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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 11:01 AM Title: Baring Souls

SO Emmett is moving into the house and Edward is moving into the Cabin lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, we (my buddah & I) thought it was fitting for them to live in the cabin. (a little akin to the cottage in BD?) Thanks!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:42 AM Title: Making the Rounds

Jake is working on getting his ass kick lol



Author's Response:

Yes he is-lol!!  Thanks.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:27 AM Title: Taking the Ride

wow that was some realy good non sex.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!  :) Thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:09 AM Title: Coming Clean

Wow I am glad Emmett didnt get pissed.  I love what Carlisle said about family he knows Bella will be his daughter-in-law soon.



Author's Response:

The only reason Emmett was okay with it was because of Rose.  He fell hard for Rose and so he understood.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:50 AM Title: More Confessions

I knew he would take it well just worried about Bella.  They need to tell the rest of the family and what is Emmett going to do???



Author's Response:

Edward is great, isin't he? Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:35 AM Title: Confessions

Wow that was pretty hot



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was! Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:38 AM Title: Getting Closer

To bad all of the good things that are going on at the Cullens can be ruined by one though Volturi.



Author's Response:

Have faith...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:23 AM Title: Talking

Will the creeps follow them???  Edward is so far gone lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward fell hard. Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:12 AM Title: The Field

Ridem Bella



Author's Response:

:) Thank you



Author's Response:

:) Thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:56 AM Title: The Tour

Well that was probley the first self love of many that Edward gave himself LOL



Author's Response:

Ha! Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:40 AM Title: Later

Wow this is tough not being able to get involved because you have killers after you.



Author's Response:

Yes, I'd imagine so! lol Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:32 AM Title: The Bonfire

I like it Bella is being very cool about Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you're liking it! :)

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:28 AM Title: Finding Home

Awesome story

Love it



Author's Response:

Thank you! Have a great day!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 7:22 AM Title: Edward's Past

Tanya is a skank.



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you for your support!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:50 AM Title: Meeting the Family

that was fun an interesting meet of Edward



Author's Response:

I wanted him to make an impression! Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:25 AM Title: Settling In

home sweet home



Author's Response:

Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:59 AM Title: Road Trip

Bender sounds like a fun place LOL.



Author's Response:

That was a silly name. I should have come up with something better. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:24 AM Title: Prologue: New York City

Oh my thats feaky



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: nikki62581 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:15 AM Title: Finding Home

great story, as always. You've gave me something to do during the snow storm..lol. keep up the great work and have a nice christmas.  ps...if Bella gets bored with doc send him my way...haha



Author's Response:

Thanks. That was very nice of you. Edward may be busy, but I'll check.

Reviewer: Robmatized Ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:38 AM Title: Finding Home

Great job!

Happy Holidays, Mz Ded



Author's Response:

Thank you. Appreciate all the reviews.

Reviewer: Robmatized Ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 12:44 AM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..

*uses hand to fan myself* Lawdy, Lawdy, Lawdy, that was HOT!   So glad you didn't edit lemons, dirty talking Edward kills me (hence my name Mz Ded, lol)  I think B/E will be up to no good in the pool :o

Works for me =;o)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm still cringing over that. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Robmatized Ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:54 PM Title: Taking the Ride

Oh my Lord, as much as I luv a sweet Edward, I'll take a hot horny E everytime!!!!



Author's Response:

yummy, right? Thanks.

Reviewer: Robmatized Ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:48 PM Title: Coming Clean

Oh Gawd, I just luv a sweet Edward. *sighs*



Author's Response:

Me, too. Thanks.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:13 PM Title: The Bonfire

really enjoy it so far.  wish the chapters were alittle longer thou.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you like it. Short chapters were one of the reasons I never planned on publishing it.

Reviewer: Robmatized Ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:22 PM Title: Edward's Past

Holy 'Invasion of the rabid vampire cats' Batman, too funny =:o)



Author's Response:

I have no response for that. :) thanks.

Reviewer: Robmatized Ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:06 PM Title: Settling In

Like the name Bender and the reason behind it, lol.   B's bath sounds devine :)



Author's Response:

I don't know where that name came from, it just came to me!

