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Reviewer: fishy1976 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2021 7:47 AM Title: Silence

As I read about Paul's odd reaction, I keep thinking about how you references a major character death...😥

Reviewer: fishy1976 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2021 6:57 AM Title: Family

I absolutely LOVE the hint/giveaway of Nathaniel's bio father in those first chapter!!!!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 6:31 PM Title: Outtake 5: Daddy’s Little Girl

So sad to see this story reach it's end. It was wonderful, now I want to go see what this other story is I've heard mention of.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I don't want this to be over. I'm really glad I found it after it was finished so I didnt have to wait for updates.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 22: Time of Dying

I'm thinking big hospital bills = Edward to the rescue? = Pissed off and jealous husbands.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:57 AM Title: Walked Outta heaven

I get that Bella is upset, rightly so, but she seems to be over reacting here.  Makes we wonder if something else is going on.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 18: Dance with my father

This chapter required tissues-

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

This chapter was very well done. One thing that stuck out to me though, while I can't say that all hospitals are the same, I can't imagine a circumstace where the family would ever be denied seeing a family member who has passed. In cases where a medical examiner may be called in all the Emergency equipment would remain in place, and the family would be made aware of what they would be veiwing, but the decision to view the body would be entirely up to them.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

Bam!

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 12: No More Drama

At the rate Paul is going he won't need to tell Bella about the Cancer, she can read about it in his Obituary. Come on Paul, stop being a chicken shit and man-up here. You are not making this better.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2015 4:15 AM Title: Jealousy

I don't understand why Jacob is out of the bedroom. Just because they are trying to ensure the baby is Paul's doesn't mean Jacob can't be an active participant in the "sexy time". There are MANY, MANY things they could do to be sure that any child conceived would be Pauls. So right now I want to slap Bella and Paul, Jacob needs lovin' too.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2015 3:33 AM Title: There goes my baby

I've been meaning to review, but honestly I'm so in love with this story I haven't wanted to take a break between chapters. Right now I am worried for Paul - I have a medical background, and that part of me says you are setting up some nasty shit for my boy. The optimistic part of me is saying that maybe it's a little to obvious and you are going to hit us with an illness but eventual recovery. And perhaps a character I don't give a rat's ass about can kick the bucket....... I am not however, a glass half full type of person. So I'm hoping for the best, preparing for the worst. Someone want to wheel the crashcart into Exam room 3 ?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 1:23 AM Title: Outtake 3: Somebody's heartbreak

Raises hand!!  Yes! You freaked me the fuck out!  I was thinking I needed to go back and reread the last chapter. 

And yes, that talk was needed!

whew?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:59 AM Title: Outtake 2: Isn't it Romantic

They were sexy sweet hot horny adorable and amazing!

Loved the b&b!

a cruise?? We will see!

Reviewer: Sisteria27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:35 AM Title: Silence

Great chapter!

I was a little surprised at Pauls advice to Quil. He never told them to find a permanent 3rd for their threesome.

Reviewer: julie70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I am so glad to read a new chapter of this story,it always has been a fave of mine..

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

Welcome back!  I missed you, I re-read last chapter just 4 days ago cause I missed this!

 

Great come back chapter!  I loved it!  I am anxious to see what the boys are cooking up!  :)

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2012 7:54 PM Title: Announcement/Author Note

Hope you sort you life out soon :)

love your stories so much - truly inspirational

Reviewer: twilightrose0372 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2012 11:12 PM Title: Family

Please update!  This is such a great story and I can't wait to see how it plays out!  I've waited patiently for over a month (ok, maybe not so patiently) for an update... Please put me out of my misery!

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

:DDD hope paul gets betteer soon :DDD

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 29: Confrontation

Love it !

Reviewer: x-Holly-x Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 29: Confrontation

yeyyy for more chapters to come :)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 29: Confrontation

tanya is a crazy, delusional, whore, bitch!  shes going down!

miguel  so sweet!

until you post again!

