Date: 10 Jan 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
aw man, don't leave me hanging like that. i wish your chapter woudl have been a little longer and included a little more. Hoping for an update soon
Author's Response:
trying to get them a buit longer, thankyou for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Happy birthday to your daughter , I had my first child when I was i9 going on twenty she was born exactly 1week from my twentieth birthday and now 22 years latr after good and bad her fther and I are still together this story is really a reminder of that time, I love Edwards little quote in the Journal 'your heart is my home sweet.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Good addition...
On the 28th it would be the third year anniversary of the loss of my nephew. He was miscarried at 4 months my sister had no clue she showed no signs of pregnancy it was a shock to everyone. She got to name him, Gabriel Alejandro. It Was and still is a hard time. Our extended family made it a horrible time, but define family anyway.
Author's Response:
sorry for the loss your sister and family have gone through. My mother had a stillborn in 1975. It was her first. My sister lost a child at 12 weeks gestation. It still affects them greatly. thankyou so much for your review
Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
and his little inscription is so sweet.
Author's Response:
Thankyou for the review,
Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
I just found this story this morning and absolutely love it. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I always love new readers and Thankyou for taking the time to review.. see you soon:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
well i hope your daughter has a great b-day. some people can handle being pregnant and accept the responsiblity that comes with kids. it sure is alot of work and i think alot of people do not see that. mine are older and it is still alot of work and you would think it gets easier. i also have a friend who lost her 16 yr old daughter the mother is 42 now and starting over. i do not think i could do that but i understand because she was missing that part of her life. we all do things for a reason for our kids and hope for the best.
i feel for victoria but am pleased that she is finishing her schooling and staying where she is happy and feels loved. alice and jasper have made the decision to stick together and raise their child. i hope they get the tools that will help them be sucessful. bella i guess we will wait in see in her deceision. she has alot to think about. i love what edward says plans change. she can always go to school in Aizona and she has her family there and who knows maybe she end up wanting her child or she makes that descion to not raise the child and go thru witht he adoption process. it needs to be what is best for all of them. love it
Author's Response:
She had a good day thankyou, I couldnt imagine starting over at that age, but i understand the need to be a mother. thank you so muc for your review
Date: 09 Jan 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Best Parts:
He handed me a leather bound journal with the words Il tuo cuore è la mia nuova casa written on the bottom in beautiful hand written calligraphy . I looked up at him and he was looking at bit apprehensive
“ Are you going to tell me what this says in Italian”
“ I’ll tell you when you’re ready to hear it”
“ The only new thing is that I have filed for divorce from Renee, so to answer your question, I will be coming alone”
“ Plans always change Isabella”
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much, glad u had parts you liked:) those are my fave as well
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
I got pregnat with my daughter right out of highschool, I was two weeks from leaving for college when I found out. My mother was wonderful she was with me every step of the way, while my dad took some time to come around to the idea. He wouldn't speak to me the whole pregnancy but the moment he saw my little girl he was hooked, he says that God brought down a beam of moonlight and it opened his eyes. My now husband was wonderful and stood by me even when I told him I wouldn't marry him. We did get married just a few years ago, but you know when they say god has a reason for all he does. If I had not gotten pregnant and had my baby I never could have had children I have a disease called Endomitriosis and because of it I was only able to have my daughter and son(my boy was a very high risk preg. that almost killed me). Just because we do not understand why things happen doesn't mean that there is no reason, I thought my life had ended when I got pregnate but in truth it had really begun. No baby is a mistake no matter what path you choose ( I understand and agree with any womans choice) its the path you were destined to take.
Author's Response:
I never regret any of my kids. I have 3 and my last was born when i was 25 and was very difficul to concelive and carry. I was diagnoised at 29 with ademyosis and had to have a hysterectomy 3 days before i turned 30. thankyou for your review:)
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
i had my son mikey when i was 16, he will be 13 next month and everyday i set and wonder where the time went, but have never regretted a second of it.
Author's Response:
I have a son Mikey also, he will be 12 in june. I had him when i just turned 20.. hes loves his momma:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Go Edward!