Reviewer: Robmatized Ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:53 PM Title: Prologue: New York City

Just had to read this too!   So far so good, looks like there could be a lot of suspence.   *pops some popcorn & settles in for a good read*



Author's Response:

I'm not so sure. It's unrefined, needs more of everything (except citrus) and while it seems to be  being received fairly well, yeah, whatever. Hope you enjoy it. Thank you.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:06 PM Title: Finding Home

the story was great.....:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:39 PM Title: Finding Home

im happy that they both got their happy ending



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:49 PM Title: Finding Home

Loved it! It was perfect!

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks! I'm really happy you enjoyed the story. Thanks for all the reviews.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:46 PM Title: They Found Us

I do, too! Oh....Edward wasn't talking to me? Damn.
Loved it!

Author's Response:

LMAO! Get in line, sister. Ha! Thanks!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:39 PM Title: The Cabin

Side sex....very intimate.
Great chapter!

Author's Response: SCORE! That's what I was going for. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:17 PM Title: Time To Run

No worries....not planning on doing anything until I get to the end. Good thing I started a day late...now I won't have to wait!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I guess I should go back and change that!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:05 PM Title: Finally

I hope Jacob doesn't make trouble. Accept defeat like a man!
BTW - very hot & worth the wait!

Author's Response:

Good advice. He's a whiner and doesn't know when to give up! Eh, I really don't hate Jacob, I just don't like him acting like a ____ (insert your own derrogatory here). Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:49 PM Title: The Water Park

I hope you know I've done absolutely nothing since starting this story this morning. Read...get child up for school....read....make child breakfast.....read....take child to school....read!!!
This was so hot I need a shower!!

Author's Response:

I've been there!!  Thanks, though. That's a big compliment!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:32 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..

Again.....best non sex EVER!!! I love the cave ward tendencies!

Author's Response:

Me, too! That's why I wrote him like that. I've tried to take the different traits from all the different 'wards out there and put them together. The next one-Edward will be different from either ATH & CRR, but still a combination to make him very yummy. Thanks for the support!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:15 PM Title: Baring Souls

More self control than I would have had. I love that they kiss a lot & sleep in the same bed but it didn't lead to sex....yet!

Author's Response:

I was trying to build it up. I think the next one I write (which I am currently working on) they're just going to jump each other right away! LOL     Thanks, I liked it, too. It kind of made it sweet, them being all lovey-dovey!  

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:54 PM Title: Making the Rounds

Water, Edward, wet......damn girl!!

Author's Response:

Yummy, huh? Thanks!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:41 PM Title: Road Trip

cute on the 'bender' pun

liking how Em and Bella are believable



Author's Response:

I thought it was a little silly, but... :)  Yeah, I write how I talk. I want my characters to seem more real, I guess. react the way you would, ya know? Anyway, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:26 PM Title: Prologue: New York City

Intriguing and different ... off to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks! hope you like it!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:26 PM Title: Taking the Ride

Oh no, thank you!! Best non-sex ever!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, happy you liked it!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:19 PM Title: Coming Clean

Hmmmmmm is right. Not much to say after that last scene!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, well, um...Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:05 PM Title: More Confessions

Cowboy in the white hat coming in to rescue the Bella in distress! Who doesn't love a hero?

Author's Response:

Pretty typical, but I love him anyway! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:51 PM Title: Finding Home

It definitely was a very cute/good story.  Had a good amount of lovin' suspense (although, I am a mystery lover so.....) and only Jake to worry about.  You did a good job with your first story.  I can definitely see how you have grown into ATH!

Thanks for posting this all and GOOD JOB!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the kind words. I'm happy you liked it and I know you've been R & R ATH, too. Thanks for all the support!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:25 PM Title: Confessions

Damn girl....I'm all kinds of hungry now & it's not for food!!

Author's Response:

I know. I warned everybody. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:16 PM Title: Getting Closer

Ummmm.....hot!!

Author's Response:

Yeah. Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:08 PM Title: Talking

I love Ranchward! He's so romantic! Kinda pissed about NYC. Hope it gets resolved without angst or horror.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I love him too! You'll find that I don't do much angst. I'm all about E & B and their HEA!  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:02 PM Title: The Field

Love the UST!!