Reviewer: FanFanatic2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 28: Get it together

i absolutely love this story! Im glad the trio are back together and happily xpecting & cnt wait for the nxt chapter but i was wondering, will tanay's involvement with bella's car accident come up or is austin gonna remain silent?

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 28: Get it together

Oh my goodness!  I loved everything about this chapter. You rocked it girl! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 3:38 AM Title: Trying Not to Love You

Sooooo good

Reviewer: katieh71908 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 25

paul and bellas conversation had me in tears....impatiently waiting on the next chapter lol

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

So they all break up, Bella gets ready to leave with her mom...

 

Jake and Emily want to take Layla...

Sam magically disappeared...

 

Bella wins custody of Layla, moves away, then is a single mom with two russet skinned children.

 

And Tanya sets herself on fire in her cell and Charlie watches while chomping on chips and hugging Terri.

THE END

*giggles*

Reviewer: shazwarner Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 7:35 AM Title: The Un-EX-pected

That was freakin'awesome. Bella is pregnant isnt she? Well i guess i will just have to wait and see. Great chapter as usual

Reviewer: jacobsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 23: Time of Dying

great chapter keep u the awesome work

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 22: Time of Dying

Great chapter!  THe build up is great!  Emily's words spooked me a bit.

And where is that last camera?!?!

Reviewer: jacobsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 22: Time of Dying

amazing chapter thanks for posting it cant wait for more

Reviewer: jacobsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chemotherapy

chapter 22 has not shown up on here really love this story would like to continue

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chemotherapy

Wow, what a really great chapter!

Tanya cannot die fast enough, so her behind bars is a bright spot for me :)

 

Where is Jared's lost camera?  Will we find out?

 

I cannot wait to see what Paul's mother has to say to Bells.  *grins*

Reviewer: jacobsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 7:11 AM Title: Family

wheres chapter 21 its not shoing up here

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 9:30 PM Title: The third birthday

Wow!  What a great chapter!  And I thought at the beginning when you said addition to the family that it would be a puppy!  Thats was so awesome!  And Layla naming him Billy was icing on the cake.

 

Love it!!



Author's Response:

thank you for keeping up with the story here. :D hugs!

 

xoxo

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 6:21 AM Title: Walked Outta heaven

I just want to say I feel for Jessica, but she went a little far.  Mike barely remembers, I think she will understand after she just stops and listens.

 

Oh man, Paul... *offers shoulder for him*  I will be the unseen angel for you to lean on and cry on my shoulder... I have been there, but I didnt wait that long..

 

poor guy...

Reviewer: SecretWisher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 18: Dance with my father

Please don't let Paul die!!  Im too wrapped up in this :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 18: Dance with my father

I swear Eddie is mentally unstable.  Like walking in to the lions den looking for a bone to chew! 

 

Idjit.

 

lol, love it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

Gah!  I am waiting for a couple of things, so it could be either!

Tanya is going to die...

Or Paul is going to spill his secret.

 

Either is preferred :)

Reviewer: WerCub Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow...tanya has officially lost her mind. I never thought I'd say this, but I really hope the woman dies! She's crazy! But this was a fabulous chapter- I've been between computers, so I'm catching up on this story big time. On the plus side, glad Bella and her boys are back on track after all that's happened, and ooh, I wonder who else heard Laurent and Tanya? So much drama, I love it...update again soon!!!

Reviewer: ifonly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 16

I accept the lost prescious life of Billy, a very much loved and respected man, as long as that red headed bitch gets her ass fried. O and Edward finally feels pain that he helped feed. O 1 more requeat. Can a miracle happen in Pauls life? PLEASE:(



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and for being so understanding. And yes, the karma for Tanya will also be karma for Edward too. Ironic huh?

can't say anything about Paul's fate yet. I do know what's going to happen with him, but you'll have to wait and see.

 

hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am choking here!  This pain in my chest... oh, no, oh god, not Billy!