Author's Response:
i love assertive edward:)
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
love this!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
happy birthday kayla, i was 17 when i had my oldest, but i was married to her dad and am still married to him 26 yrs together, aint gonna lie we have seen our very hard times but we are still together
Author's Response:
My husband and I had our share of hard times. We have been together since i was 15 and he was 21. We married after our 8th year and we have 2 more children besides kayla.. we make it work, still dumbfounds me how sometimes, congrats on so many years together, wish you many many more
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Have a happy and wonderful birthday Kayla. I truley love this story. I have an aunt who is one month younger then I am and she was a teen mom. My cousin is the light of my life and I am so glad that you are writing this story. I get to enjoy two birds with one stone. It feels good that you are doing so many different versions of these pregancies as well as writing about my favorite couple.
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much for your review and i look forward to your reviews
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
well cant wait to see her reaction to him! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Thankyou for your review
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
I'm with Edward- "plans always change"!! And I really hope that hers do. And I can't wait to find out what the meaning is to the italian words on the journal that he gave her.
Author's Response:
Thankyou for your review...
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Hey! I have just read your story and It's one of my favourite story here. It's very gripping and I can't wait for next chapter:) My douther was born when I was 17 and this story remind me of the time, I was pregnant with her. I missed this, though it wasn't easy time to me. I very vey like this Edward, he is so caring and protective of Bella. I'm happy that Charlie arrested Renee, I can't understand her completly, How could she do this to her own daugther? Ugh....Thank you very much for this story and good luck with next chapter:) Caroline
P.S. I'm sorry if I made some mistakes, but I'm from Poland and I can't write in English perfectly:(
Author's Response:
your english is perfect and i wouldnt have known that you werent from this country if you hadnt told me, feel free to review anytime.. i appreciate the time you took to leave one and for sharing your story
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
oh damn, he just made me melt....lol. guess now she's 18, he can pursue her :) yay
Author's Response:
:) so glad to read this review.. im trying to get better writing one on one intereactions. and yes 18 and legal:)
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
cannnot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much for your review
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
:)
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Hpayy birthday Kayla - hope you had a great day with mum. another awesome chapter - i feel so sorry for victoria :(
Author's Response:
Thankyou for your review
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
whoa coming on strong there mr. cullen, i like it!!!
Author's Response:
lol hes very intense huh...l ty for the review
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
good chapter......
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
love this story ,just cant get enough.xx
Author's Response:
ty so much
Date: 09 Jan 2011 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life goes on
Bella is legal now. I am happy that the loss of Victoria's baby did not put her in a deep depretion and she is going to go on and better her life and others. I think Edward is right not to tell her she was to unstable it was best to come from her dad anyway.
Author's Response:
Thabkyou so much for your review.. always look forward to them
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
hey if you got any thing wrong no problem it's fiction .Hats off to Charlie love how he handeledd renee.
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
:-( sadly this is something that hit home
Author's Response:
so sorry. ive seen family struggle with loss of achild and it something that changes people even after 35 years. thank you for your review
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
I Am cracking up that Charlie arrested Renee but she deserved it. It is so sad that the baby didn't make it I hope that Victoria is going to be ok.
Author's Response:
Thankyou for your review.:)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
Just found this story today and am absolutely loving it. I was upset at first, I'll admit, with Charlie and Renee's response to her pregnancy but understand many parents feel that way when their teenage daughter gets pregnant. Glad that Charlie has found out the truth and is supportive of his daughter. Renee, okay, I have no words for how much I hate her. Good for Charlie having her arrested.
Hope James gets whats coming to him for what he did; I was a victim of rape and still (20 years later) struggle with it. Although I hope he doesn't die as a result of Jacob's attack--that would be horrible for Jacob to have to live with and possibly go to prison over that douche bag.
On a side note, only pet peeve I have regarding this story is the spelling/grammar errors, If you don't have a beta, I would be happy to help you. If you do, please double check things like this before posting, as it makes it very difficult to read.
