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Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 11:06 AM Title: Finding Home

Really lied this  story. This for writing it.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 3:20 PM Title: Finding Home

AWESOME!!! little lemon fest story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: TriMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 8:04 PM Title: Finding Home

I loved it!! Like loved it, loved it!! your spelling and grammar were superb and I just loved the storyline.  I especially liked the part about Jake!! I'm going to read Across the Hall now as you have me hooked!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for taking the time to read and to leave me your thoughts. xoxox

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 9:09 PM Title: Finding Home

Lovely story.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2015 7:02 AM Title: Finding Home

Sweet little story!  Good job!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2015 5:43 AM Title: Coming Clean

Awe! Sweet! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2015 4:43 AM Title: Meeting the Family

Liking it so far

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:33 PM Title: Finding Home

sweet ending.  Glad they all got their HEAs.

TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:31 PM Title: They Found Us

Jake.... what a wanker.   Glad the cops showed up at least.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:28 PM Title: The Cabin

wonder who told they were at the cabin.   Nice lemony time before.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:14 PM Title: Time To Run

Poor kids.  hope everyone will be ok.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:07 PM Title: Finally

Jake is getting annoying.  Great day otherwise.

Yey for first full lemon!!!

dl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:01 PM Title: The Water Park

grat fun day at the park.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:56 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..

yummy lemonyish time.  LOL for getting the bathing suit he asked for. lol

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:53 PM Title: Baring Souls

hmmm hope Charlotte isnt trying to get info for the bad guys.    Water park sounds cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:48 PM Title: Making the Rounds

oh Jake. Hope you behave yourself now. Billy seems nice though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:39 PM Title: Taking the Ride

nice little lime in there.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:34 PM Title: Coming Clean

Glad she told him everything.  Ah so Em did contact some police.  Cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:29 PM Title: More Confessions

Bad jake scaring our girl.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:53 PM Title: Confessions

go Chef B.  Glad E and B talked a little more.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:49 PM Title: Getting Closer

sweet chapter.  Poor B and her nightmare.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:45 PM Title: Talking

Hope Tyler and Mrs cope will be ok.   Wonder if they ought not call the cops or FBI or something

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:32 AM Title: The Field

sweet day.  love riding.       CYA for more reading in the AM

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:24 AM Title: The Tour

hee hee for towel girl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:17 AM Title: Later

Glad they found a good place.  Em and B are too cute.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:44 AM Title: The Bonfire

Em is too cute.   Glad they found somewhere safe.....for now.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:58 AM Title: Edward's Past

Poor E.   ALice doesnt pick very well huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:47 AM Title: Meeting the Family

Family seems great.   a nice rose?   thats cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:39 AM Title: Settling In

cabins sound wonderful

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 12:01 AM Title: Road Trip

Glad they've got money to run at least.  They should have gotten money from a bank before they left though.   Cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:57 PM Title: Prologue: New York City

great start.

Reviewer: karemay Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 6:53 AM Title: Finding Home

Great story. I enjoyed reading it o much.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:40 AM Title: Finding Home

ILOVED THIS STORY I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU FEEL BUT I CAME TO YOUR STORY AFTER IT WAS FINISHED AND DIDN'T THINK IT WOULD MEAN MUCH TO YOU IT I REVIEWED OR NOT BUT I WANTED TO TELL YOU I REALLY HAVE ENJOYED IT. AND I SEE YOU HAVE OTHER STORYS THAT ARE ALSO FINISHED AND I PLAN TO READ THEM ALSO THIS IS THE SECOMD ONE YOU HAVE WRITTEN I READ I LIKE YOUR STYLE YOUR A GOOD AUTHOR I THINK SO THANK YOU FOR WRITING.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:31 AM Title: Finding Home

I can't believe this was ur 1st story!! It's better than some of the more seasoned writers! Keep up the good work!
:)

Author's Response:

Thank you, that is quite a compliment! Thanks for checking it out ;)  xoxox

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:35 PM Title: Finding Home

loved it~~~~



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read, and for all the reviews! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:32 PM Title: They Found Us

great



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 1:18 PM Title: Time To Run

They did not even report the murder not sure the mom would come after them but I am enjoying this anyways



Author's Response:

I was fairly confident that if the mob had a witness to a murder, they'd be hunted down. They don't usually like loose ends. That could be blamed on Hollywood, though. I don't actually have mob connections  LOL

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 12:40 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..

no need to hide stand tall and be proud



Author's Response:

Ya think?  citrus is always hard to write. I always worry about how it will be received.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 12:32 PM Title: Baring Souls

very good



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. I cut my teeth on this story and still cringe a little when I re read it... :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 12:10 PM Title: Coming Clean

awww



Author's Response:

That was sweet, huh?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:56 AM Title: Confessions

wow



Author's Response:

Is that a good 'wow'?  :)  Happy you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:35 AM Title: Getting Closer

man does like to masturbate



Author's Response:

LMAO  I think most do... 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:49 AM Title: The Tour

I would hyperventilate too



Author's Response: Me too ;)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 2:32 AM Title: The Bonfire

really enjoying this



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: clancy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 3:04 PM Title: Finding Home

what a pleasure to read..... thank you : )



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I am happy you liked it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:49 AM Title: Finding Home

such a sweet way to finish it off. glad you decided to post.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and leaving your reviews! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:44 AM Title: They Found Us

well duh bella. yay bad guys have been locked away and they are safe to live life again.



Author's Response:

All's well in Cullenland again...Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:49 AM Title: The Cabin

let's get ready to rummmmmbbbbbllllee! heehee sorry



Author's Response:

LMAO! love that! Thanks for reading-happy you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:23 PM Title: Time To Run

time for the big show down! i can't wait. but will the mobsters be happy and leave them alone after this?



Author's Response:

Good question...I wonder if they will?  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:54 PM Title: Finally

yay sex-sex! and a little posessiveness from both of them. and finally the i love yous are out there! awww pretty awesome night i'd say.



Author's Response:

Pretty awesome night, eh?  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:18 PM Title: The Water Park

the non-sex is getting better and better. i wonder what these two will do when they get to the sex-sex?



Author's Response:

the sex-sex might put them into a coma....lol  thank you for leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:57 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..

that ssounded like even better than the best non-sex ever.



Author's Response:

hee hee....:) thank you!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:45 PM Title: Baring Souls

bella, honey you are a grown up if you want to stay you can...



Author's Response:

She's been under Em's wing for a while, I think she is feeling like her loyalties are divided. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:34 PM Title: Making the Rounds

wow eddie pee on her leg why don't you? heehee not that she seemed to mind at all.



Author's Response:

I know, right?? That was fun to write! Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:37 AM Title: Taking the Ride

best non-sex ever! heehee at least they both thought so.



Author's Response:

It was kind of nice, huh?  lol  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:56 AM Title: Coming Clean

well the trueth is out now and the cullens are willing to help keep bella and em safe.



Author's Response:

The Cullen's stepped up and rallied around them-Thank you for R & R!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:33 AM Title: More Confessions

wow eddie really took that well. now they just have to tell the rest of the cullen clan. i hope em is not too mad at bella for telling eddie, but the cullens really do have the right to know.



Author's Response:

He's a good guy to have around, dont you think?  lol  Thanks again-I appreciate the reviews!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:22 AM Title: Confessions

there you go eddie see what happens when you go for it?! you get to kiss the girl!



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:10 AM Title: Getting Closer

oh eddie hopefully you will have some help with your 'problem' very soon. i wonder if the dream will get bella wanting to tell the cullens about why they are really there?



Author's Response:

lol  yes, someone should help him with that problem. The dream would've scared me into telling! Thanks for R & R!

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:44 AM Title: Talking

looks like eddie and bella are gonna see where this goes. any idea of where that will be? heehee



Author's Response:

maybe back out to the barn...?  lol  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:39 PM Title: The Field

so close so many times! and rose and em seem to be hitting it off nicely too.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:21 PM Title: The Tour

eddie is so lost in lust with bella. and he got bonus spank material with the towel thing.



Author's Response:

I love that...bonus spank material...but you're right-he's lost already.  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 12:06 PM Title: Later

sucks to find a place they fit in right in the middle of running away



Author's Response:

I know, figures...huh?  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 11:59 AM Title: The Bonfire

bella is letting out a lot of nfo.



Author's Response:

you're right, she is...too much?    Sorry for the delayed response to your reviews-the site wouldn't let me in!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:26 AM Title: Edward's Past

heaven forbid he is not all about the money!



Author's Response:

Hmm  that gives me an idea for another story....a money-minded Edward, obsessed with his career. Enter Bella, who shows him another way to live. Maybe, it has possibilities.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:16 AM Title: Meeting the Family

hahaha eddie sometimes you have to take a few swings before you hit the homerun, at least alice was trying to help



Author's Response:

Alice is always trying to help...but she set him up with a few crazies!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:00 AM Title: Settling In

ok where is this place? momma needs a vaycay!!!



