hoo for Bad Ass Bella's first hunt and sexy times.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
Aww for cursing Carlisle. Lol for Peter trying the veggie's. Wow for Carlisle paying the med bills. Yummy dance times. Wow Bella really making it a family affair huh. Peter is such a horndog. Aww candles are nice touch. Love the parting line.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 34
Sigh….you are REALLY gonna regret that James. Thank god for Alice. Glad the boys and char took out the trash. Lord knows how many others they did it too.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 33
Glad she got to spend time with Ty. James is going to be a problem. Need to report his ass to the school for harassment. Aww for their fight. Hmmm Domsper is yummy.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
Aww Ty is just too cute. Glad Jake has manned up and is being an adult now. Sweet chapter
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 31
Ugh another slimeball names James. Aww for her three protectors. Aww poor little Tyler. Glad Lexi is woman enough to text and call her and stand up to the whiny little pack boys. Go Bella….put that oversized little boy in his place. Woo Hoo for Carlisle and his surgical skills.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well at least Tessa got the message.. lol for Peter and Em's antics. Ugh for Renee time. She is SO inappropriate. Glad she got her head out of her ass and apologized though. Hee hee for baby pictures.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
Renee is such a tempermental biatch huh? Ha ha for Jazz taking her booze. Glad her and eddie are getting along now. Lexi is so sweet. School sounds cool. Aww Jealous B is so cute. Wow the girls really guilted her into that one huh. Poor Jazzy. JPOV: Glad he's doing ok. Ugh some women are just skanks. Go Bella and Char. Knock those biatches into next week. Hmmm Domella is hawt too.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Sigh Renee is such a bitch at times, like she was parent of the year. Hmmm Carlisle throwing out a little lust there huh. Ha Ha. OMG for dream/memory. And for Carlisle's reaction, along with the boys. LOL for Esme putting her man back in his place EDPOV: aww poor eddie having to see all that…. At leat until he said´"besmirched herself in promiscuity". Butt head. Wow took her against a wall….didnt know he had it in him. JPOV: lol for Bella ragging on Daddy C.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm not much for decorating either. Glad eddie is "playing" with Tanya and not bothering B anymore. Lol for Em and his video games. Bathroom sound heavenly. Aww he is so sweet (during bathtime). She is such a naughty thing (scarves).
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
Looked up that song…..kewl. Boston sounds great…..cold as heck, but great. Yummy shower time. Whoremaid…ROFL….hmm me thinks B is just as jealous as J. Bella gonna pay for her naughtiness tonight. Woo hoo for sexy times and for finding a new house.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good idea Carlisle had. Woo hoo for the guitar solo and fun thereafter. Woo Hoo for Lexi. Hope she gives it too him really good…..or not give it too him if you know what I mean… Lexi seems like a sweet girl.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
Not that I blame him, but hope someone can talk him down. Poor pukey B. Gotta say I agree with B. He does deserve to get his arse kicked but Ty does need his dad.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Lol for drywall…..better invest in the company. Uh Oh for the Leah email. Jake is going to be an arsehole, ya know he is. Wow for follow up email. Regardless of mortality…..he has real balls threatening her. Calling her a lying, fucking whore after what he did to her…..hope someone kicks his ass.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hope he talks to her….not make demands. BPOV: Glad she is thinking about some of the same things he is like living arrangements. Glad they are moving and gonna go to school. Careful Sammy, don’t want to get on Jazz' bad side. Hmm Domsper is hawt. Lol for Em at the end.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG for the preacher. Casper and Stella. ROFL. Sweet chapter.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ewww for naked Em on the couch. Ah yes Eddie go find Tanya and get it on up there. Glad her and J are getting along so well. Party's sound fun. Glad she got to go to Lara's party. Yummy cab ride. JPOV: woo hoo on getting married.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Go Esme. Bout time she did something. Peter is such a horndog. OMG they brought Eddie to the bar???? Ugh. JPOV: awww poor eddie….NOT. ROFL for Carlisle. Glad they are leaving though. He needs to get over it.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh Eddie's gotta be buzz kill. Oh eddie…..you are in for it now? Whorish? OMG. And he had the balls to put his hands on her…..F'ing MORON. JPOV: C&E should be worried about pussy boy. Go Bad Ass Jazz.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOL satisfied Bella is so much better than grumpy bella. Lol aint he a little old to be leaving hickeys. I'm with B…..who cares how eddie feels. C & E need to be careful how much they push her. JPOV: Mercy? Not the way he hurt B. uh oh drunk B in the house. Lol for that ending.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Peter is such a naughty boy. Poor Em. ROFL. Yummy times for B/J. Jazzy keeping the whole house happy with the projecting. Sigh. Pussy Boy is coming. BPOV: rofl for testing the beds. Glad Lara is happy and moving away with Ben before any shit hits the fan. EPOV: This boy has real nerve…Calling her a whore? OMG just wait till B and J get ahold of his arse.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
ROFL for Snuggie. Hmmm So Eddie is heading back to Forks huh…..Wait till the pack gets ahold of his arse. Sigh Alice would be the one to tell pussy boy. Love when B tells off J and P. LOL for Lara and the couch. Jake is an idiot if he thinks B would come anywhere near forks. LOL for new bed to go along with couch. Hmmm love my overprotective Jazzy. EPOV: ah the pussy POV. He's got nerve to bitch about her having a kid. What a jerk. At least the Pixie is trying to keep him out.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
Rose and B and friends….hard to imagine but welcome none the less. Glad they are bonding. Hmmm I wanna wake up call like that. LOL for Em owing her a new sofa.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
I say Fuck Eddie too. He brought it on himself. BPOV: Glad B stands up for herself. Stupid drunk. Hmmm Love when the major comes out for their little talk. Mine indeed (a little True Blood coming through? Lol).