Thanks for the story. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much... Hismysticmuse is in the process of cleaning up the errors. and it taking her a bit longer since the holidays. I will do a better job at re-reading before posting the next chapter.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
OMG there are no FREAKIN words for renee well i have alot but i dont think i should type them out :(
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
loved the epov :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you are liking the story so far... it means alot to me
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
ok so now i am crying like a baby - for both bella and charlie - awesome chapter - thanks
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect
f****r had it coming good on jacob. i am glad she has decided to tell :)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
another awesome chapter - i am so glad that rose and bella had a chat good for both of them :)
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread
sounds like a good place to be when you dont have your family to take care of you - i can't believe people actually kick there kids out when this happens this should be the time everyone comes together to help not abandon them :(
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul
i feel sorry for bella that she didn't have to type of parents to confide in about what happened - it wasn't her fault not one bit of it - just because she went to party and drank a couple of drinks doesn't give anyone the right to do that.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
i knew this story would be sad :(
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
well i hope that he dosent take it to heart! cant wait to see what you have instore next for everyone!
Author's Response:
thankyou.. so much i look forward to posting soon
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
First of bravo Charlie and secondly the death of Victoria's baby is sad but I totally agree with you there are always risks. I was on bed rest for two months with my son who is now 2 I was 17 when I had him. Unlike Bella's family mine was supportive.
Author's Response:
i had my daughter when i was 16 and was on bedrest from nov till her birth in jan of 96. she is almost 15 and a pure blessing. my mother wasnt supportive at all and i move in with the father and we are still together and have 2 more children.. thankyou for your review
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
so glad Charlie had Renee's ass arrested!!!! Poor Victoria
Author's Response:
it was a hard to write:/ and we all love charlie.. a daddy is suppose to protect and he done what he had to
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Way to go, Charlie!!! That woman deserves what she gets. How can a mother be that cruel to her own daughter, believe other people instead of her own daughter.
Author's Response:
i agree, ty for the review
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Jail is not good enough for Renee. You did well, we understand this is only FANFIC.
Author's Response:
Thankyou for the review
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Hallo Mandi79, ich kann leider die englisch Sprache nicht so gut, muß aber trotzdem hier meinen kommentar hinterlassen. Vielen Dank für diese wunderschöne Geschichte, besonders dieses Kapitel (9.) Ich habe selbst mein Baby im Alter von 6 Tagen verloren, das war 1983. Sowas vergißt man nie. Ich kann die Gefühle in der Geschichte nachempfinden, es tut weh, aber so kann das reale Leben sein. Vielen, vielen Dank dafür.
L. G. Marnie
Author's Response:
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Hugs that was an awesome chapter and must have been hard to write... yeah it is rarely non risky in teen pregnancy I have friend who i sadly lost contact with when she moved but her story is she had a baby when 13 to respect her i won't go into details of that but to say she lost custody due to age and now she cannot have kids because she is at a 70% chance of going etopic (is that the right word?) any whom she got got pregnant twice since getting married (both b accedent of pill failure) and had to get an emergency abortion twice due to the fertalized egg attaching to the falopian tubes. I can't wait for next chappy and props to Charlie for how he handled Renee.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
wonderful story - great chapter - I love that Esme approves of what is going on between Edward and Bella - I hope he is there for her the whole time.
Love love this story - please update again soon.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
:)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
wow, so much emotion in this chapter, have i said that before, if I have i'm sorry. But you have alot of emotions going onhere. You write it very well, don't let anybody upset you.
Author's Response:
thankyou... was glad everyone has dealt with victoria and her baby in a positive manner. i look forward to your reviews
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
I hope other victims of James come to light.....
Best Parts:
It had always been my experience that if a man could rape once, he was very likely to repeat. It was a gut feeling whether its be a cops or dad intuition that he has done this before
"You're wrong, because of you Cullen House has suspended outside contact with her, and in order for me to talk to her I had to call the answering service and be connected with her Doctor, who tells me upon reading your lovely letter went into a stress induced panic attack and had to be sedated. You have put her life and the life of my grandbaby in jeopardy and I simply cant allow you to do this again. I know you wont change and you wont stop if I simply asked you to"
She didn't say anything , just stomped up the stairs
I composed myself and sent a text to mark to head over here
I saw him pull up in the cruiser and tried to calm myself. I never thought in a million years I would have to arrest my wife, but she was wrong and committed a crime and I wouldn't ignore this..