Author's Response:

LOL  I wish I could give you directions!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:54 AM Title: Road Trip

wanna go on a bender? heehee is that line what gave you the idea for the town name?



Author's Response:

Actually, it was the other way around...I have no idea where the name came from, it was just something that popped into my head!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: Prologue: New York City

that would be awful!



Author's Response:

I know, right?? Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: TerryRL Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 6:37 AM Title: Finding Home

Fantastic story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 8:02 PM Title: Finding Home

All in all this was a very good story.  I know you said it was rough around the edges but the storyline was great!  You set it up really good and I enjoyed it very much.  I can also tell that you are by no means a fan of Jacob!  Ha!  I love all the characters and pairings so I overlook him being put into a bad light even though he was one character that didn't have a mean bone in his body!!  I had a feeling that he would be involved in the standoff one way or the other.   You keep saying that "ATH"(?) got in the way of this story being put on here sooner and I know that it is probably another one of your stories and once I figure out this site I will be sure to go read it as well.

Hugs, Stephanie



Author's Response:

Thank you! You gave me my 100th review for this story that I never planned on putting out!! Yes, it is true that I am not a Jacob fan, but only because I'm a huge Edward fan! LOL  I am happy you liked CRR and know at this point that you also read ATH-thank you and I hope you'll enjoy my next one that I am working on. Have a great day!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 8:27 PM Title: Finding Home

I liked it a lot!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked it  :)

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 12:55 AM Title: Finding Home

Loved it wonderfull story



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it! Thanks for reviewing  :)

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 9:25 PM Title: Finding Home

that was good i liked ot    it was really good glad no one got hurt and all was well



Author's Response:

Thank you, happy you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:32 AM Title: Finding Home

loved it! i'm so glad she stayed! and Em too.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: IANticipate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:01 AM Title: Finding Home

Thanks for the fantastic story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:09 AM Title: Finding Home

some times less is better and in the case of this story I feelthat even tho ts short it is definatly worth the read.. i loved it... a little drama, a lotta luvin  just the right mix. love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I really appreciate your words and your reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 8:02 PM Title: Finding Home

loved it. Very good story and I loved the pace. Lemons but hey it wasn't sex with multiple partners and skank attack.

 

Thank you. I will be looking you up again for another story.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! The Epi for ATH should be out next week and I hope to have a little teaser for my new story that I'm working on with it. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:29 PM Title: Time To Run

good story and nice change in pace.

 

GOOD JOb



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you like it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 9:53 AM Title: Baring Souls

still good pace. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 8:45 AM Title: More Confessions

confession is good for the soul. I am glad you didn't drag that out..



Author's Response:

Thanks. I don't do heavy drama or angst very well, so you won't find it in any of my stories! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:58 AM Title: Talking

I can not say alot yet. The story is building. Glad you are taking the romance part slower. This chapter had more in it so that was good.

Now what about those NY mobsters? 

 

Bella seems suited to work with them at the rescue ranch. Then again it is a slower pace and may not require more people.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:02 AM Title: The Bonfire

Nice pace, not too fast on the hooking up part.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:24 AM Title: Finding Home

I loved it wonderful story short but great.  I love the way you ended it with another one on the way.  I enjoy the way you write it flows very nice.  Thanks for sharing looking forward to anything else you do.



Author's Response:

Wow. Thanks so much for the nice words! I really appreciate you following me and my stories! I am working on something else right now and may leave a bit of a teaser with the Epi for ATH next week. Thanks!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:23 AM Title: They Found Us

Of course she wants to stay there is nothing in NY for her and Emmett will not leave Rose.  I knew Jake was a puss and got everything he deserved.



Author's Response:

So right you are. Yeah, I think Jake was handled well. Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 1:26 AM Title: The Cabin

I wonder if Jake has something to do with them being caught



Author's Response:

Hmm. :) Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 12:41 AM Title: Time To Run

They had such a wonderful night and now all hell is breaking loose,



Author's Response:

I know! Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 11:05 PM Title: Finally

that was good



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:22 PM Title: Finding Home

Wonderful story!!!

 

Best Parts:

Bella fit into our lives perfectly. She had made and put into action suggestions that helped our facility grow. We were able to expand with all the donations pouring in. Her ideas about the pre-adoption forms turned out to be genius.