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Lara is so funny. Woo hoo on surprising R/E at the club. JPOV: Woo Hoo Em's here. Peter is such a trouble maker. BPOV: lol for hot outfit and the "introduction" JPOV: Em is just too funny. Go Bella.Take the bitch down a few notches.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Char seems like she could be a great friend. You are making me hungry though….. JPOV: Awww he is wuv. I love peter. If I cant have J, can I have Petey plz. Glad he remembered to tell her about R/E. Cant wait for Rose to get a load of Bella 2.0. Wow Jake is an insensitive clod. Poor B. Glad J is there for her. Hmmm yummy make out session.,,,,and more. Where's he been all my life. lol
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Go Bella. Flirt with Char. Ha Ha. Glad she is getting along with P/C. Glad he told her his story. Hmmm sucking face…..thats more like it. Doucheward indeed. Good name for eddie. Hmmm LOVE the parting line.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
Peter is such a goof. But he is right. Bella is a tough broad for still being around after her fucked up life. Well aren’t the men impatient. Hmmm smack on the arse; hmm he can smack me anytime. Lol. Log Pole ROFL.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hmmm wouldn’t we all like to take Jazz of SM's hands. Yum. Nooooo no going slow. Oh jazz be careful you don’t stick your foot in your mouth. Jake was an arsehole brining Lexi to the appointments. She really is selfless. Glad Jazz was there so she could let it out.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm much prefer the inner redneck to the preppy pussy look. Hmm love their interaction so far. A needs to fuck off. Hmm Jazzy's in for a surprise with Bella's sexual background. Hee hee. Cowboy GQ indeed. Yum. No Ms Shy anymore is she. Hmm Ride that cowboy.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Lara sounds like a really good friend. The way she talks, cant wait till B and E reconnect and she sticks her foot up his arse. Gotta agree that Cupid is not her friend. Lol for facebook. Aww someone's distracted at work. Yeah the Darlin' thing makes me a little on the warm side if ya know what I mean.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Guessing Pixie Bitch saw J and B together and she didn’t tell anyone. What a bitch. Couldn’t even tell him in person. Glad Peter was there for him to turn to. Awww Jazz boy has the hots for the swan. Woo Hoo Emmy Bear's coming. Bella 2.0 indeed.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Gotta love Lara. Bella is such a blast. Hmmm hints into her past huh. So selfless giving up Tyler like that. Another reason why I never want Jake with Bella, unless they fake an imprint cause we all know he'd imprint someday and hurt her just as much as pussy boy did. Wow Drugs, alcohol, and sex. Eddie and Jake really fucked her up. Hmmm awww JW wishing her GN
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cant blame her for worrying about pussy-boy being there. Damn Pixie Biatch. Poor Jazzy.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love mouthy Bella. SSDD indeed. Go Jazz.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Know it's an interesting story; rereading/reposting review for your TWCS version. Just so you know, I can't get FF or TWCS at work so I download and read stories offline, typing up my comments as I read to post when I get home later. I tend to ramble and type what I think as I go. :-D
Ahh so Jazzy is alone now and with P/C. Damn pixie biatch. Gawd I love sarcastic Peter. Hee hee what a reunion.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 41
I missed this story! I read it about the time you first started it and now Ive re-read it. Im still sad its over even though I know theres a sequel!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loved the end. Too good. Enjoyed the whole story. Thanks for sharing!!! Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh Eddie still the dumb ass. Lol bella well done . Zip it zip I see her imitating dr evil
Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ha em and petey are too funny. Love the bee.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 38
Just leaves up her ass. Sorry :-)
Love how she handled Daddy C.
Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 37
Oh jazz will so have his hands full. Hope she move em with her power. Lol
Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 36
Well the muti gifts are cool. I like how she awoke. The Lamaze breathing was too funny. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love all of them being a part of the change. Can't wait to see how you write a vamp Bella. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oooo. Hard to read but needed for your story. Good story telling. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 33
Well he sure as hell claimed her again. Can't say I blame him. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank heaven Jake pulled his head out of his ass. So sweet to see her and Tyler together meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my. So happy she had her say. Jazz did good to letting Bella handle it. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh renee makes me laugh. Great take on her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 29
F hot wow. Good job for jazz not loosing it with blood lust. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
Whoop. Tanya & Bella to good. Respect. Poor daddy C
Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
That was beauitiful. They deserve some joy. Meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love how she taunts him. So fun meg
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ok crying. As my hubby calls it 'gulf war illness'. He is a vet from Desert Storm. So when he cries he says "damn gulf war illnesss". :-)
TGIF for Lexi. I fear for Jake's balls. Meg