Renee came down stairs and inquired on why Mark was here. I sat back in my chair as mark started rattling off a list of charges that included
Obstruction of justice, Harassment via USP mail and witness intimation
And since she blew a 1.2 on the breathalyzer and DUI was going to be added
I watched her handcuffed and she started to cry for me and I couldn't find it in my heart to give a shit
Author's Response:
love love that those were your fave parts.... you never miss a thing... other victims..hmm, it will play out soon
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Bravo! Charlie, so glad he had that unworthy piece of crap arrested. So sad about Victoria's baby, I hope she's ok or at least will be...
Author's Response:
Victoria will grieve, and yes Charlie was awesome:)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
wow this was a sad chapter. but we know that things like that happend in life. ty for the update.
Author's Response:
ty for the review... Victoria will grieve, but she will be as well as one can be loosing the only being who she felt loved her
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Unfortunatly, sometimes babies die in birth no matter what we do. She was having a difficult pregnancy, so you were being realistic. Don't be hard on yourself. Luckily it is only a story and no real babies were harmed in this chapter. Don't you just love that disclaimer at the end of movies. Ok back to the review. I am glad that Charlie was tough on Renee I hope he heads to his lawyer and files for divorce.
Author's Response:
love the disclaimer..lmao. i have good faith that charlie will be getting that divorce.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Quite the emotional rollercoaster here. I imagine this was a tough chapter to write! And you are write; the story would be fluff without some real life slings and arrows tossed in. Well done...thank you for allowing Charlie to go after Renee and thank you for some tender E/B moments.
Author's Response:
I disnt want renee to be able to go after bella without justice. She has been done wrong to many times and for a mother to behave like that is insane.. and charlie had to be see as her personal cheerleader and he put bella before renee, thankyou for your review, it means alot and i love the personal E/B moments, i want it to progress well without them throwing themselves into bed, cause sgter such a trauma we know she isnt going to do that
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Great chapter. So sad about the baby. The same thing happened to a friend of mine recently. She was a teenager with high blood pressure and the baby was stillborn. Absolutely tragic.
Author's Response:
I agree. its horrific to have to deal with, A child my mother had before me was stillborn. it been since 1975 and she never forgets. we visit her grave on holidays and her birthday. it was a hard one to write
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Great Chapter......
Author's Response:
thank you so much
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
I was so happy with Renee's arest thank you and I love Edwards protectiveness. It is very sad about the baby but that is the way life is sometimes it is death also. I have a friend that had a cute little baby boy went to sleep and never woke up sids. That old saying shit happens is true and that shit hurts. With all the sadness I want to tell you this is a wonderful story and I get excited when you update so Thanks. Teresa
Author's Response:
Thankyou it means alot comng from you.. A baby my mom had before me was stillborn and my sister had miscarried at 12 weeks so in a way victoria is my homage to thier pain... i look forward to ur reviews
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
thats so sad!and she's so young
way to go charlie!!!woo hoo :) update soon
Author's Response:
thank you so much... yes 14 is very young to have a child and its very sad.. it feel like a real death for me and one i stuggled to write
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. I love that you had Charlie arrest Renee. She crossed the line. And as for Victorias baby, you are right not everything is sunshine and rainbows. I feel like you stole my line because I say that to authors when I give them a review I know they are not going to like. I dont like to sugar coat my opinion and I like to review almost every chapter. I feel an author can not grow if they are not told what people dont like. I love that Edward crawled in bed with bella to hold her and told her about Victoria's baby. Bella will probably need someone to hold her because I can imagine she is going to freak out now too, thinking that something will happen to her baby.