 

This is going to absolutely devastate Jake.

Who else overheard Tanya and Laurent?  I am anxious to find out, and I hope Edward leaves Tanya.  I hope that she dies... and soon.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 15: Breathe

Oooooohhh!!  Yay for shit hitting the fan, and me standing behind the glass wall watching!!  *cackles*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 1:13 AM Title: A House is not a Home

I hate Tanya...

I cant wait to see Karma bite her and Eddie in the ass.

Eddie is an ass and I hope he regrets his whole life for the nasty little shit that he is.

I wish I could fix everything for Bells and the boys, I want them happy, and I want Paul to quit being a pussy and tell them.  Such a chicken shit.

I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

:D thank you so much for reading.

 

don't worry. karma is coming for them. i promise.

 

hugs!

 

xoxo

 

Cam

Reviewer: jacobsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 9:30 AM Title: A House is not a Home

awesome chapter



Author's Response:

thank you! :D

 

Cam

Reviewer: lazybeksta69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 7:13 AM Title: A House is not a Home

thanks on the speedy update of sex on the beach 2. but 2 weeks is way to long to wait for in love with a stripper....its my favourite story atm im rather pathetic and check for updates 2-4 times a day, even knowing it only updates fortnightly.....good work with your writing, its very balanced between being descriptive and developing plot logically...keep it up, and (i know its stupid to ask but update soon, im hanging for it)



Author's Response:

this review has helped a lot, because i've been feeling insecure about my stories, so thank you for such an awesome review.

 

hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: msrocsiblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 13: I look to you

Love this Story ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: GigiB Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13: I look to you

i can"t wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 13: I look to you

So happy the twins are here!!!

Bells goin zombie freaked me out a bit.

I love your Paul and Jake... I am gonna cry thinking about it.

Love this chapter, I hope Sam and Emily stay to their own!


Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! :) hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 12: No More Drama

The breakdown was hard but she needed to do it. She needs to talk to and lean on her boys!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 5:28 PM Title: In Memory

Ok kinda pissed at bella for throwing down with tanya! She is preggers and all the other shit waits till after the baby comes! Honestly bella is a better mom than that, sorry but it is true. A little better that the fight was not the cause of losing the baby but still. Sad for the loss and I just know this will prolong paul telling and getting help for the cancer, dumb ass!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ok so now we know about paul. Cancer can be a whole lot easier the earlier it is caught but he waited so long... But who will we lose

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well tanya isn't totally heartless and now she knows who the real. Mommy and daddy are. Will she calm down now? Probably not. Hope baby is ok...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 5:53 PM Title: Anniversary

So tanya is a dumb-fuck and is taking a hit out bella and without even finding out who really adopted nate! Man she's stupid! Paul really needs to go see the doctor!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 3:53 PM Title: Sex for Breakfast

Awww this little family is too cute! Bella is a lucky girl!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

Fucking men!!!! Paul go to the doctor!!!!!! You don't even know how bad it is yet

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 7:47 PM Title: Jealousy

So mike has to be nate's baby daddy, and Tanya is gonna go after nate! Paul is just a. Big dumb man! They never go to the doctor when they should!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 4:14 PM Title: There goes my baby

Bella and paul were hot and sweet all rolled into one bella is cute how she is worring about how jake feels

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:49 PM Title: First Words

Wow bella over react much?! Babies and even big kids do that kinda shit. But hey the boys definately made her feel better!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:37 PM Title: Silence

What is wrong with paul? And how long will it be before we find out?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:20 AM Title: Family

so who is nathan's daddy? someone with blue eyes, blonde hair, and stubbie fingers... going by your outline who ever his daddy is there is gonna be a custody suit filed. poor mike and jess.

 

Reviewer: jakerules4ever81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 12: No More Drama

followed u here from fanfiction....those people who took ur story down are stupid!  now that said....i am loving this story....a little to sad at the moment....but keep up the great work:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:19 AM Title: In Memory

I blame Jessica and Angela on losing the baby.