Author's Response:

Gotta have it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:53 PM Title: The Tour

Damn....that little lemon twist was great. Loved how Edward just got down to business!

Author's Response:

*cough* thanks. Still makes me cringe.  :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:44 PM Title: Later

Short...sweet...moves the story along! Nice set up for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you can appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: shannabanana1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:43 PM Title: Time To Run

I started reading this story yesterday and have loved it.  Can't wait for the rest.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:40 PM Title: The Bonfire

Ooohhh....Edward likes! This is getting good!

Author's Response:

Yep, he definitely likes. Thank you!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:34 PM Title: Edward's Past

Poor Edward! Have faith...there are good girls out there still!

Author's Response:

Do you think if I made a really big sign he'd see me? LOL Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:26 PM Title: Meeting the Family

Loved Edwards disgust with his blind date!!
Seems a little out there but that's why it's fiction; the skies the limit with words & imagination.

Author's Response:

Yeah, well, first fic and all. I didn't go through and rewrite. I pretty much left it as is and just cleaned it up a bit. Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:19 PM Title: Settling In

Nice! I like how you're setting the scene!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:13 PM Title: Road Trip

Good! Wonder if the mob has figured it out? I'm thinking they may let it go since Bella & Emmett didn't tell the cops!

Author's Response:

Maybe in real life! But in this story, they need to be on the run! LOL

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Prologue: New York City

Hmmm....I like it so far. It's intriging. The super is suspicious....hope he doesn't turn into a rat!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I wanted him to seem shady. Em and Bella were supposed to be feeling a little paranoid, so..

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:00 AM Title: Time To Run

You are doing very good!  I am impressed you did all that you managed to get done.  Will wake up to the end tomorrow----THANKS for this story!!!



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you! Kind words. I'll get the rest up soon. Thank YOU!

Reviewer: CassieCullen06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:48 AM Title: Time To Run

omg really? i'm still up!



Author's Response:

Sorry! The words were blurring together!! Thanks :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:20 AM Title: Prologue: New York City

I am very much with you great first chapter .I can't wait to read more and Iam also reading ATH and I am loving that one as well great job .I really love the way you write it pulls you in .



Author's Response:

I recognize you, halloweenlover! Thanks for all the support! Glad you like them both.

Reviewer: CassieCullen06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:08 AM Title: The Water Park

omg...yea that's awesome...and I can't wait to see where it goes



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you!

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:54 AM Title: The Bonfire

he's too cute. Do I see someone falling in love?



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. It is a romance, written by me so, it's probably predictable!  Thanks

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:41 AM Title: The Water Park

DANG THE WHOLE THING, IN ONE NIGHT!!!  Woohoo, never had that happen before....you are a maniac....a good one, though :-)



Author's Response:

Well, it's short. We figured it would be better being put up all at once, especially with the holidays and all. Thanks for the support.

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:15 AM Title: Settling In

Of coarse Alice would have to bring em home



Author's Response:

LOL! Of course! Thanks for the support.

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:02 AM Title: Road Trip

really really good. Em is a great brother,



Author's Response:

Thank you. Emmett is great, huh?

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:52 AM Title: Baring Souls

I love this story!!  You were updating so fast, I thought I was at the end, getting ready to review and BAM, another "next" button to click!  Thanks for so many updates tonight.  Looking forward to the rest!!!  Keep them coming!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

I'm posting it all tonight.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:50 AM Title: Confessions

love it! another love story of yours but a lot different from your other story Across the Hall. both are great stories & entertaining as well.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate the support and I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Kiwibeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:44 PM Title: Road Trip

Love it! :)



Author's Response:

I'm sending Montana Edward to you for inspiration! lol! 

Reviewer: Kiwibeme Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:44 PM Title: Prologue: New York City

This story rocks! Quick read and great bones! It would have been an injustice to FF readers everywhere if you didn't publish it! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Buddah!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:38 PM Title: Settling In

Glad you wrote this story!  Am following your other story--Across the Hall.  This one sounds like it will be just as good.  Looking forward to the next chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks. This story has been written for months, just never really thought it was publishable as is. Well, I did need to write the last couple of chapters. Thanks for the support!

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