Author's Response:
i believe you may have told me that before.. so yes sunshine and rainbows is yours:) and you are right. an author wont know if anything is off or a miss unless the reviewers says.. thankyou so much i stuggled with the outcome of of Victoria baby for awhile.. it feels like an actual death for me so ive been upset all day over this..
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
go Charlie. Lets see..... in addition, keep up the pressure on mike. Ya gotta know that James bragged about it.
Author's Response:
lol, They all brag and they all leave clues....:) ty thats what court tv says..:) ty for your review
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
I hope Charlie throws that bitch out of the house. I wonder if he knows she wrote such an awful letter to her child. I hope Esme calls him ASAP. I would love to know what his view of this letter is. Edward needs to give Bella a hug.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
I was so happy that Bella came clean with Charlie and he listened to her...too bad I can't say the same for Renee, she is terrible. To actually put those words on paper for your scared and pregnant teenage daughter to read is heartbreaking for Bella. I hope she can cut Renee out of her life and maybe build a new life at the Cullen house...
Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
What a bitch Renee is!! You know, I hope they do find all the evidence they need to prove that James raped Bella just to see the look on Renee's face. How do you write a letter like that to your own daughter? I'm just glad that Bella is in a good place with people who care about her and can help her. And I'm glad that Edward is there as well. He really does care about her.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
i love this story update soon!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
thank you so much for your posting - I loved the chapter and I hope that Renee meets her fate at the bottom of a cliff somewhere!
Author's Response:
ty for reviewing i agree renee is a very good personal at all.. karma works:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
awesome chaper
Date: 02 Jan 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
Wow I can't believe that Renee would write those hateful words to her own daughter!! I really hope that Charlie sees what kind of person she is and that he leaves her because she doesn't deserve to live in comfort while thinking those things about her child.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
What is wrong with Renee what kind of mother says those things to their child she should be shot .I hope Charlie will find out what she did and we will see fireworks .Who takes the word of some guy over their daughter.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
I liked this chapter. It shows that Edward is really worried for Bella and waits to make sure she is home safe. Also he came right away when Esme called for him when BElla was having a panick attack. I am not really excited to read a Charlie pov. I am more interested in longer chapter at the home with the girls and Edward. I can not believe how hateful Renee is with her own daughter. She doesn't deserve to even have children if she cant take Bella's word about what happend. I think the only thing Edward could do was sedate her to keep her from panicking.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
Bi at ch
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
OMG! Renee is just sick and hateful! i can't believe she wrote that to her own daughter.....Bella's better off without her
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
oh I soooooo hope Esme or Edward tell Charlie about his biatch of a wife.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
WOW Her mother is such a Cee Uoo Next Tuesday!! I really love this story! Can't wait to see more!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
Gahhhhhhhhhh reneee is such a bitch in this ficcy...love the fic just gahhhhhhh poor Bells
Date: 01 Jan 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
what an awesome story! i am sure edward is totally pissed now! i wonder if the tidbit about claire will get bella thinking about a possible different future that could include school and her baby :)
Author's Response:
Thankyou.. along down the line she will weigh all her options.. since it very odvious she will be leaving with more then she came with
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
OMG, Renee is so horrid. I am still intears, and started balling while reading that. Wow . You have a gift of capturing emotions. I love your story. I live in central Florida, and our church sponsors a home here that helps girls with their preganices and gets them on their feet atfter birth.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
charlie needs to get rid of his wife. loose term. man oh man renee you need a serious ass whipping. how dare you say that. you don't stand by your daughter because you being a socialite is being threaten by what your daughter is saying. how dare you. bella is better off without you. i feel for bella
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
she is such a bitch ! just for that i hope she decideds to keep the baby! keep the chapterse comming
Date: 01 Jan 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
great chapter can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
OMG, does Charlie know that Renee sent that awful letter? That women is a beast that didn't deserve ovaries. I can't believe she could be that selfish.