Of course, I blame Tanya the most.  Stupid bitch.

 

Bella could have avoided the fight and maybe had been able to be with the boys when tragedy struck...

 

Burn Tanya at the stake... thats what she deserves.

 

I am very curious whats up with Eddie the Ass though.  I dont believe he feels anything for Bells what so ever.  You dont hurt someone you care for, and he has done that numerous times.

I cant wait to see how this plays out.



Author's Response:

Hey! its not jessica or angela's fault! be nice! O.O

 

thanks for readin hon.

 

big hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

The new baby dies?  is that it?

OMG!!!

Holy shit, I cant wait till the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

I can't tell youuuuuuuuu.

 

But thanks for reading! new chapter soon.

 

xo

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ok, so now that Tanya knows Bella didnt adopt Nathan, will she leave B alone?

I sure as fuck hope so, and I hope Austin rats her out!

Kiss her little perfect life goodbye cause Karma is a bitch! 

 



Author's Response:

LOL she'll leave Bella alone. :) Cant say anything about Austin tho.

 

hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 5:53 AM Title: Anniversary

Oh my GAWD could Tanya be anymore of a stupid bitch?!

 

She has some nerve calling Bella a whore.  Tanya isnt even a second thought to Bells anymore!

Tanya.  Rope.  Pole.  Kindling.  Lighter.  Accelerant.

Everything you need to burn that witch!

*giggles*



Author's Response:

glad your still loving it hon! and dont worry. we will get to tanya. ;)

 

hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:41 AM Title: Sex for Breakfast

I must push my view, once again.  *wink*

Tanya- wooden post- rope- wood pile- lighter fluid- matches.

Everything you need to burn the witch and rid her of this story. 

Hate is a strong word, you should not use it unless you mean it.

I. HATE. Tanya.

nuff said.

I hope Paul comes clean to them, it will hurt so much worse if something happens to him and his family finds out when its too late.

I look forward to the next chapters :)



Author's Response:

LOL tanya's demise will come. just...not anytime soon unfortunately. D:

 

tHANKS SO MUCH FOR READING! xoxo

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hey!  Im leavin love!!  Great chapter, I just wish Paul would tell them already.  I dont want them to lose him. *sniff*

OH!

And also...

I want Tanya to go back in time and be burnt at the stake during the Salem witch trials...

They have a bonfire with her name on it.

I really hate her...



Author's Response:

u arent the only one hehe. :) thanks for  reading hon! big hugs!

 

 Cam

Reviewer: rpattz granny Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:03 PM Title: Family

Tanya is really a lying bitch.pregnant with another man child.cheated on Edward good for that stupid Edward picked tanya over Bella



Author's Response: indeed tanya is. :D thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:45 PM Title: Jealousy

I am here to leave you love for this wonderful chapter.  When do we get the results of Paul's test?

Oh!  And burn Tanya.... at the stake... and duct tape her mouth please.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. no worries. tanya will get hers. LOL xoxoxo

 

paul's test results will take a long time. so be prepared.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 8:55 PM Title: There goes my baby

*reluctantly leaves love*

 

You laugh at me as I read your Chapter 6 spoiler.... harsh, man, harsh.

I will say this:

I love this chapter... lemony goodness is always wonderful.

And my usual; Tanya->a wooden stake->some rope->a lighter

No need for lighter fluid, the venom shit she spews out of her lips is enough to set the flames ablazen.

 

Im just sayin'.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. :D hugs!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 1:02 AM Title: Silence

*gets choked up*

I remember your warnings...

Oh god...

Loved the chapter. 

It would have been better with Tanya tied to a stake...

burning away from the world... and this story!

*sighs wistfully at Tanya's demise*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 12:58 AM Title: Family

Wow, started off just as awesome as SOTB1 did.

Sweet, I cant wait till Tanya burns at the stake, or gets hit by a semi truck.

I have very morbid thoughts on how to get rid of that witch.

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