 

Jake moved away just before Bella and I were married. After the town found out about him bringing the mob guys right to Bella, he was essentially ostracized. Because of his arrogance, he tried to ignore all the whispers and looks. It got to him after a while and last I heard, he moved to New Mexico.

 

Bella gave birth to a beautiful baby boy a year and a half after we were married. Best birthday present ever. He was the perfect combination of us both. Charlie had brown hair and green eyes and his facial features were a mix of us both.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It really makes my day that so many have liked this story. Have a great day :)

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:17 PM Title: They Found Us

Best Parts:

 

“You are a sorry excuse for a man, Jacob. I ought to shoot you myself! Instead, I’ll just put you out of my fucking misery.” I pulled my arm back and hit him as hard as I could. He fell like a 12 year old girl. “Fucking asshole,” I muttered.

 

 

“What in the hell are you doing here?” Bella yelled. This ought to be good…

 

“He is the one that BROUGHT those fuckers here. Apparently they scared him into it!” I informed her.

 

Bella turned five shades of red and stormed over to Jake. She slapped him hard across the face and kicked him in the balls. He doubled over and fell, cupping his junk and groaning.

 

I scooped up Bella and kissed her long and hard. Watching her put that fucking douche in his place was really fucking hot.

 

   

“Hey. What about Jacob?” Alice asked. Everyone looked at each other and we all busted out laughing. We left his sorry ass at the cabin.

 

“Fuck him. He can find his own way home,” I said, thoroughly disgusted.


 

Author's Response:

So, you liked Jake getting his ass kicked?? Awesome. :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:04 PM Title: The Water Park

That was a fun day water parks are fun places.



Author's Response:

I thought so, glad you agree! Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:56 PM Title: Finally

Best Part:

 

Bella shook off his hand and took a step closer to him, looking pissed as hell.

 

“First of all, Edward has nothing to feel threatened about. He is MINE just like I am HIS. And second, I wouldn’t dance with you if you were the last man on earth!” Bella yelled at him.



Author's Response:

That line isn't even mine! My Buddah suggested it, almost verbatim! But thanks!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:26 PM Title: Making the Rounds

Best Parts:

 

“A little early for a house call, isn’t it Doc?” Emmett looked pissed.

 

“Uh…well…Bella asked me…” was all I got out before he stopped me.

 

“Dude, I’m fucking with you,” he was laughing hysterically. “What my sister does isn’t any of my business. His face turned serious. “Unless you fuck up. Then it will be.”

 

“Jake, I’m pretty sure that Bella is perfectly content staying with us.” I looked at her for confirmation. She nodded emphatically. “Furthermore,” I winked at Bella, “I thought I told you that she is my girlfriend.”

 

I moved so that I was directly in front of Jacob, inches away from his face. “Back. The Fuck. Off. I don’t want to have this conversation with you again,” I warned quietly.

 

“Yeah, no problem. I got it, Cullen,” he sighed, looking past me at Bella.

 

“Great!” I said happily, clapping him on the shoulder. “See you around Jake.”



Author's Response:

This amuses me, you showing me what you consider the 'best parts'. Thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:14 PM Title: Coming Clean

Best Part:

“I don’t know what to say. This is really above and beyond hospitality.” Emmett said.

 

“Well, that’s what families do.” Dad glanced at me as he said this.

 

“But we’re not family, you’ve only known us for a few days.” Emmett argued.

 

“Sometimes that’s all it takes, Emmett.” Dad said standing up.



Author's Response:

Aww, that's sweet. Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:04 PM Title: More Confessions

I am so glad that Bella finally told Edward the truth.



Author's Response:

I think she was at a point where she had to. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:03 PM Title: Finding Home

great ending !!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you! I appreciate your support!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:55 PM Title: Yeah, I Got Nothing..

Edward going to be alittle possessive???  So glad everyting is in the open. 



Author's Response:

I'll admit, I love possessive Edward...Thanks!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:45 PM Title: Time To Run

ok drama building.  love your story !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad people actually like this!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:33 PM Title: Prologue: New York City

Interesting start!



Author's Response:

I needed a little drama to kick it off! lol Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:09 PM Title: Finally

great lemon, finally they were able to say/reveal their deepest feelings, and whiel making love is always sweetest



Author's Response:

Thanks! Those are tough to write. Well, write and let someone read, anyway. Yeah I wanted their 'first time' to be special, so I'm glad you feel that way. Thanks so much!

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