Author's Response:
Charlie doesnt know as of right now thank you so much
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
This story just keeps getting better! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
thankyou.. I'm trying
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
:)
Author's Response:
ty:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
OMG Renee is a BITCH...Could you tell us if Edward and Esme read the letter. I am so interested to see where this goes. Bella has feelings and so does Edward... hmmm.. Wonder if momma Esme is seein this yet. keep up the fast updates love it!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
yes, the letter was read after Edward took care of bella and to anzswer you question about Esme... a good mothers sees everything. we have eyes in the back of our heads:)
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
That bitch!!! (Renee) Poor Bella. I am so glad Charlie believes her. I just want to smack Renee for what she called Bella and not believing her.
Author's Response:
we all want to smack her...love it:)
Date: 01 Jan 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
First I would like to say I am loving your story and second I would like to rip Renee's womb out and shove it down her mouth what a bitch. I hope there is enough reviews because I would love to hear what Charlie has to say. Does Esme know that Edward has strong feelings for Bella???
Author's Response:
i am so so honored with the emotions my readers have... a charlie pov shoulf be up in a few days
Date: 01 Jan 2011 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
WOW! Poor bella, how can her mother talk to her in that manner. That lady pissed me the fuckkkk off. So you did good in your writing. Congratulations : )
Author's Response:
Thankyou... so much
Date: 01 Jan 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
please tell me he is divorcing her sorry ass!what a bitch how can you say that about your daughter?update soon
Author's Response:
there should be a charlie outake coming by monday
Date: 01 Jan 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
I hope that Renee dies a cruel painful death. Before that, I hope Charlie kicks Renee out on the street like the trash that she is. She shouldn't be welcome in their home.
Bella should have Renee charged with harrassment and endangering her life and the life of her unborn child.
Author's Response:
i agree completely.. ty for your review
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
well that was interesting with edwards pov.... update soon
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
I like the story so far, but you need a good beta. And the word you are looking for is THROUGH, not threw.
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[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
I'm going to say this for everyone... Edward Cullen can see my hooha any day at any given moment
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Date: 30 Dec 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
Well I guess taht Bella is going to be waiting to see if Edward will kiss her! I wonder what her mother has to say to her because she is a big part of the reason that Bella went away.
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chapter 8 will bring back a bit of renee.... THANX FOR BEING MY 100TH REVIEW!!!!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
great story so far, I started reading it tonight got to the end of chapter seven, and was disappointed there was no "next". keep up the great work, i'll be waiting...
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chapter 8 is half written and ty for the review:) should be next cpl days
Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
I loved this chapter, I love getting Epov !!!!
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ty for the review... there maybe more later on
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
well seems like there could be a love connection. love the respect edward has for the gals in the house. he parents raised him well. i can't wait for charlie to go kick some serious ass with james. i am hoping jacob is able to get off. it is great to see bella has a circle of women in her corner supporting her. great chapter
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ty so much... chapter 8 will be up in a few days if not sooner
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
Great Chapter......
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ty 8 will be up in a few days
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
I loved the reaction to the kiss Bella was very cool about it. I cant wait for more. Is she going to go to collage is she going to keep the baby will she have to tell the prick James that she is having his baby?????? I am glad that Charlie is acting like a father that loves his daughter no matter what. Happy New Year
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happy new to you too:) chapter 8 will be up soon... always a faithful reviewer
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
:)
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ty
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
I love this story. I am glad that Bella was strong enough to tell her story. Now it is time for Charlie to go back to Forks and get Jacob out of jail and get James in jail.
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i agree.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
I turly like this Edward. He is such a kind person. I hope they make it with the age and the fact that she has to go away to school.
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i believe in HEA... eventually
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
Well really this was just the same thing in EPOV. I really dont like reading the same things twice. It is nice to see how Edward feels about things but not the whole chapter. Also after you A/N on the bottom there is a couple of paragraphs there that I am not sure were supposed to be there.
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i dont like to repeat. there will not be many epov and it wont repeat like this chapter did. ty for the mistake after the an.. its fixed, ty for the review
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
hmmm guessing Renee's letter will put her into a tailspin
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it will give insight to what happening in forks and how renee feels.. cause renee is all about renee
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
wow, go Bella, a girl that knows what she wants :)
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shes trying to grt past everything and be assertive:) ty